AvNeil SS: The Vows We Take; Complete - Page 10

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Girl you are a pro in fooling 😆 Neil Khanna with a guy .How come his entire existence won't be shaken . 😆 I loved your description of Neil's behavior in cabin 😆 They guy has lost the nerve . Avni is a pro in disguising herself into a guy but weren't two candidates shortlisted . Who was the other . So Neil Khanna ki izzat neelami ho gayi 🤣
Ali and DD are Neil's two wives . DD toh has surrendered his heart and soul to his sir ji . Ali must be the commanding one here . Waise Ali doesn't bicker as much as DD .But our DD always catches Neil off guard and embarrasses him to no end . I cracked up at the word polygamy and sautan 🤣 I am enjoying the humor you bring in the story .

Neil tested the trick on Ali to clear that he really doesn't have attraction towards guys🤣🤣 The guy should be pitied 😆 The certain Aman Verma has shaken his foundation . Ali must have mentally laughed out his asses when Neil was trying his tricks 😆😆I got stomach ache when I read No current! No spark!🤣 Aj kal gays bahut bhik rahi hain . Waise my dream is Ali-DD 😆

Swetha would have fainted pale hearing her Tillu is interested in bringing a damad n lost her nerves
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Posted: 7 years ago
#92
Congo for promotion 🥳🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#93
Res..
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Unress..


First of all, congratulations for the color change payal🤗🥳

And coming to update.. ye kya tha?🤣
This is totally unexpected...
Bechara Neil...now i get DD and other's reaction...🤣
And about the nagging wives... Soo true...😆
This is an amazing update...
This cracked me up badly...
Awesome job payal...
I can't wait to see their next encounter...after all.. they have to work together..'in closed quarters'😉

Please update soon...😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Girl you are a pro in fooling 😆 Thank you😃 Neil Khanna with a guy .How come his entire existence won't be shaken . 😆 I loved your description of Neil's behavior in cabin 😆 They guy has lost the nerve . Avni is a pro in disguising herself into a guy but weren't two candidates shortlisted . Who was the other . Just a charcter used to create a diversion😉 So Neil Khanna ki izzat neelami ho gayi 🤣 ...bechara😆


Ali and DD are Neil's two wives . DD toh has surrendered his heart and soul to his sir ji . Ali must be the commanding one here Ooo☺️. Waise Ali doesn't bicker as much as DD. But our DD always catches Neil off guard and embarrasses him to no end...Thats his job, keeping things light for Mr.Serious Khanna😉 I cracked up at the word polygamy and sautan 🤣 I am enjoying the humor you bring in the story . Thank you😃

Neil tested the trick on Ali to clear that he really doesn't have attraction towards guys🤣🤣 The guy should be pitied 😆 The certain Aman Verma has shaken his foundation . Ali must have mentally laughed out his asses when Neil was trying his tricks 😆😆I got stomach ache when I read No current! No spark!🤣 Aj kal gays bahut bhik rahi hain . Waise my dream is Ali-DD 😆 Oh yeah...kahan gaye woh noodle bhaiya waley din...they don't interact much these days😭

Swetha would have fainted pale hearing her Tillu is interested in bringing a damad n lost her nerves that thought didn't enter my head probably coz I've always considered Shweta as a very strong woman...she sees a problem & directly goes for a solution...no dithering



Thank you for liking it so much🤗

Hope m able to justify your expectations going forward😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Congo for promotion 🥳🤗


Thank you..!!🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I'm dying 🤣
While I had an inkling of a doubt that Avni was disguised as Aman, I had no idea this would be the repercussion!
Honestly, this was one of the best chapters of a story I have read on IF so far. Hands down hilaaarious!

What I loved was DD and his gossip-y nature, 101'ing everyone about it 😆
And the test on Ali, oh man. That was beautiful 😆

It was written in a very nonchalant manner, which I truly appreciate. I like that Neil is trying to be thorough about this. Question: has he ever been in love before? Just trying to figure out whether a perceived "change" in his sexual preference has to do with the fact that he hasn't ever truly felt for anyone before. If that's the case, oh man - it's gonna get super interesting. Especially with them working under the same roof

Aaah you can tell by the length of my comment how intrigued I am for this story to continue!
You're doing a great job Payal!! Can't wait to read more 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: basket_101

I'm dying 🤣

While I had an inkling of a doubt that Avni was disguised as Aman, I had no idea this would be the repercussion!
Honestly, this was one of the best chapters of a story I have read on IF so far. Hands down hilaaarious!

Thank you sooo much..!!🤗 M glad you enjoyed it!😃

What I loved was DD and his gossip-y nature, 101'ing everyone about it 😆
And the test on Ali, oh man. That was beautiful 😆

😆😆..Thank you!

It was written in a very nonchalant manner, which I truly appreciate. I like that Neil is trying to be thorough about this. Question: has he ever been in love before? Just trying to figure out whether a perceived "change" in his sexual preference has to do with the fact that he hasn't ever truly felt for anyone before. This Neil has no 'past'...He hasn't really felt that soul ripping, heart crushing love for anyone before & certainly never felt any 'flutters' for a boy! Just the usual crushes & brushes with attraction...otherwise hez as 'pavitra as any TV bahu'😉 If that's the case, oh man - it's gonna get super interesting. Especially with them working under the same roof

Aaah you can tell by the length of my comment how intrigued I am for this story to continue!
You're doing a great job Payal!! Can't wait to read more 🤗


Thank you so much..!!😃

Your comments make my day & push me to better than yesterday!

So thank you!😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: ...SA...

Payal.. update kardo yaar..


Soon😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#99

Thank you so much😃

Hope u keep liking it!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi guys,

So I've been remiss in not posting any updates recently...but I had genuine reasons for slacking off...first real life & then ill-health kept me away from here😔.

But now that m on the mend, I'll make-up for my lapse😃.

Next chapter will be updated soon & the rest won't lag behind either...I hope😉.

So, thanks for waiting😃.


Love,

Payal.

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