RiVaniya OS: It Hurts - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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only thing i can say is just WOW! loved it :)
especially this part

All Shivanya could hear right now was Rithik. Every fiber of his being was travelling through the course of her body. The blood pulsing through his hands, then going down his veins to his now rapidly beating heart. The way his breaths were coming in and out deeply and slowly. Every minute action of his was being registered through her brain.

There was a hidden intensity in his gaze but incredible softness too. The softness of being involved in an unknown, indescribable emotion. But the intensity of fulfilling it to the fullest once it has been acknowledged and claimed.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anapneo3003

that is stupid😲

then tell them to write t on their own😡
chill everythin wil b fine😊


Seriously, we're all pissed off at her and will be filing a complaint against her soon. Her attitude has been totally unprofessional. This is no manner of teaching a class.

But the good news is that we got a week extension for the papers! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: LuvArTi4ever

U wrote it beautifully. Loved it ❤️


Thank you so much! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Sanchu--

only thing i can say is just WOW! loved it :)

especially this part

All Shivanya could hear right now was Rithik. Every fiber of his being was travelling through the course of her body. The blood pulsing through his hands, then going down his veins to his now rapidly beating heart. The way his breaths were coming in and out deeply and slowly. Every minute action of his was being registered through her brain.

There was a hidden intensity in his gaze but incredible softness too. The softness of being involved in an unknown, indescribable emotion. But the intensity of fulfilling it to the fullest once it has been acknowledged and claimed.


Thank you so much! 🤗

I have to admit when I thought of it, it left me in awe too. The connection that RiVaniya have or would have had in that moment is simply...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing ... Loved ur version ... beautifully written :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Amazing ... Loved ur version ... beautifully written :)


Thank you! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: asmaanixx


Seriously, we're all pissed off at her and will be filing a complaint against her soon. Her attitude has been totally unprofessional. This is no manner of teaching a class.

But the good news is that we got a week extension for the papers! 😃

good she deserves it😡
thats great ya u can aaram se submit ur papers🤗

btw i forgot to ask ur name wer r my manners🤣

M aishwarya btw u can call me aishu ash or any new name if ya want😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: asmaanixx


Thank you so much Aishu! 🤗

All RiVaniya moments are so beautiful together but the ones where Shivaniya's identity as a naagin and the crafted identity she has with Rithik clash together, are my absolute favorites! There is simply so much depth in them. <3

I really want to know how Rithik will react as well! Just present to him a hypothetical scenario and have him react to it. It will be more than enough to gauge what his reaction will be.

Will do and thank you once again! 🤗

@bold very true

U shld definitely try to write something frm sesha's pov too i found her much more mysterious now😳
another interesting and powerful character in this show i hope they don sideline her or something🤔

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