AvNeil SS: Broken Promises ~ Part 7 | Page 21 (21-01-2018)

AvNeil123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#61

Avni, paraysed from waist down :( too much damage, Neil has a big responsibility ahead.

Please update again soon and make it a long one please 😆

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iykyk

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Posted: 7 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Tumpa12
interesting
loved it
update soon

Thank you! 😊

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swati

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Posted: 7 years ago

#63

awesomeee too good waitinggg for next asap

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iykyk

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Posted: 7 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: -shenz-
Bookmarking.
This one is aptly penned and brilliantly constructed. The emotions are bang on and the pace is good as well. It's a well-thought of and a crisp write up, I would say. You have handled the story as well as the characters really well.

Avni was FINALLY hurt. That was logical. Neil was finally feeling the guilt. Guilty of having ignore, even though it was unintentional he ignore his wife, his wifey.

Vidyut has to be the show stealer for me. Damn this character has got real layers to itself.

Amazing job done. I hope you update this sooner because I am definitely getting impatient with this story now.

Thank you so much for such a lovely message! 😳

Avni feeling hurt is very normal. The CVs are making her behave abnormally. She can be helpful and considerate even if she's shown hurt.

Vidyut's character has caught my fancy too. He's damn interesting!

Thanks once again dear! The 4th part is up. 😊

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iykyk

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Posted: 7 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: neeraja91
Please update! I know weekend hai and you may have other things to do but it's well written and gripping. So please update soon!

Thank you so much dear! 😊

The next part is up.

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iykyk

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Posted: 7 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: prathe
do try to update soonish yaar😳😛

Updated! :D

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prathe

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Posted: 7 years ago

#67

so finally avni ko chot laggayi and neil ka udgaya fuse

i so wish tum dr akash ko lekar aao woh avni ka childhood friend

Neel shud also bajafy neil saying i will take care of mu daughter 😆

superb yaar this SS is super duper hit cos we all could connect easily and mera tho first ss hai ya par i am reading here

juhi shud irritate neil more using misty and neil shud look through it and vidyuth

do continue soonish ok😛

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iykyk

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Posted: 7 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: plmzaq
Awesome update

Thank you! 😊

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iykyk

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Posted: 7 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Chumki1234
Very beautiful updates.This should happen in serial also but we are not so lucky.eagerly waiting for next update

Thank you! :)

4th part updated.

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Sash

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Posted: 7 years ago

#70

wow Ashi u r a superb writer👏... so well penned down🤗.. the emotions and the flow of the story

Avni being paralyzed is heartbreaking 💔 i know what Neil did is unforgivable.. getting Avni in danger cause of Juhi & his Child he thought but i still hope she recovers out of it and we get a happy ending 😭

Please do continue Ashi will be waiting 4 ur update

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