Made For Each Other Avneil fanfic Part 5 on Page 6

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Sandy1988

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Here comes part 4

Ali comes to neela's house in search of Avni after getting to know of Avni leaving Neil's house. When he comes to neela's place, Neela ma tells him everything which led to Avni taking such a decision.

Ali : Neela aunty Avni abhi kahan hai

Neela: Woh Ayeshaji ki ghar mein hai Ali. Mein chahthi hoon ki tum wahan jao aur meri Avni ka saath do. Woh bahut akeli hai Ali.

Ali: Yeh bhi koi kehne ki baat hai kya Neela aunty Avni meri best friend hai. Mein usse kabhi akela nahi chodunga.

Ali in sometime reaches Ayesha ma's place and he knocks the door. After around two three minutes somebody opens the door. Ali immediately asks him who he is and what is he doing at Avni's place.

Ali was panicked if something wrong had happened to Avni. He was about to hit the guy when Avni interrupted Ali and introduced Karan to him.

Avni : Ali Yeh mera dosth Karan hai. USA se aaya hai kuch kaam se. Aur Karan yeh Ali hai mera bachpan ka dosth.

Tabhi Avni ko neela ma ka call aatha hai aur woh Ali se kehti hai ki woh Neela ma se milne jaa rahi hai. Tab tak tum dono baatein karo.

Avni leaves and Ali and Karan start talking to each other and become good friends within a short span of time.

Karan then asks Ali as to why Avni is staying away from her husband.

Ali explains everything to him and Karan gets very angry on Neil .

Ali then calms Karan and tells him that both Avni and Neil love each other a lot. Neil had taken Avni for granted and that's why he left her alone at the altar hoping that his Avni would understand. However he never realised that Avni can also feel bad about certain things.

Karan : I too agree with u Ali. Hume hi kuch karna padega taaki Neil Ko Avni ki ahamiyat pata chalein. Uske liye mere pass ek idea hai.

Ali: Kya hai idea bol Karan

Karan then explains his idea to Ali and he is quite impressed with his idea. Toh kal se hum start karenge mission avneil Ko milaana.

Karan: Ali tujhe Neil ke pass jaaake yeh bolna hoga ki Avni aur mein bahut Kareeb hai tujhse bhi zyaada. Phir dekhte hai Neil kya karta hai.

No precap this time. Do let me know how is it. Waiting for your comments

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Winxcute

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Awesome. Waiting to see a jealous Neil. Don't know when this is going to happen in TV. But at least can have some fun here. Continue . Update the next part soon. 👏

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rinku95

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Awesome
Loved it
Continue soon

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Sandy1988

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Hey guys I know it has been long time since I updated this fanfic. Sorry for the delay I was actually on a vacation so could not update it.

Here comes part 5

Avni went to Neela ma's place after getting a call from Neela ma. After reaching there Avni asks Neela ma as to why did she call her here. Neela ma says that she wanted to talk to her about her decision. Avni clearly told Neela ma that Neil has hurt her very badly and she cannot forgive him so easily.

After her discussion with Neela ma Avni returned back to Ayesha ma's place. Ali also by then left to his cafe after his plan discussion with Karan.

Karan: Avni yaar mein pehli baar India aaya hoon aur tere shehar mein bhi. Toh mujhe ghoomane lene jaa kahi.

Avni: Karan mujhe nahi lagta ki mein tere saath as paaongi. Mere Mann nahi hai. Tu Ali ke saath chala jaa .

Karan : Avni mein Ali se bas thodi der pehle hi mila tha so meri uske saath itni comfortable nahi hoon.

Avni : Theek hai Karan. Mein tumhaara saath chaloongi.

Karan : Thanks yaar Avni.

Avni goes inside the kitchen to prepare food for her and Karan.

Karan in the meantime calls ali. He informs Ali that he has convinced Avni to come out with him .

Dude Abhi tujhe Neil se woh kehna hoga joh humne decided kiya hai.

Ali in the meantime goes to Neil's house and asks for Neil. Neil comes out and takes Ali to his room.

Ali : Neil tune Avni ke saath Aisa kyun kiya. Tune Avni Ko bahut hi gehri chit di hai.

Neil : Ali maine nahi socha tha ki mera ek galat kadam mujhe Avni se dur kar degi. Tu Avni se milne gaya tha kya Ali

Ali: Haan Neil mein Avni se milne gaya tha but wahan jaane ke baad maine Avni Ko ek ladke ke saath dekha tha. Woh uss ladke ke saath bahut khush thi, hass ke baatein kar rahi thi aur hug bhi kar rahi thi . Mujhe kuch theek nahi Laga isliye mein tujhse milne aa gaya.

Neil clenched his fist in anger when he heard what Ali was saying about Avni. How can she hug somebody else and laugh with somebody else.

Ali: Maine socha Avni akelapan mehsoos kar rahi hogi isiliye usse call karke cafe bulaaya but usne mana kar diya aur kaha ki woh Karan ke saath bahar Jaa rahi hai.

Neil could not control his anger and jealousy and in fit of rage he punched his fist against a mirror.

That's part 5 for u guys. Do let me know how is it. Waiting for your comments.