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Shailja

@Kshailja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

So, in this story we will be learning more about the philosophy of Hobbes, Locke and Rousseau.. That how human being and State work and what should be the role of state in keeping the rights of its citizens and. People's political obligation...

The concept is totally unique and different and amazing...

Philosophical part is well described...

And the concept of Thriller-Action-Mystry-Romance Combo is awesome...

Keep writing...

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Fatima Khan

@Khan_fatima16

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Wow It's awesome
Just wow yaar it's too good
You are so amazing in writing
Loved the way you portrayed everything in your story
Just beyond awesome
Ananya is super smart and I think the girl who attack on Neil was none other Ananya
Neil Neil is just awesome
The way he answered her was amazing
Keep writing more and more
And I'm new here
I loved your story so much
It is really worth reading
You are awesome writer
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Vee

@reflorated

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

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ArjunPMs

@ArjunPMs

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: .Avengers.

So clear my confusion- vigilante is seeking justice on the side of wronged people but that darwesh Kumar actually met her to do some dirty deed? And Neil goes after her? Why she would help Darwesh unless he was some kind of mole for both her and ananya? This Nyaya show sounds like tehelka/satyamev jayate show, how she survived in this terror city with that kind of show? That senior of Neil,is he good or bad😆 this is all for now.

No no, the vigilante is seeking justice on the side of the wronged. The deal was happening between Darwesh Singh and a mysterious second party - the vigilante interrupted the deal to kill all of the criminals at the scene.

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

omg .. what a brilliant writing .. thriller n Daya becomes main culprit behind drug deals n there is Ananya verma as the journalist who just gives chills to police department n again there is Neil who is handling this case ...

Ali - a warm character

my god your story is different level .. u are a law student? can I name it as a political thriller?

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natzcreado

@natzcreado

Explorer

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Yooo nice update. Amazing... Do continue soon...

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Arisha

@lol_rofl

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Omg that was an interesting update.😳
I am loving this concept buddy.
Do continue it.
And girl what do you study?? 😆

Edited by lol_rofl - 8 years ago

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pri12

@pri12

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Amazing loved it

So Amol Mehta is involved too with Dayawanti Mehta...

I guess u r a law student 😆 This is superb...A proper Thriller

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Tumpa12

@Tumpa12

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Story has thrill drama
interesting
update soon
thnx for pm

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Hello there
I'm blown away by the brilliance, preparation and thought you have put in to this...👏👏
It's absolutely amazing, intriguing and addictive. Also totally Loving the concept and characters⭐️
I think Ananya is the vigilante and also hiding her real identity (Avni).
I'm in no mood to wrack my brain with this thriller, I'd just wait patiently for each awesome part😆
I hope you will update regularly😃
Take care

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