AvNeil TS: The Heart Wants What It Wants| EPILOGUE UP-PG 11| Jan 03 - Page 9

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Posted: 7 years ago
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absolutely love it! thank you for a wonderful FF:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Read it in 1 go...it was simply awesome!

Ah teenage love...when every small thing seems epic!

It is no wonder Avni fled...which 17-18 yr old girl will have the strength to confront the guy she likes about such a bet, esp when she hears him say such things about her!

But m glad that through a stroke of fate they found each other again & found the courage to grasp their together wali happiness..!!

Waiting to read more from you!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#83
It's awesome Simi.I loved it very much. Thank you for this beautiful story.Please write more stories like this.
I want to read your stories on other couples. Please give me the link.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Suuuch a beautiful concept and story... I love how you described in both perspectives. I really hope you continue to write on them.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#85
Thank u simmi for this epilogue. I loved it. It was awesome. Cute ending.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wowww simi thanks for updating this epilogue was amazing but feeling bad that this is last one I just loved the idea of avneils teenage phase I guess this is the first such ff I read something like that and the way you showed the story transition from their teenage love to now the couple wala love amid their parenthood phase is just commendable
Hope to read more of your ffs
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Posted: 7 years ago
#87
Loved this simi!😊

I wanted to know how neil reacted/went through when avni had replied back..i never thought you would include that part!im so glad you did😊

I usually love stories wer the characters(place/profession..) are kept intact as such as in the show..but this one was fantastic!!
I feel bad that this has ended here..

The way you write is so beautiful girl👏keep writing more!i would love to read more and more of your writeups!😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#88
I enjoyed the epilogue thoroughly . Can't be better .
At once your heart will break more for Avni when Neil realises what state he has put her in .
The wedding sequence along with flashback was cherry on cake .
Perfect ending Simi 👏 ESP 7 years later part have it a beautiful finish !
Keep writing 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#89
Wow Simi. This was amazing. Loved it. You should write for ITV. We will get better stories.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#90
Thanks Simi for this amazing story...loved it, loved it, loved it!! 👏
You are an extremely talented writer! You can easily replace / give competition to some of the best writers in the world of Indian Television.

Please do continue to post more stories here! Hope there are more chapters to 'The Challenge' too 😃

Shreya😊

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