Originally posted by: Arieltabi
''STAY ALIVE, Avni. STAY ALIVE. Else your husband will himself turn into a serial killer, murdering us all at one go!''
This line made me laugh so hard🤣
I really don't know what to say. U r an amazing writer. I can't get over how beautiful this this story especially AvNeil's relationship is in here. I wanna read it again n again. And just not AvNeil all the characters are written beautifully. I love Ayaz and Reyhana's chemistry too. Ayaz I just love him. He is too good with his one line. Make-up Sex🤣
The scene where Neil rescue Avni, in that scene u portrayed both of their emotions beautifully. Avni's fear and then happiness and then longing for Neil's warmth, Neil's anger, frustration ,fear.👏 I really love that scene and hope cvs recreate something like this in this Vidyut track. I so wanna see this onscreen.
Avni is too cute she invited everyone for party in fear of Neil's anger😆.
The last part was emotional. I don't know why I had this feeling from first she is pregnant and yes I was right😆. Chalo serial me na sahi yaha toh we got the good news.😆
I really love this story. Its going to be one of my fav in IF. Please do write more stories.
Ye Hai Mohabbatein
