AvNeil TS-Fragile Love (Part 2 on page 5) *Complete*

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Shailja

@Kshailja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

This OS is awesome dude..

Just make it long story only if you can..

Because it's totally different and well written..

Will love to read this story...

The pain and the love which you expressed through words are just amazing..

So do update..

And please inform if you write any other story..

Will be delighted to read more from you..

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Starfish03

@Starfish03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Such a unique story, never read anything like it hats off to u for it, it's truly a masterpiece and congratulations for the success I can tell you are a talented writer please carry on writing more on avneil:)

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Gurveen

@Gurveen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

What a tragic love story
But I think Neil's love will bring back Avni
Amazing

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Deepti_98

@Deepti_98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

This was so beautiful!!!

I had literally had goosebumps reading this one!!!

The plot you chose was completely different and realistic

And the dialogues were beautifully penned down

One could feel all the emotions in this story

This is just amazing

Avni's pain, Neil's guilt was perfectly shown

Keep writing- You have superb writing skills

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Zenab

@Duskyylilac

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

It is superb
Poor soul she has been tortured from last 3 yrs
Neil will help her to overcome her past he will heal all her wounds with his love

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oh nakhrewaali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: pri12
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unres
Yayyy I m the first...
Shibani What was that...You put every emotion in this OS...This is jus brilliant... I m out of words...You wrote close to reality...
Avni has been raped for 3 bloody years...This is so difficult to bear...Neil is also in pain...I had goosebumps when she said after three years I have seen a man look away from my body,"
Eventually their love will conquer everything😊
Lots of love🤗
please write more

@bold, thanks😳
@red, unfornutely, what I wrote was just 1% of the harsh reality

Edited by __shibani__ - 8 years ago

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oh nakhrewaali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: vidz2122
kill dayawanti .. such a b**** 😡... isse acha who maar dethi avni ko ... neil ... why are u soo good ... wonderful ... his love melt my heart ... but felt really really realy bad for avi ... this is beyond worst for a girl ... i wish no one come acrs such a situaton

@red, Agar woh Avni ko maar deti, toh iss OS ka wajood hi nahi hota😆
@bold, that's what love does😉

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oh nakhrewaali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: shikhsk
It's different Shibu.really it's very difficult to come out of this trauma.neil's love will definitely heal her pain.its brilliant!!!

glad you liked it😳

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oh nakhrewaali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: suhaaana
such a beautiful depiction of love yr
the pain avni endured is nothing that can even be imagined and Neil he is there with all his love
I could feel the longing in Neil's character and hatred of avni for herself

can we get some parts as continuation if you are comfortable.

@bold, thanks Suhaana😳
@red, hopefully time permits me to give a second part for this story😆