AVNEIL FF : NAINA ASHQ NA HO - BOOK 2 (CHAPTER 47 UPDATED ON PG 60)

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Electro.Cutie

@Electro.Cutie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#251

Vihu first of all our comments can never be complete without a sorry. So just bear with it.

I read this update the night you updated but I couldn't get time to write a long comment until now. Sorry for that.

Coming to the update, I am one of those people who awaited this moment the most and it's finally here. Actually I have no words to describe this chapter Vihu. It is mindblowing!

As Dr.Singh narrated the whole story I could imagine each and everything. It was such an emotional ride and I would like to give you a salute for your flawless plot. Your thoughts, your ideas are just so unique! Hats off Vihu.

Vishakha is so broken. I can't even imagine what she is going through now. When Neil yelled at Avni.. I was so disheartened. I felt like shaking him and knock some sense into him.. but I know the most affected person here is Neil. He was living a lie. Gosh! Vihu you are so fab. I wish I could write even a bit of how you do.

The car ride was dangerous and my heart was jack hammering. Really! But everything was okay in the end. Loved how he pulled her as the car dropped down.

Overall I couldn't have read a better version of this chapter. Keep doing wonders sweetie. Lots of hugs and kisses your way.

Tumhaari Zuu

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__VIHU

@__VIHU

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: Kshailja

Bas good..
Itna hi samjh payi tu mujhe itne comment-o se...
Hey bhagwan ab mujhe utha hi lo...

Beta, tune itna mast likha h ki shabd kam par gye bayan krne ko...
Pehle toh itti late update ki..Lekin chalo maaf kiya coz update complan pee k aaya tha...
And then that truth revelation..

Omg! uss doctor ki itni himmat ki mere Neil ko torture kre.. Lekin usne kr diya.. Bahot ganda h yaar wo doctor.. But chalo use bhi maaf kiya coz usne mere Neil ko bachaya..

And then wo Nalayak Mark.. Sahi mein agar wo mere haath lag gya na toh bachega nai..

Fir Vishakha.. Yaar aise insaan hote h kya duniya mein..
She is so damn perfect.. I am feeling so bad for her... Usne Neil and Ayna dono ko kho diya.. But now I hope Neil Khanna should remain her bestfriend to call her chubby.. I like this nick name.. And her outburst.. You described it so so so well.. Especially jab wo use shadi k liye bolti h..

And Neil is so gadha.. How can he think ki ye sab Avni ka kaam h.. I can feel the hurt which Avni faced at that time..

Or jab use realise hua ki he is NEIL KHANNA.. That moment was like ab kuchh achha hoga.. Lekin fir wo gussa ho k chala gya.. And even he pushed her aside... Felt so bad...

Or wo high speed wala scene... Waise kitna maja aa rha hoga high speed mein car chalane mein.. Ek baar try krenge.. Bas break na fail ho jaye.. Hehehehe..

Or wo scene tune Dilwale se liya tha kya?? Dono ka car facing each other on the side of hills in high speed..
I can totally imagine that scene...

Finally Tillu is back.. Usne Avni ko bacha liya...
And that forehead kiss... Aww kitna cute tha..
"ye mausam ki baarish, ye baarish ka pani, ye pani ki boonde, tujhe hi toh dhoondhe." bas ye bg mein baja do..

And now waiting for them to go back to Khanna house..
Avni should sing, " Mera piya ghar aaya oh Raam ji.."

Ab na agle update k liye itna mat tadpana..
Hm toh har ghante update check krte the.. Ki ab aaya hoga ab aaya hoga.. Lekin nai aaya tha..
Or jab aaya toh bas khushi ka thikana nai tha..
So aisi khushi deti reh.. Or jaldi se update kr de next part..

Aww.. Mele rockstar ko bura laga... You deserve this😆

Aisa kon karta hai...

I knew I m gonna recieve a super lovely comment from you Shailu... Lekin maine jitna suspense se tadpaya.. Tumne uska poora badla le liya... Maine tumhare comment ko magnifying glass se hazaar baar ghoora... "No comments"... I wanted ki dharti phat jaye aur main usme sama jaun...

But finally... My Shailu is back...

Thank you

Meri chatterbox.. Kinna wadda dil hai tumhara... Sabko maaf kar diya...

You like high speed... Me too... But be precautious... Always have your Tillu by your side while trying this stunt..

Yeah!! That was inspired...lol...

Bg music was song of the rain...

Piya ji ko jaldi ghar pahuncha dungi..

Next update will be updated soon..

No more tadpaying... Tumhara revenge bada dangerous tha...

Lots of love..

Vihu