AVNEIL SS Tu Meri Zindhagi part 5 in pg 10

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PART 1

Neil entered Rang Mahal with his team.. He wanted to save his Avni at any cost... When he enters the hall he is shocked to find his Avni dancing infront of many people.. He noticed how other mens were eyeing his Avni.. Anger raised in him and he noticed her.. Avni .. His Love.. She was dancing but he can find out that she is thinking about him.. those eyes are filled with pain.. It pricked his heart.. He noticed a men nearing his wife... He ran towards them... when that man was about to touch Avni a hand caught it... Avni was brought back to this world... She was happy to find her Neil standing infront of her... Neil punched that man and Avni sensed her hubby's anger... RP was shocked to find out that her place has been covered by police... Neil was fighting with RP's gundas... he was beating everyone mercilessly due to his anger... everyone were lying down... Neil's angered vanished when he hears his name from her..."Neil"... "Avni.."
Neil ran towards her and hugged her tightly .. he doesnt want to leave her... he have been waiting for this moment to find his Avni safe... Avni hugged her Neil... She knows that her Tillu cop will surely save everyone... She always believe in him... She knows that she loves him unconditionally... They doesnt want to let go others.. tears are flowing continuously from their eyes...
RP is arrested... Neela , Bebe , Prakash and Swetha everyone enters to find the love birds engulfed in a hug... Neelama is feeling happy to find her bachi safe.. Bebe and Prakash smile looking at Avneil.. Swetha looks at both and thinks about his Tillu's confession and Avni's sacrifice for her Tillu... DD brings Ali and Juhi with him.. DD feels happy to find his Neil Sir and bhabhi together.. Ali smiles looking at his friend who loves her husband unconditionally... Juhi sees Neil and Avni with tears in her eyes.. Swetha notices Juhi and says" Juhi.." Everyone looks at Juhi.. Avni and Neil comes out of the hug and look at her... All hearts are pounding with some fear and pain...
DD says that Dayavanthi Mehta and Amol Mehta escaped... Neil looks at Avni whose is in pain because of her bhai's betrayal and says that they wanted to arrest them also... Suddenly they hear DM voice saying that they cant arrest her.. Within a fraction of second Amol keeps knife in Avni's neck making everyone to gasp.. Neil shouts at Amol to leave her but he says that if he tries to arrest him he will kill Avni... Neil is ahgered to find his love under a knife in her neck... Neelama shouts " Amol... Im warning you leave my daughter or else you will face bad.. DM laughs and says" look he is not Aman..he is my Amol.. mere pothe.." Avni closes her eyes and remembers her first time holding her little brother in her arms..when aman called her as di.. raksha bandhan incident.. she smiles with tears in her eyes...Avni says " Daavanthi Mehta he is not my Aman.. you killed him long before.. He cant be my briother.. Mere Ayesha ma na beta nahi he... I was a fool to believe that I will get him back.. After you killed my ma shot me I came back to you oly to see my Aman.. but you killed him long back ago.. Amol.. Ayesha ma will never have a beta like you.. Its better you kill me Amol.. I should get the punishment for trusting you.. ".. Amol says everyone to drop their guns.. When Neil was about to drop he manages to shot Amol in his hand and as a result when Avni was being pulled out by Neil she gets a scratch in her hand.. Neil panics seeing blood in her hand.. She assures him she is fyn and walks near to Amol.. DM is sitting beside Amol and he is crying in pain.. Avni says" Amaol this is what you get when your with Dayavanthi.. I thought you changed but you will never and your not Aman.. Your not bhai.." Everyone has tears as all knows how hurt Avni is... DM takes a gun and says "It was my mistake to leave you live.. I should have killed you long before.. No matter your death is always from my hands" Before anyone can react DM shoots Avni... Neil shouts "AVNI.." and runs to her.. he holds her before she fell down.. Everyone surrounds her and Avni is having pain in her abdomen... Neil lifts her and moves out to take her to hospital... Neil jus turns and looks at DM with his firey eyes and warns her.. he ask the others to arrest them... Neil enters the hospital with Avni in his arms who is unconsicous ...

PRECAP:- Neil is crying.. Juhi holds Neil's hand and everyone look at them..

Part 2 :- Pg 4
Part 3 :- Pg 6
Part 4 :- Pg 8
Part 5 :- Pg 10
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very nicely written...
OMG! Avni is sshot.. Juhi and Neil.. Really desperate to read next chapter.
You moved everything at a fast pace.. Very interesting.. Do continue it soon dear
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yaar it is too good.i was waiting for such a thing...could cv's give like thhiis..i really want..aishu keep updatinng soon.friends?and do read my stories too...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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AWesome start, do update again soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting start...
Loved chapter 1
Update soon😃
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Originally posted by: shrushti24

nice... plz send me pm


Thanks dear.. Sure I will send PM.. :)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: vu1998

Very nicely written...

OMG! Avni is sshot.. Juhi and Neil.. Really desperate to read next chapter.
You moved everything at a fast pace.. Very interesting.. Do continue it soon dear


Thanks a lot dear.. will update the next part soon.. :)
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Originally posted by: Sami72

yaar it is too good.i was waiting for such a thing...could cv's give like thhiis..i really want..aishu keep updatinng soon.friends?and do read my stories too...


Thanks dear.. Will update it soon.. I hope so CV's will come up with a good one more than this.. :)
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Sure dear.. will update soon
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Originally posted by: pri12

amazinggg...loved it


Thanks dear :)

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