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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update but was so short...
Finally they met...
Neil tm toh ho hi handsome...
And Tillu..Hahaha... Maa da ladla Supercop Tillu...
Update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazinggg Ifa...loved it :)
Shweta is so amazin here...I want her to ship Avneil 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved it. Waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Interesting update
Avni got to know about Neil's nickname and can tease him in the future
How will she break this engagement???!
Update soon please
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 9

After teasing Neil about his nickname everyone gathers around the hall to complete the ritual . Neil and rhea was standing near each other but they both were looking uninterested , they has kept their smile on but if anyone look closely at them they can tell their smile is fake .

They were about to start the ritual when lights get dimmed and spotlights get onto rhea . Flowers starts showering from the above . Rhea has a beautiful smile adorn on her face which was genuine . When suddenly they hear a boys voice

Boy : ehem ehem can i have your attention please

Everyone looks at the boy . Meheta's was shocked to see him while avni was having a teary moment . It was difficult for her to express what exactly she was feeling. Whether she was shocked to see him suddenly appearing , happy that she was seeing him after so many years or sad that she missed him growing up infront of her . Indeed infront of her was her brother . Her little brother who she used to feed the bottle , whom she used to sing lullaby . She came out of her thoughts when her brother again starts talking

Amol : I can't believe it Rhea di . You are getting engaged . Aap kuch dino mein mujey chod kar chali jaao ogi . Waisey achaa huwaa aap jaarahi hai mujey apna favourite cake aap saa bachana nehi padegaa .

Rhea : Amol

Amol : sorry sorry !!! I will definetly miss you not

And starts laughing while rhea burns in anger . After avni died rhea spent most of her time with Amol . They were really close . They have done so many mischeif togeather , sneaked out of the house late night just to get some ice-cream . But still rhea couldnt save Amol from adapting Dayawanthi's methods .

Amol comes to rhea and hugs her while Avni wzs watching this with teary eyes wishing her brother could come and hug her .

Dayawanthi : ab chalo bohoth hogayaa ab sagaai karthey hai

Bebe : han mein peheley rhea ko kadey pehena thi hoon

Avni ( in mind ) : yahaa bebe ko jab yeh pataa chaley gaa ki kadey nakli hai toh misunderstanding toh zarur ho gaa jahaa tak mein iss dayawanthi ko janthi hoon woh zarur tanaa mareygaa aur bebe ko dekhar lagthaa nehi hai woh esaa kuch sunsak thaa hai

The servent brings the Bangles in a plate . Bebe takes the bangles and takes rheas hand while avni was praying to make the bangles break . Bebe makes Rhea wear the bangles much to avni disappointment as it didnt break.

Avni ( in mind ) : yeh kadaa tootaa kiyu nehi ab kiyaa karoon jisey mein iss engagement ko rokh sakhoo

After bebe made rhea wear the bangles another servent came with rings . Bebe gives rheas the rings . Rhea was about to put ring in Neil finger when she felt a dizzy spell hit and and she falls down . Avni and Neil who was standing either side of her holds her before she falls down . She was in semi counciousness.

Avni : rhea

Avni could help but shout when rhea fragile body came in touch with hers . Everyone was shocked and worried for her .

Daywanthi : isey betaao jaldhi

Avni and neil makes her sit in nearby chair . Avni was about to go bring the water when she felt a hand holding her hand . She looks and sees rhea was holding her hands tightly.

Rhea : Avni di math jaao

She said in small voice but everyone heard her . Meheta's was shocked while amol and khanna was confused .
Avni was so happy to hear rhea say her di for the first time . She wanted to sit beside her and tell her that she wont go anywhere leaving her . She will be there for her always . But she couldnt she knew if she did she blow her cover .

Neil : yeh avni kon hai

Amol : haan dadi meiney toh kabhi Avni kai berey mein nei sunaa .

Daywanthi : koi nehi hai

Avni was sad that amol doesnt know about his own sister .

Dayawanthi has suspicion that rhea was helping her today her suspicion has turned true . Rhea was indeed helping her .

Bebe : hum yeh sagaai pir kabhi kareyngi

Dayawanthi : nehi aaj hi karthey hai

Bebe : koi baath nehi dayawanthi behen waisey bhi rhea ki tabiyath bhikaraab hai

Dayawanthi : nehi rhea ko bhi buraa lag jaaey gaa ki uski sagaai nehi hui aaj . Ananyaa beta will hold rhea hand . They can finish the ritual .

Before khanna could say anything dayawanthi gave neil the ring .

Dayawanthi : Ananyaa beta rhea ki haath bakad kar neil ko ring pehena

Ananyaa takes rhea hand and looks at neil . They get lost in eachothers eye . Rhea hand loses from the ring and was behind avni hand . Avni also doesnt realise that and makes neil wear the ring . Everyone starts clapping which brings both of them to real world . Neil makes rhea wear the ring .

Bebe : ab sagaai bhi ho gayo hai .ab to koi doctor ko bulaa iyeai

Amol goes to call the doctor

Bebe : Tillu rhea ko uski kamrey mein leykar jaao

Ananyaa tries to remove the grip feom her hand but the grips get tighter and rhea wimper increases . It hurts her to see her sister in so much pain

Bebe : Ananyaa puttar tum bhi jao . Mujey nehi lagthaa abhi rhea tumharaa hath chodeygaa

Neil pick rhea in bridal style and goes toward rhea room while avni follows also follow them .

In rhea's room neil puts rhea in her bed . Avni sits beside her . Neil also sit beside her .

Rhea : i am sorry avni di mujey maaf kar doo i couldn't save you

After that rhea fell uncoucious . Avni was about to reply rhea when Neil spoke

Neil : yeh avni akhir hai kon

Avni was shocked . She had forgotten that neil was sitting beside rhea .

Avni : mujey nehi pataa .

Neil : tum toh rhea ki best friend ho na tumhey toh pataa ho na chahiyai .

Avni : har waqth tumhari police giri karnaa zaruri hai kiyaa . Yai tumharaa police station nehi hai aur tumhari mangaithar yahaa behosh padaa hai

Neil : mujey bhi pataa hai

Before they could argue more whole family comes with the doctor neil stands up and stands with bebe while the doctor stands rhea checkup . Everyone was waiting doctor to speak up to know whats wrong with rhea

The doctor stands up and face the family

Doctor : rhea bilkul teek hai bas todaa stress hai iss ki wajasey yai bimaar hogayi . yai dawaai dheydho aur riyaa ko bilkul stress hona chahiyai

The doctor leaves with amol .

Bebe : ab hum chaltey hai

The khanna's bid bye to mehetas and leave from meheta house

Dayawanthi : Ananya betaa aaj tum yehi rukh jaao rhea ki pass .
Avni agrees as she know if she goes to her house she will be worried for her and cant sit peacefully .

Everyone leaves the room leaving avni with rhea .

Avni : tumhari koi galthi nehi hai . Tum nai toh kitni baar meri matath ki thi . Just dont stress yourself over that thing .

It seems as rhea had heard her as a smile comes to her face and she snuggles closer to avni.

Precap : Avni meeting Ali
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Posted: 8 years ago
Avni put the ring in Neil's finger.. Yeayyy...
I would love to see this side of Rhea in show...
Just can't imagine Rhea to be so good.. But happy to see her like this...
Update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Thank you so much😊
Ifa_Hassan thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago

Thank you so much
Ifa_Hassan thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago

Thank you so much 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kshailja

Avni put the ring in Neil's finger.. Yeayyy...

I would love to see this side of Rhea in show...
Just can't imagine Rhea to be so good.. But happy to see her like this...
Update soon...


Thank you so much glad you like it
Even i like this rhea too much

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