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1234gemini1234

@1234gemini1234

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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

I think this is one of the best avneil stories I have read...

I r actually ...a splendid writer ...thnks for enlightening us with such a masterpiece of yours...it was actually a complete combo of love ..passion ...mystery...loved it from the bottom of my heart ...keep on writing ...

Nd again hats off fr being such an awesome writer ...which u r...👏

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Tabassum

@Arieltabi

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#32

''STAY ALIVE, Avni. STAY ALIVE. Else your husband will himself turn into a serial killer, murdering us all at one go!''
This line made me laugh so hard🤣
I really don't know what to say. U r an amazing writer. I can't get over how beautiful this this story especially AvNeil's relationship is in here. I wanna read it again n again. And just not AvNeil all the characters are written beautifully. I love Ayaz and Reyhana's chemistry too. Ayaz I just love him. He is too good with his one line. Make-up Sex🤣
The scene where Neil rescue Avni, in that scene u portrayed both of their emotions beautifully. Avni's fear and then happiness and then longing for Neil's warmth, Neil's anger, frustration ,fear.👏 I really love that scene and hope cvs recreate something like this in this Vidyut track. I so wanna see this onscreen.
Avni is too cute she invited everyone for party in fear of Neil's anger😆.
The last part was emotional. I don't know why I had this feeling from first she is pregnant and yes I was right😆. Chalo serial me na sahi yaha toh we got the good news.😆
I really love this story. Its going to be one of my fav in IF. Please do write more stories.

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#33

loved the ending, perfect song for this part Phir Bhi tumhe chaahunga

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#34

This was awesome ! I could picturize Neil Khanna who was mad when Avni went to RM and how he wished she doesn't provoke Ballu .

Avni is pregnant . Else why on earth she will listen to him 😆 Lady Don !

Whatever image you gave of the killer I can imagine only Shaurya Goenka 😆

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Thesweetsoul

@Thesweetsoul

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Simi...1st of all I read both in one go...oh my horrors...u gave me not one but 2 heart attacks...omg omg omg...god ...1st I am a scorpion..nov born..when I heard neil he is a scorpio...I just flipped to the ground...and second...most people use sam... I don't understand why people use my name so much..are they in love with it...my gosh. ... Samiksha I am and everyone calls me sami or sam... my horrors... well last year, in each of our books I saw my name sam...this tine too... my god...1st nandhu used my name in a game called love oneshot... and then u..and so many people also... and u are a true writer..u know here and on wattpad my story Avneil: destined to be yours... that is completley like this...full of suspense and surprises... par aaj tune is no.1 analyser and guesser ka dil khush kar diya...I am impressed...tyjhe na ek book likhni chahiye..ek nahi hazaaro... I am a crime lover with suspense drama action... and romance... toh yeh ek perfect combination tha..which I love... u know I loved it so mch ki agar koi mere se poochega ki meri fav stories ki list mai konsi stories hai...mai sabse pehle iska naam loongi...and post on wattpad. .. this was legit legut amaz8ng u nailed it u rocked it..mere liye yeh story ko continue kar na... just 2 chaps morw..however I wanted that u never finish this story..keep writing. .aur mujhe apni simi se aur stories chahiye...soon..

ps u have even wrote better than reflorated ... u wrote better than a fate intertwined

Edited by Sami72 - 7 years ago

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1127246

Hibernated

Posted: 7 years ago

#36

Hey u know wht I tnk this one is my 1st comment on IF but I must say that u r truly a wonder god has created. U have so much power in ur writing..

I very much adore ur style of writing..

As ur well wisher I hope u have a bright future ahead.

With love

Kathy.

Edited by Kathy_927 - 7 years ago

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: docritu99
Take a Big Bow gal..!!
It was Indeed a Masterpeice..!!
This is probably the best story i came across and it was written in best possible way..
I m in love with ur writing..

Plz grace us with more of ur writings and stories..!!

Thanks a lot dear.

I am happy this story could strike a chord with you. 🤗

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 7 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Sami72
Simi...1st of all I read both in one go...oh my horrors...u gave me not one but 2 heart attacks...omg omg omg...god ...1st I am a scorpion..nov born..when I heard neil he is a scorpio...I just flipped to the ground...and second...most people use sam... I don't understand why people use my name so much..are they in love with it...my gosh. ... Samiksha I am and everyone calls me sami or sam... my horrors... well last year, in each of our books I saw my name sam...this tine too... my god...1st nandhu used my name in a game called love oneshot... and then u..and so many people also... and u are a true writer..u know here and on wattpad my story Avneil: destined to be yours... that is completley like this...full of suspense and surprises... par aaj tune is no.1 analyser and guesser ka dil khush kar diya...I am impressed...tyjhe na ek book likhni chahiye..ek nahi hazaaro... I am a crime lover with suspense drama action... and romance... toh yeh ek perfect combination tha..which I love... u know I loved it so mch ki agar koi mere se poochega ki meri fav stories ki list mai konsi stories hai...mai sabse pehle iska naam loongi...and post on wattpad. .. this was legit legut amaz8ng u nailed it u rocked it..mere liye yeh story ko continue kar na... just 2 chaps morw..however I wanted that u never finish this story..keep writing. .aur mujhe apni simi se aur stories chahiye...soon..

ps u have even wrote better than reflorated ... u wrote better than a fate intertwined

Samiksha 🤗

You're a Nov born Scorpio?

Superb!

I am one too. November 17th! When is yours? 😛

And haha, Sam is indeed a lovely name that I have used not just in this story but many other stories too. I bet you're loved hon 😉😳

Thanks a tonne for the lovely words buddy.

It is really encouraging. I will post this on Wattpad for sure.

If you really love thriller/suspense a lot, you can read: The Sinner and Cruise Adriana-- two of my stories on Wattpad that have received a lot of accolades in both the genres. I am sure you'll enjoy reading them.

And tumhe tumhari Simi se aur stories jald hi milengi. Pakka 🤗

Love,

Simi

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 7 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Kathy_927
Hey u know wht I tnk this one is my 1st comment on IF but I must say that u r truly a wonder god has created. U have so much power in ur writing..
I very much adore ur style of writing..
As ur well wisher I hope u have a bright future ahead.

With love
Kathy.

That's so sweet of you Kathy. 😳

I am glad you liked the story and also cared to comment on it.

I wish you a very bright and pleasant future too.

God bless. 😊

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 7 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: prathe
you are indeed a superb writer yaar simmi 🤗 i love reading detective/spy type stories a lot with a mix of love stry and this was just what all i love reading perfect combo i so wish avni in serial was some criminial lawyer or some detective though she ain't less than any
hats off yaar loved it to the core😳👏

Aww, thanks a lot for the appreciation buddy 🤗

And haha, our Avni on the show is anyway killing it with her dual life, one as the lovely Avni Khanna and second, as the invincible Ananya Verma.

No wonder Tillu is lattoo over her 😆