COMPLETE|AvNeil TS:From Loggerheads to Soulmates(Last shot:Pg 4)Oct 21

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Sonali

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

wow what a surprise! freakin loved the twist at the end!

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nlisa

@nlisa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

So beautiful! I can't wait to read the rest!

Update soon.

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rinku95

@rinku95

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Loved it
Continue soon please

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shreya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Utterly awesome part...

Enjoyed during reading..

U r really amazing writer

Happy diwali..

Plz Do write more on avneil.. M looking forward for ur stories

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

O man ! This was damn awesome !

I was astounded when you revealed they were married . Thought they were always Tom and Jerry .

I am all in for a crime story . I love crime 😆

The romance 😳 I was breathless . Jealous Neil is always a treat .

The way he demanded I want you now☺️ Sexy yay !

CBI is interesting than a police case .

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Tabassum

@Arieltabi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

This sooo good. I really love this genre. Mystery and Avneil together what a treat. That husband thing was so unexpected I thought they might have some kind of history together but husband😲😆

This story is really interesting. Just not AvNeil even the case in intriguing. And this reminding of one of my fav couple of a crime investigation show but unfortunately their love story was unfinished. I m really loving this story. Please continue soon.

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Ananyea123

@Ananyea123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

This was one of the best things I have ever read...Please update soon...This is such a new concept..Loved it...The husband part was totally unexpected...🤗

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Happy Diwali Simi
And what a wonderful story. And the ending was too good. Though I would like to see the end of this case, but the interaction between Avni and Neil was awesome.