AvNeil FF: Haal-e-dil link to BOOK 2 (PAGE 1) - Page 105

Originally posted by: Kshailja

Which song was that??

I thought it's your poem😆

Originally posted by: preya_radev

zuu zuu updated whoop whoop... finally an update from my awesome zuu zuu just loved it.
chap 134 was the best it was just all avneil all the way. when i started to read then chap i had a smile on my face and that smile stayed till i reached to the end of the chap... u did a fab job zuu zuu... loved it how avni was adoring neil when he was sleeping and the way she said "my sleeping baby" unconsciously and when she realized she said that and how her eyes widened and the way she covered her mouth...awww im so happy the way avni was speaking to neil was just the best past. liked how u made avni mention that when she was in coma she heard everything he would say to her, the songs he would sing to her but she never got to tell him this...the way avni was telling an sleeping neil on how she was feeling when she thought she lost him was amazing each and every word u wrote was bang on...the way u described the room neil was in was amazing i could actually imagine each and every thing with avneil in that room... hayee what a song just loved it zuu zuu...loved it when avni sat down next to neil again and took her hands in his... but super cop tillu had to wake up at the time. haha neil never fails to amaze me with his lines and of course the credit goes to u zuu zuu...loved it when he said "kya hua wifey? bhoot dekha kya?...uff that smirk even in this state he wouldnt stop smirking...loved how from inside neil was really happy seen avni care and concern for him...loved how neil understood what avni wanted to say and was waiting for her to talk...aww loved it when neil cupped avni face and how he said "hey shona zindagi bhai tumhare sath main rahunga.. okay vadha raha tumse"... and how his comforting voice always made avni feel protected...i actually loved it avni didnt hold back this time and let those tears fall down and since she didnt want neil to see her like this she hugged him and also loved it when neil let her cry and hugged her back...hayee the way they stayed like that and avni didnt feel like moving... uff this nurse had to come at the wrong time... she was talking so rudely to avni but happy neil replied back to her even though he tried talk nicely his tone actually told how angry he was... nobody can talk to avni like that until neil is there...haha the way avni said "what is wrong with her" and there starts neils self praising dialogue... and what i loved the most when he said "not everyone is lucky to have such a hot and dashing husband baby"... baby? that just made me dance zuu zuu...haha the way avni pleaded neil to get some rest and how neil made that puppy face and was like "nahh... yeh rest nahi asaan bla bla bla" that actually made me laugh... haha when avni told neil to remove his shirt and there starts neil drama...just loved it when neil said "wow wow wow first insult my poetry and now trying to loot me? whats going on in that head of yours?"...hayee loved it how avni decided to unbutton neil shirt herself while neil was pretending to protest he was enjoying it...uff the way neil was staring at avni when she was unbosoming his shirt and how our romantic neil gripped on to her bare waist which made avni stiffen... hayee the way neil ask "y did u stop" and how avni replied back saying "too much distraction"... naughty neil didnt stop there and tightened his grip and pulled her closer and the way he ask "now" and the way avni said "neil"... im just loving this avneil scene zuu zuu...haha u r right how can avneil not have a eye lock... hayee both busy stating at each other...the way neil called out avni name but it came out as whisper and avni didnt hear him and how neil called out to avni again and this time loudly...the way avni tried to move away from neil but due to his hands around her waist he fell back on his chest was sweet... loved it when avni asked neil concernedly if he is ok... but neil next line just made me laugh when he said "besharam biwi meri"...and poor avni was confused when neil continues and says "hubby zinda ho ya zakhmi wifey ko to bas romance ki hai padhi oh god protect me"... haha the way avni raised her hand to punch neil but decided not to...zuu zuu just loving anveil dialogue... this was aweomse when avni says "tumse baat karna bekaar hain" and neils band on lines "haan toh tum baat kaha karrahi ho..beshramo ki tarah bas mujhe kaisi kaisi nazro se dekthi rethi ho bagwaan janne"..haha loved it how avni put he index finger on neil to make him stop speaking and how neil obeyed and placed his finger on his lips...liked how avni was stopping from blaming herself when she saw neils wounds...liked how neil had his eyes close living the moment when avni was applying the ointment and doing the bandage...the way neil asked avni how she knows how to do all this as she thought she knew nothing... and the way avni mentioned how neil things she is probably worthless but there are certain things she know and ayesha use to take care of her like this whenever she got hurt ... loved it when neil grabbed avni wrist and gestured her to come in front of him.. loved it how he lifted her face and cupped it while she was standing in between his legs while he was sitting...loved it when neil said "never say u r worthless for me u r priceless" and the way he pulled her in a hug and how avni hugged him back... thank u so much zuu zuu for this anveil part it wss the best and loved it but zuu zuu baby that doesnt mean u dont update for a long time so update soon really cant wait for the next part. lots of love and hug

Originally posted by: srividhya68

superb upt
loved it
cont soon

Originally posted by: kamu_zainaddict

Long time zuuu
How are u?
This is the best thing you gave us, after such a long break.
This was so so cute adorable update.
Avneil scenes we're so bliss.
And the lines u used to show avni emotion that tunnel one "kya kehna" uske.

Waiting for the next update.and yah congratulations CVs are on way to churao ur ff

Vihu, Sri and Nainooo ❤️

Originally posted by: Electro.Cutie

Omg Omg if I knew this comment was here I think sab chod chaad ke aajati 😆

But on a serious note kitna likhti ho Preya. You never fail to do this.

But I failed to fufill that wish in the 2nd last line. 😕

Anyway, Can't thank enough for this. So 🤗

then do it now update soon this has been the longest im addicted to your ff😆😭... haha i can even write more than this but controlled myself as it was long enough and u deserve it. by the way i want to say one thing
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update otherwise i will continue my update morcha 😆

Zuuu Kahan ho yaar...plz update

Hi people I am a silent reader but this wait is killing me so please update 😭

Happy Birthday Cutie..

Happy Bday Zuu...Many Many happy returns of the day