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HighOnSarcasm

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Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#41

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srinithi

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Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#42

O teri ! Such a no-nonsense chic Avni is . She knows whole history of Neil and his accomplishments . Her opinion of Neil is justified . After facing such harsh past and lame system she will obviously think Neil as any other police office who just uses his subordinates to finish off his work . I just chuckled when she mentioned how is she gonna rescue the dumb ACP Neil 😆

I guess Avni is more or less similar to show in this story except she is more strong willed and resourceful.

You made Vidyut a victim . 😲 I would love it . That poor fellow is being used by RP in show and he just does idol worship of her . Is Vidyut positive in your story ?

Don't want Juhi to be connected with Neil🥱

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basket_101

@basket_101

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#43

Oh wow, I'm really enjoying this tolerating-no-nonsense attitude of Avni. Her rationale is justified too, but now I really can't wait how the story between AvNeil actually begins!!

A little part of me is also excited at Vidyut being the good man, with RP and Juhi being the amoral ones. However is that really the case or...?? There's going to be something in the story pertaining to at least Vidyut if not RP and Juhi too, otherwise you wouldn't have mentioned it.

Anywho, I'm enjoying how Avni thinks very less of Neil at the moment. It's going to be a very interesting journey.

Great part!! Waiting for the next! 😳

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HighOnSarcasm

@HighOnSarcasm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: AgnesFan
O teri ! Such a no-nonsense chic Avni is . She knows whole history of Neil and his accomplishments . Her opinion of Neil is justified . After facing such harsh past and lame system she will obviously think Neil as any other police office who just uses his subordinates to finish off his work . I just chuckled when she mentioned how is she gonna rescue the dumb ACP Neil 😆
I guess Avni is more or less similar to show in this story except she is more strong willed and resourceful.
You made Vidyut a victim . 😲 I would love it . That poor fellow is being used by RP in show and he just does idol worship of her . Is Vidyut positive in your story ?

Don't want Juhi to be connected with Neil🥱

Yep, Avni is smart, resourceful, & strong! Shze qualified & runs her own company...she can't be anything but!

As of now shez prejudiced against Neil...so she'll consider him of no consequence to her😉

Neela maa is the source fountain on Neil for Avni😆.

Vidyut was just a case, RP & Juhi just some random criminals that Neil caught...they have absolutely no connection to this story, AvNeil, & even DVM...so don't fear😆

Thank you for your comments😃

Edited by paayaal - 7 years ago

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-WingsOfFire-

@-WingsOfFire-

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#45

It's epic.Plz update fast.I couldn't even wait for the next chapter.👏

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HighOnSarcasm

@HighOnSarcasm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: basket_101
Oh wow, I'm really enjoying this tolerating-no-nonsense attitude of Avni. Her rationale is justified too, but now I really can't wait how the story between AvNeil actually begins!!
A little part of me is also excited at Vidyut being the good man, with RP and Juhi being the amoral ones. However is that really the case or...?? There's going to be something in the story pertaining to at least Vidyut if not RP and Juhi too, otherwise you wouldn't have mentioned it.

Anywho, I'm enjoying how Avni thinks very less of Neil at the moment. It's going to be a very interesting journey.

Great part!! Waiting for the next! 😳

M so glad I could put across how focused Avni is on her mission & how intolerant she is of others weaknesses, perceived or actual!

I hope m able to do justice to your expectations!

Vidyut, RP, & Juhi have no place in this story...they were just a case that Neil solved...It was just my way of paying homage to how I view these characters in the show...does that even make sense😕

Thank you for reading & liking it😃

Edited by paayaal - 7 years ago

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HighOnSarcasm

@HighOnSarcasm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: -SaskatoonDan-
It's epic.Plz update fast.I couldn't even wait for the next chapter.👏

Thank you so much😃

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basket_101

@basket_101

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: paayaal
M so glad I could put across how focused Avni is on her mission & how intolerant she is of others weaknesses, perceived or actual!

I hope m able to do justice to your expectations!
You're doing great so far, and I'm sure you will continue to do so!!

Vidyut, RP, & Juhi have no place in this story...they were just a case that Neil solved...It was just my way of paying homage to how I view these characters in the show...does that even make sense😕
Aahh okay, that makes sense. And yes, I understand what you mean. Definitely a good way of doing that in your SS btw! :)

Thank you😃
No problem at all!! 😃