Avneil FF:Tum Mile (chapter 9 updated at pg 15 26/12) - Page 8

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Then everyone started having food. When they finished, neela gets up to bring ice cream for desert.

Neela served everyone and sits. Everyone eats.

Neel winks at neela and says "finally there is something which is my favoutite" neela simles and avni looks at neel with wide open eyes, and disbelieve and shock is clearly visible on her face.

Neel haves another spoon of ice cream and says "so tasty my favotire ice cream"

Neela says "Even avni's favourite ice cream is butersotch"

Now it is neel's time to look at her in disbelieve, he says "not fair, you get this ice cream because its her favourite" and he pouts

And everyone laughs at neel's expression, this time even avni finds it cute.

After having ice cream, everyone gets up and goes. Neel and Prakash goes in the living room to have some talk, while neela, bebe, maddy and kareena goes to their room. Shweta takes avni to show her new room.

They comes near the room, avni sees another door and asks " whose room is this"

Shweta smiles and says "this is neel's room"

Avni nods.

Avni opens the door of her room and finds a very beautiful room, decorated with cute stuff, full of teddy bears and stuff toys.

Avni jumps and says "thank you so much aunty, this is just like my room back in Austrailia"

Shweta smiles and says "mention not" and she caress her cheek.

Shweta says "its late now sleep, if you need anything call me or your ma, even you can ask neel"

Avni nods and says "good night aunty"

Shweta says "good night" and she goes.

Avni goes inside her room and adorbles her room. While roaming around her room, she accidently hits her leg with a sharp edge of table and gets a scratch.

Avni says "wow great, now where is the antiseptic cream"

She tries to search around the room but fails to find any.

Avni thinks ' I think I have to go and get it from neel's room, no choice"

She goes out of her room and stands infront his room. She murmurs "you can do it, you can do it, you just have to knock and ask for antiseptic cream and done"

She takes deep breaths and murmurs "okay"

She knocks at the door, but no one opened the door. She sarcastically murmurs "great"

She pushes the door and goes inside. She finds no one in the room. She goes near the wind chimes.

She says "its so cute, also this room is so nice"

She goes near the balcony side side-table and suddenly something comes infront of her eyes which made a scream.

She screams "cockroach" , (Author's Note: the cockroach is really very big)

And she jumps on the bed and runs on it. She reaches the other side and jumps down. She finds that the cockroach is coming near her though it is really very far but still coming. So she jumps on the chair and then moves up to the table.

Sseing the cockroach she screams "don't come near me" but the coackroach didn't listen and slowly walks to the table.

Her focus is on the cockroach that's why she didn't notice neel opening the door and coming inside. Neel while coming to his room, heard some screams. He got tensed that why avni is scream and he hurridedly comes inside the room, only to find avni standing on his study table and looking at a cockroach (Author's Note: their rooms are in a different wing of the house, so no one can hear the scream or noises coming from rooms except from the ones who are near their rooms)

He thinks ' really cockroach, so you are screaming because of that small creature. You have almost given a heartatteck. Such a miss ajooba you are avni hats off.'

He starts to walk to the table and she is still busy with cockroach that she didn't notice him.

Seeing the cockroach advancing near the table and ultimately her. She takes steps back. Unknowingly that she is at the very end of the table, she takes a step back , such that half of her foot is on the table. She turns as neel shouts "avni". But it was too late she begins to fall, but she looks and finds herself falling on neel who has opened his arms so that he could catch her.

As soon as she fell in his arms, he loses his balance and falls back. With him on the floor and she on the top of him.

They remained in that position for some seconds, looking in each others eyes. Neel breaks the silence and says "i didn't know you liked me so much. Why behaving so rudely with me at the dinning table when you wanna come close to me later".

Avni gets angry and says "its nothing like that" and she separates herself from him and gets up. Neel sits up and asks "so whats brings you here other than me"

Avni chooses to answer first few words and ignore the last three words.

She says "antiseptic cream"

Neel gets alarmed but didn't show it. He gets ups and goes to the almirah, to get the first aid box.

Neel asks "where and how did you get hurt"

Avni says "I got my leg hit by a table"

Neel takes out antiseptic cream, and asks "where"

She shows him the scratch on her leg and he sits down next to her leg and applies the cream on the scratch.

Neel looks up and says "next time be careful"

Avni nods.
Neel gets up.
They keep looking in each others eyes. Just then neels phone rings which got them out of their world.
Neel sees the caller name and mentally curses the caller who is none other than DD and avni felt awkward thinking what she was doing.
Neel looks back at avni and she said "good night". She turns and runs out of the room before listening to neel.
After she was out, neel's face fell and he sadly says "good night miss ajooba"

Avni comes to her room and thinks 'why did i felt so good with neel. Why felt so comfortable'

Neel in his room, picks up his phone and says "what was so urgent DD that you couldn't wait for morning"

Neel says "WHAT??!!"

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Neel in his room, picks up his phone and says "what was so urgent DD that you couldn't wait till morning"

Neel says "WHAT??!!"

He angrily moves his hand over his hair. Neel asks "Are you sure

Neel says "ok DD will talk to you tomorrow, good night

Meanwhile in neela's room

Neela is standing near the window and is in deep thoughts.

*****FLASHBACK******

In the hospital

Neela says "Don't make fake promises. I know why you left. Not just me, everyone knows. Juhi told us everything."

Neel says "what juhi"

Neela says "yes juhi she told us "

*****SECOND FLASHBACK*****

In Khanna house

Everyone except neel is in the hall, crying for avni. They all the crying seeing the fate of their poor girl. Also, they are hell worried because of her disappearance.

Juhi comes to Khanna house with her wrist and forehead bandaged. DD has come with her till the gate only, then she asked him to leave as she can go all by herself.

Everyone sees juhi and bebe asked "what happened, why bandages around your forehead and wrist

She smiles seeing the environment and ignore her question and instead asked "where is avni and why all of you are crying

Prakash says "as avni has ran away after neel had left her on the alter in the middle of wedding

Juhi says "oh really,

Juhi murmurs to herself and says "great now it is even more easier for me to get neel

But to her misfortune, Shweta heard her. She turns juhi and slaps her hard.

Everyone gasps.

Shweta shouts "I knew it that you will come in between them

Juhi touches her slap mark and shouts "don't shout aunty, and by the way avni has come between me and neel, and it is good that she left.

This time bebe turns her and gives her a tight slap.

Bebe says "tell me what did you do "

Juhi says "so you what to know, so listen I called neel at the time of wedding and had asked him to choose between avni and me, reminding him of the fact that he is my husband and our daughter's real father. And also that if he will choose avni over me for his family's happiness then i will commit suicide. And he will live his whole life without his love, with the most hated person in his life. So without even thinking he came running to meet me at the suicide point and took me to hospital. He came for me, for his love. Finally he chose his love else you would have got him married to avni forcefully.

Neela gets up from the sofa and slaps juhi, and she says "how dare you

Shweta drags juhi out of the house and says "don't come here again else

*****END OF SECOND FLASHBACK*****

Neel says "thats a lie, not everything but many things and the way it is put is a false"

Everyone gasp

Neel then tells neela the actual reason.

Neel says "neela ma, DD had called me and asked me to come soon as juhi has attempted suicide and is in Ayesha ma's home. And she is calling my name and not opening door. She is asking about me, DD just gave me this message and asked me to come fast. Juhi, she has never called me. Also I have never married juhi and her daughter is not mine, its Vidyut's daughter. Also I love avni only. I know that its my fault and I should not have run like this, I should have atleast informed but ma, what could have I done ma. I just felt that saving a life is more important and in stress I couldn't think much. And I am sorry ma.

Shweta says "Neela please you know why he done that right then please forgive him."

Neela says "But because of that only she is under this condition. How can i forget that"

**END OF FLASHBACK***

Neela says "I could not have even thought that juhi can go to this lengthens and because of her I treated neel so badly. I thought that he cheated on my daughter and and a tear escapes her eyes.

Suddenly she hears a knock on the door and she wipes off her tear and says "come in

And she finds neel on the door, neela says "come neel what brings here at this hour

Neel says "ma actually I want to tell you something

Neela says "come sit and I also wanna say something

Neel sits in the bed besides neela.

Neel says "you say first

Neela says "actually neel I want to apologize "

Neel interrupts her and says "ma please don't apologize, I was at fault and I must be punished for it, and you did right by punishing me, so don't apologize

Neela says "neel thank you so much for not getting angry with me, also what do you want to tell

Neel says " yeah right I have to tell you something very important. ma actually DD called me and told me that avni's accident was planned and the mastermind was none other than, any guesses "

Neela says "Vidyut

Neel says "no, another try

Neela says "ragini pandit

Neel says "no ma, it is juhi

Neela gasps and says "juhi

Neel says "yes ma juhi, I have never thought that her hatred will make her do this, I am sorry ma because me only she is in this condition

Neela says "don't apologize neel, its not your fault, neel don't worry everything will be fine, and I think its late and you should sleep, we will discuss this tomorrow

Neel says "yeah ma, you are right, good night

Neela says "good night

Neel gets up and goes.

When he comes in his room, he says "it feels so empty without you avni, even when you are back in this house, we cant sleep in the same room, or can we neel smiles and runs out of his room. He goes to avni's room and finds her sleepy not so comfortably as there is a frown on her face.

Neel murmurs "I know why this frown is there, because I am not sleeping with you. Before also when we use to sleep separately you have this frown when you have nightmares "

Neel smiles and murmurs "even when you forgot me, you still remember my presence

Neel goes and sleeps with her.

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