Made For Each Other Avneil fanfic Part 5 on Page 6 - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
Excellent please update soon 😊 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
Excellent update yaar! šŸ‘ could feel avni's condition! 😭 don't let Avni melt so easily for Neil! And plz keep dat chuhi aside😔 I'm sick of her 🤢 but I really want VP to fall for Avni and neil getting really jealous šŸ˜† Do update soon...
Lots of love 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13
Yaar honestly I want Avni to bash him like this in the show also on behalf of all avneil fans neil leaving the wedding has no excuses and that too for that chuhi makes it unbearable you guys are amazing yaar you all are far better writers than the original ones
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Super and executed for more updates and wanting to see who karan is ..

These lines Have so much depth of meaning ...

Tumhare liye hamare rishte ki kya ahamiyat hai yeh mein jaan chuki HOON
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awsome pls update next part soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Guys if u ask me personally I don't want to include Juhi or her daughter track in this Fanfic. Neither will Vidyut be a part of it.
Part 3

Karan played by Rithvik Dhanjani

Neil tries to make Avni understand that he loves her more than anybody else. However Avni does not pay heed to him and Avni just shuts the door on his face. Neil is now determined to get his Avni back in his life.

Next day morning Neil thinks what should I do that will make Avni realise that I love her a lot and will not leave her and he again leaves for Ayesha ma's house to meet his Avni and convince her.

A good looking, handsome guy comes towards Avni's house. He knocks the door and Avni feels that it's Neil who is bothering her again.

Then Avni walks and opens the door and is shocked to see the person standing in front of her.

Avni: Karan!!!! Tum yahan kaise. Kab aaye India wapas Karan?

Karan: Arey yaar Avni. Itne saare sawaal ek saath. Saas toh lelo. He just hugs her after saying.

Avni also feels happy seeing her childhood friend and hugs him back. Seeing Avni and Karan hug somebody felt very bad and upset about it. That's none other than our Neil.

Neil felt a pang in his heart seeing Avni hug somebody else apart from him. And Avni who was not talking properly since yesterday had smiled and hugged Karan which made Neil feel even more bad and jealous of Karan.

Avni: Karan maine tujhe kitna miss kiya pata hai. After leaving this city where Ali was my only friend, I was thinking if I will ever get a friend in the new place. But u were very warm and kind to me and we instantly kicked off and become the bestest of friends. Pehle yeh batao tu yahan kya kar raha hai.

Karan : Woh sab chod Avni pehle yeh bata ki tune kya halat banali hai apni. Shakal dekhi hai apni. Aisa kya hogaya hai bolo Avni

Avni then narrates the whole incident that had happened to Karan.

Karan: Acha kiya ki tune Neil Ko maaf nahi kiya. Usse yeh ehsaas hona chahiye ki tujhe bhi Bura lag sakta. He should not take u for granted.

Karan : Aur Haan mein teri madad karunga tere Neil Ko yeh samjhaane mein. Karan notices that somebody is constantly looking at him and Avni since a long time. But does need to say anything about it to avni

Karan hugs Avni and kisses her on her cheek. This makes Neil burn in anger and jealousy and he clenches his fist in anger and bangs his car.

Precap: Karan meets Ali and makes a plan to make Neil realise his mistake

Guys here is part 3. I know it's a bit boring and short too but will definitely make it interesting next time. I will updating this Fanfic once or twice in a week as am a working. So will update the next tomorrow if I get time or after 22 as am going for a vacation. Please let me know how is it.



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Posted: 7 years ago
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It was really nice. Neil being jealous was awesome. Can't wait for next part. Karen is doing all this to make him jealous and realise his mistake. Good work keep it 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
superb
waiting for karan's plans
continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Jealous Neil wow nice update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
Nice will wait for next part

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