Hi guys this is my first post in this forum and hope that you people will like what I have written
The characters are same as in the show right now. And the story of my Fanfic starts from where yesterday's episode ended.
All the family members were very angry with Neil especially Shweta and Neela ma. They were not in a mood to talk to Neil.
Neil comes.home calling out for Avni but does not get any reply from Avni. So he asks his mom where Avni is
Shweta : Bahut jaldi yaad aagaya tujhe Avni ke bare mein Tillu.
Neil : Mom please bataiye na Avni kahan hai. Mujhe usse baat karna hai
Shweta: Tune ek Baar bhi nahi socha Tillu Avni Ko use mandap mein akela chodke jaane se pehle. Tune yehi nahi socha ki usse kaise lagega, woh kya feel karegi. Nahi tujhe toh sirf Juhi ki padi hai.
Neela ma : Shwetaji sahi keh rahi hai Neil. Tumne meri bachchi Ko woh yaad dilaya kisses woh bahut saalon se bhulne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Tumne Avni Ko kaha tha ki t Ashish Mehta nahi ho but aaj tumne bhi Ashish Mehta ki tarah mandap mein meri Avni Ko akele chodke chale gaye.
Neil was feeling very guilty.
Neela ma: Tumhari wajah se meri beti ne pyaar karna seekha tha aur tumhari wajah se hi uska pyaar se wapas bharosa uth gaya hai Neil.
Neil: Avni kahan ho tum mujhe tumse baat karni hai. I am sure tum mujhe samjhogi and meri madad karogi Avni. But he does not get any reply. Mom Avni kahan hai
Shweta: Jabse hospital se aayi hai Avni ne kisi se baat nahi kiya hai Tillu. Woh seedha Apne kamre mein chali gayi and uske baad humne usse dekha bhi nahi.
Neil runs towards his room but he has an unknown fear also.
When he reaches the room he does not find Avni there. He checks the washroom if she is there but could not find her. Then finally his eyes fall on the letter that Avni has written.
Dear Neil,
Jab tum yeh letter pad rahe hoge tab tak mein tumse bahut dur jaa chuki hongi. Neil aaj tumne mujhse yeh ehsaas dilaaya ki Ayesha ma ko kaisa laga hoga jab papa unhe mandap mein akela chodke gaye. Maine socha tha ki mera Neil Ashish Mehta nahi hai but tumne bhi mujhe mandap mein akela chodke diya. Aur jis baat Ko mein bhoolna chahthi thi usse hi tumne yaad dilaaya. Phir bhi maine himmat nahi Hari Neil. Maine saare ghar waalon Ko yeh kaha ki Neil Ko hamari zaroorat hogi toh hume uske saath chalna chahiye. But maine joh hospital mein dekha usne mere dil ko thod diya Neil. Tumne Juhi se vaada Kiya ki tum hamesha uske saath rahoge. This broke my heart and also it broke me. Mein nahi chahthi hoon ki kal tumhe mujhe ya Juhi mein se kisi ek Ko chun naa pade. Mein tumhe aise situation mein nahi dekhna chahti hoon. Isiliye tumhe chodke jaa rahi hoon Neil. Dont try to find me. Always stay happy with Juhi.
Yours
Avni
Neil broke down after seeing this letter. By then all the family members also arrive there and get to that Avni has left them forever.
Shweta: Yeh sab tere wajah se ho raha hai Tillu. Naa tu usse bachchi Ko dikh pahunchaata aur naa woh hum sab Ko chodke jaati.
Bebe: Shweta theek keh rahi hai Tillu. Naa jaane Avni bahu kis haalat mein hogi
Prakash: Neil tu Avni Ko dhoond aur ghar wapas le as
Neel who was till now not in his senses realises that it's because of him that Avni has left him. I hhave created this fear in Avni that I can leave her and choose Juhi. I will only clear all these misunderstanding Avni and get you back iny life.
U are my life Avni and I will get my life and my happiness back soon.
That's my first part. Hope you liked it. Will continue it if u all want me to continue it. Also help in finalising a title for this Fanfic.
Edited by Sandy1988 - 7 years ago