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HighOnSarcasm

@HighOnSarcasm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: docritu99
Res for this one for time being.!
Just been busy with marriage of my KG's times of friend, oldest ever.!

That trumps everything!

Enjoy!

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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#52

this is twist ,actual one... didn't expect this...something about VR and RP..hmm...interesting interesting...

neil isn't incompetent..waiting for avni to realize that..the term incompetent cracked me up badly..vms ka asar shaayad...😆

kya paayal.. i was thinking aaj toh hojayega..avneil's mulaqat...i'm waiting for it.. hope agli update mein interview scene milega..😳

superub update... give iv in next update please😳

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HighOnSarcasm

@HighOnSarcasm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: ...SA...
this is twist ,actual one... didn't expect this...something about VR and RP..hmm...interesting interesting...
neil isn't incompetent..waiting for avni to realize that..the term incompetent cracked me up badly..vms ka asar shaayad...😆
kya paayal.. i was thinking aaj toh hojayega..avneil's mulaqat...i'm waiting for it.. hope agli update mein interview scene milega..😳
superub update... give iv in next update please😳

VR, RP, & Juhi are not part of this story, nor connection to any of the characters...they were just one of the many cases that Neil solved.

Avni doesn't know Neil yet...ek baar jaan jayegi, incompetent sey competent apney aap ban jayega Tillu😉

AvNeil will be meeting in the next update...just wait for it!!

IV??

Thank you😃

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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: paayaal

VR, RP, & Juhi are not part of this story, nor connection to any of the characters...they were just one of the many cases that Neil solved.
Avni doesn't know Neil yet...ek baar jaan jayegi, incompetent sey competent apney aap ban jayega Tillu😉
AvNeil will be meeting in the next update...just wait for it!!
IV??
Thank you😃

@italics: i got that.. but i said it in the meaning that's interesting.😆 (i mean kon soch sakta hai k vr is innocent actually)

iv..interview😳

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HighOnSarcasm

@HighOnSarcasm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: ...SA...

@italics: i got that.. but i said it in the meaning that's interesting.😆 (i mean kon soch sakta hai k vr is innocent actually)
iv..interview😳

Ah that ways!

I actually consider RP & Juhi unredeemable, intentionally bad women, making evil choices! I don't think they are victims but actual perpetrators!

VR on the other hand is a complex character who was raised to be a psycho and a mommaz boy...so I consider him very much a victim of RP, like every other women in RM was! Because her MO for both are the same!

Too much said for characters that are not even part of my story😆

IV & AvNeil meet will happen in the next chapter...just wait for it!

Edited by paayaal - 7 years ago

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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: paayaal

Ah that ways!
I actually consider RP & Juhi unredeemable, intentionally bad women, making evil choices! I don't think they are victims but actual perpetrators!
VR on the other hand is a complex character who was raised to be a psycho and a mommaz boy...so I consider him very much a victim of RP, like every other women in RM was! Because her MO for both are the same!
Too much said for characters that are not even part of my story😆
IV & AvNeil meet will happen in the next chapter...just wait for it!

@bold...thankyou for that.. 😆

@italics.. yeeyy..thanks again😳

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#57

I'm loving the pace of the story!

A vulnerable Neil & determined Avni. Quite an interesting combo. 👍🏼

Dayawanti Mehta. No comments! 😳

Neela & Vidyut as a couple! 😲 ANd Vidyut is Avni's Chacha?! 😆

Hmmm.. I wonder where Vidyut is at present. Is he positive or negative in the story?

Neil is juggling between his job and office. So here comes Avni Ayesha Pareikh to his help. I like the brainy & sassy Avni. Totally in love with her.

Dumb ACP Neil Khanna.. 😆

Please do update soon dear. This is very interesting. I would love to read more. :)

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HighOnSarcasm

@HighOnSarcasm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Ashi3
I'm loving the pace of the story!
A vulnerable Neil & determined Avni. Quite an interesting combo. 👍🏼

Dayawanti Mehta. No comments! 😳

Neela & Vidyut as a couple! 😲 ANd Vidyut is Avni's Chacha?! 😆
Hmmm.. I wonder where Vidyut is at present. Is he positive or negative in the story?

Neil is juggling between his job and office. So here comes Avni Ayesha Pareikh to his help. I like the brainy & sassy Avni. Totally in love with her.
Dumb ACP Neil Khanna.. 😆

Please do update soon dear. This is very interesting. I would love to read more. :)

Thank you so much😃

M glad you are loving the sassy Avni & the Neil of my story so far..!

Hope m able to keep them the same till the end!

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HighOnSarcasm

@HighOnSarcasm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#59

Note:

So I just realized I made a rookie mistake, considering m a rookie in writing/spinning stories please allow me a pass this time😳

I gave 2 characters the same 1st name.

Neelaz husband is named Vidyut Mehta & one of the cases that Neil solved had Vidyut R as the victim.

Let me clarify;

First, the characters of the Neilz case have no connection to this story. That was just my way of paying homage to the characters in the show...u saw who became the victim & who the criminals😆. So you can imagine anyone to be this Vidyut R.

Second, I imagined Karam as Neelaz hubby Vidyut Mehta & he does have a role to play in the story.

So please excuse my mistake and continue enjoying the story😃