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INDEX
CHAP 1 AT PG 1
CHAP 2 AT PG 4
CHAP 3 AT PG 8
Chapter 4 at pg 10
chapter 5 at pg 13
chapter 6 at pg 13
chapter 7 at pg 15
chapter 8 at pg 15
I have read your comments... that cvs are good.. just trust them.. also i shouldn't leave writing..
So i trust you guys.. and i will try my best not to leave it.
I wanted to write this chapter so wrote it.. tell me.. how is it..
Its short.. coz i have a mood off.. sorry..
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In the church...
Everyone is sitting on the benches, and are very happy. Today shweta is getting avni and neel married again but in a Christian way.
Avni is wearing a beautiful white gown and neel is in black suit.
Priest says "Do you consider him as your legal husband"
Avni says "I do"
Priest says "Do you consider her as your legal wife"
Before neel could answer.. his phone rings. He sees the caller ID .. picks up the call then runs away. While everyone shouts to call him back.
Avni is standing there perplexed. Tears are flowing from her eyes.
Neela notices avni and comes to her. Before she comes to her avni runs from the church.
AFTER 1 WEEK
Neel opens the door. Avni opens her eyes very slowly and looks at the surroundings.
Neel gets very happy.. and says "Avni" and he walks to her bed.
Avni looks at him and says "who are you"
_________________
This is dedicated to the new olvs and my previous storyline idea..
Hope you like it..
Sorry for any grammatical errors or any other error
Thank you
Love you all
Mehak
CHAP 1 AT PG 1
CHAP 2 AT PG 4
CHAP 3 AT PG 8
Chapter 4 at pg 10
chapter 5 at pg 13
chapter 6 at pg 13
chapter 7 at pg 15
chapter 8 at pg 15
I have read your comments... that cvs are good.. just trust them.. also i shouldn't leave writing..
So i trust you guys.. and i will try my best not to leave it.
I wanted to write this chapter so wrote it.. tell me.. how is it..
Its short.. coz i have a mood off.. sorry..
______________
In the church...
Everyone is sitting on the benches, and are very happy. Today shweta is getting avni and neel married again but in a Christian way.
Avni is wearing a beautiful white gown and neel is in black suit.
Priest says "Do you consider him as your legal husband"
Avni says "I do"
Priest says "Do you consider her as your legal wife"
Before neel could answer.. his phone rings. He sees the caller ID .. picks up the call then runs away. While everyone shouts to call him back.
Avni is standing there perplexed. Tears are flowing from her eyes.
Neela notices avni and comes to her. Before she comes to her avni runs from the church.
AFTER 1 WEEK
Neel opens the door. Avni opens her eyes very slowly and looks at the surroundings.
Neel gets very happy.. and says "Avni" and he walks to her bed.
Avni looks at him and says "who are you"
_________________
This is dedicated to the new olvs and my previous storyline idea..
Hope you like it..
Sorry for any grammatical errors or any other error
Thank you
Love you all
Mehak
Hollywood
Udne Ki Aasha
