VANI OS; i'm yours - Page 2

Originally posted by: Cinnamon_Kisses

At this point, I need Veer ka tashan. Very good cheelu baby.

Things back to normal? Sweet heart poora time toh tumne maaro mujhe maaro kiya hai... Ab kya normal?

Maine kaha thha na naina... Insaan ko kisi bhi cheez ki ehmiyat tab pata chalti hai jab woh usse kho deta hai. Bohot Jay jaap kiya hai tumne gharwaali ab bhugto.

You know I thought Veer naaraaz hoga but honestly tumne jo likha hai feels for natural.

And humme milta hai yet another private intimate bedroom conversation. Zehnaseeb Zehnaseeb. I loved everything Veer said to Bani.
I know Bani has that caring and sincere side. Remember jab Veer ko naagphani se chot lagi thhi. She was so worried for a moment. But abhi Veer ke liye Bani ki fikar dekh ke dil ko sukoon mila.

Aah. That conversation. That is what you need Gharwale and Gharwali. Shanti se baithke baat karlo bass. Show mein toh bohot time lagega kyonki Bani jal rahi hai nafrat ki aag mein aur Veer ko apne ghar waalo ke aadhe kaand nahi pata. Upar se dono dushmano se ghire hai. Offo.

Bani locked Jay in a cave? Yes Queen Yes!

Lo aa gayi mayuri... Discounted rates mein beizzati karwaane... Thakti nahi ho kya baaharwaali?

“yes veer, god how do you not notice these things?”

“are you trying to say i'm stupid sweetheart?”

“low key, yes,” bani said teasing him, “but i still love you.”
Oh my heart. This is such bliss. It makes me so happy. Haayeeeeeee...

i was going to write veer being upset and all lekin the way it came out was very different haha i wasn't able to write that, yeh hi hogaya. i feel like veer wouldn't be upset at bani ever, i don't know why so i guess i'm unable to imagine it.

i love these private convos, they're truly the best. still stuck on saturday's epi

HAHA discounted rates mein beizzati karwaane sach mein yaar always there, but surprisingly in the show wou abhi mrs ponky banke hi khush ho aur veer ke saath flirt nahi karti

i love that last bit hayeee need these little i love you's in the show ☺️

This is beautiful. Do write more 🤗

Hahahaha again Mayuri Bani cat fight 😆 I love their cat fights yaar 😂

So Another OS with the concept of the track after Bani gets to know the truth about Jay and then what will be the equation of Vani then..

And i loved this one also.. I want k Veer tab thoda shaant ho jaaye, dur dur rahe and Bani desperate ho jaaye.. Aisa hi hoga.. And Bani has to confess that she loves Veer in this way 😍

Naina , this is really amazing One shot

One thing I liked the most in this OS was veer's understanding, his faith on his gharwali. I thought he'll get mad after learning bani's truth and I felt that is why he was behaving weird in the beginning of the OS. When bani asked him to help, he rejected saying I'll ask mayuri.

But the way you turned the story I loved that 😳

Originally posted by: SnehaSneha

This is beautiful. Do write more 🤗

thank youuu just got a new OS up! 🤗

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/naagin-5/5187458/vani-os-saaiyaan

Originally posted by: Dwipanita

Hahahaha again Mayuri Bani cat fight 😆 I love their cat fights yaar 😂

So Another OS with the concept of the track after Bani gets to know the truth about Jay and then what will be the equation of Vani then..

And i loved this one also.. I want k Veer tab thoda shaant ho jaaye, dur dur rahe and Bani desperate ho jaaye.. Aisa hi hoga.. And Bani has to confess that she loves Veer in this way 😍

their cat fights are the best sachi haha i tried writing this to be more of veer wanting to stay away but nahi ho payi and he melted pretty quick ☺️

but i just wrote a new OS, https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/naagin-5/5187458/vani-os-saaiyaan

has quite a few confessionsss in it also in terms of love

Originally posted by: Manu_986

Naina , this is really amazing One shot

One thing I liked the most in this OS was veer's understanding, his faith on his gharwali. I thought he'll get mad after learning bani's truth and I felt that is why he was behaving weird in the beginning of the OS. When bani asked him to help, he rejected saying I'll ask mayuri.

But the way you turned the story I loved that 😳

thank you so much!! so glad you enjoyed

i tried to make him more angry and tried to get him to stay away but yaar likhne waqt nahi ho paya tou this came out haha weseee i just wrote a new OS: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/naagin-5/5187458/vani-os-saaiyaan

it's inspired by the new navratri promo, would love your feedback 🤗

This is really cute...Vani confession and mayuri & bani's cat fight everything😊

Originally posted by: rumki34

Nice update

thank you so much 🤗

Originally posted by: AnnieSKaur

This is really cute...Vani confession and mayuri & bani's cat fight everything😊

thank you annie 🤗so glad you liked it!