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This gotta be one of the most engaging stories I have read since a long time now. Predictions fail, the moment I expected Avni to be on the floor, she was not.
But what I love the most about this story is the way the emotions are portrayed. Apt. The way Neil's emotions play out in this part is absolutely stunning. As though I am watching scene unfold right in front of my eyes. His guilt, his fear and most of all, the panic was delt marvelously.
Can I just say, I loved DD here. He hardly had any presence in the chapter but the way he screamed 'Bhabhi' was all that I needed from him. His concern was well played there.
I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter now. Looking forward for Neil's outburst on Juhi, though he is consumed by fear as of now, but I still can't wait to read that part.
Thanks :)
