Avneil TS:Kismat (LAST PART UPDATED AT PG 11 13/11) - Page 3

Originally posted by: mehak4

This is my
three shot, hope you like it.

The lines in black is for what author is saying or
describing, blue for avni's POV and () for translation and red for song.

Author's POV

In khanna
mansion.

"Avni where are you, neel screams and fell on his knees,
covers his face with his hand and cries. Prakash pats his shoulder, on the
sofa, bebe and neela are crying and kareena and maddy are trying to console
her. Prakash's eyes are moist too.

"why did you leave me neel murmurs in cries.

*** SOME HOURS BEFORE (That day juhi comes to meet avni in
neel's apartment)****

A door bell rings and avni opens the door to find juhi
standing on the door, avni personally never liked juhi, she always feels
jealous when neel is around juhi. She feels that something is not right about
juhi. She had a gut feeling that juhi is wrong and is trying to trap neel, and
neel being a good innocent person will unknowingly fall in her trap. For avni,
juhi is just a friend which neel had years backs, after that juhi was dead to
world, but in reality she was not, she was very much alive. When juhi came
back, avni thought neel is just helping her settling here. And she is unaware
of the truth about juhi.

<font color="#0099ff">Why is she here, even neel is not here then why is she. Hope she go out
soon. I cant bear her.</font><font color="#8db3e2"></font>

Avni says "come inside, juhi comes and avni asks "what
brings you here indicating her to sit. But she didn't and remains standing.

Juhi says "you

<font color="#0099ff">What is she saying.</font>

Avni asks "me? What

Juhi says "yes you, don't you have any shame left that you
still are after my neel

<font color="#0099ff">Her neel, is she mad, I am his wife and she is saying that he is her neel,
if she isn't related to neel then I would have had murdered her right away, but
now I cant, so control your anger avni and don't let it show.</font>

Avni says "your neel?

Juhi says "yes mine, don't you pretend like you don't know
that he is my neel. I am his love, he was my boyfriend. He loved me to life,
and he does now also. But you, you are coming in between us, since you have
married my neel by cheat, he thinks he has to take care of you, that you are
his responsibility. Why cant you let him live his life peacefully, why are you
being a burden on him. He is too good that he will sacrifice his love for his
duty. Why don't you leave him. Why don't you go away from him and let us live
our life peacefully with each other

<font color="#0099ff">No no this cant be true, its false, yes yes it is, else neel would have
had told me, but if she is saying is true, then why neel has hidden this fact
from me.</font>

Avni gets shattered after hearing to juhi's cruel words.
Avni stammers and says "n-no it-its not tr-true

Juhi says "ofcourse it is sweetheart. Are you blind, cant
you see how much he cares about me, thinks about me, do stuff for me. Much more
than he do for you because its his love for me avni and for you its his burdened
responsibility not love. And you think that he is yours but in reality, he is
mine and will be mine, our love cant die

<font color="#0099ff">No, neel cant cheat me, he cant do this with me.</font>

After hearing to juhi, a tear fell off her eye.

Juhi says "thats the problem of your kind of girls, you trap
rich boys for money, and when your plan gets exposed you try to make excuse and
be innocent so that your money doesn't stop coming. Don't know how your parents
nurture you, oh I forgot, shweta aunty oops shweta mom told me about you being
illegitimate, what can we expect something nice from you then. And if you have
a little shame left then get lost from neel's life

Juhi smiles evilly, turns and goes; leaving avni broken.

Avni falls down on her feet, She is sitting on the floor
with her legs folded and tightly pressed to her chest, her head on her knees,
she is holding herself so tightly as if, if her hold gets a bit loose she might
break like a glass. "Ma where are you she screams more loudly.

Avni is crying very badly, and rocking herself to and fro.
She is recalling juhi's words and past few day's neel's action.

<font color="#ff0000">Qismat badaldi vekhi main,

Ehhe jag badalda vekheya,

Main badalde vekhe apne,

Main Rabb badalda vekheya..</font>

<font color="#ff0000">(I have seen fate change</font>

<font color="#ff0000">I
have seen the world change</font>

<font color="#ff0000">I
have seen my closed ones change</font>

<font color="#ff0000">I
have seen even God change) (x2)</font>

<font color="#ff0000">Sab kuch badal gaya mera,

Sab kuch badal gaya mera,

Chal jar hi javangi..

</font>

<font color="#ff0000">(I
have seen everything that was mine change</font>

<font color="#ff0000">Still,
I will bear it)
</font>

<font color="#ff0000">

Ve je hun tu vi badal gaya,

Main te...

(But
if even you change, I shall) </font>

<font color="#ff0000">

Ve je hun tu vi badal gaya,

Main te mar hi javangi.. (x2)

(But
if even you change, I shall die) </font>

<font color="#0099ff">Neel
doesn't love me so why was he doing that, being so flirty, so touchy, so weird.
Why was he showing as if he loves me? Why did he cheat me, why did he break all
the promises? why? Why did he break all the dreams which he taught me to dream,
with him? Maa says that neel loves you, and wants to accept me as his wife,
than why has he changed maa. Why? You always use to say that I am a normal girl
and will get what all girls get, love from her husband. And here my husband
does not love me, maa, after juhi has come neel is totally changed, I know he
has loved her but I am his wife, his wifey. He always used to be with me,do everything
with me, for me, pamper me, embrace me, makes me happy, comfort me. Why has he
changed, everything has changed after juhi came back, neel is always there for
her, with her rather than being with me. Neel's behaviour was breaking me but
now juhi's words have broken me, my heart has broken into pieces as if it was
made up of glass. Why am I feeling so pain, why so hurt? Why? Why my heart is
feeling like it is getting ripped apart? Why it is feeling so broken? Why it is
feeling like something is piercing it? Why juhi's words are affecting me so
much? Why is neel's changed behaviour breaking my heart so much? Am I in love
with neel? No I am not, I had just got a habit of him and his attention, his
presence and thought that he will be there with me, that he he will be mine.
So does that mean that I love him, does it? yes it does. It does mean that I love
him. I love him. But why did I get to know, why not early, why now, why not
later, why now when everything is broken, when my world is broken. I shouldn't
have got to know because now when I have got to know then nothing cant be done
as neel cant be mine, he is juhi's. Nothing can be good now, no happiness is
left even when I got to know that I am in love. That love has finally entered
my life, that my mothers wish has come true. Nothing can be fixed, everything
in my world is broken now, my heart and my soul. Why god why, why did you do
that with me, why let me guards fell off, why let neel to come in my life and
why did you make me fall for him. It feels like nothing is left, like I am not
alive, just physically alive but emotionally I am dead. Like I am a living
dead, it looks scary at the very thought but that it is what I have become now.
Everything inside me is dead, all emotions, all feeings, my heart and my soul
too, everything feels so lifeless.</font>

<font color="#ff0000">Ho qismat badaldi vekhi main,

Ehhe jag badalda vekheya,

Main badalde vekhe apne,

Main Rabb badalda vekheya..

(I
have seen fate change </font>

<font color="#ff0000">I
have seen the world change </font>

<font color="#ff0000">I
have seen my closed ones change </font>

<font color="#ff0000">I
have seen even God change)


Tu aakhri umeed meri,

Tutt kite jaavin na,

Lutti hoyi nu ve Jaani,

Lutt kite jaavin na.. (x2)

(You
are my only hope,</font>

<font color="#ff0000">Don't
break it</font>

<font color="#ff0000">Don't
rob the one who has already been robbed) </font>

<font color="#ff0000">Main jhooth badalda vekheya,

Main sach badalda vekheya,

Main badalde pathar vekhe ne,

Main kach badalda vekheya,

(I
have seen lies change</font>

<font color="#ff0000">I
have seen the truth change</font>

<font color="#ff0000">I
have seen rocks change </font>

<font color="#ff0000">I
have seen glass change)</font>

<font color="#ff0000">

Sab kuch badal gaya mera,

Sab kuch badal gaya mera,

Chal jar hi javangi..

(I
have seen everything that was mine change</font>

<font color="#ff0000">Still,
I will bear it)</font>

<font color="#ff0000">
Ve je hun tu vi badal gaya,

Main te mar hi javangi..

(But
if even you change, I shall die) (X2) </font>

<font color="#ff0000"></font>

<font color="#0099ff">Why
did you do this god, why are you repeating the history, first you snatched
Ayesha ma and neela ma's love and now mine's. What wrong have we done, why did
you make us so ill-fated. Why so much pain and cries in our destiny, why so
little happiness. Dayawanti Mehta was right, I am ill fated. Why am I alive? I
should have died either from the bullet or from the fire. Then everything would
have been perfect, neel would have gotten juhi without feeling guilty because
of my responsibility. And I would have been saved from the pain of heartbreak. Or
I should have had given divorce to neel, but how could have i. I have had
fallen for neel, I didn't have power to get separated from him, but now after
the cruel act that destiny has played with me, I have to leave my love. I have
to go away from neel, for his happiness. I think that is what love is being
selfless, losing your own self in the fire for your loved one's happiness.</font>

<font color="#ff0000">Ho qismat badaldi vekhi main,

Ehhe jag badalda vekheya,

Main badalde vekhe apne,

Main Rabb badalda vekheya..

(I
have seen fate change </font>

<font color="#ff0000">I
have seen the world change </font>

<font color="#ff0000">I
have seen my closed ones change </font>

<font color="#ff0000">I
have seen even God change )


</font>

<font color="#ff0000">Je lod nahi ae hun meri,

Mooh te mere bol ve,

Maang na salhaan jaake,

Par lokaan kol ve..

(If
you don't need me any more,</font>

<font color="#ff0000">Say it to my face </font>

<font color="#ff0000">But
don't ask for advice from others)</font>

<font color="#ff0000">

Je dena ae te dil naal,

Saath devin mera tu,

Je rolna vi ae te fer,

Changi tarah rol ve..</font>

<font color="#ff0000">(If
you want to be with me, </font>

<font color="#ff0000">Stay
whole heartedly </font>

<font color="#ff0000">And
if you want to destroy me, </font>

<font color="#ff0000">Do it completely)
</font>


<font color="#0099ff">Yes I
have to go away from neel's life for forever, so that he can be with juhi, the
perfect piece of his life puzzle, else as I am the mis-fitted piece that neela
ma was trying to fit in neel's life, and neel was letting her do to as I am his
legally wife, his burden, his forced responsibility. But now I wont let this
happen anymore, I will go away from neel's life. It will hurt me but for his
happiness I will do it.</font>

<font color="#ff0000">Main chann badalda vekheya,

Taare badalde vekhe main,

Haaye lod pehn te duniya ch,

Saare badalde vekhe main,

(I
have seen the moon change</font>

<font color="#ff0000">I
have seen the stars change </font>

<font color="#ff0000">I
have seen everyone change as per need)</font>

<font color="#ff0000">



</font>

<font color="#ff0000">Sab kuch badal gaya mera,

Sab kuch badal gaya mera,

Chal jar hi javangi..</font>

<font color="#ff0000">(I
have seen everything that was mine change</font>

<font color="#ff0000">Still,
I will bear it)</font>

<font color="#ff0000">

Ve je hun tu vi badal gaya,

Main te mar hi javangi.. (x3)</font>

<font color="#ff0000">(But
if even you change, I shall die)</font>

<font color="#ff0000"></font>

Avni lifts her head and wipes off her tears. Her eyes and
face is red due to so much of crying. She gets up and finds a paper and a pen,
she writes Neel, I am going from your life for forever, stay happy with juhi, yours
avni she cuts yours because now she doesn't have any right on him, she has
separated herself from neel so that he could be of juhi and juhi could be his.
Few tears also fell on the paper.

She puts this note on the bedside table. She then goes to her
cupboard and takes out her clothes, and packs them. She takes out a pink colour
suit for herself to wear. After that, she takes her luggage, phone, and car keys and goes out of
neel's apartment and neel's life.

________________________________________________________________________

This is my avneil ts. Hope you guys like this, if yes don't
forget to hit the like and comment down below please. I love comments, so
please comment and don't forget to hit the like button who so ever read this,
its a humble request.

And the song is a Punjabi song Qismat', I love that song
very much.

Sorry for any grammatical error or any other error.

Thank you for reading

Love you all

Mehak

mehak please update fast and do post it on wattpad. Me eagerly waiting there for the 2nd part

Originally posted by: taarey25

continue please

will update soon

Its very nice. Loved it.Waiting for next update

Originally posted by: SweetgirlSami1

mehak please update fast and do post it on wattpad. Me eagerly waiting there for the 2nd part

will update soon... thank you... i ek message u when i will upload it

This is my three shot, hope you like it.

Author's POV

The scene starts with neel coming to his apartment, he comes and finds the door open, not locked.

It's weird that this door is not locked, this avni na, how can she be so careless, anyone can come inside and harm her, now she will get a good lecture from me. Or maybe she saw me coming and opened the door. God knows what is happening in her mind. So let's go inside and surprise her with my gift.

He opens the door and goes inside, he puts his gift packet on the kitchen counter and without glancing the room, he says "avni, come, see what I have got for you. He looks up and waits for avni and says "avni come fast, I have got your favourite ring that you wanted to buy. His smile disappears when avni didn't come, he goes looking for her, he says "avni now stop hiding and come out, look I know that you are angry with me that I went to office early this morning without informing you but I am sorry, it was an urgent work, look I am saying I am sorry, come out now he goes to check in bathroom, when he is about to go inside, his eyes fell on the note which is kept on the bedside table. He reads that note Neel, I am going from your life for forever, stay happy with juhi, yours avni she has cut the word yours' in it.

Tu safar mera
Hai tu hi meri manzil
Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil

What, no, she-she cant do that with me, she cant go, she cant leave me just like this. I know its a prank, yeah she must be playing a prank on me to punish me, to teach me a lesson that I should not go without telling her.

He become distraught after reading the note, it affected him so much that he starts to behave like a lunatic.

Tu mera khuda
Tu hi duaa main shaamil
Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil

He checks the bathroom, the balcony quickly and lastly after accepting the fact that she is not at home right now, he goes to check the cupboard to make sure that she might have gone to get some stuff. But alas, his this thought gets thrash. There are just his clothes in the cupboard, also he notices that the trolley bag is also missing.

Mujhe azmaati hai teri kami
Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi

Junoon hai mera
Banu main tere kaabil
Tere bina guzaara
Ae dil hai mushkil

Neel couldn't control his emotions and tears starts to escape his eyes so fast as if they are having a competition that which eye shred more tears and how fast.

Why avni why did you leave. Why did you leave me here alone and decided to go away from my life for forever. How can you take this decision, who has given you this right, that you can take decision for my life also? No one. Was my love less, cant you see how much head over heels for you, so how can you go from my life, why did you think that I love juhi when I love you? Why?

Yeh rooh bhi meri
Yeh jism bhi mera
Utna mera nahi
Jitna hua tera

Tune diya hai jo
Woh dard hi sahi
Tujhse mila hai toh
Inaam hai mera

He fells on his knees and screams "avni.

Mera aasmaan dhoondhe teri zameen
Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi

I cant live without you, I need you. Come back.

Zameen pe na sahi
Toh aasmaan mein aa mil
Tere bina guzaara
Ae dil hai mushkil

Suddenly a thought comes in his mind.

I think I should go to khanna mansion to find out what they have done because of which avni has taken this decision. I am 200% sure that someone has said something to her because of which she has left, as everything was going so smooth between us, even we were coming close, and my tubelight was also understanding that I love her. So she cant leave me just like this.

He goes out of his apartment with car keys and phone in his hand. He was getting bad thoughts like someone might have kidnapped her and to cover up, he creates the scene that avni has left her neel. He calls nanno and neela ma to check whether avni is with them, but they deny. They both ask if anything is wrong, to nanno he replies nothing is wrong' and to neela he told everything. After that he calls DD and asks him to get the CCTV footage of his apartment floor.

He finally reaches khanna mansion and hurriedly goes inside.

In khanna mansion

Everyone is in the hall, talking with each other, and juhi comes with tea and cookies. At that point neel comes inside the mansion. Everyone sees him and gets delighted except for prakash as he sees neel's moist eyes and worried face.

Prakash says what happened neel, is everything alright?

Shweta says "first let him come and sit then ask question, he has come after so much time, come sit and have tea which is made by juhi and she smiles proudly

Neel ignores shweta's words and says "no dad, nothing is fine

Bebe gets worried and asks "what happened tillu

Neel doesn't reply to bebe and turns to face shweta who is smiling internally now and says "what have you said to avni

Everyone turns to face shweta, bebe gets angry hearing neel and shouts on shweta "what have you done now

Shweta says "bebe please stop shouting on me, I haven't done anything

Neel says "really then why did avni left me forever?

Everyone gets shocked, and shweta sees juhi as if saying well done' and juhi nods in reply.

Shweta says "It's good that the trouble has left you neel, and how can you except from that illegitimate to keep relationships, when her own mother

Neel couldn't take any more harsh words said for his wifey and he shouted on shweta from top of his husky voice "mom enough

Shweta hearing her own son to shout on her because of that avni, couldn't take this insult and lost her control and shouted "don't shout on me because of that illegitimate girl

Prakash doesn't want to take this war between his wife and his son to go any further so he asks "enough both of you ,neel tell us what happened

Neel narrates what happened and what he saw when reached his apartment.

DD makes his entry and says "sir I have got the CCTV footage with me

Hearing DD, juhi gets scared and thinks that now they will get to know that because of me avni has left.

Neel nods and DD goes to play the footage, they see that only juhi has come to his apartment and after juhi went sometimes later avni left with her luggage while crying.

Neel loses his control over him and turns to face juhi, his eyes are burning with fire of anger, he is very furious with juhi, and juhi, she is very frightened because of the thought that what will neel do with her in his rage, how will she survive his wrath. Juhi has never seen neel in this form, she has always seen his peaceful state. Also she has never imagined that after avni will go neel will react like this, she thought that he would be happy rather he is sad and angry. And she thinks that she has done a big blunder.

Juhi takes small steps backwards slowly, she shivers and stammers "n-neel i-I

Neel takes big steps faster than her and very quickly he shortens the distance between her and himself, he grabs her by her arms and jolts her with intense power and screams "why. Everyone gets shocked seeing neel's action, but didn't stop him.

Juhi is shivering very much and stammers "i-I di-did th-that before she could complete neela comes and says "leave her neel, you are scaring her

Neel looks at her while he is still holding her very tightly and forcefully that it may be hurting her but due to fear she can't voice her pain and he says "but ma "

She doesn't hear his explanation and orders "neel I said leave her

Neel says with anger "fine and he leaves her by pushing her forcefully, and she lands on the floor and a cry of pain escapes her mouth. DD goes and helps her to get up, she says "thanks, and DD nods in reply.

Neel is very angry on everyone and only he knows how he is saving everyone from his wrath. He has turned himself so that his back is facing juhi, because if he sees her face again then he might kill her in reality. He wants to kill her but law and his duty has tied his hands. But this is for sure he might have had hurt her for hurting for avni.

Neela says why did you do this she doesn't shout on juhi but anger can easily be sensed in her voice.

Juhi says " I did all this on shweta aunty's order

Neel turns, he is in extreme shock and says "what, everyone gets astonished and shweta fears that her truth has came out.

Juhi says "I am saying the truth

Shweta gets scared and says "oh no this girl is saying all wrong I didn't do it

Prakash says "then why are you explaining shweta ji

Shweta says "because everyone will think shweta is wrong all the time

Bebe says " that you are

Neela says juhi you continue

Mom made juhi did that? Mom? My mother? Why? Her hatred towards avni was more than her love towards me. That she betrayed me. Why?

Qismat badaldi vekhi main,
Ehhe jag badalda vekheya,
Main badalde vekhe apne,
Main Rabb badalda vekheya..

(I have seen fate change

I have seen the world change

I have seen my closed ones change

I have seen even God change) (x2)

Sab kuch badal gaya mera,
Sab kuch badal gaya mera,
Chal jar hi javangi..
(I have seen everything that was mine change

Still, I will bear it)

Ve je hun tu vi badal gaya,
Main te...
(But if even you change, I shall)

Ve je hun tu vi badal gaya,
Main te mar hi javangi.. (x2)
(But if even you change, I shall die)

Juhi says "shweta aunty told me that neel's marriage is happened by cheat, that avni tied neel's real bride in a room and took her place without telling anyone. Also she told me that avni is a bad girl and is after neel because his father is a big businessman. She loves money and not relationships. She told me that she behaves with her so rudely, and always act like she is very good and innocent in front of everyone. Even neel is not happy with his marriage and wants freedom from her, but he cant give her divorce because he thinks that she is his responsibility, and he cant do anything wrong with her because of her past. She said that avni has gained everyone's sympathy by lying about her past, that what she has told everyone is a lie. Shweta aunty said that when she got to know about avni's truth , avni blackmailed her. So to get rid of avni, I have to insult her very much so that she will go from neel's life, as she acts all so goody goody in front of everyone, so she will go thinking that someone will get her back, but in reality no one will go. And neel will be free. And can be mine. But I didn't do all this to have you neel, I did this to save you.

Prakash says "its nothing like this juhi, avni is a nice girl, only shweta dislikes her and wants her to get out of neel's life. But neel doesn't want it, he is very happy with avni

Juhi says "that I can see uncle

Hearing juhi and about her mothers true colors, neel went numb, he become lifeless like he was never alive.

How can mom do this with me, how can she. How? She loved me, wanted me to be happy then how can she snatch my happiness from me. How can she snatch my life from me. I bared juhi's loss but I cant think avni not being with me. I will die without her. I want her, just her. I want my avni back. I feel disgust calling you my mom, how can a mother rob her own son's happiness. How can a mother cheat her son, break her son. How? Why did you do this. Why?

Ho qismat badaldi vekhi main,
Ehhe jag badalda vekheya,
Main badalde vekhe apne,
Main Rabb badalda vekheya..
(I have seen fate change

I have seen the world change

I have seen my closed ones change

I have seen even God change)


Tu aakhri umeed meri,
Tutt kite jaavin na,
Lutti hoyi nu ve Jaani,
Lutt kite jaavin na.. (x2)
(You are my only hope,

Don't break it

Don't rob the one who has already been robbed)

Mom broke me more than juhi's action. By snatching avni mom has made my handicap, I am not able to do or think anything properly. Even my feelings and emotions are not getting out, they are struck inside me. Like I don't remember how to express myself. I never thought that my mom could do something like this with me; my own mother can back stab me. You used to crave for my smile before, wanted me to marry rhea so that I could move on and be happy. But when I moved on with my love, my avni, when I was happy with her finally, when I was neel khanna again who was lost somewhere after juhi's death. Then you couldn't digest my happiness that I got because of avni. You couldn't bare the girl, who coloured my black and white life, who brought happiness in my life. Who made this dead person alive. Who taught me how to love again. What kind of mother are you. I wish that my words could find voice but it seems impossible. Feels like I am a lifeless person.

Main jhooth badalda vekheya,
Main sach badalda vekheya,
Main badalde pathar vekhe ne,
Main kach badalda vekheya,
(I have seen lies change

I have seen the truth change

I have seen rocks change

I have seen glass change)

Sab kuch badal gaya mera,
Sab kuch badal gaya mera,
Chal jar hi javangi..
(I have seen everything that was mine change

Still, I will bear it)

Ve je hun tu vi badal gaya,
Main te mar hi javangi..
(But if even you change, I shall die) (X2)

If you wanted to destroy me then why didn't do you it before, why now, and like this. You could have killed me, or have asked me to kill myself and I would be happy dying rather than living this day. You broke me today mom, you broke my trust, you finished my love that I have for you. You finished your relationship with me. I feel like you are not my real mother, I feel like that I am your step son. Because a mother cant do wrong with her children. But you did.

Ho qismat badaldi vekhi main,
Ehhe jag badalda vekheya,
Main badalde vekhe apne,
Main Rabb badalda vekheya..
(I have seen fate change

I have seen the world change

I have seen my closed ones change

I have seen even God change )

Je lod nahi ae hun meri,
Mooh te mere bol ve,
Maang na salhaan jaake,
Par lokaan kol ve..
(If you don't need me any more,

Say it to my face

But don't ask for advice from others)

Je dena ae te dil naal,
Saath devin mera tu,
Je rolna vi ae te fer,
Changi tarah rol ve..

(If you want to be with me,

Stay whole heartedly

And if you want to destroy me,

Do it completely)

Nothing can be fixed, everything in my world is broken now, my heart and my soul. Why god why, why did you do that with me. It feels like nothing is left, like I am not alive, just physically alive but emotionally I am dead. Everything inside me is dead, all emotions, all feelings, my heart and my soul too, everything feels so lifeless. Only avni could heal me, heal my bleeding wounds. Nothing except her can heal me. I want her to pamper me, to console me, to love me, to hug me, to cuddle me till I forget all my sorrows, my pains, till my wounds get healed. I don't wanna loss her, I just want her safe in my arms right now. I want to see her smile and behaving like a kid. I want my tubelight back with me right now. I can still bare any pain except the pain of losing you.

Main chann badalda vekheya,
Taare badalde vekhe main,
Haaye lod pehn te duniya ch,
Saare badalde vekhe main,
(I have seen the moon change

I have seen the stars change

I have seen everyone change as per need)

Neel couldn't control his tears more and his tears starts to escape his eyes so fast as if they are having a competition that which eye shred more tears and how fast.

Neela sees him and pats his shoulder ,saysneel don't worry, avni will come back

I will die without you avni, come back. I want avneil to be real and for forever.

Sab kuch badal gaya mera,
Sab kuch badal gaya mera,
Chal jar hi javangi..

(I have seen everything that was mine change

Still, I will bear it)

Ve je hun tu vi badal gaya,
Main te mar hi javangi.. (x3)

(But if even you change, I shall die)

Shweta says "so you don't love tillu

Juhi says "no I don't and I never loved neel

prakash says "but you were his girlfriend

Neel finally breaks his silence and says "no dad, I had to propose juhi, and on the day I was going to propose her, she met with a car accident

Juhi says "neel I want to tell you something that I always had a crush on DD, I never liked you more than a friend

Juhi's words didn't affect neel, because he is lost in his own world, he is lost thinking about avni.

DD gets shocked on juhi's confessions and says "really?

Juhi smiles and says "yes

Neela says "your love story can take place later on, first find out where is my daughter, my Bacha

DD says "yes, I go and get her phone traced, don't worry he turns and runs out of the house.

Bebe shouts why are you still here shweta, get lost

Shweta sees prakash thinking that he will support her but he remains quiet. Shweta then goes from the house angrily.

Bebe loses her balance but before she could fall, neela and maddy got her and made her sit on the sofa.

"Avni where are you, neel screams and fell on his knees, covers his face with his hand and cries. Prakash pats his shoulder, on the sofa, bebe and neela are crying and kareena and maddy are trying to console her. Prakash's eyes are moist too.

"why did you leave me neel murmurs in cries.

DD comes back smilingly and says "Neel sir bhabhi's phone has been traced and she is in Mumbai only, just at one hour distance, he will find her and bring her back.

Neel smiles, there is a new charm on his face after hearing that avni will be back soon. He wipes off his tears and without wasting a second he gets up and says "lets go and bring avni back, as soon as he says this, he runs out of the house. DD sees his running and runs behind him.

Kabhi Gardishon Ka Maara
Kabhi Khwaahishon Se Haara
Roothe Chand Kaahe Chakor

Zara Se Bhi Samjhaute Se
Yeh Parhez Rakhta Hai Kyoon
Maane Na Kabhi Koi Zor

Duniya Jahaan Ki Bandishon Ki
Yeh Kahaan Parvaah Kare
Jab Kheenche Teri Dor..
Kheenche Teri Dor..

They sit in the car and neel drives the car or can say literally races the car on road and DD tells him the route. I am coming avni, and now I will never let you go away from me, never'

Manchala, Manchala Teri Or..
Manchala, Manchala Teri Or..
Khamoshiyon Ki Suraton Mein
Dhoonde Tera Shor..
Dhunde Tera Shor..
Man Chala, Man Chala Teri Or..
Man Chala, Man Chala Teri Or..

Neel reminisces his moments with avni. Their closeness, their talks, eye locks. Their pillow fights, nok-joks, teasing each other, all the nights , all the days, each and every moment they have together. Her taking care of him, her tubelightness when he comes close to her. His calling her tubelight, wifey, miss ajooba. Their time when they live in their apartment.

Rukhi Sukhi Dil Ki Hai Zameen
Jane Kahaan Gum Hui Namee
Meri Ummeed Hai Teri Baarishein..

Sahu Kahi Baar Pyaar Pe
Tujhe Her Baar Haar Ke
Seekhe Phir Bhi Kabhi Nahi Saazishein..

Ho Tere Liye Aaj Khud Se Hi Bhaage Hai
Himaat Ke Tukde Bator..
Ho Bhaage Zamaane Se
Chhupke Dabe Paanv, Jaise Koi Chor
Jaise Koi Chor..

Manchala, Manchala Teri Or..
Manchala, Manchala Teri Or..
Khamoshiyon Ki Suraton Mein
Dhoonde Tera Shor..
Dhunde Tera Shor..

I am coming soon mrs avni neel khanna, and then I will tell you how much I love you, how much I am crazy for you.

Manchala, Man Chala Teri Or..
Manchala, Man Chala Teri Or..
Manchala, Man Chala Teri Or..
Manchala, Man Chala Teri Or..

And will make avneil real.

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This is my avneil ts, part 2. Sorry for making it this long. Hope you guys like this, if yes don't forget to hit the like and comment down below please. I love comments, so please comment and don't forget to hit the like button who so ever read this, its a humble request.

And the song is a Punjabi song Qismat', also I have used manchala and ae dil hai mushkil.

Sorry for any grammatical error or any other error.

Thank you for reading

Love you all

Mehak

Oyeee this is so so good.juhi likes DD hahahahah kya twist hai .very well written.neil's emotion very well done . great

Awesome update

Juhi And Dakhan Dyal...wah wah kya jodi hai😆😆

Just read through both the parts, and I am immensely moved by your words. Neil and Avni, both their pain has been depicted so beautifully. I absolutely love this! Please update soon :)

Omg ! What a twist . The POV was totally heartbreaking and beautifully penned when u suddenly made Juhi was in love DD . I was in splits. sorry if I hurt you . It was really ROFL moment for me in that serious update