AVNEIL FF: LOVE WILL FIND ITS WAY chap.11 pg 8 (30/04/2018 - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very nice update ...Yaar since we waited long time we need atleast 1 more update today ...Excited to who is d guy behind avni ...Waiting 4r nxt update
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Lovely update... Was waiting for this update
Who is the Mistry guy

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The flashback was too cute. So she is doing all this to protect neil?!
Loved the chap. Try to upload the next one soon :)
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chapter 8

Avni woke up the next day her mind kept going back to the previous night when Neil was speaking to her

Avni: remember Avni keep your distance that's all u need to do she muttered to herself

Neela: keep distance from who ?
Avni
Avni loooked towards the door to see Neela walking in

Avni: good morning maa

Neela: morning bacha she said sitting next to Avni on the bed and kissed her forehead

Avni: from Ali he is planning to propose Riya and I'm sure he will come after me to give him some idea she lies

Neela: Arien wah that is good news. Bacha don't u think it's high time that even u think about getting married

Avni: mama please not again she said getting up from the bed

Neela: y? What wrong did I say. One day u have to get married na

Avni: yes but that one day hasn't arrived yet. She said taking her clothes out from the wardrobe

Neela: is your one day coming on a flight she said sarcastically

Avni: that was a good one

Neela: Avni I'm serious

Avni: even I am. Before Neela could say anything else she went to the washroom.

Neela: what will I do with this girl.

Ashish who was putting his tie on saw Neela walk in mumbling

Ashish: what happened mrs metha

Neela: Avni was saying Ali is planning to propose Riya so I told Avni that even now she should think about getting married but this girl

Ashish: and u got the same reply as usual

Neela: exactly she said coming to ashish and helping him wear the tie properly

Ashish: maybe she is not ready yet

Neela: Ashish how much more time does she need... all her friends have got married or r on the way of getting married. And soon Riya is going to get married. Avni is older than Riya and..

Ashish: neela...Avni is only few months older than Riya he said interrupting her

Neela: that doesn't matter...the thing that matters is that we need to make our daughter understand that it's time she gets married.

Ashish: Neela there is no point of stressing about this when the time comes Avni will get married ...for us her happiness matters right?

Neela: Haan but sometimes we have to guide them to that happiness. Ok forget about this come down soon

She said leaving the room while Ashish smiled and shook his head

Neil was getting ready to join Prakash to go to the office

Shweta: Neil beta I'm going to ragini house u please have breakfast Haan

Neil turned around looking at Shweta who was standing outside his room

Neil: don't worry I will

Shweta: and good luck for your first day at khanna industries she said while walking away

Neil: thank u .

Neil came down to see Prakash already sitting at the dining table

Neil : morning dad

Prakash: morning puttar come sit. Neil patted Prakash shoulder and sat opposite him

Neil: where is Bebe?

Prakash: she has gone to the temple by the way Neil u still can rest for few days before joining khanna industries

Neil. No dad i would rather join now.

Prakash: ok then as u wish.

Avni as usual reached the office she was not in a good mood due to the topic Neela had bought up. She went straight to vidyut cabin and placed his usual coffee from costa on the table. And sat down.

Vidyut looked at avni and saw her looking annoyed

Vidyut: what is the issue now?

Avni: the same old thing MARRIAGE

Vidyut laughed but stopped when Avni glared at him.

Vidyut: how did the topic come up again?

Avni: I was telling maa about Ali planning to propose Riya and that was it she bought the topic up

Vidyut: yaar but what is the problem in getting married

Avni looked at vidyut and thought only if she could tell him that she still feels for Neil but no that has to remain a secret

Avni: there is no problem but I'm just not ready yet she said a little calmly

Vidyut: y don't u start meeting the guys that Neela aunty has chosen and if u like any of them then say yes otherwise u could always say no

Avni: have u gone mad I'm not going to do any of that I know my family well till I keep rejecting they will continue to show me all the guys pics. Anyways let's not talk about this if I keep thinking about this then i won't be able to concentrate on any work.

Vidyut nodded and Avni left he opened the drawer to see a parcel which for Avni

Flashback

Vidyut reached to the office a little early and the receptionist had gone to the canteen area to get some coffee when the delivery boy came and gave all the post and parcel he was about to place it on the receptionist desk when a name on the parcel caught his attention. He placed the rest on the desk and looked at the parcel which had Avni name

Receptionist: sir u came early today

Vidyut turned around to see the receptionist

Vidyut: yes Shreya by the way the delivery man came I placed all the post and parcel on the desk and this is for me he said showing the parcel

Receptionist: ok sir she smiled at him and vidyut quickly left from there and went to his cabin

End of flashback

Vidyut: sorry AM I wouldn't have done this if it was any normal day. But now I have seen the note U have received and also something that u and Juhi r hiding and maybe this is the only way to find out

He opened the parcel and was shocked seen the pics which was taken when they were at ali cafe and seen how the pics were taken he knew that someone has taken it secretly

Vidyut: what is going on? He checked all the pics and at the end found a note he opened it which read

"Thank u beautiful for keeping your promise I know u must be wondering who I am and I'm sorry for staying away from you for all these years but soon u will find me in front of u also I will going out of town for few weeks so sorry baby won't be able to send u any pics or notes for some time but don't think i won't know anything I will have people to keep an eye on u remember that"

Vidyut read the note again and placed the pics and note back in the parcel placing it back in his drawer

Vidyut: what is happening who has AM promised and what promise has she kept. Someone is keeping an eye on her? Or maybe all of us but y? I know I can show Avni all this and ask her but then she probably wouldnt take any help and give her oath of not telling anyone or wouldn't even tell me the truth and Juhi she won't tell me as she promised Avni.

Vidyut covered his face thinking about what problem has his friend landed in.

Neil reached the office with Prakash and was given a warm welcome by all the staff he was soon shown his cabin

Prakash: Neil beta give me a moment I will be back

Neil nodded while Prakash left the cabin

Meanwhile at ragini place ragini was laughing hearing Neela tell her about how Avni reacted the same way when she bought the marriage topic up

Neela: ragini it is not funny at all

Ragini: ok ok sorry but give that girl a break she is working so hard and one day she will agree to get married

Neela: that's what Ashish said but I'm worried for her after all I'm her mother

Ragini was about to speak when she heard the door bell ring

Ragini: one minute Neela nodded and ragini went to open the door to see Shweta

Shweta: hellos

Ragini: finally u came she said hugging

Neela looked at ragini walking in with someone.

Ragini: Shweta this is Neela...Neela metha and Neela this Shweta

Shweta: Shweta khanna.. she said moving to hug Neela

Neela: heard a lot about u from ragini

Shweta : I hope it's all good things

Neela: of course.

Ragini: let me tell u another thing your son and daughter have studied in the same college and also r friends.

Shweta and Neela were surprised

Neela: really ?

Shweta : what is your daughter name?

Neela: Avni

Shweta: my son name is tillu I mean Neil

Neela: Neil? I think I have heard that name from Ali and Riya before when they were talking.

Shweta: my son came back few days from abroad he had started he business there but now he will be managing it from here and help his dad too

Neela: that seriously is a great thing

Meanwhile at the khanna industries

Prakash hugged Ashish who came to meet him. They had signed a deal few Month back and had developed a warm bond of friendship

Prakash: u came at the right time

Ashish: y do u say that? And u seem to look happy

Prakash: of course my son came back after so many years

Ashish: really?

Prakash: yes come let me introduce u to him

Back at the pandit place

Shweta: so it's your birthday tomorrow ?

Neela: Haan and please u have to come to the party.

Shweta: but

Neela: Shweta ji in this short time we talked so Much that it feels like I have known u for a long time just like ragini so please

Shweta: ok ok how can I Say no to the soon to be birthday girl and my new friend

Ragini: that's not fair u both didn't even thank me

Shweta: for what?

Ragini : because of me both of u met and here I feel left out she said jokingly while Neela and shweta laughed

At the khanna industry

Prakash: Neil beta

Neil who was looking at the view outside turned around when he saw Prakash walk in along with someone else behind him

Prakash:. Beta I would like u to meet someone

Ashish: Prakash let me introduce my self

Prakash: sure go ahead

Ashish: hi Neil I'm Ashish... Ashish METHA... Neil shook hands with Ashish however the surname caught his attention

Neil: nice meeting u mr metha

Ashish: Neil no need with the formality I wouldn't mind if u call me uncle

Prakash: exactly during our business tours we became friends and also have signed a deal with the metha industries

Neil felt like asking Ashish if he is related to Avni but stopped himself

Ashish: ok Prakash I got to leave I came to give u the contract papers and I have a meeting with some clients so will see u later.

Prakash: ok hope your meeting goes well

Ashish: oh and one more thing tomrrow is my wife bday and we have organised a party so u better come with the full. Family

Prakash: do we want to get in trouble by saying no to u no right we will definitely come

Ashish: tomorrow at 7pm Prakash nodded and Ashish said bye to Neil and Prakash.

At night at the khanna mansion Neil had gone to his room as he was on a video call talking to the manager asking about the business in abroad
Once he was satisfied that things were ok he went down to see Bebe Shweta and Prakash sitting he joined them and shweta passed him gulab Jamun

Bebe: Tillu what took u so long

Neil: I was checking if my business is ok in abroad

Prakash:there is no problem right?

Neil. No dad everything is ok

Shweta: I have an important announcement to make

Bebe: and what is that ?

Shweta: actually tomorrow we have been invited to my friends party I met her through ragini

Prakash: tommrow ?

Shweta: yes

Prakash: tommorow won't be possible

Shweta: y?

Prakash: because one of my business client who is my friend has also invited us for a party

Shweta: sorry cancel the plan we should be going to my friend party only

Prakash : y shall I cancel the plan my friend has said we must be there

Shweta: Haan so we must be there too

Bebe: uff both of u decide to whose party we r going too

Shweta: we r going to Neela party and that is final plus Neil is friends with their daughter

Neil: huh?

Shweta: what was her name again oh yh Avni ...Avni metha

Prakash: what name did u take?

Shweta:Avni metha y?

Prakash: is it your friends bday tomorrow

Shweta: Haan but y r u asking

Prakash: my friend who invited me is Ashish metha we all got invited to the same party

Shweta: what a coincidence

Bebe: thank god otherwise this argument would have still continued

Neil in his head: so my doubt was right Avni is Ashish uncle daughter
He smiled at the fact that he will be seen Avni tomorrow.

Meanwhile vidyut was unable to sleep he kept thinking about all the pics and the note...he came out of his thoughts when he felt Juhi hugging him in her sleep.

The next day Neela woke up to see the room decorated

She got of the bed and went to the dressing table to see a gift and card she smiled and opened the card reading the lovely message by her husband when she felt Ashish wrap his arm around hugging her from the back she turned around

Ashish: happy bday Mrs Ashish metha

Neela: thank u me metha.

Aman: mom ! Oops sorry
Wrong timing he said coming into to see Ashish holding on to Neela by her waist

Ashish: like always

Neela smacked him and moved away from him Aman moved forward to wish Neela

Aman: happy... before he could complete he felt Avni push him out the way moving to hug Neela

Avni: happy bday maaa she said hugging Neela tightly placing a kiss on her cheeks

Neela: thank u bacha and where is my gift

Avni: u will get that by tonight she said winking at Neela

Ashish smiled and casually looked at aman who was glaring at avni

Ashish: oye what's with this angry look

Avni and Neela looked at Ashish then at aman

Aman: this is so not fair Di always wishes mom first I mean I was about to finish my sentence that she just pushed me away

Avni: better luck next time amuuu

Aman: stop calling me that

Neela: Avni don't tease Aman

Aman: exactly any ways happy bday mom and here is your gift

Neela: what's in it?

Aman: open it and see for yourself

Neela opened it to find a lovely
Pair of earring

Neela: thank u bacha

Avni: mama get ready and come down everyone is waiting for u.. amuuu come

Aman: diii he said running after Avni while she quickly made an exit from the room.

Ashish: chalo madam get ready

Neela nodded and went to freshen up

When she came down she took dayawanti blessing

Dayawanti: happy bday beta

Neela :thanks maaa

Ketan and hetal also wish Neela giving a side hug to her.

They all did the morning Aarti together getting ready for the normal day to finish of all the work so that they can be ready for the party tonight.

Neela: Arien bacha I forgot to tell u I met ragini yesterday and one of her friend Shweta came over and ragini told me that u r friends with her son

Avni: who? She asked confusingly

Neela: what was it ...Haan Neil.

Avni who was eating her toast started choking... Ashish rubbed her back

Ashish: slowly superstar your toast is not going to run away

Neela: maaa Shweta ji is also nice I invited her for the party in this short time we became good friends

Dayawanti: in that way we will get to meet your new friend too

Neil was getting ready he was somewhere happy to meet Avni again but then stopped

Neil: what is wrong with u Neil. Stop thinking about Avni all the time he came out of his thoughts receiving Ali's call

Neil: 'Haan Ali Bol

Ali: Neil what r u going to be wearing for the party at night?

Neil: umm not sure probably something causal or party wear

Ali: year whatever u decide let me know Haan till then I will ask Dd and vidyut he said cutting the call before Neil can reply

Neil laughed while cutting the call

Meanwhile Avni was in her room she was thinking about what Neela said

Avni: y am I thinking too much Riya had invited everyone yesterday which included Neil so if mama has invited his family then it's not a problem..Avni u r thinking too much today is mama bday and I need to concentrate on the party arrangements nothing else she said diverting herself from Neil thoughts and went down to see if the decorators have come

Time went quickly it was 6:30pm. The methas had only 30 mins left to get ready

Avni came down wearing a blush pink glided cape lengha. She applied a little a little bit of make up and was putting the locket on which had Neela and Ayesha picture.

Ketan: wow Avni u r looking amazing

Avni: thanks chachu she said walking to ketan and sorted his shirt collar properly.

Ketan: I will just make a call to see if the cake is on the way

Avni: ok I will just go and check on the menu

There was all type of drinks for alcoholics and Non alcoholics while avni also made sure that both veg and non veg dishes were served

Avni was texting Ali on her phone when she bumped into Nanno

Nanno: guddo y r u in a hurry

Avni: No nanno I was actually make sure if the arrangements were ready also was checking where ali is.

Nanno nodded while avni went up to her room to get Neela gift and then went to meet Neela who was getting ready

Avni: maa

Neela who was applying sindhoor turned around

Avni: here is your gift

Neela looked at avni and the opened the gift to see a beautiful collage of Neela

Neela : bachaaa

Avni: u like it

Neela: i love it. Thank u so much for this

Avni: any time my beautiful lady. I will just go and check on Riya she said leaving the room while Neela was looking at the effort Avni had made for the collage

Riya saw Avni walk in

Riya: someone is looking beautiful today

Avni: thank u all thanks to the person who chose the outfit for me

Riya: her name is Riya right

Avni: yep pretty good choices she has. Both looked at each other and laughed.

Riya: Avni help me put this necklace on. Avni moved towards Riya and helped her

The guest had started to come Neela and Ashish stood there welcoming them with guest giving Neela gifts

Hetal: Avni beta can u do something

Avni: what happened chachi

Hetal: Diksha just called she is outside and needs help with the gifts she bought Avni nodded and went out.

Diksha was getting few gift bags out from the car when she felt a tap on her shoulder she turned around to see Avni

Diksha: hey baby

Avni: how many gifts did U bring bua she said with her eyes widening

Diksha: not much only about 4-5 gifts

Avni: u seriously haven't changed no matter whose bday it is u will always bring the same amount of gifts

Diksha: because this is Diksha style

Avni smiled and took a bag from Diksha both started to head inside metha mansion

Avni: hasn't hansmuk phufa ji come back yet

Diksha: still in abroad for his business meeting .

Avni And Riya were talking with Diksha when Vidyut walked in with Juhi ragini and Mishti...

Ragini hugged Neela and wished her while Vidyut and Juhi also wished her and gave her a hug

Vidyut walked towards where Avni and Riya were and by then Diksha had gone as dayawanti had called her

Vidyut: u both r looking nice

Riya: Haan u will say nice only can't say beautiful right or gergous as that's only saved for Juhi right.. Vidyut and Juhi smiled and looked at each other.

Ashish: Avni ... he said coming towards her

Avni. What happened papa

Ashish: ketan said the cake has arrived but can u go the kitchen and see if the candle have been placed properly

Avni nodded and went to the kitchen with mishti joining her.

Neil entered with his family along with Ali and Dd.

Prakash saw Ashish and went to him

Ashish: I was thinking what took u so long come meet my wife

Ashish took the whole khanna family to Neela who was standing with dayawanti and nanno

Ahsish: Neela

Neela turned around to See ahsish but she smiled seeing Shweta

Neela: Shweta ji finally u came

Shweta: many many happy returns of the day she said hugging Neela

Ashish was surprised to see this and looked at Prakash who told him how him and shweta were arguing to whose party to go to only to realise they r going to the same person house to which the metha laughed.

Shweta: Neela ji this is Neil my son and my Bebe and of course Prakash ji my husband friend of your husband too

Neela: what a coincidence . By the way this is my mother in law and my maa she said holding nanno hand

Dd: look there is Vidyut and Juhi along with Riya

Nanno: u can go otherwise u will get bored with us oldies

Dd Ali and Neil walked towards their friends

Avni who made sure the candle were put on the cake properly came out of the kitchen with mishti who was eating chocolate

Avni was whispering something in mishti ear making her smile not aware that Neil had arrived

When she was about to reach near them she looked ahead and saw Dd and Ali along with Neil even though his back was facing her she was still able to recognise him.

Dd: wow Avni he said seen the way she was dressed up

Neil turned around when Dd said that . Avni started walking slowly when she saw Neil turn around and looking at her or more likely staring at her she felt her cheeks going red and cursed her emotions for always reacting like that

Riya: : come on Dd u r acting like U have never seen Avni like this

Dd: yaar but today she is just looking amazing I mean we hardly get to see her like this most of the time

Vidyut and Ali noticed the way Neil was staring at avni and they also noticed how Avni was looking everywhere except ahead of her not missing how her cheeks colour had changed. Both glanced at each other smiling a little

Juhi: mishti I told u no chocolates today right?

Neil looked away from Avni ...coming out of his staring mode

Avni: it's ok let her have it she said handing mishti to vidyut as mishti knew Vidyut would never say anything to her.

Dd: where is Aman?

Avni: probably in the garden area with his friends

Neil knew Aman was Avni brother as she had mentioned about him when they were in college.

Soon Ashish got everyone's attentions and thanked everyone who came to the party.. Neela blew the candles while looking at avni while everyone was singing happy bday... she cut the cake and fed her family followed by the pandits and khannas.

Dd was eyeing the cake as he would it eat it any. Moment

Avni: don't worry U will get some she said seen his state.

Dd: I swear yaar move the cake from me otherwise I will eat it here right now ... Vidyut ,Neil ,Ali Juhi Avni and Riya laughed

Aman: attention attention everyone. All looked at aman

Avni: what announcement does he need to make now

Riya : don't know

Aman: ok I know my dad gave a lovely speech for my mom but come on that doesn't mean the party will continue like this where everyone would be standing and just talking

Ali: agreed he said shouting

Aman: so come on guys let's have some fun. We have an amazing Dj who will play awesome music so let's add our dance to that music and enjoy it.

Dayawanti: Aman is crazy how can everyone dance

Aman: ok ok I know there are some oldies here but come on I'm sure U can do some moves he said winking at dayawanti and nanno.

Dayawanti went up to Aman and took the mike slapping him playfully while everyone laughed at that gesture

Dayawanti:ignore him everyone u all r free to do what every u want be it talking to each other, dancing or enjoying the lovely dishes that are been served in the garden area. I hope u all have a lovely time at the party thank u

Like everyone knew only some elder ppl stayed while the rest moved outside some were near the bar counter while some where on the dance floor getting ready for the music to start

The lights were changed to disco lights

Avni was about to go when Riya held on to her hand

Riya: where r u going. It was only her Avni and Juhi standing together as the boys had gone to get drinks.

Avni: Riii I will just sit there and watch u all dance

Juhi: come on Avni dance ...have some fun its Neela aunty bday what would she think seen u sitting while we all r dancing

Avni: she would only know if she sees me she is outside busy with the guest

Riya: dancing won't be a problem come on Avni we all know how well U dance if u don't feel like it then just move your legs along with the music

Avni was about speak when the boys came back and handed the girls non alcoholic drinks

Avni thought to herself : if I act normal thorn nobody will doubt anything but if i don't then everyone will guess it's due to Neil .

Avni : Aman when is the Dj going to play the song she asked aman who came

Aman . In a bit Di

Riya : by the way Aman u didn't meet Neil yet that's him she said introducing both

Both greeted each other with a smile

Soon the Dj started with the song swag se swagat all were near each other dancing. Doing the same step to some of the lyrics of the song

Avni didn't look towards the boys otherwise she knows if she does look at Neil then that's it she will be hell nervous

Ali came near Avni and Riya and twirled.them around few times before moving back to his spot taking his drink from Neil and having a sip

Riya: I'm getting a drink u all want some more

Avni: wait I'll come and help u Riya nodded and went while Juhi danced with the boys

Riya: hi can we have three jd with coke please

Avni: not bad Haan

Riya: even we can have fun like boys its not like we r going to get drunk with this.. Avni shook her head at Riya.

When the bartender placed the drinks on the counter unaware to them by accident Riya took another two alcoholic drinks which were for someone else who was waiting at the counter while avni took one Jd with cola for Juhi

Avni handed Juhi her drink and Riya passed a glass to Avni by then the song had changed.

Avni toon a sip and found the taste a bit strong she Was about to ask Riya When she saw Riya taking a sip and was all normal while dancing

Avni: maybe I'm finding it odd since I'm drinking it after a long time

She took few big gulps and coughed a little at the end moving her legs to the beat of the song .

Avni smiled a little

Avni: I'm going to get another drink she said to Herself

Riya finished her drink and started to shake her head due to the strong taste

Riya: strong but awesome.

Avni: excuse me can I have another drink

Bartender: ma'am I think u and that lady took someone else drink here is your drink he said showing the two glass

Avni: no I don't want this one anymore can u please make the other drink that u made for those people

Riya: make it two please ..she said coming behind Avni

Since the alcohol was strong it had done its effect way quickly

The bartender nodded and made the drink handing It to Avni and Riya
Avni sat there this time gulping it down in one go

Juhi noticed Avni and Riya disappearing again and looked around to see them At the bar...she went toward them

Juhi: girls what r u doing overs here

Riya: drinking. Come let's go back to the dance floor she said walking Juhi looked at Riya and then at avni

Juhi: Avni y r u sitting here and what happened to Riya y is she behaving like this

Avni: god knows she said shrugging and pouted

Juhi: what r u drinking she said eyeing Avni drink

Avni: I don't know the bartender made the drink it's awesome here try it she said making Juhi have a sip forcefully

Juhi closed her eyes due to the strong Taste

Juhi. Avni u r drunk and so is Riya

Avni: nooo who said I am drunk u know I don't drink strong alcoholic drinks right

Juhi looked at the bartender who quickly spoke before he could get questioned

Bartender: ma'am I didn't do anything when they came to collect their drink the first time by accident they took two different glass and one jd with cola which they ordered and now when they came back I told them that they took someone else drink but This ma'am told me to make the same drink which I made for the boys

Juhi shook her head at the blunder that just took place

Juhi: Avni u stay here ok I'm coming

Avni: y would I go anywhere. One more drink please Juhi nodded no at the bartender and went to tell the guys

Meanwhile at the dance floor Riya was clinging on to Ali and he sensed something was wrong not to miss the alachol smell who could smell from Riya

Ali: r u drink

Riya: nooo she said hugging Ali

Juhi: she is and so is Avni.

The gang had stopped dancing when they had seen how Riya was behaving

Vidyut: where is Avni

Juhi: at the bar

Neil saw Shweta walking in

Neil: guys mom

Dd: nobody should see Avni and Riya state otherwise they will get worried and also may not be happy seen them in this state

Neil: I will divert mom till then u take them

Vidyut: Dd u stay here me and Ali will take Riya and AM Juhi u also stay here with Dd.. Dd nodded while Vidyut quickly went to get Avni

Neil walked over to Shweta

Neil: mom u here

Shweta: Haan woh I left my phone in the car

Neil: ohhh but it's not that important forget it I mean u don't need your phone right now he said turning Shweta the other way so she can't see Vidyut and Ali taking Riya and Avni

He saw them walk up the stairs with the girls thankfully the music was loud that they couldn't here Avni and Riya voice

Shweta: tillu what's wrong with u move now let me get my phone she said moving Neil away and went to get the phone

Juhi looked around and saw aman busy with his friends and prayed that he doesn't notice Avni and Riya missing

Meanwhile upstairs

Riya : Ali baby u r so cute she said laughing like a child while Ali rubbed his forehead seen Riya in this state

Ali: Riya come on go to sleep.

Riya : no i don't want to sleep.

Neil: how did Riya get drunk

Ali : god knows she is always careful with the amount of alcohol she drinks

Dd: yaar over here Riya is drunk and in the other room Avni is acting the same

Vidyut: how didn't both realise the drink they took

Neil: I'll go and check on her till then u stay with Riya

Juhi in her head: what if Avni says something in her drunken state. God please don't make things complicated for Avni even more .

Neil entered Avni room to see it was dark suddenly he felt someone hug him from behind and he could even recognise that touch with his eyes closed

Neil: Avni? He whispered

Avni: do u know how much I missed been close to u.

Neil was shocked by her statement and turned around

Neil: what did u say he said holding her so she stands still

Avni: i missed been close to u?

Neil: y did u break up with me then

Avni: had no choice she said cutely and looked at Neil and then at his lips she moved forward to close the gap but Neil stopped her as he would never want to take advantage with Avni in this state

Neil: Avni let's do one thing we will talk tomorrow now come on sleep

Avni: noo I don't want to sleep

Neil: if your family see u like this then they won't be happy right. Think about it since it is your moms birthday and she wouldn't want to see u like this

Avni: u r so caring Neil she said pulling his cheeks while Neil somehow took her to the bed and made her lay down

Neil: now come on go to sleep I will call Juhi hmm

Avni: don't go please she said holding his hands

Neil: I'm not going anywhere will be outside

Avni: Pakka she said pointing her fingers at him

Neil: Pakka he smiled slowly. And was about to leave but stopped midway when he heard what Avni said next

Avni; I love u Neil I always did

Neil turned around to see Avni looking at him with her eyes closing slowly

Avni: shhh it's a secret don't tell anyone ok she said in a kiddish way and slowly her eyes gave up and closed.

Neil walked back to Avni he sat down and tried to think did he hear correctly

I love u neil i always did

Neil: they say when a person is drunk they speak the truth and if u r speaking the truth Avni then I will find out y m u broke up if u still love me he said looking at her seriously

Neil was about to walk out when he saw Vidyut standing outside

Vidyut : come we will tell Juhi to come here

Neil nodded and went with Vidyut where Juhi Ali and Dd were

When he walked in he saw Riya was cuddling Ali while he was patting her trying to put her to sleep.

Vidyut: Juhi go to Avni please

Juhi. Ok she left the boys alone

Vidyut : I have something to tell u guys

Ali; what?

Vidyut: I wouldn't have said anything now but hearing what Avni said to Neil I think it's best if u all know. Dd knew what Vidyut was talking about

Neil: what r u talking about

Vidyut: let's go to my office. I'll answer all your questions over there.

Ali: I'll go and keep Riya in Avni room so Juhi can look after both

Vidyut: don't tell her we r going just say we will be downstairs so the elders don't doubt anything and we will tell the elders the girls r upstairs having their girl talk

At the office Vidyut was looking at Ali Dd and Neil reaction

Dd: is this what Avni received today

Vidyut: Haan but she doesn't know about it as I took the parcel when the delivery boy came

Neil was looking at the pics and the note

Vidyut: I'll get straight to the point on the day Neil came back Juhi and Avni went to mishti room to get her ready and mishti heard certain things that Avni and Juhi said

Ali: like?

Vidyut told all of them what things mishti had told him (chap 5) and how he had asked for Dd help to find out about what Avni and Juhi r hiding

Ali: so there is someone sending notes to Avni since 2nd year of college

Vidyut: yes

Ali. Neil did Avni ever tell u about this since u were dating till then

Neil: no I'm shocked myself Avni had never told me anything she was all normal until we were nearly done through our second year and then she broke up with me.

Vidyut: but after what she said I'm confused

Dd: what did she say

Vidyut looked at Neil

Neil: that she really missed been close to me but had no choice and also that she still loves me he said remembering Avni words again

Dd: but she was drunk right

Ali: and usually people speak the truth when they r drunk ...but I don't get it ..if Juhi knows y don't u ask her directly

Vidyut: because I know she won't say anything as Avni has gave her my oath

Neil: I have feeling all this is connected

Ali: u mean from the break up to Avni still receiving all these notes from that unknown person along with Juhi and Avni hiding something

Neil: Haan

Vidyut: we will have to find out our own way

Dd: Neil

Neil: hmm

Dd: r u going to question Avni about this

Neil : after what she said today and now finding out everything she won't get away easily

Ali: I think we should go back now before anyone doubts anything

Nobody had doubted anything and the metha were told that Avni and Riya slept early while talking to Juhi

Neil was in his room standing near the window

Neil: it took me a lot of strength to forget what happened between us for my family and friend I had come to terms that we were not meant to be burying all the memories in my heart but after knowing certain things especially what u said I won't stay in peace until I get my answers and once thing is for sure due to some reason u r keeping yourself away from me. But I promise one thing Avni once I find out who that person is that keeps sending u all the notes and pic won't be spared I won't leave him that easily.

Precrap: Avni: leave Neil she said crossing her arms

Neil. Not until u answer my question

Avni: it's nothing to do with u she said turning around

Neil: it has everything to do with me especially after what I said in your room last night he said turning her around with full force

Avni: I don't know what u r talking about besides I was drunk so don't remember Anything she said trying to be strong

Neil: don't worry I remember everything u said let me refresh your memory.

Ok my lovelies hope u all love this part

Thank u to those who took their time out to read comment and like for the previous part..it really means a lot

Would be waiting for all your comments and don't forget to press the like buton

Lots of love Sonali

chapter 9 below

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chapter 9


Avni woke up her head was hurting a lot she was about to get up when she saw Riya sleeping next to her

Avni: gosh my head ...y is it hurting so much she tried to get her phone to look at the time when She noticed Juhi message which said

Juhi text:
U and Riya got drunk last Night since u both took some else drink by mistake. We told everyone that us girls were busy talking and during that u and Riya fell asleep. So do let Riya know just in case if anyone asks.

Avni tried to recollect the previous night incident by closing her eyes... she was trying a lot when her eyes shot open remembering what she did

Avni: omg what did I do...I said all that to Neil in that state now what shall i do. No I can't let my effort of staying away from him go to waste I will just have to act as if I don't remember what happened. Yeah that is a good idea

Riya: ouch my head

Avni looked at Riya

Riya: babes what am I doing in your room

Avni told her how they got drunk and what the others told their family

Riya: how didn't I realise the strong Taste

Avni: what's done is done now come on let's get ready we both have work and also take some lemon water or tablets so that this headache goes away

Riya nodded and went to her room to get ready

Meanwhile Neil was getting ready and went downstairs

Neil: dad

Prakash: Haan puttar

Neil: I will be coming to office a little late as I have some work

Prakash: ok that's fine. Do u need help with whatever work u r going to do?

Neil: no dad I will be able to sort it out myself

Bebe: Neil have breakfast at least

Neil: no Bebe I'm going to meet Vidyut so will have it then

Avni reached to the office and as usual she gave Vidyut his coffee

Vidyut: AM how u feeling now

Avni. Good and thanks for yesterday

Vidyut: anything for u . I am leaving for an important meeting will see u later

Avni: good luck to u since u have worked hard on the presentation and I hope U comeback with some good news

Vidyut: thanks he said giving a side hug to Avni

Vidyut left his cabin and thought to himself: good luck to u too AM as u have someone waiting for u in your cabin

Avni left Vidyut cabin and walked to her cabin...she greeted some staff memebers and opened her cabin door when she saw someone standing near the window looking outside

Her pace became slow as she recognised who it was

Neil as if sensing her turned around ... for a sec Avni got lost in the way he was dressed in formal clothes looking handsome

Neil: hi

Avni came back to reality her cheeks slightly red

Avni: hi..um Vidyut is not here as he has gone for a meeting .. she said walking towards her desk and placed her bag on it

Neil: I'm not here to meet Vidyut he said sitting on the couch on the left hand side

Avni was confused at Neil's behaviour however her mind was telling her it was something to do with last night.. especially the things she said to him

Avni: then? she asked playing with her ring

Neil's smiles slowly seen Avni fidgeting with her ring he knew Avni always does that when she is nervous

Neil: I'm in your cabin so obviously I came to meet u . Y r u standing come sit

Avni gave a fake smile and sat on the couch next to Neil. He leaned forward while looking at her

Avni: y did u come here she said clasping both her hands together and looked at Neil who was staring at her

Neil: i came to ask u about last night he said not looking away from her

Avni in her head: great i knew it. Calm down Avni just go with the plan u made act like u don't remember anything

Avni: what about last night? She said normally

Neil raised his eyebrows

Neil: after u got drunk and the things u said to me in your room

Avni: neil i seriously don't know what u r talking about she said getting up

Neil: Avni just say it he said getting up too
Avni looked at Neil

Avni: say what? Look Neil I have some work to do and I seriously don't have any idea what u r taking about

Neil: really? He asked sarcastically

Avni knew Neil once he gets his head in something then he will do it but she is stubborn too.

Avni: leave Neil she said crossing her arms looking at him sternly

Neil. Not until u answer my question

Avni: it's nothing to do with u she said turning around

Neil: it has everything to do with me especially after what u said in your room last night he said turning her around with full force

Avni: I don't know what u r talking about besides I was drunk so I don't remember Anything she said trying to be strong

Neil: don't worry I remember everything u said so let me refresh your memory.

Avni gulped

Avni: I don't want to know anything she said trying to speak normally but it came out as a whisper

Neil: y? Because u already know what u said right.

Avni got flashes of the moments spent with Neil. And then how she had to make the decision of to break up with him which is only known to her and Juhi.. she closed her eyes for a sec and then moved Neil's hands away from her arm

Avni: no I don't and I have no interest in knowing now please leave she said glaring at him

Neil was angry now he started walking slowly towards Avni while she started moving back this continued until her back touched the wall. Neil placed both us against the wall blocking her from both sides

Neil: y r u doing this Avni? Y r u playing with my emotions ?..u broke up with me giving a stupid reason I didn't believe it but came to terms with it...After so many years we meet and u give me different reactions one minute u show That u still feel for me and the next min u act like we hardly know each other

Avni: that's your opinion I never gave u any different reactions for u to think like that

Neil looked angrily at avni and moved his hands away from the wall and in a sec Avni found herself close to Neil with his hands around her waist while hers were on his chest

Neil: then what was last night about Avni..u were saying how u miss been close to me , how u still love me.. who is this person that keeps on sending u note along with your pics

Avni was looking away from Neil when he spoke but when he mentioned about the notes and pics she was in shock and looked at him

Neil: speak Avni he said a little loudly

Avni: I'm not answerable to any of your questions this is my life so stay out of it she said pushing Neil away from her and walked to the door holding it open.

Neil looked at avni sternly who was looking straight avoiding Neil gaze

Neil: if u think u can get away from this then u r wrong. I won't be in peace until I get my answer from u he said looking at avni who kept a straight face

Once Neil left Avni closed the door sliding down against it and held her knees ...the tears which she tried to stop finally flew out... she wanted to hug Neil and tell him everything but she couldn't. She was sobbing really badly but covered her mouth so nobody hears.
Suddenly Neil's words came back in her mind

"who is this person that keeps on sending u note along with your pics "

Avni: how did Neil find out this I didn't even say it yesterday. In fact I didn't even mention it to anyone except Juhi. .. did Juhi tell Neil?..no no no if she did then he would have known the full truth and as far as i know Juhi she promised she won't tell anyone then how?

Avni thought for a second and called Juhi

Juhi: hey how r u feeling now

Avni: Juhi we need to meet

Juhi could sense Avni was crying due to her voice

Juhi: what happened?

Avni: meet me at the office I will tell u then

Juhi: ok I'll be there soon

Juhi was sitting in Avni cabin while avni briefed her everything.

Juhi: I didn't even tell Vidyut anything then how did Neil find out and that also so soon

Avni. Even I'm thinking but my brain has just stopped working.. both unaware that Vidyut was the one to find out about the notes and picture

Avni: did Vidyut know Neil was waiting for me in my cabin? And if he did then y didnt he say anything? She said looking at Juhi who also started to think over Avni question

Meanwhile Neil was in his cabin he was luck as he didn't have much work as his mind kept going back to what happened in Avni cabin

Neil heard his phone ring and was about to cut it when he saw Vidyut name showing.

Vidyut: any luck

Neil: no...
Neil then told Vidyut everything that happened

Vidyut: only two people can tell us and that is only Avni and Juhi

Neil: I had made up my mind that I will forget Avni and move on but now I won't leave her not after knowing that she loves me

Precrap: Neil: mom u remember I loved a girl in college

Shweta: Haan but y r u brining it up how

Neil: that girl is none other than Avni

Shweta looked at Neil shockingly.. Shweta turned around lost in thoughts while Neil slowly smirked

Ok my lovelies here is chap 9 I don't know how it came out but I tried my best

Thank u to those who took their time out to comment for the previous part and also liked it

Hope u all like his part to

My lovely writers I will be comment soon for your stories

Will be waiting for all the lovely comments and likes

Sorry for any spelling or grammar mistake

Lots of love Sonali


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Nice update... Tilly want his mom to set alliance with avni
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Both chapter read in one go. Awesome it is . Plz update soon dear😃
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Awsm update soon...
Will b waiting for nxt...
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chapter 10


Juhi: we can't even ask Vidyut anything

Avni: exactly otherwise he will probably start doubting

Neil had come back and went to his room to freshen up. During dinner time Bebe had mentioned that she has got few girls pics and Neil should look at them. Neil ignored that and went to his room

Shweta soon came to Neil room to give him the girls pics so he can choose

Neil: mom sit

Shweta: what sits here I'm asking u to looks at the pics but u r not listening

Neil: mom u remember I loved a girl in college

Shweta: Haan but y r u brining it up now

Neil: that girl is none other than Avni

Shweta looked at Neil shockingly.. Shweta turned around lost in thoughts while Neil slowly smirked

Shweta: Avni? She said turning toward Neil again

Neil: Haan

Shweta: but y r u brining it up now I thought u Both had forgotten each other

Neil: we thought we did but we didn't. All this had happened due to a misunderstanding which we just found out he said lying

Shweta: but?

Neil: mom Avni is a nice girl

Shweta: that I know tillu... but if your
Misunderstanding is solved does that mean u both r back together?

Neil: no not yet but we will be soon hopefully

Shweta: ok then let's do once thing

Neil. What ?

Shweta: ask for Avni hand from her family after all my tillu happiness matter to me but I also agreed because I know Avni is a nice girl due to Neela ji
Neil hugged Shweta while she went to tell Bebe

Neil called Vidyut

Neil: plan successful bro

Flashback

Neil: I had made up my mind that I will forget Avni and move on but now I won't leave her not after knowing that she loves me

Vidyut: what do u plan to do?

Neil: mom and Bebe have chosen few girls for me whenever they bring that up I will talk to Mom and tell her that me and Avni love each other but due to a Misunderstanding our relation ended

Vidyut: u plan to marry avni? Bro I do know if Shweta aunty goes to ask for Avni then it's going to be a straight no from Avni... but?

Neil: but what

Vidyut: Neela aunty wants Avni to get married so if u convince her then your work will be easy

Neil: perfect

Vidyut: when the first step to your plan is successful let me know

Neil: will do. Chal I will speak to u later both said bye and cut the call

End of Flashback

Vidyut: so now u r ready for step 2

Neil: yup. Mom is saying we will go
Tomorrow to ask for Avni hand

Vidyut: the plan will only be successful once Avni has to say yes... but Neil by Doing all this how r u going to make Avni say the truth?

Neil: I don't know but I can't lose Avni again not after knowing she loves me and if this is the way I can get her then I will. With all my love I will make her spill whatever she is hiding in her heart.

Vidyut: all the best for that

Neil: thanks man

Vidyut. I'll inform Dd and Ali too

Neil: yeah otherwise both will moan saying they were not told he said chuckling

Once he cut the call he placed it near the table and walked towards the window resting against it looking outside

Neil (to himself): sorry Avni I know this is not the right way but u have not left any option for me. Just like u even I love u but I buried my feeling inside me but not anymore. We both have stayed away from each other for so many years but not anymore.

Shweta was in Bebe room and told her what Neil told her

Bebe: that's fine then we will go to the metha house and ask for Avni hand

Prakash had slept early since he had to wake up early the next day so he was unaware about all of this

The next day Shweta didn't get a chance to tell orakash about Neil and Avni as he left quickly so she decided she will let him know once he is back.

At the metha mansion
Ketan and Ashish had left to go to the office while Aman had gone to college so it was only the ladies

Avni was in her room getting the file she needs and was walking down the stairs when she saw her family greeting the khannas and there she saw Riya hugging Neil

Neil casually looked up to see Avni standing on the stairs with a frown while he was smiling and winked at her making her uncomfortable

Avni was finding something fishy in that smile. Her mind diverted back to their cabin scene.

Dayawanti: Avni beta what r u doing there come down

Avni came out of her thoughts and walked down stairs.

Shweta: sorry Neela ji I know I should have informed u earlier that we were coming

Neela: it's ok Shweta ji I'm glad u came over please come and sit

Shweta and Neela sat together while Bebe and Neil sat next to dayawanti

Riya and Avni stood

Avni: umm I have to leave as I'm getting late

All nodded and Avni left giving one last look to Neil to see him smirking

Shweta: actually we came here for a reason she said looking at Bebe then looked at Neela and dayawanti

Neela: is everything k she said seen how nervous Shweta. Is

Bebe: Neela beta we came to ask for Avni hand for our Neil

Riya was shocked and looked at Neil.

Neela: Avni hand? She said getting happy and nervous at the same time

Shweta: Haan..

Dayawanti: we would be happy that our Avni is getting a proposal from a family like u but the thing is she is not ready to get married yet

Shweta : maybe because she only wanted to Marry Neil?...dayawanti and Neela looked at each other with a frown

Neela: what r u trying to say Shweta ji

Shweta: last night Neil told me that the girl he use to love and dated is none other than Avni.

Dayawanti Neela and hetal were shocked

Dayawanti: Avni was in a relationship and she didn't tell us?

Neela: even I'm shocked to know this. Maa maybe Shweta ji is right that Avni kept saying no to other proposal because she still loves Neil and wasn't able to forget him

Dayawanti: that could be possible

Bebe: we just want u to ask Avni once and whatever she decides we will agree to it.

Neil: aunty the thing is me and Avni loved each other but during our second year of college things ended between us or u can say she ended it... but seen her after so many years my feeling which were kept hidden all came out and somewhere I know she loves me too but is still angry

Neela: beta if u don't mind me asking what was the cause for your break up

Neil didn't know what to say as Avni broke up with him saying she just found it as a attraction which was a complete lie as she confessed in her drunk state she still loves him so he decided he will tell Neela what he told Shweta

Neil: it was due to a misunderstanding Aunty and U know how stubborn she is

Neela: that I know she said smiling slowly... Neil remembered Vidyut words of convincing Neela

Neil. Aunty I really love Avni and can't afford to lose her this time he said holdig Neela hand.. Neela could see in Neil's eyes which showed how much he loves Avni

Neela: I will try my best Beta

The khanna left from there as dayawanti and Neela told they will call them after speaking to Avni

Riya was listening to all this and found something very odd she felt like calling Avni and tell her the things that were happening but somewhere she stopped herself from doing that as even she wants Avni happiness... she left from there to go to work before dayawanti or Neela can question as to y she didn't tell them about Avni been in relation and somewhere hoped that Avni and Neil get back together again

Avni finally came back home ...seen Neil at the metha mansion didn't leave her in peace.. her mind kept going back to Neil smirking like that and was wondering y he came over with his mom and Bebe

Avni went to her room to change in her pj and came down...

Ahsish and ketan were going to come a little late so they told the rest not to wait for them

Neela: bacha u remember Neil with Shweta ji and Bebe

Avni who was about to place the spoon in her mouth stopped midway when Neela said that

Neela and dayawanti saw Avni reaction.

Aman elbowed Riya and raised his eyebrows as to ask what they r talking about to which she just shook her head

Avni didn't answer and looked down placing the spoon back on her plate

Dayawanti: Neela stop beating around the bush and just say it. U leave it let me actually say it ..Avni Shweta and Harleen ji came to ask for your hand for their son Neil.

Avni: WHAT? she said getting up in shock

Riya looked at avni

Neela: Haan and Neil even told us about u both dating during college days

Avni eyes widened she didn't expect
Neil to do anything like this

Neela: bacha look he really loves u and when he was telling me about u i was able to see the love in his eyes for u

Avni: Maa there is nothing between me and Neil right now and about getting married then sorry my answer is no she said getting up and was about to leave from there

Daywanti: Avni eat your dinner

Hetal : Its not good to leave without having your food come

Avni: I'm not Hungary

Neela looked at avni angrily

Neela: if there is Nothing between u two y r u refusing to get married all the time

Avni stopped when Neela asked that

Avni: I have given u my answer before and I will say it's the same

Avni was about to walk up the stairs when Neela words again stopped her

Neela: I think Neil is perfect for u and after knowing u both were in a relationship and broke up doesn't mean u can't get back with each other

Avni. Maa don't u get it I don't want to marry Neil I don't want to marry anyone she said frustratingly

Neela: enough is enough now I had given u many chances but your answers were always no but this time I won't listen to u. Until u don't agree to get married to Neil I won't eat or drink anything

Avni looked shockingly at Neela and was also hurt somewhere

Dayawanti: Neela what r u saying. Stop been childish if Avni doesn't want to get married we can't force her

Neela: Maa this is the problem we keep telling her to get married and she keeps saying no thinking we will support her in this descision but not anymore.

With that Neela left to go to her room

Avni stood at the stars watching Neela go. She was having mixed emotions be it hurt anger frustration annoyance sadness

Avni went to her room.

Riya decided to inform Ali about what's happening unaware that even ali was a part of Neil Vidyut and Dd plan

Ali who received Riya message about the situation in metha House forwarded the message to the boys and then he text Riya back to keep updating him

Hetal and dayawanti were waiting for Ashish and ketan to come back when they came back dayawanti told what happened

Ashish closed his eyes thinking what to do because he loves both Neela and Avni and if he supports one of them then the other one will get angry

He decided to go and see Neela first and left to their room when he entered he saw Neela sitting near the balcony lost in thoughts

Neela sensed Ashish but didn't look at him and she felt him sit beside her

Ashish: Neela y .. but he couldn't continue as Ashish interrupted him

Neela: have I failed as a mother?

Ashish turned to look at Neela.. he turned Neela to face him and saw a silent tear drop down her cheeks

Ashish: y u r asking this?

Neela : yes or no?

Ashish: no after Ashu death u took care of Aman and Avni just like your own kids

Neela: then I do have the rights to decide about Avni life right?

Ashish: of course u do

Neela: then y r u going to try and convince me to change my descision

Ashish was surprised as Neela guessed correctly

Ashish: how did U know this

Neela: I'm your wife she said looking ahead after seen Ashish smile

He held her hand and started stroking the back of it with his thumbs

Ashish: Neela I'm not stopping u from doing anything...you have the right to take descision for our kids and also for this whole family but don't u think at the end of the day the rest have the rights to make their own decision

Neela: agreed but when our kids r stubborn and don't listen then we have to do such things to change their decision and at the end of the day we all want the best for them and as a mother that's what I'm doing for Avni

She said getting up while going to the washroom ... Ashish pulled his hair back he knows his wife and daughter very well especially when it comes to putting their points across he headed out the room somewhere praying that he is able to make Avni understand.

Avni was taking her clothes out from the wardrobe throwing it angrily on the bed

Ashish : what r u looking for superstar

Avni: my laptop she said angrily

Ashish felt like laughing as he realised Avni was too angry too realise that nobody keeps their laptops in their wardrobe

Ashish: u looking for the laptop that is on your table.

Avni turned around too look at Ashish who was standing near the door. She banged the wardrobe door so loudly and walked towards it

Ashish ( to himself) lord save me

He walked over to Avni who was turning on her laptop and slowly turned her around

Avni: papa I have some work please go

Ashish: first talk to me

Avni: I don't want to she said controlling her different types of emotions that was running inside her

Ashish: Avni...Meri jaan please just let it out

Avni. Let out what I have nothing to let out she said walking past Ashish and sat on the bed going through a file which wasn't even important

Ashish shook his head and sat next to her.

Ashish: Avni listen to me carefully.

Avni: no u listen to me carefully u should go and make maa understand that if I don't want to get married the she can't force me especially to get married to Neil just because he was my ex

Ashish: yaar what is it with you both over here when I tried to speak to Neela she cut me of and here u r...I swear to god u both r the same he said trying to lighten the atmosphere but it didn't work

Avni: I just don't want to get married she said hugging Ashish sides way controlling her tears Ashish hugged her back

Ashish: we r not even forcing you but think Avni as a mother Neela wants u to get married have a family of your own and I don't think that is wrong besides she wants u to get married to Neil because he said both of u love each other an... again Avni interrupted him

Avni: can u please stop talking about Neil she said pretending as if she has no interest but Ashish saw something else in her eyes but didn't bring it up

Ahsish: just sleep and forget everything then think with a calm mind

Avni: I have already decided

Ashish : superstar think from your heart... till then I will go and try make Neela eat something he said kissing her head and left the room

Avni: if I choose my heart then it's screaming to marry Neil but I can't because I have to listen to my mind she said helplessly.

Ashish tried but Neela was not ready to eat anything he sighed and hoped the next day Neela eats something's

The next day all came down for breakfast except Neela

Dayawanti: Ashish where is Neela

Ashish: on the terrace maa

Dayawanti: madhavi go and call Neela for breakfast

Ashish: forget it Madhavi

Dayawanti: y r u saying that

Ashish: she still won't eat anything

Dayawanti: she still hasn't ate since yesterday?

Ashish shook his head. When Avni heard that she didn't feel like eating anything and felt like going to tell Neela to eat but she knew that if she does then Neela would try to convince her
Avni left for office hoping that somehow Neela eats and drinks something by the time she comes back home

She went straight to her cabin and sat on her seat resting back looking at the ceiling

Vidyut looked at the time as usually Avni would have came long back
...he called the receptionist to ask if Avni came and was told she came an hour ago

Vidyut: Avni came and she didn't come to my cabin how she usually does... I hope she didn't doubt me knowing y Neil came yesterday or maybe it's due Neela aunty telling avni to get married

He got up and left for Avni cabin.. he knocked but when he didn't get any response he opened the door to see Avni sitting on her chair looking lost

Vidyut : Avni! He said a little loudly

Avni came out of her thoughts and saw Vidyut

Avni: Vidyut u here? Do u need anything

Vidyut. No u didn't come to my cabin like usual days so came to check on u

Avni: I'm sorry I completely forgot

Vidyut. What happened.

Avni looked at vidyut she sighed...Vidyut sat on the chair opposite her

Avni: Vidyut did u know Neil was in my cabin yesterday? She blurted out

Vidyut: no if I knew then he would have met me.. when did he come he asked pretending as if he doesn't know

Avni: after u left for your meeting I came To my cabin and then I saw him.

Vidyut: ohh

Avni: Vidyut y does things have to be complicated for me

Vidyut: y u saying that AM

Avni looked at vidyut and then told Him what had happened at home

Vidyut: really? But y would Neil say some thing like that to your family?... wait wait why did he come to meet u.. he asked pretending as if he doesn't know anything

Avni gulped and thought about what she should tell Vidyut as she can't let him know about the person sending all the notes

Avni: I don't know he was saying that I was staying stuff in a drunk state which I don't remember she lied to him as she remembers every single thing

Vidyut. Like ?

Avni: about me missing him and I still love him

Vidyut: do u? Avni looked at vidyut her heart was screaming a big yes

Avni: no y would I? She said... Vidyut looked at avni While she looked at her bracelet.

Vidyut: so now what r u going to do

Avni: its a no I just need maa to break her stubbornness of not eating or drinking anything

Vidyut : u know that is not easy

Avni: Vidyut instead of been positive u r been negative

Vidyut:. Ok sorry but u know I'm saying the truth as we all know what Neela aunty is like.

Avni: but I will have to do something

Vidyut in his head: let's see how u escape from this Avni as this time Neil won't let u go away from him and we all would get to the bottom of this'

Vidyut: like?

Avni: if maa can play the emotional blackmail game then even I can do something like that

Vidyut looked at avni in a alert way

Vidyut: what is your plan AM

Avni: something that will make maa eat and drink and stop this marriage thing.

Vidyut looked at avni and could tell by her expression that something was cooking in her head

He excused himself and went back to his cabin and told Neil

Neil: dw Vidyut let her do whatever she wants

Vidyut: Yaar y r u calm? what is cooking in your head?

Neil smirked and told Vidyut his plan

Vidyut: that means AM has no way out he said smirking too.

So here is chap 10 I'm glad u all
Loved the previous chap and also the recent promo...

Hope u all will love this chap would be waiting for all the comments and votes

Sorry for any spelling or grammar mistake

Lots of love
Sonali

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Chapter 11

Ashish was in his cabin looking at a file but without any concentration ...last
night when he had got to know Avni was in a relation with Neil who is Prakash son had surprised him but he didn't pay heeds to that as his main concern was Avni and Neela...but now he was not able to get that out of his head... he thought of calling Prakash to talk about this but cancelled the idea.

Prakash had woken up late since he was very tired due to yesterday workload ..Shweta gave him tea and then sat down next to him

Prakash : what happened Shweta ji

Shweta: actually Prakash ji I wanted to tell u something

Prakash: go ahead y r u hesitating...Shweta nodded and then started telling him about Neil and also how she and Bebe had gone to the metha house yesterday and asked for Avni hand

Prakash: Avni and Neil were together? I mean it's not a bad thing but I'm just surprised

Shweta: its strange na Neil and Avni were in a relation few years back and here I met Neela ji recently through ragini...and we became friends and u knew Ashish ji since a while due to business work and also became friends with each other...if only our kids were still together then maybe we would have know the methas way before

Prakash: I agree but whatever the decision may be it won't effect our relation with the methas in any way...Shweta nodded and just hoped for the best

At night

Ragini was playing with mishti while Juhi was getting dinner ready

Vidyut came and Misti ran to him and
Vidyut picked her up and threw her in the air making mishti laugh and then walked over to where ragini was he sat next to her with mishti in his lap

Juhi came to give Vidyut some water
And then went back to the kitchen

Vidyut: maa don't u think we should invite everyone for dinner

Raging: everyone as in?

Vidyut: as in the methas , khannas along with Ali and Dd

Ragini: not that I mind but anything special

Vidyut: no it's just that all of us could gather together and have a nice dinner with both the families I mean we haven't done that for a long time .

Ragini: not a bad idea I will talk to Shweta and Neela tommrow

Vidyut smiled and went to his room to change while on the way to his room he texted Neil with a thumbs up emoji ..Neil smiled as all thanks to vidyut he will get a chance to meet Avni again

Avni reached home and didn't see Neela around ( whenever I write Neela scenes I actually get tears in my eyes as it's still hard to digest she is no more in the show)

Avni: chachi did Maa eat anything?

Hetal turned who was placing the plates on the dining table turned around

Hetal: no Avni we all tried but she hasn't had anything... Avni sighed and headed upstairs but instead of going to her room she went to Neela room as she knew Neela would be over there

She slowly opened the door to see Neela resting her head against the head bored with eyes closed

Avni went to her and sat next to her on the bed. She looked at Neela who still had her eyes closed

Avni: Maa

Neela. Bacha if u r here thinking u can convince me to change my decision then u r wrong she said still with her eyes closed.

Avni: Maa please stop been stubborn and eat something

Neela opened her eyes and looked at avni

Neela: if I'm been stubborn then what about u? U say u don't want to get married then at least u can get engaged for now it's not like u have to get married straight away

Avni: just because Neil said all of those things u believed him thinking ... but Neela didn't let her complete

Neela: I didn't believe him just like that bacha I believed him because his love for u is clearly visible in his eyes

Avni gulped but she wasn't going to give up

Avni: come down and eat something ...all of this can be discussed later

Neela: no like I said I will only eat and drink something once u agree

Avni: Maa please she said getting a little annoyed

Neela: u r just wasting time bacha go this is my decision she said getting up and went to the washroom

Avni looked at Neela walking away and left from the room angrily going back downstairs

Ashish and ketan who just came back saw Avni walking pass them without saying anything

Ashish: Avni where r u going he shouted... seen her walk towards the main door but without answering she left

Ashish ran out to see Avni getting in the car driving away he tried to ring her phones but no luck.

Ashish: where did Avni go of like this he said coming back in looking at hetal and dayawanti who were also clueless and then looked towards the stairs to see Neela walking down

Hetal: don't know Ashish bhaiya when she came she asked me if Neela bhabi ate anything and then headed upstairs

Neela: she came to tell me to eat but when I said I won't have anything until she agrees she left... but y r u asking about her

Ashish: because she just left the house angrily and isn't answering my call right now
Neela was was thoughtful as to where Avni went as she thought Avni must have gone to her room

She tried calling Avni but still no luck .. they decided to wait for sometime and then try and call Avni and if no luck then they decided to call her friends to see if she was with them

An hour later the telephone ran.. dayawanti went to answer it

Dayawanti : hello .. all of a sudden her expression changed and the phone fell down.. all get alert

Ashish asked dayawanti what happened and who called

Dayawanti: our neighbour mrs Gupta daughter riddhima who is a doctor and became Avni friend just called

Ashish: what about her

Dayawanti: it's her call she said... she said that...Avni...avni...

Neela: Maa please speak what about Avni u r scaring me

Dayawanti. That Avni met with an accident and she is at the hospital... some person bought Avni to the hospital as she got an injury on her head and when riddhima saw her she called us

Neela: mera bacha!! She said tears welling in her eyes

Ketan: we should go there now.

All left to go to the hospital ... ketan Parked the car Neela quickly got out of the car running not waiting for the rest...Ashish called out to her but no luck when he reached inside he heard Neela asking the nurse at the reception about Avni... both reached to the room followed by the rest few mins

They saw riddhima coming out of the room

Neela: roddhima how is Avni is she ok now ?there is nothing to worry about right? Y r u quiet answer? she said losing her patience

Ashish: Neela ...Neela calm down he said turning her to face him

Neela : what do u mean calm down our daughter met with an accident.

Riddhima: aunty relax Avni is ok she got an injury on her head due to that she fainted but there is nothing to worry about in fact we should thank that person who bought her here on time

Neela prayed in silence thanking god

Ashish: where is that person who saved Avni

Riddhima: right behind u she said showng a lady who sat on a seat.. riddhima took them to that lady

Riddhima: ma'am this is that girl parents who u saved

Neela: thank u for brining my daughter to the hospital

Lady: there is nothing to thank me it way my responsibility as a human being... but if u don't mind can I tell u something

Neela: ji sure?

Lady: when I was brining your daughter to the hospital she kept mumbling please don't force me to get married... eat something please... I don't want to get married

Neela looked at the lady with her eyes widening. Ashish placed his hand on her shoulders

Lady: since u r here I will leave now as I was waiting for her family to arrive

Dayawanti: can we meet avni now

Riddhima: sure although she is unconcisious but u all still can one by one .. everyone went to see Avni and Neela and Ashish went last

Neela sat on the chair besides the bed while Ashish kneeled besides Neela.

Neela held Avni hand and looked at her face to see a bandage on her forehead

Neela. I'm sorry bacha because of me u r in this state... what can I do bacha I'm your Maa I really want to see my kids getting married but if my descision bothered U this much that it caused your accident then fine I lost... just wake up once please I won't ever tell u to get married without your own wish

Ashish: did u hear that superstar now come on like a good girl wake up soon so we can take u home.. otherwise look at your Mum she will continue to cry like this..understood.

Neela and Ashish went back outside giving one final look to Avni

Ketan: bhai I informed Aman and Riya they were about to come here but I told them not to worry...

Ashish: u did the right thing... since Avni is ok. I think it's best if u all go home me and Neela will be here

Dayawanti: but?

Ashish: Maa please

Ketan: bhai if U need anything let me know and I will send the driver back with the car

Ashish nooded while ketan hetal and dayawanti left

Meanwhile at the metha house Riya who got to know about Avni accident tried to call Ali but in vain so she called Juhi and told her that Avni met with a small accident but is ok now

Juhi who ends the call turned around when she heard Vidyut voice

Vidyut. Who was it Juhi

Juhi: Riya... she said Avni met with an accident

Vidyut: WHAT?... how did that happen and...before he could continue Juhi calmed him

Juhi. Calm down Vidyut.. Riya said she just got a small injury on her head nothing serious. She said cupping Vidyut face

Vidyut: but she is our friend and is hurt

Juhi: I agree but we will go tomorrow and see her .. she probably needs rest now...
Vidyut nodded

Meanwhile at the hospital Neela and Ashish were waiting outside Avni room

Riddhima who was going to check on Avni saw them ... she somehow convinced them to take a break and go to the canteen... riddhima entered the room to see Avni laying on the bed with eyes closed

Riddhima: I have sent your parents to the canteen u can open your eyes now

Avni opened her eyes and turned her face sideways and smiled at riddhima.

She quickly got of the bed and hugged her tightly

Avni: thank u so much for helping me riddhu

Riddhima: anything for u but do u know how worried your family looked

Avni: I know but I didn't find any other way to change Maa decision... if u hadn't call today then I would have never got this idea

Riddhima shook her head while
Avni smiled at her

Flashback
After Vidyut left Avni cabin she was thinking of ways to convince Neela to change her decision but suddenly she came out of her thinking mode when she recieved a call from riddhima

(Riddhima is Avni friend and also the neighbour of the methas however she knows nothing about Avni past)

Avni: hey. She said in a unusual tone

Riddhima: what is this Avni i finally got to speak to u after my hectic Schedule and this is how u greet me she said dramatically

Avni: sorry just a little busy

Riddhima: any problem?

Avni: no actually no prob... suddenly avni stopped when something started to cook in her head

Riddhima: what happened ? She asked when she noticed Avni going silent

Avni: riddhima I need your help

Riddhima: for what she said asking suspiciously

Avni: the thing is mum wants me to get married and that also to a guy who happpene to be... be my ...my ex she said closing her eyes as she never revealed to riddhima about Neil or anything

Riddhima was silent for some time and Avni was just waiting for her to respond

Riddhima: YOUR EX?..U HAD A BF AND U NEVER TOLD ME!

Avni closed her eyes as she expected this type of reaction

Avni: I'm sorry for that u can moan to me later on now please help me I don't want to get married and Maa has decided she won't eat or drink anything until I don't say yes

Riddhima: fine I will get u back for hiding that to me.. and tell me how do u need my help

Avni: well I'm going to go home and try and convince maaa and if she doesn't agree then I will fake my accident and u will call my family up and let them know that I got a small injury on my head and,,,,

Riddhima: Avni u know that is hard if my senior finds out that I faked a case then I will be in so much trouble and even if I do that much what if your parents ask who bought u to the hospital.

Avni: don't worry about that u won't get into trouble... I will make sure that I have a small injury on my head

Riddhima: have u lost it?..u r going to hurt yourself so that aunty gets convinced this is not done Avni

Avni: please riddhima as a friend please she said pleadingly for our friendship sake please

Riddhima: but?

Avni: if u love Armaan U will agree

Riddhima: I so hate u for this fine I will help u

Avni: great now we just need someone who could say that they bought me to the hospital

Riddhima: dw I have a nurse who can help me with that and u r lucky one of my strict senior and the dean is not in today

Avni: that is another good thing...so u will tell your nurse that she should tell Maa that I was mumbling in my unconscious state saying please don't force me to get married... eat something please... I don't want to get married

Riddhima: what r u making me do Avni.
But since u r my friend and of course I love armaan then I can do that much

Avni: thanks baby I will call u once I will leave to come to hospital bye

Riddhima: bye

Avni placed her phone back on the table and said to herself: I have to do this to stay away from Neil...even if it means to hurt my self.

End of flashback

Riddhima: thank god everything went according to the plan do u know how worried I was by lying to your family

Avni: thank u so much riddhima because of u my plan worked... even though I had my eyes closed but when Maa was speaking I felt the pain in her voice

Riddhima: I can't believe just so that I don't have to get married u made this whole accident plan.

Avni: like I said I couldn't think of anything else and happy that nobody doubted anything

Riddhima: but u actually injured yourself a little in the head does it hurt?

Avni: no riddhima chill I'm fine

Suddenly Avni saw the door knob turn she quickly sat on the bed pretending to hold her forehead while riddhima pretended to check on her

Neela walked in looking at avni... while avni was not able to figure out Neela expression and was hoping she had not heard anything

neela: how r u bacha? She said sitting next to Avni on the bed and gave a small smile

Avni: feeling ok

Neela: I'm sorry this happened because of me I promise to make it up to u.. that lady who saved u told me what u were mumbling when u were unconscious... I would never want to see u in this state bacha .. Avni felt a little guilty

Avni: Maa please don't say sorry and I hope u ate something

Neela: of course Ashish made me eat in the canteen... by the way riddhima can we take Avni home now

Riddhima: ji aunty

Neela: great come bacha

Avni: where is papa

Neela: I had told him to wait in the canteen

Neela held Avni hand and took her to Ashish

Avni was bought home however Neela was silent through out the whole drive and Avni noticed that.. when Ashish asked Neela as to what happened she just said she is feeling tired

Any guesses as to y Neela is behaving like that and what do u think will happen?

Thank u so much for all the comments for the previous part it seriously means a lot

Would be waiting for all the likes and comments for this part

Sorry for any spelling or grammar mistake

Lots of love

Sonali

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