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Posted: 4 years ago

Amazing updates

Read all the 4 parts in a go. 👍🏼

Loved it. 😊

U r really a brilliant writer. 👏

Ur work is amazing. 👏

Tapish and Bani’s convo was so amazing😊. He let his feelings out to Bani. Teer and Veers memories

Felt sad for Balwant and other Singhanias- the situation when they had to the face Akesh and Veer together at the same place. 😒

It would be terrible for them to witness someone else taking their Veers place. 😒

Meera and Tapish track in between was cute - standing up for their respective siblings. 😆

Those stupid pariskiths - to insult and hurt Singhanias asked them to plan the party. But our super cool cheels with their bahurani = “The Singhanias “ gave it back to them with lots of bonus. 😆🤣🥳👍🏼

Poor guys their plan backfired. And be prepared to face Markaats wrath. 🤪

Sam has undergone so much , yet he is back with a bang. 😎

The skit for revoking Veers memories 😎👍🏼

Unexpected Chandrakalas entry and as usual her foolishness made veer stronger in the end. 🤣

Markaat has some feeling in him ..he is bad but not very very bad I guess ....he is a attention seeker.

The moment to choose between two close ones 👏

I just loved the scenes with the ring.

Veeranshu - while Markaat and Bani is talking he just found a way on his own and escaped with his sweetheart though he got hurt. 😆😒

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Posted: 4 years ago

i have read ur story multiple times. And Mindblown the way u tell the story. It is so good. How nicely u portrayed the emotion. Waiting for vani talk after veer is back. Pls pls update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

What an update yrr Never felt this emotional reading something since a longg time! Veer's mother's bit was most beautiful❤️ I thought it would take bani's final confession that she loves him, to bring veer back! But this way more touching than words❤️

Ishana Singhania is such a valuable addition to the story! I always envisioned veer would have such a personality like her in his life, unless what could explain, why he is he so emotional and different than others in his family!

Bani's cry for bringing him back was described so well! Hayeee The whole play set up! You made me go through wayyy back that memory lane! Made me remember, why had I even subscribed to this once a beautiful show❤️

What I love about your story is, everyone has backstory! No one is just here for the sake for it! Maybe it be balwant, samrat, tapish, daksh, Chandrakala or even maarkaat! Maarkaat IS THE ULTIMATE VILLAIN the show never got!😎

Am super curious how will he leave veer's body!

Special mention to tapish's backstory! I loved the evolution of his character and why he is the way he is!

Ishana and Veer's interaction is another masterpiece of writing!❤️

Please update soon🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

This made me cry.... wat an emotional roller coaster. So beautifully written. Every emotion and feeling.Just toooooo good. How can someone write sooooo beautifully with all the emotions and love..Gonna be ur biggest fan for this ff. Continue soon

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Hey Ally, tu jaise likhti hai na behen, waise agar yelog likhte to by God mazaa aa jata yaar. Great going with this FF yaar. Really great, detailed, in-depth work. Build up is good. VAni progression is very natural. Good show!!!👏🤗

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Chapter 33


Bani opened the room to let them put Veer on the bed. She took out some clothes from the shelf.

“Tapish bhai, daddyji, aap pehle Veer ke kapde change kar dijiye. Jitna zyaada bheega hoga utna hi sukhne mein time lagega. The wings were drenched.

Bani and others walked out. Balwant and Tapish changed his clothes. They opened the door and Bani came in with first aid box. The wings were broken and Bani knew that it wasn’t something she can do to repair them. She could heal the other wounds on him but she wouldn’t be able to heal the wings. Even Veer’s own healing power can’t heal the wings. Feathers had to grow on their own again.

Bani noticed that they hadn’t made Veer wear a shirt.

“Tapish bhai, shirt kyu nahi pehnaayi?” Bani asked, halfway complaining.

“Yeh pankh hai, Bani. Unless he pulls them back in, we can’t fit clothes through. It is an odd thing that neither of us understand either.When we wear a shirt, there is no issue with opening out wings through the clothes but when it comes to putting clothes over the wings, it isn’t the same.It doesn’t pass through the clothes. Mat pucho…” Tapish didn’t know how to explain that design malfunction. Bani looked at him confused but she decided not to dwell on it. He was unconscious there. The wings almost took up the major space on the bed.

“Shukla ko bulao. Use pata hoga na ki ise kaise heal karna hai…” Bani suggested.

“Use kuch nahi pata hai.” Pawan commented, irritated.

“Acha, aap log bhi change karke aa jaao.” Bani suggested. Everyone went to their rooms to change. Bani went to the bathroom and changed. Bani looked at the unconscious husband of hers. Bani sat next to him. He generally seemed a lot of thinner. The wings were burnt but in general, he seemed to be in a weak state.

She knew it couldn’t go on for long. Two souls in one body is a load that isn’t something a body cannot handle. Not even a supernatural creature like cheels can carry that burden. It is a nature’s law. One body, one soul. Bani touched her forehead and noted that he had a temperature.

“Ramesh kaka, zara ek kapda, aur thoda sa Thanda paani le aaoge?” Bani told the servant.

“Ji, Bani bitiya.” He nodded. Bani looked at Veer. She could only imagine how much in pain he was in. He must be so exhausted with the constant battle. She held his hand.

“Tumhe pata hai na, Veer, main yahan tumhare saath hamesha hun?” She spoked to a unconscious Veer. The pandits at the Naag Mandir used to tell her that the soul never sleeps. It is the body and the mind that sleeps. Soul is always awake and that’s why we see dreams. She noted that suddenly his heart beat was a little faster than usual. His breathing was also a little harder. It didn’t go down to normal. She checked the pulse and confirmed that she did feel his heart beat had been fast for a long time now. That worried her.

She brushed her hair behind her ear and put the cloth over his head to help the fever. Tapish and Balwant came in quickly.

“Veer ko bhukar hai?” Balwant asked.

“I don’t think he’s well at all. His heartbeat is a little fast, he’s having fever.” Bani explained. “He seems weak.”

Bani turned to look at Tapish.

“Tapish bhai, I don’t know how long the body can take the burden.” Bani added.

“Kya matlab?” Balwant asked.

“Daddyji, this isn’t normal. Ek body sirf ek soul ko carry kar sakti hai. It is a burden to carry two souls. Tabhi toh itna weak ho gaya hai. Body handle nahi kar paa rahi hai.”

“Markaat ko Veer mein se nikalna hum mein se kisi ke bhi bas ki baat nahi hai.”

“Pata hai mujhe.”

Bani had too many questions to answer and too many dangers. Veer was in some serious danger. The feathers were burnt and it would a hell of a time to heal. Bani didn't know a lot about cheel anatomy.

"Bani, feathers heal nahi hote. If it was the wing muscle, it could be healed. Feathers are like hair. You can't repair them. They have to grow back. Till then, he can't fly. Like he can use all his cheel powers but he can't fly unless the wings grow back." Tapish told her.

Bani knew what his wings meant to Veer. He just loved flying. It was like clipping wings of a bird. Nothing could be more depressing than not being able to fly even with having wings. Bani took care of him.

Veer put the paste over her arms and back. Then pulled her hair in a pony tail and put the paste on her face. Softly blowing over the burning skin.

Aakesh very carefully and delicately put the medicine over Nageshwari's wounds.

Bani thought of all the times, Veer had cared for her. She put her hand on his forehead and tried to feel the temperature. She put the cloth on his head again. The soft rising and falling of his chest showing that he was breathing. His body temperature was constantly going up.

“Veer bhai….” She heard Sam shouting. Everyone got up fromthe bed. Sam just barged into her and Veer’s room and went up to Veer.

“Sam, hua kya hai?” Tapish asked. Sam seemed visibly shaken. He touched Veer’s arm. The moment Daksh entered the room, he froze.

“Sabh usse Veer bhai se dur hat jaao.” Daksh shouted.

“Kya?!” Balwant was confused.

“Bas keh raha hun na? Hat jaao.” Daksh pulled away Sam and Bani away from Veer.

“Jo maine dekha wahi hua na?” Sam asked. Sam and Daksh looked at each other. The two shared a knowing look.

“Tum dono kuch bataoge?” Bani asked.

“Veer bhai nahi hai.” Daksh put it straight. Bani’s expression changed. She clenched her fists.

“Dare you to say that again.”

“Bhabhi, veer bhai nahi hai. He’s dead. The soul is gonefrom the body. Unhe feel bhi nahi kar sakta.” Sam told him.

“Kya bol raha hai?” Balwant grabbed his collar.

“Bade papa, hum mazak nahi kar rahe. Jab Veer bhai ke body mein Markaat ghusa toh mujhe dono Veer bhai aur Markaat ki aura feel hui unse.But now, Veer bhai’s aura is gone. There is only one possibility. He’s dead. Unke body mein abhi bas Markaat hai.” Daksh answered pulling him away from Sam.

“Yeh nahi ho sakta. Mera beta, mera Veer kabhi aise nahi haar sakta.” Balwant shouted.

“Tum dono bakwaas mat karo. Bas kuch waqt pehle hi Veer ne mujhe wahan gufa se bachaya.” Bani argued.

“Bhabhi, we don’t joke about something like this. Itne bhi gire hue nahi hai.” Daksh added, just as angry. Sam stopped him.

“Bhabhi, hume bhi pata hai aur aapko bhi pata hai. Veer bhai hum sabh ke liye important the. Aise jokes kabhi nahi karte hum.”

Bani sat on the sofa holding her head. How could she not know? People always said all the time that a wife knows when something happens with her husband. How could she not know then? She knew when Veer called her name when he was stabbed by Jay who was in her form. How did she not know in this situation?

No sound, no sobbing, not even loud shouting. Bani just sat silently. The shock still registering in her mind.

“Bhabhi….” Ponky was confused as to how she would react. Just a while ago, Bani had asked Veer to actually be hers and told him that she wanted to be his. He didn’t know what to tell her to ease her pain. First he lost his twin and now he lost his elder brother.

“He can’t be just gone that easy…” Bani commented. No, that wasn’t the Veeranshu she knew. The one she had married was determined to own her heart. He was determined to make her his. He was someone who lived at his whim. He had reasons to do everything. There would be a certain kind of logic to everything he did. He had been fighting for this long then why would he give up now? Bani was confident that it couldn’t be a possibility that Markaat defeated him. Veeranshu wasn’t someone to be defeated like this. Even after one hell of painful experiences, he’d stand back up tall and stronger. Bani wasn’t ready to admit that Veer was dead and now Markaat had occupied Veer’s body. Daksh can’t sense the aura of a soul out of the body. Sam can’t use the powers of his intuition on a soul out of a body. That’s why he didn’t feel Markaat until he entered Veer.

"Nahi... nahi... there is something. Tapish bhai, ek kaam kariye. Aap mujhe shamshaam tak leke chaliye." Bani told Tapish.

"Bani, tum kya yeh soch rahi ho ki uss aghori baba se kuch pata kare?" Balwant asked her.

"Daddyji, yeh possible hi nahi hai ki Veer itni asaani se haar man le. Matlab 10,000 divya varsh usne wait kiya mere janam lene ka. Taaki phir se mujhse mil sake aur jab main khud use offer kar rahi hun mere saath rehne ke liye, woh aise hi marr jaayega? No. That's frankly impossible. Yaad hai aapko? Aapne hi kaha that kisi ne prophesize kiya tha ki Veer ko sirf ek naagin maar sakti hai toh how is it ki suddenly woh chala gaya?" Bani's questions made sense to Balwant. "Aur Veer hai hi itna ziddi aur sanki. Koi stupid sa plan uske dimaag mein aa gaya hoga. Toh sir ne zaroori nahi samjha kisi ko baat samjhane ki. Bas chal diye khud kaam pura karne."

Bani's taunt made Tapish laugh.

"Chalo." Tapish took them to the shamshaan. Bani felt uneasy once again. The vultures flying over her head. He scales began to show. Bani grabbed Balwant's sleeve out of habit. She's always grab Veer's sleeve or his hand when she felt scared. The action of her surprised Balwant.

"Yeh kya kar rahi ho?" Balwant asked. She removed her hand.

"Sorry. Woh.... Shamshaan se ajeeb si feeling aati hai mujhe."

"Tum Shiv bhakto ko shamshaan se problem hoti hai?" Balwant commented as if the thought amused him.

"Bani, its okay." Tapish offered her to hold his arm. Bani took his arm. They found the aghori.

"Soch hi raha tha ki tum aaogi, Bani." The aghori said. This time he had addressed her as Bani instead of Nageshwari. That surprised her. She decided to dwell on that question later.

"Baba, agar aapko pata hai ki main aane wali hun toh aapko yeh bhi pata hoga ki main kyu aayi hun. Aapko pata hai kuch Veeranshu ke baare mein?" Bani asked him.

"Bani, aatma ko dekha nahi jaa sakta par mehsoos kiya jaa sakta hai." He told her. He signalled them to sit. "Aankhen band karo aur dhyaan karo. Jab mehsoos hoga toh tumhe khud pata chal jaayega."

"Iske paas koi information nahi hai. Yahan aana waste hai. Yeh kya meditation kare hum abhi? Yeh bhi koi time hai meditation karne ka?" Balwant commented angrily.

Bani closed her eyes and tried to follow the advice. She tried to concentrate on the finding Veer. Blank. Bani felt her temper.

"Nahi, Bani. Nahi. Gussa nahi. Calm down..." She told herself.

15 minutes and Bani's irritation went to another level. She got irritated.

"Nahi ho raha hai. Aap hi pata laga ke bataiye." Bani told the aghori.

"Main kaise dhundhunga, Nageshwari? Pati tumhara hai. Sambhand uska tumhare saath hai." He asked her. Great, now she was back to Nageshwari. One, she was already irritated and two, this man was back to addressing her as Nageshwari.

The trio returned home.

"Kuch pata chala?" Daksh asked.

"Kuch nahi. Bas yeh kaha ki dhyaan karo toh pata chal jaayega." Balwant commented angrily.

Bani sat down on a mat and tried again. Balwant rolled his eyes at that.

"Ise abhi lagta hai yeh kaam karega." He growled.

"Aur koi idea hai aapke paas, daddyji?" Bani hissed back at him just as angrily. "Nahi hai toh mujhe wahi karne dijiye jo baba ne suggest kiya hai."

Bani's problem was she couldn't empty her mind. Irritation. Temper. Anger and the worry of losing Veer had gripped her. Tapish went up to Sam's room. Sam was already meditating. It was his regular exercise. That is how his morning started.

Sam had learnt how to meditate well at Kathmandu. He had spent quite some time in Nepal's mountainous areas with Buddhist monk and hindu sages. All those who lived there in mountains leaving behind the 'mundane existence' as they called regular lives. After years of practice, he had managed to get some of it.

Bani came up behind Tapish. She looked at Sam meditating and sat down before him. Trying to concentrate like him.

"Kaise kar rahe ho?" Bani asked him.

"Chup rehke." Sam replied.

"Kabse koshish kar rahi hun. Nahi ho raha." Bani complained. Sam sighed.

"Aap apna 'Om namah shivaay' kyu nahi try karte? Apne bholenath ko yaad karo." He suggested her while his eyes were still closed.

Bani closed her eyes and tried it. The trouble was that now Bani was chanting it out loud, disturbing Sam. He chants didn't have a particular rhythm. It went in the way her mind was working. Chaotic.

"Chup..." Sam told her. Bani stopped suddenly.

"Excuse me?!!" Bani was offended.

"Yeh kya tareeka hai? Matlab na toh koi tune hai aur nahi ek particular rhythm hai. Chants have specific rhythm, bhabhi. Please. Yaa toh apne mann mein chant karo ya phir mat karo. Mujhe disturb mat karo. Main bohot hi zyaada accha nahi hun ismein ki disturbance ko block kar sakun. I'm no sage."

Bani gave a distasteful look to her brother-in-law. Tapish patted her shoulder.

"Sabke bas ki bata nahi. Use karne do. Bas aankhen band karo aur koshish karo." Tapish adviced her. Bani sighed and tried again.

Sam was back in his meditation.

"Sam..." He heard a familiar voice. Veer.

"Veer bhai?" He asked.

"Kya hua? Veer ka kuch pata chala kya?" Bani asked suddenly.

"Arrey, ek minute, bhabhi. Thoda chup raho." Sam shut her up. Bani drank up her temper because it wasn't going to help.

Sam tried to meditate again. Easing his mind into the calmness. Letting him connect to the soul energy.

"Sam? Sun raha hai?" He heard Veer again.

"Veer bhai, what the hell?" Sam asked. Veer sighed a heave of relief.

"Kabse koshish kar raha hun. Saale, itna time laga diya."

"Veer bhai, gaali baad mein do. Pehle yeh batao what the hell are you thinking? Kya matlab hai iss sabka? Bhoot ban gaye ho."

"That's because meri khud ki body bohot zyaada hi weak ho gayi hai. Already kaafi damage ho chuka hai. Interior tissue damage ho gaye hai due to the stress. BP low ho rakha hai. Markaat nikalne se raha nahi toh maine socha ki koi aur rasta nikale." Veer explained to him.

"Kya Veer bhai, kuch bhi plan kar lete ho. Pagal toh khud the, hum sabh ko bhi pagal kar rahe ho. Jab itna sabh soch liya tha toh wapas aane ka bhi rasta socha hoga."

"Haan, listen. I don't have much time. If I wasn't extremely exhausted already, I could have stayed for longer but because of the exhaustion and the amount of fight I have been through, ek problem hui hai yeh ki. Dheere dheere, I'm disappearing. Something like soul leaving the living world. So, mere paas bohot time nahi hai. Mujhe for the present while body chahiye. the only we have is Monil's body jo ki cheelon ki gufa mein rakhi hai. Dad, Ponky, Chachu aur Daksh se kaho ki woh uss kaam par lag jaaye. Bani, Tapish bhai aur tum kisi ko dhundho jo yeh transfer kar sakta hai. Someone who knows this kind of magic." Veer told him.

"Okay... okay... but yeh batao. How long do we have for all this?"

"Abh subeh ho gayi hai. Cheel kuch kar nahi paayenge. Bani se kaho ki woh tabh tak pata kare ki use koi aisa pata hai jo yeh kar sakta hai. We cannot depend on the aghori baba kyuki waha toh Markaat ne already giddho ka pehra laga diya hai. Aghori baba isiliye help nahi kar rahe the. We need to find someone else who can do it. If we cut out the 12 hours of the day and 2 hours of the sunrise timing, we've got 10 hours. Zyaada lag rahe hai but kam padh jaayega. Us insaan ko dhundhna hai aur saari cheezein ready karni hai to finish the whole process. Meri soul ko Monil ke body mein transfer karna hai."

"Veer bhai, kya kya karwa rahe ho hum sabh se." Sam complained.

"Abe, stop complaining and bloody get to work. Bohot time nahi hai humare paas. Pata chala tum sabh idiots ne daaru peene mein time waste kar diya." Veer scolded him.

"Daaru? Please pichle 2-3 din se daaru band hai ghar pe. Kya bol rahe ho. Aapke chakkar mein har din naya drama ho jaata hai ghar pe." Sam retorted.

"Sam...." Bani shouted at him. "Mujhe bataoge?"

"Ek minute, sweetheart. Important baat hai."

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Chapter 34


Sam told everyone what veer had told her.

Bani was sitting in the room. Markaat had left quickly as soon as he woke up. Veer walked up to the room. Banisat down on the bed, her head in her hand. Almost sobbing silently. She wasn’t crying profusely but the tears fell down her eyes.

“Sweetheart….” Veer felt bad to see her cry. He kneeled down before her. “Bas ek baar feel karke toh dekho. Tumhari har dhadkan mein main apne aap ko main basa lun.”

“Kahan ho, Veeranshu. Abh itna bhi pareshaan kyu kar rahe ho? Bas thodi se der kya laga di maine, tum chal diye akele?” Bani wiped away her tears. She tried not to cry like that but the tears didn’t stop. “Dekhlo, itna rula rahe ho. Adi-Naagin kabhi itna roti hai kya? Kaise prove karu khud ko agar aise rulaoge toh?”

“Sweetheart, main yahin hun. Hamesha tumhare saath hi hun. Bas ek baar aankh band karke dekho toh sahi mujhe. Aankho se kaise dikhu tumhe? Dil se dekhogi toh dikh hi jaaunga.” Veer tried to tell her. He wanted to wipe away her tears but he couldn’t. He looked at the ring she was wearing. He never got to take the ring from her. Veer tried to use his magic and opened the window. The sun was beginning to rise. Bani sighed and got up.

“Abh iss khidki ko kya hua hai. Achanak se khul gayi…” Bani complained. She tried to get the curtains but they just wouldn’t get in her grasp. It opened to make her see sunrise.

“Although I used to like the night sky but I had always been someone who like sunrises more. Something about it was always enchanting to me.”

Bani suddenly remembered that.

“Veeranshu??” She turned around hoping suddenly she’ll see him. “Please kuch toh kaho. Tum ho na yahan?”

Bani’s love was poetic against Veer's crazy love. She held the poetic passion in her love while Veer held the crazy passion. She had the slow burning love. One that slowly engulfs someone. She assumed it was affection, care and attraction but she was slowly falling in love. Veer looked at Bani. He smiled. His sweetheart was falling in love with him. If only she could see it.

“Tum na, mujhe itna pareshaan kar dete ho. Kabhi kuch kabhi kuch. Sir ko toh bata ke kuch karne mein ego aa jaati hai. Kabhi bhi koi kaam seedhi tareeke se nahi karoge. Mujhe na tumpe itna gussa aa raha hai. Tum milo bas mujhe ek baar.” Bani started scolding him. Veer chuckled at that.

“Bas thode din dur kya raha tum toh puri gharwali form mein aa gayi ho, sweetheart.” He teased.

“Zid ki bhi hadd hoti hai. But of course, Veeranshu Singhania toh naam hai hadd paar karne ki. Nahi, bhaisaab toh ko apni manmaani karni hai….”

“O.. excuse me. Bhaisaab mat bolo, yaar. Pati hun tumhara. Chachu dad ko bhaisaab bulate hai. Tum mujhe aise mat bulao.” Veer commented. Bani started pacing around in the room.

“Itna gussa kyu dilate ho? Kabhi chal doge kisi jaal mein. Kabhi kuch bina kahe hi koi bhi matlab nikal lete ho. Kabhi aise hi gayab ho jaate ho. Matlab yeh koi tareek hai kya? Bas kuch pal ki sharafat aur phir se wahi badtameez aur adiyal.” Bani went on with her complained.

“As if tum toh phoolon ki pari ho…” Veer retorted. “Itna zeher ugalti ho. Kya batau.”

“Jis din tum mere saamne aaye na, main bata rahi hun tumhe.”

“Itne pyaar se bula rahi ho toh aa hi jaaunga.”

Bani sighed.

"Tum sach mein ho na, yahan?" Bani asked, her voice breaking. Was she just imagining things.

"Aatma ko mehsoos kar sakte hai. Aankhe band karke dhyaan karogi toh pata chal jaayega."

Bani sighed and wiped her tears.

"Tumhare chakkar mein na main dehydration se mar jaaungi. Bata hi nahi sakti kitna royi hun..." Bani complained cutely. Veer smiled at how adorable she seemed in that moment. She couldn't hear him or see him but she still was talking to him like she could hear him.

"Ek kaam karo. Tum anulom vilom karo. Tabh tak main tumhare liye paani laata hun" Bani remembered Veer's antics and laughed.

She drank some water.

Sitting back on the bed with her legs crossed, she breathed. Inhaling and Exhaling.

"Ek toh mujhse yeh meditation and all nahi hota. I know it sounds really odd kyuki main Bholenath ki bhakt hun toh sabh assume karte hai yeh toh mujhe aata hi hoga. Par nahi hota, yaar." Bani complained.

Bani inhaled and exhaled again. Calming down herself.

"Tum na itna pareshaan karte ho mujhe. I swear. Kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki kis pagal se pala padh gaya hai mera." Bani complained.

She inhaled and exhaled again. Veer looked outside at the sky, as if it listened to his order, the soft cooling breeze flew into the room, letting Bani calm down.

"Aankhen band kar ke apne dil mein dhundhogi na, Bani, toh main mil hi jaaunga. Tumhari har dhadkan mein meri zindagi hai." Veer told her.

Slowly, after a few moment, Bani felt something so familiar to her. Veer's aura.

"Veeranshu?"

Veer smiled.

"Bas. Don't open your eyes."

"Aankhen band karke kaise dekhungi? Sirf andhera dikh raha hai."

Veer chuckled. He sat before her. As the air softly brushed on her cheeks.

"Mehsoos karo. Hawa dikhti nahi hai, Bani, but you can feel it. Now, stop crying and calm down. Bola na maine tumse. Chahe tum mujhse dur raho par main humesha tumhare paas hi rahunga. Jahan tum, wahan main.

Bani soon called up Vanshika and told her.

"Bani, I think I can manage that. Like Takshak vansh ka jaadu hai jo aise saare cheezein kar sakta hai. I'll get some books and get it done." Vanshika assured her.

"Perfect. Yeh bata do ki tumhe kya kya chahiye."

"Some blood, ashes and vodka."

"Vodka? For the spell?" Sam asked confused.

"No. That's to make me feel about doing dark magic that is technically illegal." Vanshika answered.

"I don't think anything about everything that is happening around us for a few days is legal." Bani commented. The boys all laughed at that. "These people are smuggling dead body. What makes you think that is anything legal?"

Once the day fell, Balwant and Pawan went to the caves without any news to Markaat at all. In the caves, there were certain caves were the bodies of the cheels were preserved. They were all cheels who were related to royal familiesof the cheels. Related to the Cheel Rajkumar. Since Monil was cousin to Veer, his body was preserved and kept there.

No one could do such work better than Balwant and Pawan. They were good at smuggling stuff from a place without anyone knowing. Daksh, Ponky and Sam went up to distract the Parikshit Family and Markaat, acting like they were looking for some clues. While that was there, Pawan and Balwantescaped through the cracks. They found Monil’s coffin and started dragging.

“Uda ke le jaana padega. Aise ghaseetenge toh milega nahi. Koi sun lega.” Balwant commented. Vanshika and Bani took Balwant and Pawan’s form out so they didn’t doubt the two heads of the family were.

The two changed into eagles and picked up the coffin, noiselessly taking it into the forest. To help them in the task, there seemedto be a dust storm. It gave them enough cover to escape with the coffin. It was difficult weather to escape but they were glad for the cover.

The moment they reached the jeep, Tapish texted the boys to take leave. The sudden leave made Markaat doubt. He sent cheels to check. Then they saw, Bani and Vanshika change into their real forms. The cheels tried to attack and cause troubles for the Singhanias.

“Aap sabh aage jaao. Main sambhal lungi in sabh ko.” Bani suggested. She changed into her snake form and attacked the cheels. Her venom and strike were fast. She tackled all the cheels behind them together. A few cheels tried to escape and win but Bani caught them and finished them. The coils were impossible to escape from. She dragged them through the ground, irrating the feathers through the ground.

Markaat and Chandrakala showed up together. Markaat was in complete possession of Veer’s body now but she couldn’t attack him because it still looked like her Veer. It made her feel like she was attacking Veer. Chandrakala always made the mistake of attacking Bani first. Bani fought back with the same vigor.

“Tumne jo kiya hai, Chandrakala. Uski bharpaayi toh tum karogi.” Bani warned her. Markaat got out his talons and attacked Bani. Bani only dodged and played defense. He grabbed her throat. If she wasn’t going to attack, he wouldn’t blame himself. If she didn’t fight in a war, it was natural to end up dead. Markaat tried to attack her but she was also Adi-Naagin.

Chandrakala and Markaat attacked together. Bani was feeling difficult to deal with them together. Bani hissed aggressively. Markaat was nothing like Chandrakala. The talons cut through Bani’s scales. Bani winced in pain. She dodged the next attack. Chandrakala jumped up and grabbed Bani in a headlock.

“Aaj aayi hai Adi-Naagin mere haath.” Chandrakala laughed. Bani tried to kick away Markaat using her tail but he dodged skillfully. Bani had never fought a cheel that well trained. His talons made a gaping gash though her. How is she to fight someone who occupied Veer’s body? Markaat stood before her. The eyes she couldn’t escape. Although the physicality of the eyes was still the same yet, the deepness that his eyes carried for her was absent. Bani only saw anger and hatred in those eyes of his around this time. She was weak against him. She dodged and defended herself. His eyes reflected the hatred that Bani herself once bore for Veer.

“Tumne Aakesh ko maar ke meri 2000 divya varsh ke intezaar ko ek pal mein vyarth kar diya. 12,000 divya varsh ke liye main jalta raha, bandhi bana raha, sehta raha kyuki tum apne gusse par kaabu nahi kar paayi.” Markaat growled at her.

“Main sirf tumse nafrat karti hun. Tumhe 1000 maut dena chahti hun. Tumhare saath rehna kaid jaisa lagta hai. Jabse tumhe dekha sirf burai burai hai tum mein.” Bani remembered how she had spoken without athought to him. “Tum bas isi nafrat ke laayak ho. Tumse koi bhi pyaar kaise kar sakta hai? Tum ho wahi. Khooni, katil, shaitan, sirf dard de sakte ho kisi ko.”

Bani laughed at herself mentally. All the pain she had set him through was coming back to her. Karma existed. If the Gods were true, then so was karma. What goes around comes around. What you give comes back to you.

Markaat took a dagger and stabbed her. It wasn’t a regular dagger. The blade was dipped in poison. Her own venom was power but this was a different kind of poison. It was taken from vultures. It started degrading the tissue.

“Aaj tumhe khatam karke kahani khatam kar dunga main. Abh main azaad hun. Woh sabh mil gaya jo mujhe chahiye. Abh Veer tumhare saath mar jaaye toh bhi koi parwa nahi.” Markaat said.

“Aaj tu bachega nahi, cheel. Aaj tujhe main maar ke apne pyaar ki maut ka badla lungi. Tujhe 1000 maut dungi. 1000 maut.” She heard her own voice as Nageshwari.

She felt Chandrakala grab her.

“Yahin maar ke khatam kar dete hai.” She suggested. Markaat fought her. Breaking through her bones. She couldn’t fight back against someone who took Veer’s physical body. The talons cutting through her.

“Aaahhhh….” She winced in pain. She saw the vultures flying above them. Markaat had called them.

“He fell through the rocks and was impaled on a sword. 4 din aur 5 raaton ke liye uski body wahin padi thi. Koi bhi use lene nahi gaya. Giddho ne aadhi body kha li jab tak woh waha pahuche.” Bani remembered Tapish telling her.

Even if Markaat couldn’t fly because of the burnt feathers,he was still a powerful opponent. Bani tried to save herself from the constant attacks. He couldn’t completely turn into a cheel or actually fly up but he was still a vicious enemy. The only thing that would take off all the powers of a cheelfor a particular amount of time was water. It was close to impossible that inthat moment, she could get rains. Only one who can control the sky like thatwas Veer. Now, she had idea if it would listen to Markaat who was in Veer’s body.

Chandrakala was about to stab Bani when someone stopped her. She saw Monil. Bani realized it was Veer in Monil’s body. Monil was dead. So, this was the only logical explanation. Markaat was about to attack Bani when a large tank of water was poured over him. Even Veer’s body, which was the body of acheel Rajkumar, was vulnerable against water. Especially when the water was salty.

The cheels as flown ahead towards the sea and managed to get sea water. Sea water makes them weaker than regular freshwater. The property of salt in sea water does the part of taking away all the powers of a cheel for a while. All they rest on is their own physical strength and human form’s strength to fight and save themselves.

Markaat was never human. The whole concept of how regular humans save themselves was a knowledge absent in him. He never bothered to do that. He was up against 5 cheels and two naagins while being human without cheel powers. What Markaat had was his ability to think. Only thing he could rest on.

Markaat looked around. He couldn’t fly. He couldn’t use his cheel powers. Solely resting on thought. He gave a displeasing look. In a few moments, The Parikshit Family showed up. All of them stood against the cheels.

Chaos broke out. Everyone fighting in the whole place. Markaat took advantage of the situation and started running away from the center of chaos. Just as he reached the end of the forest, before him was Veer in Monil’sbody. Even with Monil’s body, Veer was presently stronger than Markaat in Veer’s own body.

“Veeranshu, aaj tum mujhe marne ki koshish ki toh shayad tumhe tumhari body kabhi nahi milegi.” Markaat tried to remind him. Veer chuckled.

“Waise, ek baat toh tumhe pata chali hi hogi ki meri body khud kamzor pad chuki hai. Thoda sa waqt bacha hai. Itne din hum dono they wahan andar aur body stressed ho gayi hai. Isiliye, kaafi weak ho chuka hai.”

Veer turned to fight. Markaat tried to fight Veer but the cheel powers still in Monil’s body made it difficult for Markaat. Even in someone else’s body, Veer was still Veer. He almost was about to punch Markaat in the face but stopped.

“Ek toh shakal bhi meri hai. Kharab bhi nahi kar sakta.” Veer stopped and gave a distasteful look.

“Veeranshu….” Bani ran up towards him. Veer turned to look at her. Markaat took off in that moment. She was injured slightly but was healing herself. The stab wound from the poisoned dagger was not something she can heal with her own magic. The poison degrades tissue.

“Sweetheart, tum theek ho na?” Veer asked. Bani winced slightly as she heard the word sweetheart.

“Bas yeh sweetheart aur gharwali mat bolna. I swear iss voice mein bohot ajeeb lag raha hai.” Bani complained.

“Really?”

“Kya? Obvious si baat hai. Even if tum Veeranshu ho, yeh body toh Monil ki hai and …” Bani shook distastefully. “I just don’t want to hear the same things from you as of now.”

“Kuch waqt pehle tak toh bohot romantic ho gayi thi. ‘Veeranshu, agar tum aaj bhi mere saath rehna chahte ho’ and all that…” He commented.

“Listen, waise toh main bhi bohot kuch bol sakti hun. Aisi badi badi baatein karte ho par kiya kya? Chal diye khud?” Bani argued.

“Yeh baad mein kar lein? Kaafi odd lag raha hai ki Bhabhi ke saath Monil hai. Then this lovers spat ajeeb lag raha hai.” Daksh commented. Bani crossed his arms and pointed to hiscomment.

“Sirf main nahi hun. Sabh ko odd lag raha hai. So, tum zara control karo. Ek toh hume yeh sochna hai ki Markaat ko waha se bahar kaise nikale.”

“Tumhe bohot jaldi hai…”

“You best shut up kyuki jis din tum wapas aaoge na Veeranshu banke, I swear. Tabh main tumhe bataungi….” Bani warned him. She turned and started walking back towards Singhania Mansion.

“Waise bhi body kaafi weak ho chuki hai. Markaat would want to find ways to make it better and stronger. We’ve got to act fast.” Veer pointed out.

“Par karenge kya? Mujhe nahi lagta kisi bhi halat meinMarkaat apne haath se jaane dega ise.” Sam pointed out. Veer turned to look at Bani. Bani raised an eyebrow.

“Main koi stupid act nahi karne wali.”

“Bohot hi easy kaam hai. Because tum Adi-Naagin ho, kisi ko tumhari scent nahi aayegi. Markaat ko bhi nahi. Hum Shukla ki jagah tumhe wahan bhej dete hai. Tum bas itna karo ki thoda thoda zeher dena so that it stays weak even with his tries to strengthen it. Phir when it seems to him that this is beyond repair now, he’ll leave the body and I can get it back.”

“Isse tum weak nahi ho jaaoge? This is the craziest idea I’ve ever heard.”

“Bani, main manage kar lunga. I’ll find ways to strengthen myself. Pura cheez ek saath plan karogi toh beech mein kahin atak gayi toh pura plan phir se banana padega. Go step by step.”

“Are you mad?”

“Totally. Abhi tak tumhe yeh samajh nahi aaya? Veeranshu Singhania is nothing if not crazy.”

Bani threw her hands in the air exasperated.

“Kis pagal ke saath mera pala padh gaya hai…”

“Abhi itna bhi mat itarao, Bani. Tum bhi mujhse pyaar karti ho regardless of my madness.”

Bani sighed. Looking at him was like looking at Monil. Nothing was same about it. Bani walked up to the verandah and sat on the swing.

“Kya baat hai?” He asked.

“Bas kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai. Everything is a mess. Aur aisa lagta hai ki kahin na kahin main pehle hi baat ko sambhal leti toh yeh sab hota hi nahi. I feel like every time I think I’m doing something right, it turns out to be wrong.” Bani confessed that she felt like she was failing at everything. Veer looked at her.

“Bani, aisa kyu soch rahi ho? It is not your failure. It is just a part of a situation.”

“Veer, mujhe pata nahi main kaise samjhau. Yeh darr ki shayad kabhi main Adi-naagin banne ke kaabil thi hi nahi humesha rehta hai. Jab tak yeh realization nahi hua tha, I felt like I could manage myself even with my fear of failures. Par jabse yeh pata chala hai, yeh darr aur bhi zyaada ho gaya hai. I am supposed to be so much better. Tumhe dekho. Everyone keeps saying ki tumse better koi nahi tha. Sabh tumhe pasand karte hai. Main…” Bani’s fear of her failures grips her into being stoic. She had spent all the time blaming Aakesh that when she finally has to face that Aakesh did what was his nature but Nageshwari failed in her duty, she didn’t know how to deal with that.

“Bani, tum aur main, we’re different people. We have out similarities but we’re also different. Why do you want to be me? Be yourself.”

“Mujhe toh khud nahi pata aisa kya khaas hai mujh mein….”

Veer couldn’t understand how did someone as strong as Bani suddenly have these issues.

“Achanak se kya hua, Bani?”

Bani stared at the ring on her finger that Veer used to wear.

“Pata hai. Bas us thode se waqt ke liye jab I had become Veer, alag hi feeling thi. Like everything was light. I actually felt what flying would feel like. Free from everything and worryless. I just end up wishing that I had been more like you.”

Veer sighed.

“Bani, khud se pyaar karo. It is important to love yourself just as much as it is important to love someone you care for. Jab tak khud se pyaar nahi karogi, tabh tak kisi aur ka pyaar apne liye accept kaise karogi. You shouldn’t have to ask yourself why someone loves you.”

“Tumhare liye asaan hai, Veeranshu. Mere liye nahi. Tumne kabhi bhi failure face nahi ki hai. Uss din meri aankhon ke saamne kitne saare naag-naagin maare gaye the. Mere aankhon ke saamne Hriday mar gaya. Meri responsibility thi ki sabhko bachana hai aur sabhko sahi rakhna hai. Meri responsibility thi ki main Hriday ko bachau. I failed at that. It proved jab Bholenath ne bhi mujhe shraap diya. Phir se wahi baat aayi. Meri responsibility thi ki uss din uss baarudi surang ke paas saanpo ki jaan bachau but I ran away. Jay ne bhi dhoka diya. Somewhere it has to be my failure that everything is going wrong. Tumhe acche khaase the. Almost impossible to break and unable to be controlled by anyone par abh dekho. Apne khud ki body wapas paane ke liye khudki body ko zeher dena pad raha hai.”

Bani hid her face in her hands. Veer held her hand.

“Bani, agar tum ise failure samjhogi toh yeh failure hi hoga. But if you try and change your perspective, you’ll see that you’ve been taught something. Life lesson koi sikha nahi sakta. Khud seekhna padta hai. The whole thing about you starts with a part where tumhe lagta hai ki sabh tumhe khud karna hai. Sabh responsibility tumhari hai. Ek cheez hoti hai team work. Tum naag-naagin iska T bhi nahi samajhte. Saara bhoj akele leke chalogi toh natural hai ki thak jaaogi. Zara ruk ke saans logi aur kisi se help maang logi toh tumhari ego hurt ho jaati hai. Pehle bhi aisi thi aur abh bhi aisi ho. Uss din naag mandir mein us sabhki jaan bachane ki responsibility sirf tumhari nahi thi. Hriday bhi tha jiski responsibility thi. Saanpo ko wahan baarudi surang se bachna agar tumhara kaam tha toh iss sabse pehle yeh Jay ki bhi responsibility thi. Hriday ko Aakesh ne maara because that is what Aakesh wanted to do. Jab ladai hoti hai do natural enemies ke beech toh kisi ek ka marna confirm hota hai, Bani. Either the eagle dies or the snake. You can't save both. Nature doesn't choose, it lets the situation choose. Uss situation mein Aakesh ka jeetna decide hua. Aur dhyaan se socho toh samajh aayega ki tumhare bholenath ne tumhare failure ke liye shraap nahi diya. There is some other reason. If he wanted to punish you for failure toh dursa mauka nahi dete tumhe. Yeh choice offer hi nahi karte ki tum phir se janam lo. Na tum janam lene ka decision leti, na main janam leta, na hum milte, na Markaat azaad ho jaata. There is a reason why we're all born.”

Bani looked at him.

“Bani, saath rehne ka matlab hai ki tum sabh share karo apne saathi ke saath. Yeh nahi ki bas keh diya tum saath dogi aur sabh akele karne chal di.”

Bani moved to rest against his shoulder but after a moment moved away.

“What?”

“Ek toh tum yeh…” Bani pointed to how he was in Monil’s body.

“Itna bhi bura nahi dikhta Monil.”

“Haan but its not the same. It doesn’t feel the same. It isn’t same comfort.”

He raised an eyebrow.

“I thought the comfort you felt was the comfort of my love.”

Bani chuckled.

“Woh hai but there is also something about the way I have you in my mind. Jaise. If I say food, the first thing that would come to your mind is chicken because its your favourite. If I say drink, you’ll think of scotch or whiskey. If I say friend, you would think of Sam. If I say colour, you’ll think of black. Waise hi, when I think of Veeranshu, kuch cheezein hai jo bohot specific hai.”

“I knew you find me hot. Pata tha mujhe.”

Bani laughed.

“Sabse pehle kya sochti ho?” Veer asked her.

“Hmm… The way you smell. Like there is an odd blend of your cologne with the smell of forests and whiskey. Your smile. You have the kind of smile that makes people think you plan so much before you do. Your confidence. Badtameez. Ziddi. Way too carefree to care about anything.”

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Hey Ally, tu jaise likhti hai na behen, waise agar yelog likhte to by God mazaa aa jata yaar. Great going with this FF yaar. Really great, detailed, in-depth work. Build up is good. VAni progression is very natural. Good show!!!👏🤗

Haina!!!! 😳

Thanks.

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This made me cry.... wat an emotional roller coaster. So beautifully written. Every emotion and feeling.Just toooooo good. How can someone write sooooo beautifully with all the emotions and love..Gonna be ur biggest fan for this ff. Continue soon

I'm so glad you like it. I like emotional stuff. Matlab when a story hits the emotion. Usmein baat hi kuch aur ho jaati hai

Thank you thank you...

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Originally posted by: Dmad

Ufff..tum likhti jao aur mai padhti rahu!!!🤭

Anyways, I am very interested in how all of this moves ahead. I liked how you potrayed markaat complaining to narayan. It was like a small child throwing a mini tantrum!!!

This is what is missing in the show, plot so fascinating that it keeps you hooked. Everyone has a role to play and every action has a reason behind it.

In this update, Bani has technically confessed her love to veer atleast that's what i inferred. Very honestly, l love love love these kinda confessions/ potrayal of emotions. It's just so much better than the cliched i love you so much.

I wonder how will veeranshu cope up with his wings burning, when in the show they started the track of veer losing his powers, i had hoped that there would be a track regarding how veer realises that his whole personality is not just being a cheel. I mean that's a part of his personality, his nature but there exists a veeranshu also, not just a cheel.

I hope you shed some light towards that facet where we actually actively see veer realising that he is not just a cheel, he is veer as well!!

Also, this is getting quite long😬..so once again kudos to you for picking up the very slight nuances in bani's and veer's nature like bani always calling veer veeranshu only.

I love love love it.

Of course, yaar. Main likhti rahungi aur tum padhte rehna ❤️

I've got quite a few things planned. So, seat betls laga lo. Acha khaas drive milega.

Bani's halfway confessions. Yes. I like to see something more than just I love yous. Matlab baat ki depth ho aur situation apt ho.

ABout Veeranshu and his wings, I'll come to that soon. I have already planned something for that.


Waise feel free to comment log. Accha lagta hai. ❤️

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