A Rather Cold AvNeil Reunion, Challenges Begin: Today's Episode

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Posted: 7 years ago
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The problem with Indian TV writers is that, they surpass all perimeters of Intensity when it comes to hurtful scenes, but when it comes to redemption, or reunion: The impact is always a little too cold for our liking.
To take the same legacy forward was today's episode with AvNeil Reunion.
One would feel that after all the mangalsutra breaking and sindoor wiping clips of AvNeil separation, when they do come face to face after 6 months, the impact would be palpable, but IMO, it was too thanda for my liking.

Again, for my liking.

Anyway, in the opening scene Avni kicks some ass of that leech Maan Singh! And boy, she was Awesomeness redefined. She is all about girl-power, as she kicks the creep and makes him beg for forgiveness from Preeti, all of this while being handcuffed herself. I guess that's what made the scene more visually appealing.

Christmas competition announcement happens in the jail, and bam, the next second, you have Neil and DD in there, and Avni sees them in between glimpses of flying confetti.

Neil has his dream sequence of hugging kissing Avni, something I would say again was way better in OLV, thanks to crappy editing.
He is lost as he sees in reality Avni has turned her face from him.

Avni has the same flashes of him breaking the symbols of their marriage and says in her mind yet again, ''This guy never believed you and you will NEVER believe in love. IT is nothing but DHOKHA!''
Yes, girl. I feel you.

Neil is monitoring a rather isolated Avni among the crowd, through CCTV.
Neela calls him up to ask him about Avni, he says, now that he was here he would take care.

When the jailer asks him if she can get him his lunch, he says he would have what other prisoners would have.
I liked this little detailing here. Zain emoted brilliantly, as he saw an isolated Avni.

Avni is waiting for nurse in the medical room, and wondering how does she cover up that tunnel, now that Neil was here and she believes he doubts her escape plans.
She is about to leave, when Neil comes there, and forcefully starts dressing her hand.
A small moment is created (in Zain's bhasha, lol) where Neil gets close to Avni, eyeing her lips, and she too closes her eyes, as he nears her, but she revives her sanity and pushes him away!

It was twice that Avni referred to herself as Avni Ayesha only, and Neil was visibly tongue-tied. He however did use his sarcasm to tell her that he almost knew that the wounds on her were self-inflicted.

I kinda don't sympathise with him here as he taunts her saying, ''I hope you know you won't get any special treatment here, because you are my wife!''

This riles up Avni like no tomorrow (and rightly so) as she pulls her hand away from him and taunts him by saying, ''I wish nobody gets such a husband like you!''
This dialogue of Avni renders Neil speechless as the bandage falls from his hand (you gotta watch it keenly to spot it.. Editors, please buck up yaar!)

Avni tells him, she is only a prisoner and he an IPS officer, and there's nothing more b/w them.
She says she has duty in kitchen and it would be better if he does his work and she does hers.

She shoots him one last look before leaving as she says to herself that she has to plan with Ali to close up that tunnel, while a determined Neil says to himself, I won't let your escape plans succeed Avni. I won't let you take the law in your hand! (umm.. Hello! What do YOU do as Neo, then? Play ringa-ringa-roses? 😕 )

Anyway, precap has Neil doubting over the Goddess' poster in Avni's cell, while Avni is lying on a mat in the cell.

Overall, a good episode, with unfulfilled expectations for me!

Best,
Simi
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks a lot for the detailed update.. And glad to read your perspective too.. Yes, we have to give the show a chance but not at the cost of our own vision lost with whatever they throw on us.. Hmmm.. For now have to watch it for Avni.. Not sure whether Neil's day will come or CVs will conveniently forget him...😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Y u all in fandom keep taunting Neil nd appreciate avni when she hurts him with words evn aftr knowing wt he did is for avni...ss nly prblm here is y he did nt tell avni his plan as though Ur pyaari avni wll keep quiet nd listen to him if he shares his plan with her...it's is bcoz of her over smartness nly dey have ended up in prblm...wen juhi was behind Neil ppl got disgusted with track BT wen vidyut is making avni's vulgar pics dey r appreciating just to see neil's possessiveness...here all want to see Neil always going behind avni nd begging her even after knowing wt he did was to protect her...evn fr becoming neo ppl r taunting him...poor Neil...u r de best one...neither avni nor the fandom realises it here...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you! I have put up exactly the same words in another post! Thanda for my liking.
The only good thing in the episode, again according to me, was the fight sequence. Rest of it was either not required or low on emotions.

While watching it I didn't feel anything for Avni or Neil. And saying that is difficult because I know what aditi and zain are capable of when it comes to emotional scenes. Probably they were written very badly.
It might be so that they didn't want to show each other the intensity of emotions. But the entire episode had so much internal dialogues but still the turmoil was not evident.

Avni telling neil that you aren't a good husband didn't wrench my gut as it should have.

At some places I felt lack of continuity in the dialogues.may be because of the whole ips/acp thing. But that could be my imagination.

I am on the fringe of losing hope. Which I don't want to. I had very high expectations from this track. Let's see though, how next 2-3 episodes unfold.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Push-pull

Thanks a lot for the detailed update.. And glad to read your perspective too.. Yes, we have to give the show a chance but not at the cost of our own vision lost with whatever they throw on us.. Hmmm.. For now have to watch it for Avni.. Not sure whether Neil's day will come or CVs will conveniently forget him...😆


The fact is, I am an AvNeil fan.
And I want them as equals in this.
For me, post-leap, Avni has totally been the show-stealer, but the Neil fan in me wants him to buck up too, and do something that shows more than what's currently been shown, especially since we know Zain would kill those angsty emotional scenes! But alas! The CVs are twisting this way too much, when all they could do was keep it simple.

Like, there was no need for Neil to taunt Avni today that she shouldn't expect special treatment today because she is his wife, ALL THIS when he KNOWS she is innocent!
And why this is irksome to me is, he expects that after all these bitter words, Avni would be readily compliant of starting a new life with him after coming out of jail.

There's so much lack of connectivity here, which regardless of waiting, it seems it would barely bear any fruit for us as viewers and fans.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I said this earlier, if their first meeting after leap is not intense then we can expect Avni to forgive Neil easily when she will learn the truth behind Neil's actions and may even feel guilty for misunderstanding him
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: SubaSoumya

Y u all in fandom keep taunting Neil nd appreciate avni when she hurts him with words evn aftr knowing wt he did is for avni...ss nly prblm here is y he did nt tell avni his plan as though Ur pyaari avni wll keep quiet nd listen to him if he shares his plan with her...it's is bcoz of her over smartness nly dey have ended up in prblm...wen juhi was behind Neil ppl got disgusted with track BT wen vidyut is making avni's vulgar pics dey r appreciating just to see neil's possessiveness...here all want to see Neil always going behind avni nd begging her even after knowing wt he did was to protect her...evn fr becoming neo ppl r taunting him...poor Neil...u r de best one...neither avni nor the fandom realises it here...


I guess your selective thinking AND reading don't need a place here in this post, simply due to the fact that it looks like we are on different forums, watching a different show. For if you think people are going gaga over Vidyut making vulgar paintings of Avni, then not only are you grossly wrong, you are also selective in your thinking!
AND, if you want to look at all of this one-dimensionally through Neil's perspective only, you can make a solo thread for it, for this one, talks about AvNeil TOGETHER.

Suit yourself!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Globetrotter_me

Thank you! I have put up exactly the same words in another post! Thanda for my liking.

The only good thing in the episode, again according to me, was the fight sequence. Rest of it was either not required or low on emotions.

While watching it I didn't feel anything for Avni or Neil. And saying that is difficult because I know what aditi and zain are capable of when it comes to emotional scenes. Probably they were written very badly.
It might be so that they didn't want to show each other the intensity of emotions. But the entire episode had so much internal dialogues but still the turmoil was not evident.

Avni telling neil that you aren't a good husband didn't wrench my gut as it should have.

At some places I felt lack of continuity in the dialogues.may be because of the whole ips/acp thing. But that could be my imagination.

I am on the fringe of losing hope. Which I don't want to. I had very high expectations from this track. Let's see though, how next 2-3 episodes unfold.


I feel you.
My opinion of today's episode lies on the same line as yours.

I don't want to lose hope either, because everything about this track felt so right, and now that we only have good actors onboard, including the antagonist. I think the blame has to lie with the writing here.
Secondly, AdiZa are both director's actors and I wish the director invests more time in bringing out from the core what is required for the scene, like it used to be, before all the Juhi crap started.

I am hoping against hope that in the next two episodes, once the whole crappy school-like competitions in jail are over, we get to see some high-end intense scenes, which ARE the need of the hour now!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I'm really watching for girl to be reckoned Aditi ! The girl is making me tongue tied with her action scenes . She is such a power when she comes on-screen . 👏👏 Bow to her! ⭐️
Editors have used their magical scissors ! Huh ! Have they kept Zain protecting his cap from falling 😆😆

If really the scene is tanda then we can count on Avni to forgive him as she learns the truth . I wonder why is he making her hate him even more by passing sarcastic comments and irritating her
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I didn't understand why Neil taunted avni to not expect any special treatment what is the need for that dialogue and what are CVS intending to show I really didn't understand but glad that infuriated avni and atleast she gave two -three taunts
Does Neil wants to fake anger and show avni that still he is mistrusting avni for Juhis murder and he isn't sorry for that day?
Did he say those dialogues because he was miffed that his plan will backfire since avni is trying to escape from jail?
I felt it that dialogue was unnecessary why should Neil say such dialogues to avni when he knows she is already suffering physically and mentally for a crime didn't commit
Like seriously what's the reason he provoked her to get taunted by her?

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