AvNeil FF: FATEFUL COLLISIONS (closure pv 38)

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#231

Rula rahi ho mujhe 😭I miss Ali so badly . His shayri was so cool . I have yet ishq nahi hai aasan. Was it played in any film . This Ali is more interesting than Ali in show . Is Neil so obvious that Ali pointed .😆 lol . Ali and his three advices to Neil for winning Avni. Neil ka kaam aayega bahot. Both had become friends immediately 😆

Neil should see them in that couple 😉 Is her costume inspired from goa track ?

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Globetrotter_me

@Globetrotter_me

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7
Wow you updated sooner!!! Me loving it.. can't wait to know more on other parts.. great writing, keep the momentum going

pS silent reader.

trust me, I am trying to update my stories as fast as I humanly can.

Thank you! I am so glad that you're liking it. And I am so glad that you commented. Thank you!

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Globetrotter_me

@Globetrotter_me

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: Brightglow
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I'll wait. Patiently!

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Globetrotter_me

@Globetrotter_me

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: AgnesFan
Rula rahi ho mujhe 😭I miss Ali so badly . His shayri was so cool . I have yet ishq nahi hai aasan. Was it played in any film . This Ali is more interesting than Ali in show . Is Neil so obvious that Ali pointed .😆 lol . Ali and his three advices to Neil for winning Avni. Neil ka kaam aayega bahot. Both had become friends immediately 😆

Neil should see them in that couple 😉 Is her costume inspired from goa track ?

never intended to do that. Sorry! The shayari was one of his firat scenes. And it is used time and again in several movies. I am so glad that you are liking this Ali. Let's see how he helps neil further.

And who is the couple and whether it is a dream or reality is in the next part.

Thank you so so much!! And I totally understand tom felton obsession, being a wild potterhead myself. Have you seen his show murder in the first? He is brilliant in it

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Globetrotter_me

@Globetrotter_me

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: Tumpa12
loved it
update soon

thank you !!

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docritu99

@docritu99

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#236

Hey puja.
I am sorry i couldnt catch up with this story so far, since i was on and off from the forum for quiet sometime now, mostly off rarely on.

Now that i can breath and read, i am gonna read it pretty soon.!
So jyst letting u know, i will be back with my inputs soon.! 😉

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: Globetrotter_me
never intended to do that. Sorry! The shayari was one of his firat scenes. And it is used time and again in several movies. I am so glad that you are liking this Ali. Let's see how he helps neil further.
And who is the couple and whether it is a dream or reality is in the next part.

Thank you so so much!! And I totally understand tom felton obsession, being a wild potterhead myself. Have you seen his show murder in the first? He is brilliant in it

I have never tried any English shows . If you know some suggest . I always feel that Rowling didn't do justice with Malfoy and Snape . In Snape's case he had redemption when he dies but in case of Malfoy she never dealt with his inner turmoil. When she brings him as important as Ron or Hermione I expected her to deal with his emotions more . Agreed the story is about Harry and his adventures and relationships still there is no harm in dedicating a chapter for Malfoy's feelings

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#238

Awww, I'm loving the pace of this...and Ali the Cupid... m wondering if avni reaction won't be as bad as everyone thi is since she is softening to Neil... can't wait for more

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Wingsoflove_2

@Wingsoflove_2

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#239

Awesome chapter.👏

Aww, Ali is too cute.

He is interesting character. Lol Ali found out about his feeling in one second. Smart😎

His shayari was so good. Banda badi talented hai.

So, they teamed up against avni.😉 now Ali will help Neil to patao avni.

Let's see what happen.iam so excited.

Continue soon.

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Globetrotter_me

@Globetrotter_me

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: docritu99
Hey puja.
I am sorry i couldnt catch up with this story so far, since i was on and off from the forum for quiet sometime now, mostly off rarely on.

Now that i can breath and read, i am gonna read it pretty soon.!
So jyst letting u know, i will be back with my inputs soon.! 😉

hey Riya! Don't be sorry. I totally understand as i am also quite off the forum recently. And I am as well catching up with stories, one story per sunday kind of way. With impending admissions and my travel plans it was difficult to catch up. So trust me, I do understand .

Take your time and do let me know how did you like it! You are one of the best writers here and a input from you will certainly make me very very happy.

I'll be waiting. Patiently.

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