Ritik Shivanya FF ~ Meri Aashiqui Tum hi ho~ Ch6 updated on 20 dec

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guyss i m going to start my first ff in this forum. Nd i will write the story in my way. Their will be lots of suspense nd thrill. The story will start after ritik and shivanya's marriage nd how things will change in their life nd how shivanya will fall in love with his enemy nd how ritik will came to know abt her true identity. And yes shesha is going to be the most important part of this story so shall i continue.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Plz do continue nicePlz do continue nicePlz do continue nice
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yippee finally getting FF 🤗
we will b waiting plz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ohk now i m going to start first chapter of this ff hope u all will like it.


Evry1 was gathered in a big hall where ankush raheja's son ritik raheja got married. Evry1 was vry happy nd specially ritik. He was happy bcs he married to that girl whom he wanted to. Shivanya was also very happy bcs she entered in this house now it will be easy for her to take revenge. Yamini was happy bcs now their will be nt any danger on ritik. Ankuh was happy bcs ritik nd yamini was happy. Bt they were unknown from the danger which has entred in their house.

Shesha.was standing infront of idol of shiv. " tody i m vry happy bcs now shivanya will take her revenge from her enemies. Bt i have too help her in any cost bcs she is alone nd i dnt want her to fight alone. Anyhow i have to entre in the house for shivanya bt how" she thought in her mind.

Shivanya was sitting on her bed thinking that she is martied to ritik now nd she have to fulfil her revenge. She heard foot steps. She got nervous as she saw ritik comming toward her. He sat near her on bed nd looked at her." you know what i m vry happy today bcs i got married to you" ritik said while holding her hand. She was nt knowing what is happening as she was nt able to understand anything else than her revange. " why you.are not saying anything?? Are you nervous?? " asked ritik holding her hand. She replied in no tried to remove her hand bt he was nt ready to leave her hand. He take her towards the window nd pointed towards the moon" look that moon is also trying to hide in sky bcs he is nothing infront of you" ritik was saying this words to shivanya who was trying hard not convert in snake was nt able to hide her true identity. Ritik turned towards her. He was shocked seeing her in snake skin. He got scared seeing her horrible face. Shivanya who.was in full anger without wasting a time she stings on ritiks neck. He got shocked as he was nt able to.react. Suddenly shivanya came out of her dream world when ritik jerked her. "kya hua kaa kho gayi acchanak" ritik asked shivanya. She was trying to cover her skin nd said" mjhe neend aa rhi hai main jaa rhi hun sone " shivanya left while he was standing their only looking at her continuesly. " par aaj ki raat mjhe neend ni aa gyi" he said with a smile on his face nd went towards the sofa. He sat on sofa nd he was looking at shivanya who was sleeping peacfuly. He slept on sofa with a smile on face wondering what turn his life will take from tommrow..

Precap: A girl in short dress entred in house. Ritik nd shivanya got shocked seeing her.


Sorry guys this is a small updt. I know its nt that gd bt hope u all will like it plzzz do comments
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome starting
ritik ke maan main toh laddo phut raha hai after all he got what he want 😉
but shivanya was thinking abt her revenge
oh god shivanya got dream abt biting ritik
poor ritik couldn't sleep at night bcoz of his excitement 😆
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good start...so that snake bite is a dream in ur ff...hmm Ritik ro fula nahi sama raha...he is in heaven... P.a I guess that gal in short dress is sesha
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteariya

awesome starting
ritik ke maan main toh laddo phut raha hai after all he got what he want 😉
but shivanya was thinking abt her revenge
oh god shivanya got dream abt biting ritik
poor ritik couldn't sleep at night bcoz of his excitement 😆
continue soon

Tnx dear will continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kit_Kat

Good start...so that snake bite is a dream in ur ff...hmm Ritik ro fula nahi sama raha...he is in heaven...P.a I guess that gal in short dress is sesha

Thnx dear nd wait for the suspence
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ritik was sleeping in sofa. Suddenly the sun rays fall on his eyes. He rubbed his eyes nd found a blanket on him. He got surprised. He looked all around the room bt couldnt find shivanya around her. He got worried as he couldnt find her anywhere. He came out of his room nd start finding her evrywhere. He called out her name loudly nd walked towards hall. He got relief as he saw her with family members. Yamini nd ankush was introduceing her with some guests. He ran towards her nd hugged her. She became shocked after seeing his reaction. Evry1 was looking at him nd his reaction nd was feeling shy. " kaha chali gyi thi tm tmhe pta hai mein kitna ghabra gya tha mein jb maine tmhe room mein ni dekha" ritik said while cupping her face. Suddenly he saw evryone was looking at him vry surprisingly. He came back to his sense nd left frm their without saying a word. Shivanya was feeling embrace nd left frm their. Evry1 laughing loudly seeing their reaction. Ritik was roaming in his room suddenly he felt her presence in room. He turned around nd saw her standing at door. She came towards her nd said" tmhare dress meine nikal diya hai jaake fresh ho jao sb tmhaa wait kr rhe hai neeche". she was abt to go when he held her hand. He came towards her ndd whispered in her ear " abhi jo kch v hua uske liye i m sorry" shivanya could feel his breath on her ear. She didnt said a word nd left frm the room. She came out nd looked at the family members. Evry1 was laughing nd talking. " khush ho lo jitna khush hona hai kyuki ab tmlogo ki khushiyo pe grahan mein lagaungi" shivanya looked at them with full of anger. " are bhaiya kya hua kch zyada hi blush kr rhe ho" ritik's brother asked him in teasingly. " are blush hoga ni uska morning itna gud jo hua hain na " his drunken sis told him. Evry1 was laughing as they both felt embarrassed. Suddenly their eyes felt on main door a girl in short dress entred in house. Evry1 got shocked seeing her specially shivanya nd ritik. " tum" they both said together. "shesha tm yaha kya kr rhi ho" shivanya asked as she was very surprised seeing shesha here. " tm jaanti ho usse" yamini asked to shivanya. " haan yeh meri bachpan ki dost hai shesha " shivanya said looking at shesha. Ritik looled confusingly at shesha as he recalled his dream. " ahayd yeh wahi larki hai jisse mein apne sapno mein dekhta tha" ritik said while looking at shesha. " mjhe toh bhut se log apne sapno mein dekhte hai ab agr tmne dekh loya toh kya prob hai" she said while coming towards him. Shivanya was getting angry seeing them together bt she was more angry bcs shesha came here without informing her. " tm dono ka naam bhi kitna unique hai ek ka naam shesha nd dusre ka shivanya jaise kisi saap ka naam ho" said ritiks brother while they both got shocked. " aesa kch ni hai hm dono bachpan se saath rhe hai toh hmmare parents e socha ki ek jaisa naam rakh le isiliye thora unique naam rakha" shivanya said while trying to handle the situation. Ritik was continuosly looking at shesha. precap: ritik tieing the dori of shivanya's blouse. Shesha sees them nd got angry
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Posted: 9 years ago
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good start shivya waiting for next part😃

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