AvNeil SS: The Vows We Take; Complete

theodyssey

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Hmm intriguing! Can't wait for the next update!

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HighOnSarcasm

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Posted: 7 years ago

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HighOnSarcasm

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: jarianasuslove
Hmm intriguing! Can't wait for the next update!

Thank you😃

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HighOnSarcasm

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: rinku95
amazing
continue soon

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docritu99

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Ye DVM bhi na, fictional stories me bhi change nahi hosakti.! Pathetic women.!

And omg what was that Vidyut is Neela's ex husband and DVM's son.? Dragon ke post ko seriouly leli yar tune.! 😆

but itna chotu sa update.
Bring on more.!

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HighOnSarcasm

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: docritu99
Ye DVM bhi na, fictional stories me bhi change nahi hosakti.! Pathetic women.!

And omg what was that Vidyut is Neela's ex husband and DVM's son.? Dragon ke post ko seriouly leli yar tune.! 😆

but itna chotu sa update.
Bring on more.!

😆😆...I thot y not...reel nahi to FF life mein hi sahi...😉

Chota sa b'coz it was an introduction of the main antagonist of the story. & no one wants to read a post full of ONLY DVM😆

Next part shud be better...fingers crossed😆

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basket_101

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Reserved!!

Read this in my short break, but won't be able to comment. Will surely come back to it by tomorrow night! :D

-- Unres

Hey!! I'm back to comment, albeit a little later than planned 😆

I think what I really enjoyed in the intro is the aligning of their stars. It's perfect and apt, how their vows will inevitable lead to the intertwining of their fates.

I look forward to reading this story because I know it's going to be very intriguing.

If you are sending PMs for this story, do add me to that list! I'd love to be notified of updates!

Take careee!

Lots of love 🤗

Edited by basket_101 - 7 years ago

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HighOnSarcasm

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: chavi12345
Nice

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srinithi

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: paayaal

Y was she a thief...I still don't understand, just so Neil could have a legit reason and a case no. to pursue her? How was that gonna help her against Dayavanti Mehta??

DVM is Dayavanti Mehta...she kept Avni locked in that dark and dirty store room when she was a kid...that experience. I'm sorry if that wasn't clear.

The stranger helping Neil...wait & watch or shud I say read😉

I know DVM is Dayawanti Mehta 😆

With whatever Neil pursued her was lame . He pursued coz he had personal interest . Actually he couldn't have arrested her. She never did any crime except stealing his heart 😆

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srinithi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#20

DVM is same be it fanfic or show 😆 I could imagine only Reema ji as DVM . She had such aura .

So what is she gonna do with Neil to destroy him . Marry him to Rhea . 😆 This is lame ! Give me something different

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