Vani FF// The Phoenix (Thread 2 Link in Pg 1) - Page 13

Originally posted by: J2lover

The story is becoming soul-touching!❤️❤️❤️ This was the Vani we have been pinning to watch since the start! You are touching on every aspect of the story and weaving it into such a beautiful story! Its unreal! Am truly touched! Never imagined how aakesh would have felt while falling off that cliff! What would be his last thoughts! How his pinning for nageshwari developed into veer's insane and unconditional love for bani! I feel like am experiencing the 2.0 version of the show! Just wayyy more refined and touching!

This is the writing Sharad and Surbhi deserves!

Thank you for making me experience both of them in these characters in this story! Am truly invested in the story!❣️❣️❣️

Please keep up and update soon!

Now a days am looking forward to your update than the show, its that gripping!❣️❣️❣️

Kuddos to you dear! You are an exceptional writer and visualiser!❣️❣️❣️

Thank you so much.... means a lot to me.

I just am obsessed with certain things in the show and try to put that out in my writing. I'm all the way Aakesh and Nageshwari fan. Just as much as I am Veer and Bani fan.

I wish they could show something like that too. Something other than old TRP tropes. There are so many other ways to take the story. Abh show se hopes hi nahi rahi toh bas, yahin pe khud fanfic bana ke baras nikalni padti hai 😆

I really glad you're liking the story.

Originally posted by: SilentEyes7

Awesome update...

Continue soon...

Thank you ❤️

Originally posted by: LoveMyself_sri

Awesome man so good. Veer is struggling and becoming weak. Bani trying to find how to help. Everyone working together. Loved it. Loved it. So so good.

Thank you... thank you...

I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Originally posted by: Dmad

I've always been fascinated with the kind of love aakesh/veer had for naageshwari/bani..yk the kind that they tried to show but could not, atleast not as well as you've penned it down!!

Very articulate and as usual amazingly written. I'm going to go off the track and just say it, a lot and i mean a lot of people on the forum say that bani's love for veer is not equal..you know not as deep as veer's. But I've never felt that way, I don't know why but even with the shoddy writing and editing in the show, I've felt her love for veer.

So i am very keen to see how you express the other side of this love story because you know to borrow zoya's words for asad, Bani is just "emotionally handicapped".

You've got me hooked, line and sinker!!!

I just love the part where Veer is crazy obsessed with Bani. There are so many ways to play with that part of his personality. It moulds well like clay.

Thank you so much for loving my story so much.

Originally posted by: SemieM

I don't have words to write anything

Mein bas kho gai thi aapke FF mein it's mind blowing dear matlab fabulous

Now I can understand ke itne din baad update kyon kia aapne

The love of Akesh ko jo describe kia na it's totally outstanding and the way you are growing Bani's love for veer is superb

It's not look like rushed it's like what we want to see in serial

Hope Veer ko jaldi wapas le aaein aap and update soon dear bahut eagerly hum log wait karte hai aap ke update ka so please try to update daily 💖💖

Thank you ❤️

Main toh comments dekh ke khush ho jaati hun... 😆

Veer will be back soon but with some *conditions apply. 😈

Originally posted by: afnashahid

Its so damn amazing yr....... Just mind blowing.... Kindly update next asap

Thank you ❤️

Originally posted by: AliChase

Thank you so much.... means a lot to me.

I just am obsessed with certain things in the show and try to put that out in my writing. I'm all the way Aakesh and Nageshwari fan. Just as much as I am Veer and Bani fan.

I wish they could show something like that too. Something other than old TRP tropes. There are so many other ways to take the story. Abh show se hopes hi nahi rahi toh bas, yahin pe khud fanfic bana ke baras nikalni padti hai 😆

I really glad you're liking the story.

Its a very constructive way to take away the bhadaas!😆😳❤️ Your VaNi are so pyaar mei paagal, but at the same time, have their brains at the right place! Am always pro reading than watching!😳 I wish to see Sharbhi in such a beautifully written script one day! Maybe sapna hi rhe jaayega woh humesha!😆

Wow this s so good. The way Bani reminded all the memories and the way she told him she wants to be with him. Wow it's mind-blowing. Can't explain how good it is. Loved it so much. Waiting to know what happens next. Pls pls update soon. Please 🥺

Ufff..tum likhti jao aur mai padhti rahu!!!🤭

Anyways, I am very interested in how all of this moves ahead. I liked how you potrayed markaat complaining to narayan. It was like a small child throwing a mini tantrum!!!

This is what is missing in the show, plot so fascinating that it keeps you hooked. Everyone has a role to play and every action has a reason behind it.

In this update, Bani has technically confessed her love to veer atleast that's what i inferred. Very honestly, l love love love these kinda confessions/ potrayal of emotions. It's just so much better than the cliched i love you so much.

I wonder how will veeranshu cope up with his wings burning, when in the show they started the track of veer losing his powers, i had hoped that there would be a track regarding how veer realises that his whole personality is not just being a cheel. I mean that's a part of his personality, his nature but there exists a veeranshu also, not just a cheel.

I hope you shed some light towards that facet where we actually actively see veer realising that he is not just a cheel, he is veer as well!!

Also, this is getting quite long😬..so once again kudos to you for picking up the very slight nuances in bani's and veer's nature like bani always calling veer veeranshu only.

I love love love it.

Good amazing super update...

Continue soon...