Ritik Shivanya FF ~ Meri Aashiqui Tum hi ho~ Ch6 updated on 20 dec - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: cutieharshitaro

Will u give a weekly update monthly or yearly or daily update

When ever i will get tym i will update nd i will try to give daily update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Guyss those who want pm of this ff they can send me buddy req nd i will send them pm of evry ch of this ff
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Wow beautiful story plz continue soo...waiting!!!
Plz pm me...hav send u request:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Hehe finally rivanya ff 😃
Do continue please and one request
please do send pm 😊
Chapter 1 was awesome waiting for
next hehe update soon please 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shivanya entred in her room with full of anger. She was roaming in her room when suddenly she hear a foot step coming towards the room she turn to see nd saw shesha standing on door. Shivanya pushed her in the room nd closed the door. "tm yaha kyu aayi shesha aur agr tm aayi v toh aane se phle mjhe btaya kyu ni" shivanya sked in one breath. "Main yaha isiliye aayi kyuki mjhe lgta hai shaadi ke baad naye rishte tmhare raasta na rok le. Isi liye mein yaha reh kr har pal tmhe tmhare badle ke baare mein yaad dilaungi" shesha said to shivanya with a smirk. "uski zrurat ni paregi koi v naya rishta mjhe mere maksad pura krne se ni rok skta" shivanya said with full of anger nd confidence". "ek rishta hai jo tmhe tmhare maksad ke beech aa rha hai" shesha said coming towards shivanya while shivanya looked at her in confusion. "aese confuse mt ho shivanya main tmhare aur ritik ke baare mein bol rhi hun. Ek wahi rishta hai jo tmhe tmhare maksad se hata skta hai socho iske baare mein aur kch karo" saying this shesha left frm the room while shivanya looked vry confused. She came in front of mirror nd started remembering tym she spend with ritik. A smile crept on her face while her face became red. Bt suddenly her smile vanished when her parents face came infront of her. "nahi koi bhi rishta mere aur mere intekaam ke beech nhi aa skta. " she said lookung at ritiks photo.
shesha was coming down when suddenly she collided with ritik. He holds her arm nd saved her frm falling. She got mesmarized seeing him. "ab mein smjhi ki shivanya tmhare baare mein itna kyu baatein krti hai" shesha said to ritik. Ritik got confused. "mera mtlb hai ki shivanya aapke baate mein bhut baatein krti hai ritik yeh hai ritik vo hai 24 ghante sirf aapka naam rhta hai uski zubaan pe" saying this shesha left frm their while he was having smile on his face.
Evry1 was bsy with their preparation while party was abt to start bt when person was nt happy with the surrondings, ankush who was thinking abt viren's word he was nt happy. "anky ji ka hua aap abhi tk ready ni hue kya hua" yamini asked ankush putting her hand on his shoulder. He didnt replied nd left frm their bt yamini understood that his husband was unhappy bcs of virens word. She knew that their past is back bt she was more scared that their past deeds will effect on their present nd future.
Shivanya was getting ready she was trying to tie dori of her blouse bt she was nt able to do. She heard a footstep coming towards her. "shesha tm ho kya agr tm ho toh plzz meri help kr do na yeh dori bhandhne mein" she said without looking who is their. She felt that someone has touched her it was a men hand. She got scared bt got relief when she saw ritik in mirror. Ritik tied dori of her blouse. He came near her ear nd whisperd" ho gya tmhara kaam" shivanya was feeling uncomfortable with his closnes. " aapse ek baat puchun" shivanya some how managed to speak up. " haan pucho" ritik said in curiosity. " aap...har...baat...paas...aakar...kyu..khte hai" shivanya stammerd. Ritik coulnt control his laugh nd started laughing loudly. Shivanya looked confused. "accha ab se mein har baat tmhe dur se hi keh dunga khush" They both started laughing loudly. Shesha who was standing at door saw evrything. "lgta hai shivanya ko yaad dilana parega ki vo yaha kyu aayi hai" shesha fumes in anger. Evry1 was in garden enjoying their time. Shivanya nd shesha were talking with each other while ritik was bsy on his phone. Suddenly they hear a scream. Evry1 ran towards that voice. They came nd saw a maid was screamin. "kya hua chilla kyu rhi ho tm" yamini asked to maid. Maid pointed towards a snake which was infront of them. Evry1 got shocked seeing the snake. Ankush asked evryone to step back bt shivanya moved towards the snake. Evry1 tried to stop her bt failed. Shivanya sat infront of snake nd startd looking at snake. After sometime snake went towards jungle. Evry1 got shocked they looked at shivanya with questioning eyes. "bhabhi aapne yeh kaise kiya " asked angad with shock. Shivanya came back to her sense nd realised what she has done right now. She got confused what to say. "actually hm dono ka janm aesi jagah hua jaha bhut jungle the aur snkes v bht the toh we r use to" shesha try to handle the situation bt this didnt convinced everyone specialy ritik. " andar chale hmme party ki tayari v krni hai" shivanya says to then. Evry1 left that place except shesha nd shivanya. They both went towards jungle. They saw that snake was still their. "kyu aayi ho tm yaha" shesha asled snake in anger. The snake change into tanvi. She smile seeing them nd hugs them.

Precap: viren says naagin is back, ankush asked who is she viren points finger on shivanya. She got shocked
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
uff what seesha have problem with rivanya
everytime she need to tell shivanya abt revenge
awe shivanya smile thinking of ritik 😉
rivanya cute little moment 😳
seesha saw & got angry
oops shivanya went in front of the snake
everyone was shocked to see that 😲
shocked to know that snake is tanvi 😲
precap look shocking
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: cuteariya

uff what seesha have problem with rivanya
everytime she need to tell shivanya abt revenge
awe shivanya smile thinking of ritik 😉
rivanya cute little moment 😳
seesha saw & got angry
oops shivanya went in front of the snake
everyone was shocked to see that 😲
shocked to know that snake is tanvi 😲
precap look shocking
continue soon

tnx dear will continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Well done
Ye shesha ki problem kya h???
Why is she behind Rivanya???
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Tanvi bhi Naagin... Poor Ritik!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tanvi hugs shesha nd shivanya. They both get worried seeing her. "finally our plan worked yess" said tanvi. "tanvi tmhe yaha ni aana chahiye tha agr kisi ne tmhe dekh liya toh" said shivanya with anger. "kya kru apni behen se milne ka mann kr rha tha. Jiss din maa aur papa ki maut hui thi ussi din se hm teeno alag ho gye the. Aur tmlogo ne mjhe uss orphanage me chor diya lekin jo v ho sb plan ke mutabik hua kaise shailesh mathur aur ramya mathur ne mjhe apnaya aur meri mulakat ritik se hui nd tbse start hua hmara plan" tanvi said with tears in her eyes. "tmhd jb maine is mehel mein dekha toh mein kitni zyada khush hui thi shivu mann kiya ussi waqt tmhe hug.kr lun bt maine khud ke emotions pe control kiya" she continues with teary eyes. Shivanya who was also in tears was listening to her sisiter how badly they both missed each other. "uss din jb maine tmhe ek naukrani kaha aur bhut kch sunaya toh mjhe bhut bura lga plzzz maaf kr do" They both hugged each other with teary eyes. "So shivu tera first night kaisa tha ritik ke saath" tqnvi asked in teasing way this question made shivanya blush. She couldnt replyd bt shesha read her mind nd said " mt pucho iska chehra hi bta rha hai ki yeh kitna khush hai nd jb v vo uske paas aati hai toh pta ni isse kya ho jaata hai yeh toh apna revenge hi bhul jaati hai" This made shivanya sad nd tanvi burst into a laugh. " isme shivu ki koi glti ni ha ritik mein hai hi kch aese jo koi v apna maksad bhul jaega. Ek pal ke liye toh mein v bhul gayi ki mein uske saath kyu hun mein khush ho gyi thi jb mjhe pta chala ki mjhe usse shaadi krni hi i was happy bt tb mjhe yaad aaya ki hmme revenge lena hai" tanvi said with puppy face. Suddenly they heard someone was coming towards them. Tanvi hides behind a tree. Shesha nd shivanya turned nd saw ritik standing infront of them. "dekh toh aese rhi ho jaise koi bhoot dekh liya ho ya maine tmlogo ka koi jhooth pakar liya ho" ritik said teasingly. "Accha vo sb htao ek gdnews hai viren bhaiya ghar aa gye hai toh andar chalo sb tm dono dhundh rhe hai" shivanya nd shesha got tensed after hearing this. They went inside. Biren was on wheelchair nd he was half paralysed he cant move his head or any other part of body all he can move was his index finger. Viren got scared seeing shesha nd shivanya. "vo aa gyi hai uncle vo aa gyi hai" viren got hyper nd said. " kon aa gyi hai viren kiski baat kr rhe ho tm" Ankush asked quriously. "Naagin" viren said making evry1 shocked. Wvry1 got scared as ankush couldnt react in this. Shivanya nd shesha got teansed as they where nt able to understand the situation. "who is she??? Kon hai vo viren???" ankush asked him. He pointed his finger towards shivanya. Evry1 got shocked after this. Shivanya become spechless as evry1 was looking at her. Suddenly shivanya started crying ritik was looking at her with quesioning eyes. "aap mjhse badla lene ke loye mjhe naagin bol rhe hai na??? Meri wajah se ritik ji ne aapke uper haath uthaya isiliye aap mjhse badla le rhe hai." saying this she left frm their. Ritik angrily looked at viren nd went to look shivanya. Shesha smiled at viren nd left frm their. Ankush asked chaya take viren in his room. Viren looked at a piller. Shivanya was standing their with smile on her face. Suddenly shs felt that someone was coming towards her. Shebturned to see bt got unbalnced. She felt that she is in someones arm. Her eyes was closed so she didnt see the face bt she felt vry protective in hs arms. Slowly she opened her eyes nd saw she was in ritik's arm. She forgot evrything nd they share eyelock. Suddenly shesha's word started roaming in her mind that only infront of ritik she forgot her revenge. Its true right in his arms she could feel that she is safe here. She could see in his eyes that how much he loves her bt inback what he was being betrayed by her. Suddenly she came back in her sense nd got up frm his arms. Tears was still in her eyes nd it was seen by ritik. He offerd her a handkerchief. She looked at him nd tears rolled frm her eyes. He wiped her tears with his hand. They both looked at eachother. Precap: shesha fills ritik's ear against shivanya.

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