AVNEIL FF : NAINA ASHQ NA HO - BOOK 2 (CHAPTER 47 UPDATED ON PG 60) - Page 12

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Posted: 8 years ago
hey...
just now started reading ur story
completed all the chap
really awesome story
loved it so much
i read it overnight
storyline is perfect...no loopholes
i love avneil here so much...they are so cute
u have perfectly expressed all their emotions...no over dramatic
u have exactly maintained the balance between Neil Khanna & Neil Kapoor😊
Avni's character portrayal was excellent
What to say about Neil...he is such a sweetheart both in the show & in this story..😊
waiting for Neil to realize the truth
Zain perfectly nails as neil😉 & u perfectly nailed nail's character
i just wish i can pull Neil's cheeks...he is so adorable in ur story😛
finally the hug in the bed...i'm so blushing blushing😳
last but not least ur writing...its simply fabulous
ur writing conveys all the emotion...picture perfect writing
waiting eagerly for ur next chapter
cont soon plz
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Posted: 8 years ago
Vihuu...first of all... Congrats dear..
Book2 !!!
Continue to treat us with such magical updates...
And the story is awesome... All the chars...and I loved the journey from neil kapoor to Khanna ... though it's just for us...readers and avni... Neil ko abhi aur wait karna padega ..hihi...
U managed everything sooo well... finally caught up with all the updates... AMAZING...just amazing...
Update sooon...
❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Nice update Vihu
He remembers everything but he himself down know about
Love their cute nok jhok
And Avni ki beizzati 😆 chipkali se comparison aur moti n dumb
Neil is injured that is why she didn't took revenge for calling moti
Waiting for next update

Lots of love
Zainab


Thank you Zainab...
But Avni won't spare him that easily...
I feel so happy that it made you smile..
Love..
Vihu
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Dreamer3

So..he remembered about their marriage..!!!
And..when he said.."Tum beech mein toh aa nahi sakti..Space kam hogi na tumhaare according."😆
The way..you described Avni's feelings..while sleeping..👏
Waiting for the next update..😊


Yes!! He do remember about marriage...
Thank you Aqsa...
Awww!! You liked them... I wrote them with all my heart..
And it feels great to be appreciated for that..
Will update that very soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Really amazing update
Their nok-jhok was hilarious
Avni scared of lizard and Neil teasing her was fantastic
Update soon please

Thank you Gurveen..😊
I'll try to update asap..
And i am really grateful to you.. For always boosting me with your regular comments...
Love...
Vihu
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AppsG1974

I'm really sorry for getting late. Was really busy. All the chapters are superb and marvellous. "She could it me" was so funny. I'm sure that he is only our N.K. but the question is that whi is Vishakha's childhood friend Neil Kapoor. Sorry once again for getting late.


Appu.. Please don't say sorry...
I m so glad to see you back..
This was out of my comfort zone... As i m not that good at funny scenes..
And i m so glad that you commented on this one..
All the love..
Vihu
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: srividhya68

hey...
just now started reading ur story
completed all the chap
really awesome story
loved it so much
i read it overnight
storyline is perfect...no loopholes
i love avneil here so much...they are so cute
u have perfectly expressed all their emotions...no over dramatic
u have exactly maintained the balance between Neil Khanna & Neil Kapoor😊
Avni's character portrayal was excellent
What to say about Neil...he is such a sweetheart both in the show & in this story..😊
waiting for Neil to realize the truth
Zain perfectly nails as neil😉 & u perfectly nailed nail's character
i just wish i can pull Neil's cheeks...he is so adorable in ur story😛
finally the hug in the bed...i'm so blushing blushing😳
last but not least ur writing...its simply fabulous
ur writing conveys all the emotion...picture perfect writing
waiting eagerly for ur next chapter
cont soon plz


Hellow Sri!!
Thank you for such a lovely review dear...
It feels really nice to have a new reader on this thread...
Overnight... OMG!! That means a lot...
Actually I wasn't sure about the hug on bed.. I thought it could sound awkward... But you liked it.. Thank God for that...
Will update soon..
And hope to see a regular review from you..
Vihu
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Posted: 8 years ago
Vihu it was a fantastic dialogues.
And Mr. Kapoor dialogues! Oh MY GOD Vihuuu you rocked. The dialogues were epic🤣
BTW Mr. Kapoor is now really living the life of Mr. Neil Khanna because when she said k tum us riya se shaadi krne jarahe they so he said that it was mom choice not mine i mean hi is definitely Neil Khanna.
Vihuuu i just loved thiss update.
Continue asap :)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: _SANJU

Vihuu...first of all... Congrats dear..

Book2 !!!
Continue to treat us with such magical updates...
And the story is awesome... All the chars...and I loved the journey from neil kapoor to Khanna ... though it's just for us...readers and avni... Neil ko abhi aur wait karna padega ..hihi...
U managed everything sooo well... finally caught up with all the updates... AMAZING...just amazing...
Update sooon...
❤️


Thank you SANJU...
I can't express my happiness about the fact that you liked it... I tried to make it light and humerous like most of your random shots..
I'll try to update very soon..
Love..
Vihu
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lol_rofl

Vihu it was a fantastic dialogues.
And Mr. Kapoor dialogues! Oh MY GOD Vihuuu you rocked. The dialogues were epic🤣
BTW Mr. Kapoor is now really living the life of Mr. Neil Khanna because when she said k tum us riya se shaadi krne jarahe they so he said that it was mom choice not mine i mean hi is definitely Neil Khanna.
Vihuuu i just loved thiss update.
Continue asap :)

Hii Areesha..
Sorry for not replying the previous comment...
It feels great to be appreciated for the dialogues as this time I have worked on them..
You noticed that shaadi wala point... Avni too but Tillu was concentrating more on fight...
I'll try my best to update asap..
Love...
Vihu

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