just now started reading ur story
completed all the chap
really awesome story
loved it so much
i read it overnight
storyline is perfect...no loopholes
i love avneil here so much...they are so cute
u have perfectly expressed all their emotions...no over dramatic
u have exactly maintained the balance between Neil Khanna & Neil Kapoor😊
Avni's character portrayal was excellent
What to say about Neil...he is such a sweetheart both in the show & in this story..😊
waiting for Neil to realize the truth
Zain perfectly nails as neil😉 & u perfectly nailed nail's character
i just wish i can pull Neil's cheeks...he is so adorable in ur story😛
finally the hug in the bed...i'm so blushing blushing😳
last but not least ur writing...its simply fabulous
ur writing conveys all the emotion...picture perfect writing
waiting eagerly for ur next chapter
cont soon plz