AVNEIL FF : NAINA ASHQ NA HO - BOOK 2 (CHAPTER 47 UPDATED ON PG 60) - Page 43

Originally posted by: Kshailja

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Yeaayyy , I am the first one😎

Wow Neil is back😊

And Mark too😡

Uss 🤬 ko ek na ek din wapas aana hi tha..Lekin why so soon.. Thoda AvNeil romance toh hone deta 🤬...

Avni is so brave. That girl has got some balls... And that's why I Love Her... Show mein Sita ban k Rang Mahal jaa rhi or yahan Naam Shabana ban k gundo ko goli se uda rahi.. 👏

Hat's off to this Girl..

And then there is our Tillu😳

Situation kaisa bhi ho use toh Hot lagna hi hai.( Yup I totally imagined him with those red eyes and anger.. ufff Kya hot lag rha hoga..)

Mark beta tu bach k reh, tujhe abhi andaza nahi tera kisse pala para hai. IPS Neil Khanna hai... Or use lagta h ki Neil ko Cop k badle uske team mein hona chahiye Tha toh just imagine Neil with skills of Police and terror and mind and whatever Mark think, of Goon... Neil Khanna "A deadly combination.. Ufff.. Tabahi macha dega...

Ya kaho, Sansani macha dega...

And yeaayyy, Chubby is back.. Now they will find Avni and will kill Mark and please ab Neil ko goli mat khane dena.. Bahot ho gya Neil pe Atyachaar, Abki baar Mark ko goli maar... (Waah waah Kya dialogue maara h Maine.. *self shoulder patting*) hahahahahahhahahahaha...

Avni k to jalwe h.. Kya bindaas h and Neil apni wife k saare baton ko samjh jata Hai Bina dekhe.. hehehehe...

And this was totally action Wala scene and I think next will be super duper action episode...

Bas ab next update ka intezaar rahega mujhe..

And Mujhe aisa aabhas q ho rha h ki ye story end hone wali h? Agar mere intuition sahi hai toh Vihu new storyline leke ready raho. Coz iske baad hum bina Tere update k adhoore ho jaenge.. So keep the next story ready.. Ab se hi.. And iss story ko or bada kr rhi to mashallah... I am waiting...

And Love you yaar with lots of love, hugs and kisses...

🤗

Keep writing and updating...Kissi Wala emoji nahi hai warna yahan dher laga deti main..😆

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Hey girl ! how much days ? intezar tera sadiyon se kar raha pyas baiti hai kab se yahan 😆😆

So mere Sher Mark is back with a bang ! Photo kahan hai 😲

Wonderful gift for Neil as he returns from training session .

#TilluKiLadyDon 😎 I'm just proud of this girl . She never falls soon . Fighter ! I thought someone from family died but our Lady Don is more than enough to protect them . She shot two gunmen of Mark !

Great to see Vishaka too .

I am waiting for action sequences to unfold 😆 I know you will be fab ! Tujhe geography bhi pata hai . Or kya kya pata hai tujhe han . Kolaba fort . Goa 😕 You are tailor made to write adventure series and family drama girl !

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

awesome update, hope he can get his name cleared after and Avni is saved

Originally posted by: pri12

Vihu Vihu Yeh to Romantic Thriller hai yaar...Loving it

Now Neil should kill Mark...Please Dont kill any police officer..DD ko to bilkul nhi..I love DD bond with everyone He is always there for Neil...Vishakha should be safe...All in all I want terrorists dead 😆

Avni The fierce tigress killed 2 terrorists...I want to see her in action too...Long list of demands 😆

Plz continue soon

Originally posted by: Deepti_98

Such a dhamakedaar- action bhara update, kept me on the edge of my seat throughout!
My heart pounced when I read the starting paragraph, I thought Avni ko kuch ho gaya...
OK so Mark is back, even more stronger this time:(
Neil must be feeling so helpless and distressed to see Avni in that condition, I could imagine his condition
My poor babies, uss Mark ki toh, how dare he touch Avni 😡
I could feel the pain in Neil's voice and face to see Avni there 😭
Neil be the best, iss halat mai bhi Avni ko itne acche tarike se motivate kiya usne...My heart goes out to him ❤️
I am glad to see Vishakha back, Neil- DD- Vishakha will be a good trio!
My brave badass girl, Avni is not scared of anyone;)
This Evan seems more cruel than Mark, his look seemed dangerous...
Neil and Avni are in so much pain 😭
Par Neil toh iss Mark ki pungi baja dega, bahut maza aayega
The way you handled the whole track- Mark blackmailing Neil, Neil and his team trying to find Avni was phenomenal, you have so much information regarding all this...
I loved loved loved this update
Waiting for the next update eaageeerlllyy, with more suspense and dhamaka!
Lots of Love