AVNEIL FF : NAINA ASHQ NA HO - BOOK 2 (CHAPTER 47 UPDATED ON PG 60)

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Deepti_98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#401

So Neil is going to Training Camp, aur main pata nahi kya kya soch rahi thi!

The starting scene was literally really heart touching, Avni faith on Neil was perfectly depicted...

DD- Avni friendship is a bond to cherish...

Avni must be feeling so heartbroken on learning Neil will be away from her one more time..

Both Neil and Avni are correct on their view points, won't support anyone!

But how cutely Neil tries to reconcile with Avni, your writing made it look suppeeerr cute!

Neil holding Avni's pic before falling was touching!

Ok here it comes- AvNeil's first Kiss!

You're such a sexxaayyy writer I didn't know!

Avni's kiss was breathtaking too, I loved this bold Avni...

And the consummation☺️

Par Neil sach mai chala jayega😭?

But overall a khidkitod update!

Love<3

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shikha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#402

Vihuu this one is mind blowing.first of all sorry for commenting late.really Neil Khanna back in police form n the way he tried to convince avni was adorable.i like the whole part specially the kitchen scene.n jus hope this new entry is not juhi madam

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__VIHU

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Posted: 8 years ago

#403

Originally posted by: rinku95
amazing
continue soon

Thanks..😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

#404

Originally posted by: sorathsheikh
This story is awesome sis! 😃 Please do send me PM when ever you give update.

Thanks dear..

Will definitely pm you on next update..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#405

Originally posted by: Gurveen
Nice update
Neil was hiding his rejoining and Avni I upset about this
Precap sounds interesting
Update soon please

Thank you Gurveen..

Hope you'll like coming updates too.. Keep showering the love and appreciation like this dear

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Posted: 8 years ago

#406

Originally posted by: zaya93200
HOLY SSSHHHIITTT!!!!! just read all your updates at one go

Hope you liked it..

I think I have seen you on this thread earlier too..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#407

Originally posted by: Deepti_98
So Neil is going to Training Camp, aur main pata nahi kya kya soch rahi thi!
The starting scene was literally really heart touching, Avni faith on Neil was perfectly depicted...
DD- Avni friendship is a bond to cherish...
Avni must be feeling so heartbroken on learning Neil will be away from her one more time..
Both Neil and Avni are correct on their view points, won't support anyone!
But how cutely Neil tries to reconcile with Avni, your writing made it look suppeeerr cute!
Neil holding Avni's pic before falling was touching!
Ok here it comes- AvNeil's first Kiss!
You're such a sexxaayyy writer I didn't know!
Avni's kiss was breathtaking too, I loved this bold Avni...
And the consummation☺️
Par Neil sach mai chala jayega😭?
But overall a khidkitod update!
Love<3

Hii Deepu..

Thank you mera babu..

You have always been a driving force in writing this FF.

Sexy.. OmG😳.. I don't know how to take this.. Well I'll take it as a compliment.

Will return with next update soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#408

Originally posted by: shikhsk
Vihuu this one is mind blowing.first of all sorry for commenting late.really Neil Khanna back in police form n the way he tried to convince avni was adorable.i like the whole part specially the kitchen scene.n jus hope this new entry is not juhi madam

SHIKHHAAA... i can't express how happy I am to see your comment.

Thank you.. I m feeling so loved to see you..

No it will not be Juhi..

Hope you're doing well.. And hope we see you regular on forum after your workload reduces.. And negativity from NK reduces..

Lots of love and good wishes from me..

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Shailja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#409

Originally posted by: vu1998

Please don't embarrass me...☺️
I missed you Shailu.. Rarely saw you in the forum.. Thought you also left. But thank God you're still here..
A hug for you..
Love you three Shailu..
For the visitor you'll have to wait..
By the way.. Do you really want me to bring Juhi..
If yes.. I'll bring purani wali cute Juhi.. I didn't liked the new one..
Mera dil chhill jata hai use Neil ke saath dekhkar...

I am here only.. just adjusting in new environment...

And please don't bring Juhi back.. actually she is coming back everywhere so I thought you are also going to bring her back... So now it is someone else who is coming back ... Is it Mark? DM? Kaun h wo?? Iske liye I am waiting for the update..