HUMSAFAR AVNI NEIL FF

Hi all this my beginning to this forum and I am glad to be part of this Naamkaran forum actually frankly speaking i started to watch this serial when i heard that Rima Lagoo ji left the world i got curious to watch her work in this serial but soon i like this serial and thought to write story on it so that's why i am here to share my story with you guys and I hope you people like it.

Character sketch-:

Avni Metha now Avni Neil Khanna Or Ananaya Verma

Neil Khanna

Neela Metha ( in my ff Neela and Ashish are still legally married but they are seperated )

Dayawanti Metha

Amol Metha

Ali

Ria

All Character's are same as shown in serial other character's will be introduce in coming story.

Prologue -

Story start from when Neil come to know that Ananaya is real Avni Mehta Dayavanti Mehta's granddaughter, he decided that he will confront her before his marriage

with Ria and also if necessary than he will arrest her apart from all this he is also very angry and hurt with Avni for hiding this truth from him and deceiving his friendship so he head towards Mehta house but when he was about to enter what he saw and heard change his entire world never in his thought he think of this so he decided to do something before it's too late.

PART 1

At evening Baarat arrived and Avni is very tense that what will happen after this marriage will she will lost her brother forever no this thought give her lots of pain she is sitting in her room thinking how to stop this marriage when her mother Neela come in and tell her something

Avni-maa aap yeh kya keh rahi hai aisa nahi ho sakta hai kabhi nahi.

Neela- janti hoon bacha yeh aasan nahi hai per tumhe yeh karna hoga nahi toh sab kuch khatam ho jayega humara Aman humesha humesha ke liye hum sab se dur ho jayega aur na hi hum Aayesha ke katil ki saja dilwa payenge sab se badh kar tum humesha aise to nahi reh sakti na please ye hi sab problems ka solution hai aur jab use koi problem nahi to phir tumhe kyu hai beta please is bare mein gaur se socho aur phir mujhe batao

After that Neela left Avni alone to take better decision

Avni (self thought)- kya karo mai kya yeh sahi hoga mai kisi ko dard nahi dena chahti par agar ria aur Neil ki saadi ho gayi to Dayawanti Mehta mere aman ko lekar chali jayengi nahi mai aisa nahi hone dungi na chahte hue bhi mujhe yeh karna hi hoga aur koi rasta nahi hai.

In mandap

Pundit said kanya ko bulayie

Dayawanti happily mai leke aati hoon apni poti ko, She leave.

In RIA's Room

Ria is sitting in front of mirror getting ready when Dayawanti comes

Daya- are yeh kya abhi tak tyaar nahi hui kahi phir se bhagne ka iraada to nahi hai

Ria- anhi dadi bas 10 min aur lagenge bas

Dayawanti- theek hai jaldi karo pandit jee bula rahe hai mai ek min me aati hoon Hetal (Ria's mom) tab tak tu ise ready karo aur haan dyaan dena koi gadbad na ho sajhi tum dono.

Hetal- jee ma bas abhi layi aap chaliye

daya- nahi ise mandap pe toh mai hi lejaoungi aur haan ek baat yaad rakhna jab yeh saadi ho rahi ho toh mujhe woh ladki Ananaya mandap kea as paas bhi nahi chahiye.

H-jee ma

Daya leaves

In dayawanti's room

She takes passports and tickets and gives them to Amol

Daya- Amol beta tum mera airport pe wait karna jaise hi mujhe who check milega mai yaha se nikal ke use incash karwa ke paise leke waha pahuch jaoungi.

Amol jee dadi par kahi us Ananaya ko pata chala ki mai mandap ke aaspaas nahi hoon tab kya hoga use kahi shaq na ho jaye

Daya- nahi beta aisa toh tab hoga na jab who is shaadi meinshaamil hogi aur waise bhi who kuch nahi kar sakti bas tum bhai wali rasam ko pura karke airport chale jana yaha mai sab shambhal lungi.

Amol ji dadi I love you

Daya- I love you too beta ab chalo.

After that Dayawanti goes to Ria's room

Daya yeh kya hai gungat kyu dala hai???

Hetal- maa woh Kya hai na ye to rasam hai na ki jab tak shaadi nahi ho jati koi dulhan ka cehera nahi dekh sakta hai

Daya haa woh to hai accha yeh sab chodo maine tumhe kuch kaha tha kiya kya

Hetal jee maa

Daya - accha ab chalte hai muhurat ho gaya hai

Ab Dayawanti Metha aur Hetal Dulhan ko leke mandap pe jate hai.

Hi guys i am back with part two hope you people like it.

PART 2

In mandap

Shweta (Neil's mom) - aye haye itni der ho gayi aur dulhan nahi aayi what happning ji why delaying.

Diksha ( Ria's Bua) - bas Shweta ji aa hi gayi hai woh rahi humari Dulhan.

Shweta - are wah meri bahu aa gayi tillu see na kitni soni lag rahi hai kahi najar na lage.

Pandit - ab sab varmala ka wakth ho gaya hai var aur vadhu age aaye

Aise hi saare riti riwazon ke saath shaadi ho jaati hai, par tabhi peeche se Ria ki aawaz aati hai to sab shocked hoke use dekhte hai us pure mandap pe kewal 3 log aise the joh jante the ki waha pe dulhan ki jagah pe Ria nahi balki koi aur hai aur who 3 log Neela,Hetal aur Neil the. ( haan bilkul sahi pada aapne in sab mein Neil bhi saamil hai aur yeh baat Hetal ko nahi pata hai)

Back in Mandap

Dayawanti-Ria tu yaha hai to woh kaun hai gunghat mein... Woh gusse men us ladki ke paas jati hai aur gunghat hatati hai toh waha pe Ananaya ko dilhan ke roop mein dekh kar shocked hoti hai

Daya- yeh sab kya hai tu yaha kya kar rahi hai teri himmat kaise hui Ria ki jagah mandap pe bhaitne ki

Shweta- Dayawanti Ji yeh sab kya natak laga rakha hai aapne jab dekho koi na koi drama hota hai aapke ghar mein .

Daya- Dekhiye Shweta ji is sab mein humari koi galti nahi hai yeh sab is ladki ka kiya dhara hai isi ne Ria ko dara ke uski jagah mandap mein leli hogi aur...

tabhi Ria beech mein bolti hai

Ria- nahi dadi Ananya ne kuch nahi kiya yeh sab mom ne kiya hai unhone hi mujhe us room mein band kiya aur shayad Ananya ko bhi unhone hi majboor kiya hoga yeh sab karne ko

Daya- yeh tum kya bol rahi ho Ria.

Shweta-wah Dayawanti ji wah kya natak karte hai aap log maan gaye hum jab se yeh Shaadi tay hui hai koi na koi natak kabhi kuch toh kabhi kuch par bas ab bahut ho gaya mai yeh sab ab aur sehen nahi karungi yeh mere bte ki zindagi ka sawal hai jise aapne mazaak bana kar rakh diya hai.

Daya- Shweta ji yeh aap kya keh rahi hai aisa kuch nahi hai bhala hum aisa kyu karenge hum sab toh dil se cahate the ki Ria ki shaadi Neil se ho jaye par is Ananaya sab kuch khatam kar diya par abhi bhi kuch nahi bigda hai hum yeh shaadi tod ke Neil aur Ria ki shaadi karwa dete hai phir to saari problem solve ho jayegi.

Shweta-bas... Bahut ho gaya ab mai aur kuch nahi sun na cahati hoon aap kitni giri hui hai yeh baat mujhe ab pata chal gayi hai aap soch bhi kaise sakti hai ki ab bhi hum aap logo se rishta rakhna cahenge no never aura b aap mujhe kisi bhi cheez ko leke black mail nahi kar sakti hai samjhi aap Mrs. Dayawanti Mehta.

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Hi all sry for delay actually stuck in some important work so cant get time to write further but now here i am with next part

Part - 3

Yaha mandap sab log jo pehele Ria ki aur baad mein Dayawanti baate sun kar surprised hote hai ab Shweta ke mooh se yeh sab sun ke shocked hote hai ki Dayawanti Shweta ko blackmail kar rahi thi specially Prakash ji jo ki Dayawanti Mehta ki bahut respect karte the ab tak woh sab kuch chuchap sun rahe the kyuki woh samajh nahi paa rahe the ki achanak kya ho gaya par ab jab unhone Shweta ji mooh se yeh baat sun kar unke sabr ka baandh tut jata hai wo Dayawanti ko confront karte hai.

Prakash ji Dayawanti ji hum aapko ki sareef aur izatdaar samjahte the par aaj pata chala yeh sab ek dikhawa tha aap to itni giri hui hai aur rahi baat is saadi ki toh kamse kam ab is baat ki tasali toh rahegi aap se humara koi rista nahi hai aur haan aaj se balki abhi se aap se or aapke pariwar ke kisi bi insaan se humara ya humare pariwar ka koi bhi rista nahi hai aur haan ek baat yaad rakhna aur haan Ananaya bhi ab humare pariwar ka part hai woh prakash khanna ki bahu hai Shweta ji ko jo aapne blaikmail kiya hai uske liye hum chahe to aapko jail bhijwa sakte hai par nahi ab hum aapse kisi bhi tarah ka koi talook nahi rakhana chahte hai chaliye Shweta Ji Neil Ananaya ko leke aao.

Shweta - par Prakash ji yeh...

Prakash - abhi nahi Shweta ji ab jo bhi baat hogi woh hum ghar jaake karenge chaliye.

Prakash Shweta leaves from there along with Neil and Ananaya.

In Mandap

Dayawanti yeh sab kya ho gaya kisne akhir kisne kiya yeh sab Ria tumhari itni himmant ki tum mere faisle ke khilaf jao kyu kiya tumne aur toh aur us do kodi ki ladki Ananaya ko bhi apni jagah mandap pe baitha diya

Ria- dadi maine ye nahi kiya wo mom ne mujhe room mein band kar diya aur saayad Ananaya ko bhi inhone hi bola mandap pe bhaithne ko.

Dayawanti kya... Hetal! Hetal...

Hetal ji maaji

Dayawanti kya yeh sab tumne kiya hai bolo chup kyu ho

Hetal ji maaji mai nahi chaahti thi ki Ria kisi aise riste mein bandhe jisme uski khusi na ho aur jindagi bhar dhukhi rahe aur waise bhi who Neil se pyaar bhi nahi karti aapne kewal meri bacchi ko apni is planning ka hissa banaya hai kewal apne business ko bachane ke liye par mai Ria ki maa hoon aur uski jindagi barbaad hote hue kaise dekh sakti hoon aur rahi baat Ananaya ki to haan maine hi use request kithi ki who mandap pe bhait jaye who bechari to bol bhi rahi thi ki woh kisi ko dhokha nahi dena chahti par maine use majbur kiya aur mujhe is baat ka koi pachtawa nahi hai kyuki mujhe lagta hai ki Neil Ananaya se bahut pyaar karta hai

Daya Hetal... tumhari itni himmat ki tum yeh chaal chalo janti nahi ho kya hai Dayawanti Mehta bhul gayi kya kiya tha humne us Neela ka kya kiya tha aur haan yeh mat bhulo ki un maa beti ko kaise apne raaste se hataya tha bhool gayi sab to hum tumhe kaise baksh dege aaj tumne bahut badi galti ki hai aur iski saja tumhe mil kar rahegihum...

Suddenly Ketal Dayawanti ko is tarah se gusse mein saare raaz bolte hue rokta hai...

Ketan- Maa ruko kya kar rahi ho sab log dekh rahe hai

Dayawanti- haa to dekne do aaj mai ise nahi chodungi ise to mai...suddenlley she relies that ki who kaha hai aur chup ho jati hai

Here suddenly Shweta remember there khandani kangan which she have give to Ria for her sagun so she returned to mandap aur waha pahuch kar who hetal aur dayawanti ki saari baatein sun leti hai hai aur bahut disgust hoti hai yaha tak ki Prakash ji Anananya aur Neil bhi who sab sun lete hai expect Anananya Neil and Prakash ji also feel disgust toward whole Metha family mainy thislady Dayawanti Metha.

Hope you like this part next part will post soon till now bye and take care 😊.