AvNeil SS: The Vows We Take; Complete - Page 17

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

How must Avni have felt when Neil broke off the engagement . She must have been in a cloud 9 . Absolutely...no man has ever prioritized her before this...& to come from a guy who she knows for barely 15 days & whom shez deceiving too!

Neil kissed Aman 😲 I never thought he will do that . The guy has really got the guts to break the engagement and claim Aman . Thats Neil Khanna for you...Mr.Always Right! 😉Ali and DD 😆 accepted Aman as their partner . Did they have an option . Nope😛 Coz they luv Neil😆
You just left in a cliffhanger . I am dying to learn Neil's reaction as he got shocker of life .😉 I'm happy that Avni revealed her identity . It's more better than he finds by himself . Thank you! Avni always charges ahead regardless of consequences...shez not the one to sit on her fanny waiting for things to happen!

hey was Vidyut Neela's husband ? Yes, Vidyut is Neela's ex Has DVM placed him in KI to do all her underground work For that...you'll need to stay tuned😃


Thank you so much 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: docritu99

This was freaking Amazing.!! Totally AMAZING.!! Thank you😳

Neil has always been true to his feelings so the breaking engagement thing wasnt a surprise for me. But but but. The kiss was.!!😉 Glad I managed to surprise you!😆

Ohkay shuru se shuru karte hai, So Neil has observed Aman's reactions and was very much happy too. Avni is just Avni, however her personal dilema will be, she wont let things cone in her revenge plan. Absolutely Not...Avni won't let anyone come between her & her revenge...not even Neil Khanna! That quality was what drew me to this character initially...her laser focus on her mission!


Vidyut is being soo different in this story.!😉

DVM, well no comment.! She got what she deserved. So was the case with Rhea.!😆

Yayyy.!! Neil ne engagement todh dia.! Vo bhi Aman verma ke lie.! Superb.!😃

The last part was sooo awesome and it was written so beautifully too.! I am in awe of ur writing style. Thank you! I can't write such scenes & it took a lot of re-write to get here! The kiss though.!! Poor guy is longing and kissing a guy, well he thinks so.!😆

Cant wait to read Neil's reactions after this biggest Khulasa of his life. Kahi khushi ke maare pagal na hojae about the still straight guy he is.😆 And and and the love of his life is a beautiful brave and fearless GIRL.! Lottery!!😆

How come the story is ending soon.!! Because its an SS😊

Anyway, i demand the next update sooonish.!!!

Yes yes soon...minion style😉




Thank you so much...!!🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: avneil2

Yeh kya tha? 😲Shocked NEIL KHANNA KISSED AMAN VERMA kese huyi.☺️oh my god,I want next update asap. Sabr ka phal meetha hota hai 😉 why iam thinking neil khanna know about aman verma's secret. Could be true, could also be not true...who knows😉 🤓Oh my god next update mein kya hoga...stay tuned for that 😉neil khanna shocked aman verma rocked. He broke the engagement for aman verma. 👏Wat an love.❤️ If he come to know about dayawanti deeds he will kill her...hez a lawman, woh law ko apney haaton mein nahi leta...remember? He serves legal justice! How story can end. No I dont want that.plsss,I want many chapter.dont end it.😭 Awww...but its an SS, it has to end! Anyways there are a couple more ch remaining...so don't fret! Next update mein tillu paagal hojatega yeh sochke uski system mein koi prblm nahi.🤣 😆😆Continue soon.


Thank you so much Safana..!!🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: paayaal


Thank you so much Safana..!!🤗

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Posted: 7 years ago
Hehe aman ne neel ki raato ki neend uda di hai🤣
Oh god..neil kised aman hahH
Glad avni removed the wig to show him actually whom he kissed
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: paayaal


😆😆

1st aney ki party to banti hai...😉


Party ka toh pata nahi, but your gift is ready in the form of an unreserved comment!! 😆😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Hybrid_Freak

Hehe aman ne neel ki raato ki neend uda di hai🤣

Oh god..neil kised aman hahH
Glad avni removed the wig to show him actually whom he kissed


Yep, she couldn't continue the deception any longer..!

Thank you so much!😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: basket_101


Party ka toh pata nahi, but your gift is ready in the form of an unreserved comment!! 😆😉


Yay!! Off to read😛
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: basket_101

Am I actually first? 😆

Reserved though, cause I'm about to crash lol

-- Unres!! 😃

First off, awwh, thanks for the mention 😳 Glad I could be of help! urw😃

And now on to the part. I have to say, this part is hands down my most favourite part of your SS so far! Thank you sooo much😃 I absolutely love that both of them have acknowledged their own feelings, especially Neil. It's a big change for him to feel this, especially for Aman [considering he's never had to ponder about his sexuality]. But the moment he went by Aman's side during the rituals was just perfect. And then when he jumped in when Rhea was cornering Aman too. Aman didn't need the help [we know that], but it shows how willing Neil is to protect him. AND YESSS, the engagement is off! Thank god 😆 Neil was anyways wanting to break it off, Rhea's behaviour just gave him a legitimate excuse..!!

Moving on to Avni's perspective. I'm glad she recognized that Neil has maintained his gray cells when he told DVM to discuss the merger in a more formal way. Neil's a smart guy! Avni's smart too for recognizing that😉

Show stealer was the end though! First that Neil finally kissed Aman, giving both of them a clear and tangible sign of their attraction. And then the revelation!!!!! I absolutely loved that bit!! Especially the last sentence! <3 awww...thank you so much...that was an especially hard scene to write...& m glad u liked it...makes it sooo worth the effort!🤗

Eaaagerly waiting to read the next chapter [which I know will be very soon 😉😆]😆

Great job with this chapter girl!!!! 🤗


Thank you sooo much😃

I truly appreciate everything!🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
Omg ..., this is one interesting concept. I can't wait to hear this conversation

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