AVNEIL FF : NAINA ASHQ NA HO - BOOK 2 (CHAPTER 47 UPDATED ON PG 60)

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Mehak Bhambri

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Posted: 7 years ago

#451

Hey vihu.. so sorry yar.. i couldn't comment on your chapters.. i still can't.. very busy these days..
But in short.. i loved it..
I will soon write a good comment

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Zenab

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Posted: 7 years ago

#452

Who is there on first floor

I hope Avni Pillu and Vishakha are safe

Finally he has saved them from Mark

Fab update

Lots of Love

Zainab

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Wingsoflove_2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#453

Super update😛 avni pregnant u r amazing yaar.last part was bit confusing.continue soon

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Tanvi4

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Posted: 7 years ago

#454

Nice like it but stopped in cliff hanger hahahahah but something was a miss in this part not as per ur writing standard but like it. Wait for next part

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Somewhatwriter

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Posted: 7 years ago

#455

Since you are so amazing at writing could you give me the right words to explain how much i love your writing, and this chapter and how sorry I am that i couldnt reply for so long. I dont deserve to be the friend of such a lovely, kind and beautiful writer if i cant find the time to reply to all these wonderful things you kindly make the time to write for our entertainment. Let me sketch you a scenario my friend, i atrive late from school, my head pounding incessantly and my legs sore and mood sout from rough things that happened today because of friend issues or just difficult school work and i slump on my bed and decide to scroll through my phone as i havent been able to really check on it throughout the day. I flick through india forums and my eyes fall on the title NAINA ASHQ NA HO- (chapter 47 updated on pg 60) my eyes light up because I know the magic in your fingertips has the capacity to immediately cheer me up. I read through it immersed in the beauty of the way you describe the thrilling action, chubby's selflessness, Avneil's intense love. And i have to mention all that genius mystery that has left me addicted and breathlessly begging for more and TILLU KA PILLU!!!????!???!?! And Vihu i cant begin to explain how happy and free i felt for atleast those minutes i spent reading that story and living it. And for that i cannot thank you enough. Please, please update soon.

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rinku95

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Posted: 7 years ago

#456

superb

who is killed?

thanks for pm

continue soon

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Gurveen

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Posted: 7 years ago

#457

Fantastic update
Avni is pregnant and starts fearing for her child's safety
Vishakha has gone there to safeguard Avni
But what happened after mark shot but whom he shot???
Thank god neil reached there and killed mark too
It's a cliffhanger
Please please update soon

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Thesweetsoul

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Posted: 7 years ago

#458

sorry vihu for late reply...par kya karoon mai pehle paper fir yeh shifting...i am gonna be late for few more time..but u don't mind...i will reply pakka to u ,sanju,and zuu...she is in hiatus and very much busy and can't come to if like before..but she will come back soon...all the best for coaching and all.kal paper khaam hooye,independence day manaya kya? achaa hamare toh kal schol shooru hoa tha...yeh school vaale thodi aur chutti nahi de sakte the..mere ghar par shifting ka saara kaam ho jaata ...aur mujhe bh iss hectic kaamo se chutkaara mil kar aaram mlta ...uff...never miind..pata hai ki mai class kya poore 7th me 3rd aayi hoon social science mai.actually teacher padhaati dhang se nahi aur upar se itni strict checking karti hai ki bache fail hi hojaye..har class mai 18 bacho se zyaada fail hai..sivaaye hamari .10 bacho se yaada fail..so 3 new stories and many more updates...avni pregnant..hmm ttne bhi meri tarah uso banya na..let me tell u the 1st story,which i have already written in which it is..i disclosed my secret..shit... galat kiya..but now i won't..haha nahi lagta ek ghanta like karne me...mai toh bejhijak teri har story like karti gayi...mmm mark asse kaise end ho gaya...nahi toh story kaise aage badhegi..pata cha gaya kisko mara..lekin remeber my fav taline'no fun in revealing.'..😃and aise hi likti rahiyo..ek question hai,kya meri commet bhi sanju ke jaise special nahi kya?

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__VIHU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#459

Originally posted by: Kshailja
I know I know...
I know whom they killed...
Why you did this Vihuu, why?
And you know what that I know what you are trying to show. I know I know...
And if what I think I know then now I am starting to understand you😉
And don't worry I will not reveal the mystery of death.
But the plan of Neil was tagda...
Banda ainvy apne time ka topper nahi hai, potential hai Bhai bande mein.
And the way he shouted on Chubby. Yaar, she is so understanding.. I loved this character.
And Mark ko ladies doctor hi magwana tha, warna story mein twist kahan se aata..
And then the fight. Hehehe... You are so good in writing suspense and action...
Mark ka khatma ho gya na?? Ab toh wapas nahi aaega na wo?? At least ye toh confirm kr deti. Already cliffhanger pe end ki h chapter.

Last but not the least, Avni is pregnant☺️
But I am blushing like fool... Hehehehhehe...
Ab bhala wo raat kaise bhool sakti h Avni... Neil ne toh ek hi baar mein score kr diya...hahahhaha...
"Tillu ka Pillu" yup it's the most important dialogue. But ab kaise bataegi Avni? Ab toh rona start hone wala h AvNeil ka..
But I hope tu sab kuchh achha kar de next chapter mein...

Waiting for it. Maloom Hai at least ek week toh wait krna hi hoga but fir bhi a girl can request..
So update soon..
I am here waiting for it eagerly...

And love you🤗

Was it too easy to guess.. Or may be you know me too well...😳

Lady doctor.. He thought she'll be abla naari.. So no danger.. But he already knew too much about her and Neil ignored that he might had researched about Neil Kapoor and his previous one year of life..

Next chapter thoda axche se likhoongi.. Sab clear ho jayega..

OMG!! Ek baar me score.. ☺️

I'll try to update before one week this time..

Next update will be a surprise package...

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__VIHU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#460

Originally posted by: nimarious
wat to tell this was just flawless...
poor babies It hurts to see them like this...
n wat to say abt vishakha...she is friendship goals...
finally mark chapter is over...
tillu ka pillu ...hehe...wow...
last part was confusing...
I might be wrong...
but I think it's vishakha abt whom avnI is talking...
n the vishakha whom Neil is seeing is just his hallucination...
just a mere guess 😆
its upto u wat u wanna show...
main kuch jyada hi sochne lagi hoon...
but it will be very heartbreaking if it turns out to be true...
do continue soon...
can't wait for next part...

Hellow Sneha.. Thank you dear...

May be you're right.. I'll reveal all things in next update..

Nowadays e expectations are too high.. Hope I manage to keep them all..