AVNEIL FF : NAINA ASHQ NA HO..... ( LINK TO BOOK 2 UPDATED) - Page 101

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Posted: 8 years ago
My god vihu.. your stiry has us strapped us in to a rollercoster so unpredictable that im dizzy. Hats of yaar... i couldnt even write like you in my dreams you are so insanely talented... And your ff is like a class a drug man... you got me ADDICTED. Yiu have to stop with these thrillung mysteries.. its not good for my health. Like what is going on?! One second Im like this must be Avni's Neil khanna then im like no he cant be and now? God ive lost track. Your work is magical yaar, you have to update soon... or im lost. x
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Posted: 8 years ago
omg girl ! kitne log hai Neil ki deewane .juhi kafi nahi thi ab toh vishaka bhi aa gyi 😆 hawa tight hai Avni ki . huh . tu phir se guma rhi hai that is he kapoor or tillu . keep going girl . I think the day within day u will complete mei zaroor pagal ho jaungi 😕
aha . so you too don't feel like Neil is swetha's son . n you made him Maddy ka beta 😆 I never felt the mother son stuff between them .so only his DNA didn't match with that of Prakash ?

ye Dr. Singh kuch jyada hi fasa ke rakha hai Neil ko Han.pata nahi konsi kichdi paka ke rakha hai

pata nahi tu aur kitna raz chupa ke rakhi hai .mahabahrat jaisa keechte hi ja raha hai.jaldi bata de aur kon kon hai Neil ke peeche .wo Mark bi iska dewana hai kya ?😕😆

noodles ki bhi ham seedha karke kha sakti hai lekin tumhari story to chakravyuh hai . jaldi batao nahi toh mei khudi Teri dimag me ghuskar taka jaki karungi😆
Edited by AgnesFan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
res
unres...😆
I know I m very very late ...
sorry for this...
still I came online just to see how much u have updated n got three updates ...
wow...
I was so excited to read them...
ok now coming to the updates...
first one ...
I loved Ali in this update
he did showed some sensibility ...
avni's confession was awesome...
Neil knowing each n every weapon name means he is our tillu...
but last part broke my heart...😭
mindblowingly written vihuuu 🤗


now second one...
the song selection was just awesome ...
this update was amaZing
loved every bit of it...
now who is this Dr vishakha
I hope she is not a hurdle in avneil life...

now the interesting n confusing update 😆
I was literally confused at first ...
but when proceeded I just loved it...
but I m still lil bit confused with Dr vishakha's past
hope it gets clear soon 😳

love u a lot vihu...
do update soon ...
Edited by nimarious - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Vu everytime time i read your update you amazes me . Yaar vu what is this when we feel that confusion is over u create another confusion . Neil kapoor has memory problems so that means he is neil khanna right . They have told him about his past . Right ?? You give such twist that we have never think of . So i dont want to assume he is neil khanna and u prove him to be neil kapoor . Adopted son seriously vuu . You gave me a shock . You are really amazing writer .after reading one chapter i want more and more . Vu if you have another story please PM me the links i want to read more of your stories . I am addicted to your stories. And sorry for late comment just now woke up .
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sorry for being late Vihu
I was having my exam so couldn't take out time to read
But both the updates were so freaking awesome...
I liked Dr.Vishakha from the first update but is she Ayna, OMG such a fantastic twist!!!
And Neil is not Prakash Shweta Son😲
Par now its confirmed he is our Neil Khanna
So so so so so happy
Gave us a perfect treat Vihu
And the way you describe Ayna's and Avni's emotion was so damn good yaar
I always run out of words to praise you and your writing skills👏
You're just fab Vihu...
Lots of Love
Waiting for the next update eagerly...
Edited by Deepti_98 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ShailjaShan

Res

Unres
OK!!!!
What should I say??
Amazing?? Unpredictable?? Awesome?? Short??😛
Confusing?? Mind blowing??
Matlb ki what is it??
Can you explain it??
Coz mere toh samjh k bahar h..
Qki ab ye Vishakha q aa gyi mere AvNeil ki zindagi mein..
Or samjh nai aa rha how is it possible ki Neil ko Kapoor ka bhi memories yaad h and Khanna ka bhi.. Dual personality disorder tha kya use bachpan mein jo do.zindagi jee rha h..
And ye kya tha ki wo Prakash and Shweta ka adopted beta h.. Aisa jhatka koi deta h bhala...
Or Kareena ka liver match kiya means he is Neil Khanna..
Humare saath aisa q kr rhi ho.. Aaj raat hm soch soch k marne wale h..
Avni ko bol do mere liye bhi pray kr le.. Kal k update tak zinda rehna h mujhe..
Or agar ye Vishakha AvNeil k beech misunderstanding create krne ka koshish ki toh iske toh main 😡..
So ab kal ka hi wait krna padega aage janne k liye..
Humare liye koi VIP quota available h kya?? Jiske thru hm aaj jaan sake ki aage the kya hoga?? Agar aisa kuchh possible ho toh please hum garib pe thoda meherbaani kre maalik..
And really this chapter is as always awesome.. And out of prediction tha.. Aisa socha bhi nai tha..
Yaar tere dimaag mein aise ideas aa kahan se jaate h..
Thoda hume bhi ideas daan kr de..Hehehehehe
Update next part asap..
And love you dher sara for writing..
P.s- Yeayyy!! I m the first one to comment.. 😊



Shailu... Calm down..
Vishakha didn't came between Avneil..
She's a part of Mr Kapoor's life..
Neil is not Prakash's biological son.. This may be the explanation for DNA reports not matching...
Gareeb..🤣 Don't worry.. Dher sari meharbaniyan kari jayengi...
You're really a VIP for me... But the suspense must go on..
Aut itni tareef seriously karte ho... Ya meri taang khichayi..
Will update soon..
Love..
Vihu..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kaira456

so fast update..
thank u
waiting for suspense from ur story
do my one doubt is clear that y neil dna not matched
hey neil got consious and first say about avni
neil khanna is neil

i am sipent reader of your but when ur story become more interesting
so i like and commented
ur a wonderfull writer

You're welcome Kaira..
It feels really nice to have a comment from silent readers..
So thank you dear..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lol_rofl

Res

Unres!!
Koi to mjhe sambhalo.
You r so fast. You have updated chapters and i hadn't read them.
But niw i have read them. MY GOD!!
SURPRISES PAR SURPRISES!
VIHUUU HOW CAN YOU WRITE SO MYSTERIES, MY GOD!!!!
First of all biggest surprise that the doctor was Vishaka/Ayna but i am confused she definitely thinks he is Mr. Kapoor. WHY?? AND THEY ARE COUSINS SIBLING OR WHAT??
Dr. Singh is hiding something na. Vihu JUST TELL ME ALL MYSTERY TO ME ONLY. PM ME YARR. HOW CAN I DIGEST SO MYSTERY AND SUSPENSE.
Next surprise was of Kareena. You made her his biological sister and wow Shweta and Prakash adopted him. This is a big surprise for me lol.
And funally in the end my baby started to gain conscious and what the name he called out we knew it. Awww he is madly in love with Avni.
And in precap he is introducing Vishaka to her. Wow nice.
Vihuuu love you yrrr. Update soon

Yaar Areesha.. Please don't make Neil and Vishakha siblings...
Ayna was Neil Kapoor's sister and Vishakha is his childhood friend and daughter of Dr Singh...
Will clear everything in the thread itself very soon..
Thank you for the praises..
Love you..
Vihu
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pri12

You are amazing viu.. standing ovation for u girl 👏

You have completed 35 chapters but still we are excited about mystery...Ayna has entered the story...Not even one chapter was boring...You maintained essence of story...
I wonder what is mystery of Ayna Dr Singh and Neil Kapoor/Khanna
Kareena is Neil's real sister😲
Love you Viu ❤️🤗

Thank you Ms Kaur..
Vishakha and Ayna are two different persons..
Will clear all confusion very soon..
Till then stay tuned..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shikhsk

Oh god's oh god's vihuu too much suspense

The suspense will be revealed soon Shikha..

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