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Posted: 7 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: avneil2

Ohmy god,just kill that vidyut.I cant take his torture.make him suffer.poor babies.continue soon.thanks for pm.

No problem, I too cant stand Vidyut now... I struggle to write about him... I will try to update by Monday and thank you very very much :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#52
Avni...he cupped her face... that para is my fave


The agony and sadness in both is too much. Can't you just get the truth revealed to Neil in next chapter please?? Hehehehe


Vidyut is a bas***d... he hits her and doesn't respect woman. I want Neil to torture him for what he did to avni...aargh.

The update came sooner, nice!!!
Hope next one comes fast too...
Nishant is so cute and his bond with Neil is admirable

Great going!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Somewhatwriter

I'm so sorry about all the trouble I must have caused, I completely understand hindi is not my first language either but it just felt more emotional and authentic writing dialogues in hindi but from now on I will include translations for you, glad you liked it and thanks so much

Awww,thankxxx a ton...I srsly loved it and thats why said it...you are an ultimate sweety that you understood it...much love 😳😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#54
Hey Shreya!!
How are you dearo?? Hope you're doing very well..
Again I fall out of words to explain how deeply i am in love with this FF.

Sweetheart I read all the parts and loved all of them. Sorry couldn't comment on last three parts... But read all of them.

What a great man yaar Neil Khanna is?? This is true love yaar. Doesn't matter that they aren't together anymore...but he'll defend her and protect her at every place.

I am waiting impatiently for everything to unfold in front of Neil. Actually this chapter was full of Neil and I couldn't stop myself from admiring the guy.

About quoting... I can't quote a single para or line the whole chapter or I should say whole FF is my favourite.
But even then I'll say Neil's whole POV was written amazingly and I really loved it.
Neil's thought about beating that deewan/Vidyut... I want you to write that part little longer when Neil will ne free to take care of that filthy man..

Shreya... Please write next part soon... You are blessed by God and hope he keeps blessing you..
Thank you for writing this...
Lots of good wishes from your friend..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#55
Its so emotional pls do something to kick out this vidyut and pls neel kuch toh karke avni ko is hell se bahar nikale thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: __VIHU

Hey Shreya!!

How are you dearo?? Hope you're doing very well..
Again I fall out of words to explain how deeply i am in love with this FF.

Sweetheart I read all the parts and loved all of them. Sorry couldn't comment on last three parts... But read all of them.

What a great man yaar Neil Khanna is?? This is true love yaar. Doesn't matter that they aren't together anymore...but he'll defend her and protect her at every place.

I am waiting impatiently for everything to unfold in front of Neil. Actually this chapter was full of Neil and I couldn't stop myself from admiring the guy.

About quoting... I can't quote a single para or line the whole chapter or I should say whole FF is my favourite.
But even then I'll say Neil's whole POV was written amazingly and I really loved it.
Neil's thought about beating that deewan/Vidyut... I want you to write that part little longer when Neil will ne free to take care of that filthy man..

Shreya... Please write next part soon... You are blessed by God and hope he keeps blessing you..
Thank you for writing this...
Lots of good wishes from your friend..



Hey Shreya!!
How are you dearo?? Hope you're doing very well..
Again I fall out of words to explain how deeply i am in love with this FF.

Sweetheart I read all the parts and loved all of them. Sorry couldn't comment on last three parts... But read all of them.

What a great man yaar Neil Khanna is?? This is true love yaar. Doesn't matter that they aren't together anymore...but he'll defend her and protect her at every place.

I am waiting impatiently for everything to unfold in front of Neil. Actually this chapter was full of Neil and I couldn't stop myself from admiring the guy.

About quoting... I can't quote a single para or line the whole chapter or I should say whole FF is my favourite.
But even then I'll say Neil's whole POV was written amazingly and I really loved it.
Neil's thought about beating that deewan/Vidyut... I want you to write that part little longer when Neil will ne free to take care of that filthy man..

Shreya... Please write next part soon... You are blessed by God and hope he keeps blessing you..
Thank you for writing this...
Lots of good wishes from your friend..


Oh my god! Vihu is back!? Yay! Hi Vihu, I've been good. How about you? Do you know how much I've missed you? I've missed you and your lovely comments and amazing stories so much. Have you stopped writing or are you just on a break? Because I miss your story so much.

Its completely fine, i just want you to read it... because i write for friends like you. So thank you so much just for reading it.


Its no secret that we all just love our tillu na? How could I show him in any other way!? But thank you so much, im so happy that I could portray him in such an admirable way, i cant believe i achieved it!

Dont worry, this track will end soon and i will make this vidyut suffer for what he has done.

Awww this is just like you Vihu! Showering me with praises I don't deserve... the whole FF is your favourite!? Thats so sweet... you've honestly made my day. Do you know how excited I got seeing your name against who's replied!? Thank you sooo much- i was just experimenting with a PoV structure wnd I'm so so so glad its worked out. If Vihu says its worked out, then wont I believe such an amazing writer and friend immediately? Thank you...

I will try get it done and posted by tomorrow but its unlikely... you are blessed by god Vihu... thats why you are so talented, kind and lovely and god will keep on blessing you... thank you for reading and commenting and being the most wonderful friend...


All the love,

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Posted: 7 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Tanvi4

Its so emotional pls do something to kick out this vidyut and pls neel kuch toh karke avni ko is hell se bahar nikale thanks for pm

no problem, thank you so so so much and dont worry i will deal with that vidyut soon and well
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7

Avni...he cupped her face... that para is my fave


The agony and sadness in both is too much. Can't you just get the truth revealed to Neil in next chapter please?? Hehehehe


Vidyut is a bas***d... he hits her and doesn't respect woman. I want Neil to torture him for what he did to avni...aargh.

The update came sooner, nice!!!
Hope next one comes fast too...
Nishant is so cute and his bond with Neil is admirable

Great going!!



Thank sooo much for the lovely comment and answering my question, so glad you liked this sentence it is also one of my favourites. Im so sorry to keep you waiting but it will probably take 2 more chapters at least, please cope with me. But don't worry Neil will torture him- and that too very very badly... I'll try to update tomorrow but its probably unlikely. Thank youuu, so happy you like their bond... I will only strengthen it as time goes on
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I love the FBs you write . They are the essence of your story . How come Neil attends the party . Is he invited by Vidyut ? I thought Neil is gonna kill both men . Got a taste of Yuvraj Luthra .
The mood in which Vidyut is in Kahin kuch kar na le . I hope Nishan intrudes
That dance 💔 I am in love with your dialogues . They are heart ripping .
Wish Neil learns truth soon . Its so painful to read your dialogues . Can't wait to learn what will be Neil's reaction after learning Nishan is his very own son whom he wished to be his . They both are so adorable 😳

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Im so sorry its so late- I'm so so so so so so sorry. But I hope you enjoy this super long chapter in return. Please comment, vote and like and show all your love. And let me know what your favourite line/bit is pretty please...

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Vidyut PoV

First she will be dizzy and disorientated, a perfect opportunity for me to get her in the perfect place. And then she will be extremely drunk- awake to feel the humiliation yet unable to do a thing... A flawless plan.

End of PoV

Vidyut walked to stand inbetween the now parted Avneil with a slow sarcastic clap, breaking them out of their trance. Avni quickly wiped away her tears with the back of her shaky hand as Neil just watched her, painful helplessness in his eyes.

"Wah wah wah... put your hands together guys... wasn't that a wonderful dance! Vidyut exclaimed to the guests with a huge smile, the guests clapped loudly some in spiteful envy and others in genuine awe. He shot Avni a look and her hands immediately turned to fists in fear of the monstrosity in his eyes.

Neil watched as Avni immediately recovered and put a dazzling smile on her face, shaking his head as the tears fell down his face.


"I mean why wouldn't it be a wonderful dance- I mean my hot beautiful wife was dancing right? There were hoots, wolf whistles and cheers from the crowd from the disgusting men who oogled at her.


Neil clenched his jaw and gritted his teeth, he was fuming again and any second now he would lose his control. How dare they see his avni as some sort of object!?-

Avni looked him in the eyes- and the look in her eyes stopped him still. The vulnerable fear... she shook her head no at him such begging desperation in her eyes that he immediately uncurled his fists. What wasn't she telling him!?


"Now come on baby- you must be tired right? Vidyut held Avni roughly by the shoulders and shoved her down on a chair, still having his eyes trained on her with a vicious warning look.

Neil had to shut his eyes tight as Vidyut lovingly fed Avni the spiked juice, playing with her hair gently. Avni got more scared seeing how gentle vidyut was being, because the gentler he is now the worse he got later.

After finishing the juice, Avni narrowed her eyes as the world became blurry around her. She blinked repeatedly to try and clear and vision. Suddenly, she almost fell over from her seat with a soft murmur of Neil's name.

"Avni! Neil yelled as he immediately approached her to hold her up, but Vidyut holds her up first. He lets her lean on his chest and wraps a possessive hand around her waist, shooting Neil a smug look that stabs him in the chest.

"My wife will be fine with me thank you Mr Khanna... feel free to enjoy the party man... no need to look over her... I'm there na? Neil's eyes were literally flaming- he and he only had the right to look after avni like that- who does this Gaurav think he is?


"Hello? Mr Khanna? I said you can leave... didn't you hear? Neil was rooted in his spot, burning holes through Vidyut with his eyes, if Avni had not asked him not to he would be looking at this man's dead body right now. Vidyut looked at Avni with a threat looming in his eyes, his hand around her tightening painfully. "Come on na baby? Explain to him...


Avni looked up at Neil, and Neil was staring in to her eyes intently. He was pleading her not to tell him to go, pleading her to come to him, pleading to hear the words that she wanted him and only him from her lips. She couldn't stand the teardrops threatening to fall from his eyes, the way his lips were slightly quivering like a small baby. She wanted to- run in to his arms and beg him to take her away from this monster. But she had no choice. She hardened her blurry eyes, wiping all expressions off her face.


She tried to ignore the excruciating agony that flashed on Neil's face as she moved closer to Vidyut and held on to him tightly, moving closer to his chest and looking up at him with the most affectionate fake smile she could manage. She looked back at Neil forcing a false hatred in to her eyes that was the most painful thing she had ever done to herself.


But she wanted him to hate her. She didn't want him to love her anymore, she wanted him to hate her truly so that she could stop hurting him like this. If he hated her, it would be worse than the pain of death to see the hatred replace the love in his eyes but at least he would go away from her, away from the danger and the pain she gave him. She was ready to suffer Vidyut for the rest of her life, but she will never put her Neil in danger or give him pain. And she was ready to do anything to stop that.


"Mr Khanna I don't understand why you are so insistent on repeatedly making such a fool of yourself!? She stood up with a yell, making Neil step back in shock with a deep frown and a single tear rolling down his face. All the guests looked around at them in confusion. She gulps down the torturous pain in her throat as these words burn on her tongue.


"Avni- I-" He looked so heart-breaking, his eyes were so hurt and puzzled. He didn't have a clue why she was reacting like this.


Avni grabs Vidyut's hand and pulls him to stand beside her, he wears a proud smile on his face as he smirks at the shattering Neil.


"This Mr Khanna- is my husband Gaurav Dewan. And I, Avni Gaurav Dewan She has to take a deep breath as the next words refused to leave her mouth as she tried to force the yell out. "love this man more than anything...


It felt like someone had shoved a shard of glass in to his gut, and Avni was just standing there watching him bleed slowly to death. It was gruelling, a wound so unimaginably deep, cutting straight to his very core. His raw heart was completely exposed to entire room, his heart bleeding through the tears in his eyes. The heartbreak felt cold, like tar drying in his chest. His love ran down his mouth as he choked on air, as if she was slowly stealing his breath and watching him drown.

"And i will not hear another word against my husband... no matter what kind of grudge you have against him, or my family... or... whatever... sick interest you have in me...

He gasped, as did all the guests in the room at her outrageous accusation. For the first time ever he didn't recognise the woman in front of him- this- this couldn't be his Avni. Words can't fathom the pain he felt in that second, to know it you would have to feel it yourself and if you did felt it... it would feel like you can't breathe, a mental pain so strong it seems to have the power to kill you. It was like Avni was wrenching his heart in her hands, squeezing out every last bit of life in it agonisingly. He staggered backwards while trying to regain his breath that he had lost in shock. His final tear fell down his face, he wouldn't cry anymore. He has only cried for his avni and the woman in front of him couldn't have been her. His Avni couldn't say something like that.


And so he smiled politely, guarding the torment in his eyes. "I'm so sorry you felt that way Mrs Dewan...that was never my intention!


He leaned in closer and held her hand gently, making everyone look at him. Vidyut in suspicion, the guests in expectant apprehension and Avni in crippling worry and confusion. He smiled at her softly but not with the same passionate adoration but in this deep deep broken sadness. He whispered, "Maybe- maybe... I saw the woman that i used to love somewhere in you... but no need to worry anymore Mrs Dewan... i dont see a single trace of her in you anymore. I used to find you familiar, resembling someone i used to love... but now- now Avni... its like i never knew you at all...


That hurt.


This pretence went like a tonne of bricks burdening her chest. This guilt felt like someone was tearing her soul to shreds. And that look in his eyes. Nobody explain in a story how that felt. This helplessness, doing everything to save Neil and her son all on her own it hurt. Probably worse than what Neil was feeling. Having to hurt the one you love had to be the hardest thing- being willing to bear this hatred from them one of the strongest things. But she will do it. For him.


"So I'm so sorry... for hurting you by speaking so about your husband, I'm sorry for assuming I had the right to try and protect you or look after you. And I'm sorry that I considered you more when you thought of me as nothing but a stranger... god bless you. God bless you, your son, your family... you husband. May you and he live a long and loving life with one another... He brought his lips to her hand and pressed a kiss against it slowly, his tear hitting her skin.


Her lips parted to say something and Neil looked on in expectancy, with the tiniest glimmer of hope but it disappeared as soon as she closed her mouth. He was stupid to have expected to stop him. He let go of her hand roughly and it limply fell to her side.

He stormed off, leaving her to finally release the ravaging tears that were eating at her insides.

...

The guests finally fizzled out of the entrance, saying their farewells to Vidyut who stood at the door. This had to have been the most eventful party they had ever attended in their lives. Vidyut's eyes occasionally fell on Avni who sat on a chai, gripping to it as if holding on for dear life. She looked sickly pale and extremely nauseous, as if she would faint at any given moment. He smirked.


Avni pressed the bride of her nose to try and contain her unbearable dizzying headache but it refused to go away. She stumbled to standing up and decided to make her way to her bedroom slowly, leading herself upstairs by clutching the bannister.

Vidyut grinned at retreating figure... got her to the perfect place? Check.


...



Neil's shaking fingers reached for the box under the bed that he had hidden away from himself for so long. He undid the metal clasps with tremoring fingers and loud breaking sobs. Ever since he saw her again after five years, he vowed to never touch it again... but she had left him with nothing... now how did it matter what he did?


He ran his finger over the bottle of liquor, lifting it in his hand and throwing the lid away. With other hand he open his wallet, looking at the picture of Avni he had stored in it since forever. He fondly remembered when Bebe had thrown away the old tattered wallet to gift him a new one and he completely flipped at her before rummaging through the rubbish to find it.


He groaned in pure pained frustration before downing a huge swig of alcohol, the foreign taste burning like metallic bile of blood down his throat. He threw the wallet across the room as he slid to the floor with an alarming sob of agony and a scream of her name.

You know its too late...'

He wailed like a small child, hiding his red face in his knees that he curled to his chest.

Avni Gaurav Dewan..'

He punched the wooden floor with a animalistic growl of pain, the mental suffering blinding him from even caring about the blood dripping from his knuckles.

I love this man more than anything...

The alcohol brought this numbness to him as he closed his eyes and weeped quietly. Her image was imprinted in his mind... those mesmerising eyes that he couldn't shake off as hard as he tried and it just hurt more to remember.

Whatever sick interest you have in me...

He whimpered like a wounded puppy, these words were the most raw and cutting through him like a blade. He holds his paining chest as he drank all the alcohol in one go to try and forget the words that didn't stop ringing in his head.


...


Servant- please sir... you have to come with me otherwise our entire project will go to waste...


He was talking about their illegal business, he carried along on the side. Vidyut stomped his foot furiously- thinking about Avni in her room and what he was planning to do with her.


"I can't come...i have work here... why the hell do i even hire you!? So i dont have to handle these things right!? His stare was screaming volumes his voice was not capable of... "Right!?


The servant shrivelled in fear, "I'm so sorry sir, but you have no choice but to come with me, or that Neil Khanna's police department will unveil us all. Sir... please... The driver will keep Nishaan out all night. You have to come with me.


Vidyut sighed, taking a heavy breath to control his rage... this was the priority. Avni and his plan would have to have to wait. He sprinted out the house, locking the door behind him.

...


She perched on the side of the bed with her pounding head in her hands, each vein throbbing like fireworks sparking in her brain. Her vision was blurry and all her limbs trembling and her consciousness slowly drifted in and out of an inky static.


"Avni! Avniii! She froze in place, in shock at Neil's shrill screams of her name that were ringing through the house. Neil? After that whole fiasco?

His voice was so broken and desperate, that worry tremored in her heart. It was as if every single droplet of his blood was calling out for her. But she was helpless- if Vidyut heard him it was cost both her and Neil everything...

"Avni! Avni please! Please tell me your in here! Please... Neil punched the door like there was no tomorrow, pummelling it to break it down in rage and fear.

She sprinted to the door, unlatched it and dragged him inside by his wrist. Before he could say a word she effortlessly pinned his broad shoulders to the wall and rendered him completely speechless. With a shush, she clamped his hand shut with her palm and her stern gaze was centimetres away from his eyes. She watched him in confusion as just the sight of her made his eyes well up with tears and his lips quiver under her palm.


"Avni... Avni tum yaha hi ho... tum teek ho... Avni... he bhagwaan... meri avni... she let go of him in question as he caressed her face gently and the tears fell down his cheeks, scanning her as if checking her for injuries. "Mujhe laga ki mein tumhe- tumhe... kho diya... ki tum phir se mujhe- mujhe chood kar chali gayi thi... He pecked her forehead softly, his hands tangling in to her hair. He mumbles in to it, his words almost incoherent as its muffled by the hair and interrupted by his broken sobs.

"Mujhe dhar lag raha hai... mujhe- you said all those things and I thought... I thought i lost you and I didn't know what to...- I- need you... Avni... tumhara Neil ko tumhari zarowath hai Avni... please- please avni... i dont know what to- please... baby... promise me- promise me i wont lose you...

He broke her heart with his imploring, begging, cutting innocent request. He almost crushed her with his tight grip on her waist, snuggling his face in to her chest- his stubble grazing the sensitive skin of her collarbone causing her to close her watery eyes in heavy emotion. He nuzzled his nose in to the crook of her neck desperately, his tears trickling down her skin. Her hands automatically curled around him, one around his middle and other caressing his back and finding its way to his reddish brown hair and stroking it consolingly.


But then she smelt it- he reeked of strong alcohol wafting from his breath. The Neil she loved never drank- especially in front of her... she had bad experiences with drunkards and so he always made sure to never make her feel uncomfortable but here he was completely and utterly... drop. dead. drunk.

The slight stumble in his steps, the weird unusually emotional behaviour... she should have seen it coming. She staggered backwards, absolutely furious.


"Mr Neil Khanna- what the hell!? You're drunk?! Tum ko zara sa bhi andaza hai ki drinking ki asaar ka hota hai!? Tumhe kuch hogaya tho... mein kya karunga!?-"

She stumbled short of words, suddenly realising what she was about to say, but drunken Neil had no clue what she was intending. He just smirked in that dashing way of his that made her heart skip a beat, he edged closer toward her, looping an arm around her waist and gazing deeply in to her eyes.


"Damn Meri sherni... you are darn hot when you are angry...


She huffed in hurt and pryed away from his grip, looking off in to the distance with her arms crossed across her chest. She was pissed. Did he seriously have no regard of her feelings?

"Look come on avni... Neil smiled slightly at her cute angry childishness and called out to her, trying to pacify her by holding her by the shoulders and sitting her on the bed. "Baby come on... mujhe dekho na?

She still refused to look toward him, he sighed heavily while rubbing at his raw eyes.

"Look I'm sorry Avni... yes... yes I drank... I drank Avni and I've drunk a hell of a lot... but what else do you expect me to do?! Now he was yelling making her look at him in surprise, she suddenly realised how tired he looked, his limbs looked like they were about to crack, the darkness under his eyes were heavy.

"I'm fed up. Mein thak chuka hu Avni... I'm fed up of tossing and turning and not getting sleep because all I can feel is the coldness of not having your body curled up against me... I'm fed of having nightmares of where you are in danger and I- I- I cant save you... and im fed up. I am fed up of seeing that f**king Gaurav near you all the time, that filthy bas***d stares at you, my wife, my Avni like a f**king pervert and you think I wont drink? You have a life, a family, a son... without me... and i wont drink!? All i can feel is agony- nothing but agony 24/7 and to just try and stop the pain for one second- i wont drink?!

Avni gasped as she backed away, terrified by the intensity of heart wrenching pain that was drowning in his eyes. Tears streamed down her face as she weeped quietly, immediately warping Neil's face in to one of crippling concern.

"Avni? He suddenly sounded so scared for her and vulnerable, as if he had no clue why she was so upset, his intoxication seemed to have made him forget what he said even a minute ago.

He cupped her face lovingly, staring tenderly in to her eyes. There was such a soft worry in his eyes that it made her cry harder, cry at his pain and her pain and the way she was hurting him and he was hurting her, how much she loved him, and how much, how intensely, how devotedly he loved her.

"Aw come on avni... aise roh mat... smile na? His smile had such an innocent quality to it, at least because of alcohol the liveliness of the old Neil had returned in his eyes. "Jab tum muskurate ho... tum kitini khubsurat lagte hu... poore duniya khubsurat ho jaata hai... come on Avni... please baby...


Her heart fluttered at his unbearably endearing words, she saw the Neil she had fallen in love with right in front of her... youthful, joyful, playful, flirty, caring and charming... not the broken shell of the man he used to be like he is now. And she swooned, which girl wouldn't swoon at this man? The dizziness was a little heavier though, and she refused to forget the pain she was feeling, she refused to let herself smile.


"Why wouldn't i cry? What do I have to be happy about? Her eyes were still glassed over in anguished tears of a broken heart.Her teary eyes were drooping shut but she forced them open, she was desperate to savour this Neil for as long as she could, she knew she would lose him soon.

He pouted absolutely adorably with his huge chocolate-like puppy eyes that melted her heart and made her weak at the knees, he rubbed the back of his neck with an innocent shy smile and she wanted so badly to reach out and pinch his cheeks.

"Mein tumhare le liye aapne aap ko humesha ke liye poore tarah se samarpan kar diya hai na?mein... tumhare Neil... khush hone ke liye kaafi nahi hai kya? You have me right?


She just had to smile at the beautiful perfectly unblemished innocence in his eyes, she sauntered closer to him slightly and stroked her fingers slowly down his cheek. She silently stared in to his eyes for a while as deeply as she could, as if trying to soak up all of her old Neil inside of them to keep it with her forever. Tears dripped down her face but she sniffled them back, beaming, these were happy tears.

"Haan Neil... tum hi kaafi hai... Mujhe aur kuch nahi chaiye... Her fingers now embedded themselves in his bed-head hair pulling him slightly closer. These surreal words and the nausea messing up her thoughts all made her forget their helpless situation for a moment.

"Of course... I'm irresistible right? And there it was, Neil Khanna's infamous million dollar grin was etched back on to his face, making her heart forget how to beat.


But suddenly her heavy eyes fully closed and her unconscious body collapsed in to a drunken Neil's arms. He immediately panicked, shaking her gently and tapping her cheek.

...

"Avni! avni... He called out desperately for her to wake up, blinking back his tears and his words jumbled in his drunken stupor. "Oi Avni!

Out of nowhere, like a spring, Avni bounced out of his arms with a huge grin on her face.

"Areey chup kar tillu! She was jumping around excitedly like a small girl, the huge bubbly smile on her face made his heart skip a few beats. Oh god, he had missed that smile so much.

He furrowed his brows in confusion, "What? Why-"

She put a finger on his mouth to silence him, his eyes widened in surprise. He could see her stunning eyes up close, the small flecks of silver reflecting the moonlight. It felt like he could see the entire universe in her eyes, or something even more beautiful, he could see everything that made her his Avni... everything he adored.

"Chup Neil... hum hide aur seek khel rahi hu... she cutely put her finger now on her mouth with girly animated gestures that just made him want to suffocate her with kisses, on her lips and nose and eyes and just every bit of skin he could find. He stumbled forward and almost tripped over avni, laughing clumsily.

"Teek hai... tum mujhe nag karne band karo yaar! Who are we hiding from? There was a few moments of silence, as Avni completely spaced out, as if immensely afraid.

"Wo ghatiya monster se... wo vidyut se... She suddenly stammered in fear and curled up in to ball on the floor, as if trying to hide herself.

"Vidyut? Yeh vidyut khon hai ab? My lord Avni... I've already discovered one new husband of yours... how many else will I find... He rolled his eyes sarcastically with a flippant annoyance. But then immediately flared up in rage as a thought occurred to him. "What has he done... Avni? What has he- Do I have one more person to kill Avni!?


He looked around to see Avni in a mess of tears, sobbing like a school child that had just been punished. She looked so volatile, like a single touch could send her in flames that would destroy her. She shivered in a boiling hot room, as if the ice of emptiness in her heart could be felt throughout her body.


"Avni?! His voice was insanely terrified as he kneeled beside her, sitting so close that she was almost curled in to his lap and against his chest. "Avni kya hua?


She looked up at him and even with the alcohol coursing through his blood he could see how shattered her eyes were, how pained and how fed up of the carrying all this baggage on her own. Even in his intoxication, his guilt attacked him, he remembered their promise all those years ago, 3.5 pheras his and 3.5 hers, had be been so blind in his pain and loneliness that he hadn't seen how much his Avni was suffering all on her own?

"I don't like him Neil... He's evil... mujhe- mujhe bohot dhar lagta hai Neil... jab wo mujhe buri tarah se dekhtha hai... uska haath utatha hai... mujhe- please Neil... take me away from him... hide me from him... please save me Neil, i want you Neil... mujhe tumhari zarowath hai Neil, bachao mujhe- bachao please ... She wailed in torment, falling in to his arms and crying in to his shirt.


He couldn't say a word in shock, his arms just automatically wrapped around her curled body and held her as tightly as he possibly could, he would do anything for her to stay this way- safe and in his arms. He kissed her hair softly, his eyes were bloodshot in fury that anybody could dare to hurt, to scare his wife. He was bloodthirsty- murderous.

"Avni... kyu dhar rahi ho? Mein hu na? Tumhara Neil hai na? tum ko jhanta hai ki mein tumse kitna pyaar kartha hu... tum ko jhanta hai ki mein tumhare liye poore duniya se ladunga... Then why is my Avni scared huh?

She looked up at him from his lap, and his heart ached at the desperate hope in her eyes, the innocence in her love, the pain that he could feel her feeling.

"Sacch me Neil? Tum mujhe Vidyut se bachaunga? Tum mere saath hoge? Meri paas?

He frowned as the tears rolled down his face, the pain in his chest was almost unbearable as if someone was ripping out his heart vein by vein. How could he not have heard Avni's silent screams for help, her fear? How could he be so bad a husband?


"Aww avni... baby... he cuddled her even closer, pressing her so close that there was so close that there no space between them. He pecked her hair, resting his chin on her head. He lifted her hand gently, kissed it gingerly, intertwined her fingers with his while placing their hands over his racing heart. "Suna Avni? Yeh dil? Yeh dil tumhari paas hi tha avni, aur tumhari paas hi rehenga... now don't worry anymore meri jaan... ab tumhari Neil tumhari paas hi hai... and your Neil will never give you reason to worry wifey...


She didn't need those words to know her Neil was with her, she could see his ardent love in his melted eyes and its warmth finally touching her heart. On his lips that kissed her skin softly lingered all the promises she needed, in his arms she finally felt safe.

She smiled widely, her whole face lighting up. And he felt like the happiest man alive.

"Why are you so beautiful? Do you know how much your beauty tortures me? He grinned at her, mascara was smeared all over her face but she still looked so beautiful, so gorgeous. She smiled goofily at his cheesiness. "Why do you smile like that to make my stomach flutter? Why do you walk flaunting all those curves that I ache to touch?


She shook her head at him, rolling her eyes and biting her plush pink lips cutely yet utterly sensuously.

"God Avni stop that... He groaned in a husky voice as he felt his control slipping from him, didn't she realise how much of her simplest of actions could arouse him?

"Stop what? She asked, somehow completely oblivious. She shuffled around in his lap, tracing her fingers down his chest and still biting her full lips.

"That! Stop it! He yelled out with a moan, exasperated by her insane affect on him, his lust burning in his eyes as he clutched her bare waist and pulled her even closer to him. "Stop turning me on Avni...

She smirked at his flushed face, he seriously had to be god's cutest creation. She straddled her legs around his lap, looped her arms around his neck and tangled her hands through his hair to drag him closer, giving him a view down her blouse that made his throat go parched.


"Look avni.. do you know what your doing-" he stammered through his words, his eyes squeezed shut and trying hard to hold his hands where they were and not let them do what they were begging to, then his gaze fixated on those lips of her hers. "I dont think this is a good idea- god Avni... please stop- Avni-"


His eyes suddenly popped wide open as she clashed her lips against his and kissed him fiercely with the most passion she had ever felt. She stopped for a second and looked up at his adorable shocked face. Clutching to his collar she nuzzled her nose against his with a precious smile.

"Oh just shut up and kiss me Mr ACP Neil Khanna...

With a grin he claimed her lips desperately, clasping her body against his and biting her lips hungrily. He grunted as she ran her hands along the muscles under his shirt, each one of their touches were intensified by how much their body yearned for each other all these years. She cupped his face to feel more of his lips against hers, she licked the bittersweet alcohol off his lips, their intoxication driving them wild. His tongue fought hers for domination, lifting her up, hooking her legs around his waistband.

He pinned her to the wall, placing his hand behind her head being careful she doesn't hurt herself. His hands slipped under her saree pallu and roamed everywhere on her bare belly, making her moan softly against his lips.


They parted, panting breathlessly with carefree giggles that were filled with such a pure joy because they were finally together, with no inhibitions. They just smiled at each other for ages, their foreheads resting against each other and just admiring every feature of one another. Neil smirked naughtily, grabbing her waist tightly and causing her to fall in to his chest with thud, their chests heaving against each other.

"Since when have you become so bold wifey?

"Since I became so desperate for you... Her glazed eyes were bluntly, painfully honest.

His eyes become watery at the heavy emotion in her words, kissing her forehead gently while tucking her hair behind her ear. He then planted kisses on her closing eyes, her cheeks, her small button nose before returning to softly peck her luscious lips.

"Why were you desperate for me baby? When i was always yours? And you were free to do anything you liked with me?

Her cheeks went bright pink as she smiled shyly at the floor, he sighed at her antics with a smile. He pushed her chin up to face him with a dashing smile.


"Oh how you drive me crazy with these pink cheeks of yours... you are modern in every aspect Avni... but when it comes to this you are like any other 70's blushing bride...

He chuckles as she punches him playfully in the chest, "chup kar, bakwaas bolti rehti hu...

"Ouch! Mujhe maaf karo meri maa! He pulled his ears with the cutest pout she had ever seen.

But then he raised his eyebrows and a smirk played on his lips as a mischievous idea came to his mind. He leaned down to her ears, his lips brushing against her ear lobe, his hot breath sending shivers of bliss through her blood, while one one of his hands wandered up her stomach to the bottom of her blouse.

"You know meri sherni... she gasped in pleasure gripping to the back of his head as he peppered kisses on the sweet spot of her collar bone. "I think its a good idea if you kiss me as hard as you hit me...

"Really? She asked with a sexy grin and a bite of the lips, the alcohol bringing out her bold and dangerous side. "Shall we try and find out?

It got steamy as they made out, Avni pulling the shirt over his head. She traced patterns on his back as they kissed and he didn't leave a centimetre of her skin untouched. His hands wandered around her stomach, and his lips left hers to press butterfly kisses and bite and suck all the sensitive spots of her skin making a whole zoo of butterflies dance in her stomach.

He tugged at her pallu relentlessly, like a small annoying child with a desperate pout but she kept removing her hand from there as they kissed- frustrating him.

"Oh come on yaar... utharo na Avni? He whined adorably like a small baby, she pinched his cheeks and didn't take him seriously- irking him further in to a moody sulk.


"Awww Neil... udaas hogaya? Aisa chup mat hoga na Neil? She pretended to plead to him but couldn't suppress her smile at his childishness.

"Mein tumse baat nahi karni wali... He pouted with his hands crossed over his chest and looking away from her.

"Kyu?

"Kabhi meri baat nahi manti tum... humesha mujhe aisa hi tadpa tha hai... kya hai yeh Avni... not fair!


She laughed at his stupidly endearing antics, shaking her head while moving his face to look her in the eyes. She licked her lips seductively, immediately making him gulp in pleasure he didnt know what to do with- she was driving him crazy.

"Its not going to be that easy na Neil?... She looped his arms around his neck, and his arms automatically found their way to her alluring hips. She whispered huskily with a raised eyebrow. "You've got to make me...


And that was enough for him to take her lips and feast on her body, like an animal that had been starved for days. She moaned as he kissed her feverously in all the right places, their skin was burning with passion as they touched- their intoxication left everything behind- everything that was keeping them apart for so long.

He lifted her in his arms and they both landed clumsily on the bed, with a thud and bouts of laughter.


After they recovered from their random bout of laughter, He sighed deeply. It was if he was suddenly hit by the beauty of the woman in front of him, reminded of how much he loved her like a pang to the chest, and he just had to sigh in awe as he admired her. He traced her features slowly with his finger, her eyes down to her lips, just trying to appreciate everything about her, everything he devoutly adored.

He was leaning over her, their legs tangled intimately, the friction between their skin becoming unbearable. His hand moved down to her navel, teasing the skin there lightly.

"Can I make you mine Mrs Neil Khanna? He whispered in cutest, kindest most gentlemanly way someone had ever spoken to her. Even when drunk, to her was so gentle, careful and loving... in that moment she fell madly in love with him all over again. For him, he fell in love with her again every time he looked at her.


"I was always yours Mr ACP Neil Khanna... she whispered back, and they kissed again. Now less roughly, but slowly as if trying to say every word of love they felt for each other through this powerful silent communication, they moaned as they explored every inch of each other as if they feared they could never share something like this again.


And that night they became one in a way that could never be denied, not only their hearts and souls were one. But their bodies had become one all over again after these long treacherous years they had ached for one another. Now not the highest of powers could even dare to tear them apart, their love was timeless, written in to nature as if it was an irrevocable part of destiny.


That they way they were in each others arms under the blanket now... She being curled up in his chest in a small ball, her face hidden in his bare chest. And his one arm wrapped tightly around her body, his other caressing the back of her hair and his lips resting against her hairline. The way they were so intimate. Was the only way they were supposed to be.


...



Precap-

His eyes were so red she thought that they could be bleeding, she was scared to come any closer... he had never seen him so destructively angry... so explosive.

"Hey! Don't you dare touch her... you get it!?

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