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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: The.Wanderer

People GOOD NEWS!!!

My Angel has been selected for round two. Thank you for your support. I hope you will continue to read and like my story. Love ya all!!!




OHO CONGRATULATIONS DEAR

THIS IS SO AMAZING

YOU ARE DOING EXCELLENT WORK KEEP IT UP

ALL THE GOOD WISHES WITH YOU AND MANY MORE TO COME 👏👏👏
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: behirlover

Hey sumi

so bahurani is finally home acha hai😉😉 sumi approving of bella's clothes and lifestyle shows how mature she is. not judging people by clothes shows what kind of person you are. bella seriously needs someone whom she can call MA who recognizes her as daughter this pain is visible through her every talk thats the only relation she has in this whole world.

they met accidently😆😆😆 yup it was accident that she fell in his lap and landed on his lips😆😆😆 mahir seeking company of sumi for protection mamma dekho na mujhe ye ladki chhed rahi hai😉😉 that was so funny. sumi she will definitely eat up your son 😉😉

mahir haven't you learnt sharing is caring aur bed hi to manga tha padhne sone thodi na bola sath me he will break his all the rules by himself

mahir running away from her and trying to be as far as possible is so funny to read😆😆 tattered books well even i am very particular about keeping books in proper condition so can't blame him.

that note well although it was funny but still with yuvi i want them to have some real conversations like this please tell me it will be possible if not her then somewhere😉😉 and neighbours dropping by well it will happen sooner or later with him😆😆😆 i meant when they will laugh and dance nothing dirty just like bella.

ash this double meaning sentences were so on point yar i laughed so hard on this well well someone is well versed in this 😉😉😉 i meant writing such stuff.

5 minutes with him and bandi is already on bed what will happen in future.and they want to meet early to spend more time with each other ofcourse for studying only

ash you are really an amazing writer dear you change your skill from writing long descriptive ones to short ones but he content and the emotions you want to convey with that remains the same. This really takes lots of efforts to concise words for your thoughts and still convey what you want to. amazing work dear really good effort.👏


chap------8

this is good why to waste so much petrol they should travel together.

bella sumi bonding is what was needed the most in this chapter. and she asking her authoritatively to have food is so touching. she not judging her by her lifestyle makes me admire sumi more. she easily can see how much love deprived she is. sumi is not overly loving to make her uncomfortable but instead giving her space in her love and allowing bella also to accept that. Sumi sees right through her boldness and tough character.

mahir is 😆😆😆 mom she wants to smoke bhai this guy is on damaging spree 😆😆 but the fact that bella bothered so much about sumi's sentiments shows how much she is loving her already. chai sutta 😉😉 i am telling you bella and sumi are going to have such a loving bond together and they are going to gang up against mahir.😃😃

yup sumi aunty they both need each other in their life like desperately and ya you also. behir shipper she is.

and bella wishing she had sumi in her life and all the love was really touching. No one compares there mom with any one and here this girl is wishing that she got one like sumi shows how much she needs one relation to bring stability in her one loving caring unconditional relation.

things are moving at fast pace and weekend is already here. now it will be fun there is no college and i am waiting to see how they miss each other. and is mahir going to go to her home for this? oh ash this is so much fun here. i am waiting so much to read what happens ahead


excellent work dear. You are takign so much efforts and doing it in such a great manner
thank you yar for this



As usual your review is so entertaining to read Preeti ji👏
Edited by nuomi.riceball - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Oh god i just realized i did not missed one chapter, I MISSED TWO chapters😭

Okay so since you had posted that particular part on the AT i had read it then, i kept my comments reserved for here though😉
I LOVED LOVED that part! It left me laughing so hard🤣🤣

OMG!! Mr. I Am Very Decent just had such naughty thoughts? I don't believe that. 🤣🤣🤣

Oh how i am loving the banter between Bela and Mahir I like this Bela a lot, she is really naughty😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
awww chapter 8 Sumi is sooo soo SWEET!!!!!! Exactly as sweet as the Sumi we knew before the revelation😭

Ash i love how you write small small details. Asking Bela Mahir to wash their feet was such a small detail and yet you used your precious word limit and mentioned it. It definitely made a nice picture👏

Also about Bela needing a smoke was well placed! 👏 All chain smokers can not just give up smoking and it was perfectly normal for Bela too, i hope she gets rids of it one day

I am loving the whole thing Ash, can't wait to read more😃


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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice update dear
Loved it
Thanks
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Posted: 6 years ago
They are so poles apart. Mahir is so grounded; Bella is so lively. I think they are going to influence each other in a good way. Mahir will make her more grounded; Bella will make Mahir loosen up in life.
Bella is already a fan of Sumitra. But then I think it is natural to a person with Bella background. She has had nobody in her life ever since she was born. She never ever felt kindness even in a basic level. A kind of small kindness will leave her mind boggle and stupefy. It seems this girl will go miles to please Sumitra and keeps her happy.

Nice update. Please update soon. Can't wait for the next update.
Edited by nuomi.riceball - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: behirlover

Hey sumi

so bahurani is finally home acha hai 😉😉 sumi approving of bella's clothes and lifestyle shows how mature she is. not judging people by clothes shows what kind of person you are. bella seriously needs someone whom she can call MA who recognizes her as daughter this pain is visible through her every talk thats the only relation she has in this whole world.

they met accidently😆😆😆 yup it was accident that she fell in his lap and landed on his lips😆😆😆 mahir seeking company of sumi for protection mamma dekho na mujhe ye ladki chhed rahi hai😉😉 that was so funny. sumi she will definitely eat up your son 😉😉

mahir haven't you learnt sharing is caring aur bed hi to manga tha padhne sone thodi na bola sath me he will break his all the rules by himself

mahir running away from her and trying to be as far as possible is so funny to read😆😆 tattered books well even i am very particular about keeping books in proper condition so can't blame him.

that note well although it was funny but still with yuvi i want them to have some real conversations like this please tell me it will be possible if not her then somewhere😉😉 and neighbours dropping by well it will happen sooner or later with him😆😆😆 i meant when they will laugh and dance nothing dirty just like bella.

ash this double meaning sentences were so on point yar i laughed so hard on this well well someone is well versed in this 😉😉😉 i meant writing such stuff.

5 minutes with him and bandi is already on bed what will happen in future.and they want to meet early to spend more time with each other ofcourse for studying only

ash you are really an amazing writer dear you change your skill from writing long descriptive ones to short ones but he content and the emotions you want to convey with that remains the same. This really takes lots of efforts to concise words for your thoughts and still convey what you want to. amazing work dear really good effort.👏


chap------8

this is good why to waste so much petrol they should travel together.

bella sumi bonding is what was needed the most in this chapter. and she asking her authoritatively to have food is so touching. she not judging her by her lifestyle makes me admire sumi more. she easily can see how much love deprived she is. sumi is not overly loving to make her uncomfortable but instead giving her space in her love and allowing bella also to accept that. Sumi sees right through her boldness and tough character.

mahir is 😆😆😆 mom she wants to smoke bhai this guy is on damaging spree 😆😆 but the fact that bella bothered so much about sumi's sentiments shows how much she is loving her already. chai sutta 😉😉 i am telling you bella and sumi are going to have such a loving bond together and they are going to gang up against mahir.😃😃

yup sumi aunty they both need each other in their life like desperately and ya you also. behir shipper she is.

and bella wishing she had sumi in her life and all the love was really touching. No one compares there mom with any one and here this girl is wishing that she got one like sumi shows how much she needs one relation to bring stability in her one loving caring unconditional relation.

things are moving at fast pace and weekend is already here. now it will be fun there is no college and i am waiting to see how they miss each other. and is mahir going to go to her home for this? oh ash this is so much fun here. i am waiting so much to read what happens ahead


excellent work dear. You are takign so much efforts and doing it in such a great manner
thank you yar for this


I think judging a person by clothes is not ENTIRELY wrong ..i.e it's not like judging she is cheap or her character ... but we can tell that they don't have minimum sense to wear appropriate clothes at appropriate place ...


Like at work even in USA ..u can't wear shorts and come to office ..

She barely knows Mahir and she us coming to his house .he is doing her a favor ...chances are his mom will be there at 8 pm ...this is common sense ..but she does not have sense to wear a jeans pant. Instead she is in shorts .

Sumi is not natural ..here ..like any mom will think ..can't she wear appropriate clothes ..they won't think bad of her character but still will think can't she wear appropriate clothes since this is the first time that gal is coming to his home ...later on u get acquainted ..even moms won't care about clothes ...here appropriate clothes r nothing like traditional ..just a jeans pant and a t shirt covering waist ..

AND COMING TO WEEKEND WHY WIL HE MISS HER ..EXAM IS IN 15 DAYS ..SGE CANT SKIP WEEK ENDS AND ENJOY .SGHE HAS TO COME FOR PRACTICE IN FACT FULL TIME EVEN IN MORNING ..😉
Edited by VARUNI2014 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: VARUNI2014


I think judging a person by clothes is not ENTIRELY wrong ..i.e it's not like judging she is cheap or her character ... but we can tell that they don't have minimum sense to wear appropriate clothes at appropriate place ...


Like at work even in USA ..u can't wear shorts and come to office ..

She barely knows Mahir and she us coming to his house .he is doing her a favor ...chances are his mom will be there at 8 pm ...this is common sense ..but she does not have sense to wear a jeans pant. Instead she is in shorts .

Sumi is not natural ..here ..like any mom will think ..can't she wear appropriate clothes ..they won't think bad of her character but still will think can't she wear appropriate clothes since this is the first time that gal is coming to his home ...later on u get acquainted ..even moms won't care about clothes ...here appropriate clothes r nothing like traditional ..just a jeans pant and a t shirt covering waist ..

AND COMING TO WEEKEND WHY WIL HE MISS HER ..EXAM IS IN 15 DAYS ..SGE CANT SKIP WEEK ENDS AND ENJOY .SGHE HAS TO COME FOR PRACTICE IN FACT FULL TIME EVEN IN MORNING ..😉


Actually in the USA it depends. For example, if you are working in Google or any other IT company in Silicon Valley as IT or engineer you can wear even your pyjamas to the office. However, if you are working in Wall Street in some investment companies or banks of course you have to wear formal attire. Depends on the industry and the company too.

And yaaar people should really stop judging another person based on clothing and ethnicity. When I was traveling to the USA, they really looked down us just because we were not Caucasian. Practically being ignored by the shopkeeper and they were looking at us from top to bottom and eye rolling. Just because we came from emerging market does not make us any lower.
Edited by nuomi.riceball - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Sorry folks no update today or tomorrow as I woke up late and now I have to leave urgently for work. I will not have access to my laptop in whole day. So sorry. But I will post the update on Monday. And if I can then I will try to post one update tomorrow but no promises.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: VARUNI2014


I think judging a person by clothes is not ENTIRELY wrong ..i.e it's not like judging she is cheap or her character ... but we can tell that they don't have minimum sense to wear appropriate clothes at appropriate place ...


Like at work even in USA ..u can't wear shorts and come to office ..

She barely knows Mahir and she us coming to his house .he is doing her a favor ...chances are his mom will be there at 8 pm ...this is common sense ..but she does not have sense to wear a jeans pant. Instead she is in shorts .

Sumi is not natural ..here ..like any mom will think ..can't she wear appropriate clothes ..they won't think bad of her character but still will think can't she wear appropriate clothes since this is the first time that gal is coming to his home ...later on u get acquainted ..even moms won't care about clothes ...here appropriate clothes r nothing like traditional ..just a jeans pant and a t shirt covering waist ..

AND COMING TO WEEKEND WHY WIL HE MISS HER ..EXAM IS IN 15 DAYS ..SGE CANT SKIP WEEK ENDS AND ENJOY .SGHE HAS TO COME FOR PRACTICE IN FACT FULL TIME EVEN IN MORNING ..😉



Varuni you are right judging does not mean calling cheap or anything. But it is not like Sumi did not have thoughts like what is she wearing. She just did not let her thoughts be known or she did not look critically at Bella. She did not treat Bella badly because of her clothes. And Sumitra was mature enough to understand that those were regular clothes for Bella. That makes a whole lot of difference.


Also regarding Bella not knowing that Sumi will be home, Bella comes from a household where her mother was never home before 2 AM. She is not used to seeing the mother figure home at 8 PM. So she was not expecting Mahir's mother to be home.


Family life is very new to her. She has led the life of an orphan all her life. So little things like go and wash your feet or you must eat amuses her. Because no one has ever told her that.

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