My wife is a naagin~BeHir FF Part 12 - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
#11


Part 3


Mahir is seen giving a ride to suhani after her husband told her he couldnt give her a ride to work. Mahir was driving while answering her question. Suhani says " Dad is right, it's about time you get married. He already gave you enough time to look for a wife."

" pa...should stop rushing me, I already told him I'm not interested to build a relationship with his partner daughter. I have more things to worry about than a wife." He says before thinking to himself, ones I find that woman she will have to pay for the cost."

Suhani gasp " I see, your not interested in woman, could it be your-" before she had time to say something mahir stops the car.

He turns to suhani " if I say I am will that stop dad pestering"

Suhani smile " no it wouldn't"

" than I will just keep on ignoring him"

Few minutes later, he was watching his sister leave. He was about to start the car when he noticed bel. She had a beautiful green dress, while her hair was up in a ponytail . He blink thinking she wasnt real, when opened he saw his sister greeting her. " so she works here" he thought , unaware of his heart racing.

When he saw her leaving , that's when he open his car. He shouts for her and she turns. Her eyes widen seeing him. She says " when will I ever stop seeing him. I get we are soulmate, but how long will I continue to imagine him everywhere."

She sigh and start to walk again , when she heard him speak she told him to leave her. She starts to shoo him causing mahir to speed and grab her hand, pulling her backwards. Surprise by this bel froze. Mahir on the other hand could smell her perfume. He thought it smell nice. Now closer than ever, he looked at the back of her neck and realize how flawless it was.

Mahir was tempted d to kiss it. He was unaware of bel feeling the same way. Being so close and feeling the heat between them was causing her powers to act up. She could see her skin changing back an forth. She prayed that he didnt see it. Just than someone said " would you to get a room, this is a school"

Just like that they let go. They both apologize while wondering why they didnt move earlier. Bel with slight t blush on her face asks why he stopped her. She says if their not familiarize with each other why would he mess around with a stranger.


This upsets mahir. He says the same reason why you threw a shoe at my window, damaging my expensive glass.
Bel apologized for that. She says she was only teaching.

" teaching what...how to damage people property." He says irritated " if this is how you teach than you shouldnt be a teacher Matter r fact I should talk to thprincipal about it."

" please dont" she begs " this is the only job I love doing. I..
I will pay for the expenses, tell me ...how much was it"

Mahir took out a paper and showed it to bel. " even if you knew, y ou wouldn't be able to pay. so instead , let me have your number"

" what?" She says puzzled

mahir not wanting to repeat himself says " phone"

Bel Hasitate, But Comply Anyway. She WatCH as Mahir Puts His Number ON Her Phone, And Vis-versa. He SAYS " From Now On Until I Find AN Assitant You Will Have To Do The Work."

" But" She Says

He Held Up His Hand " I Have An Appointment Right Now" He Checked Her Out Before Deciding. " Come With Me"

Bel Questioned This, But He Said Nothing Further. She wonder what she had gotten herself into.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
Nice part😊
Bella and Mahir first meeting was awesome⭐️
Edited by Nonie12345 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13


Part 4



Bel was uncomfortable while mahir was eating. She asks again when the person he was suppose to meet coming, she says its been twenty minutes already. Mahir told her its not her right to question him. He says shes assisting him with work. Not to question him like a game show.

Bel annoyed crosses her arm. Mahir secretly tries not to smile when she wasnt looking. A waitress asks if he needs anything else, looking at bel mahir says yes. He says he would like another dish. Bel surprise asks how much can he eat. " why? Are you hungry as well" he asks

Bel denies, but her stomach says other wise. Mahir raise a brow causing bel to hold her stomach in embarrassment. She looks down and told her stomach to hush. Mahir finding her antic cute smirks. Bel, was grumbling in her head. She wonders if someone was really coming.

After sometime mahir wipes his mouth with a napkin. Bel looks at him while he takes out money for the bill. When the waitress came he thanks her and grab the carryout he had asked for. " I guess shes not coming" he says " come let's go"

Bel annoyed was about to complain, but mahir gives her the carry out. " what's this?" She asks

" for you" he says before leaving

Bel shock wonder why he gave it to her.

Few hours on the road, mahir was explaining to bel her responsibility as his assitant, until her debt was paid off. Bel not listening , wonder why the gods decided to pair her up with him. His not kind, his selfish and arrogant. What could we possibly have in common, she wonder.

" bel" are you listening he says

Bel nods, while they were at the stop sign they were unaware of a naagin slithering under their car and transforming into a human. The person took out what look like a sharp item and starts messing with the brakes. As soon as the light turn green, the person transform into a snake and slithered away.

Mahir driving felt something was wrong. He stepped on his brakes but it wouldnt work. What's going on he thought. He tried stirring the wheel , causing the car to get out of the lane and into another. Bel holding on to her seat belt , shouts if he was trying to kill her.

" no something is wrong with the brakes, it wont move."

Bel in panick says " how can that be, it was working fine earlier"

" I dont know"

Bel confused, remember what shivangi said to her about his life being in danger. Is this what she was talking about, she thought. Mahir looking at bel who was scared holds her hand " calm down, so I can take the seat belt off"

Bel thinking his crazy raise a brow " what...why?..."

Mahir sigh " I have no control over the car, out only option is to jump out before we crash into something."

" this is crazy, you want to die on the highway" She panicked , she held on to it harder " I rather die in the car than get ran over."

Mahir annoyed says " bel... listen, I wont let you die. Just trust me" he pleads.

Bel staring in his eyes could see the determination and sincerity. She unkmowly nod and remove the seat belt. Mahir says on three they will jump out from both end. " 1...2...3" he says opening and jumping out.

Rolling on the ground, he stop and got up. He calls for bel and saw her on the other side. Just when he was about to call for her , he saw a big truck speeding, heading towards him. Bel eyes widen and told him to move.

But unfortunately, his legs were stuck. He had a flashback to the time his parents died. How they both pushed him out the way while crossing the street. He remember shouting just like how bel was doing now, seeing his parents get hit by the drunk man.
Screaming and shouting, all while getting of the floor to run to them.

Bel was in conflict. If she transform, she could save him, but that would mean exposing herself. She cant take that risk, but if she doesnt he might die. What should I do shivangi, she mumbles.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks, I'm not really good with indian stories, but I try to add something there to match the show. Right now bel is explaining how they met and fell in love. Shes already the leader of her kind. But as the leader theirs two thing that a naggin can not do. Which is falling for a human and revealing herself to a human. Mahir on the other hand is pretending to be mean, hes still the same character from the show. But some of the characters personality will be different , and many twist will come.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wonderful part
Edited by Nonie12345 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update.

Some another snake is enemy of Mahir.

It will be interesting to see how Bela will save him.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 5


Bel says " I see mahir everywhere I turn, like we are destined. His like a magnet that keeps coming closer, his always around. I bet if I travel aboard he will magically appear" she chuckles

She frown " no bel this is not the time, I have to save him " she thought

Just when she was about to transform, some one stops her. That person was non other than vikrant her ex. He grabs her shoulder to shake her. " what the hell bel, are you crazy. Why would you try to reveal yourself in public."

Bel says " listen we can talk later, but I have to save him"

" his a human bel, you dont have to risk yourself for him"

Bel seeing how the truck was speeding shrugs vikrant shoulder and runs to save mahir. With lightning speed she picks him up with her tail and moves. The driver seeing bel turns the wheel causing the whole truck to turn. They watch as cars hit one another.

Mahir back to reality saw bel.than he felt something slithering around him. He looks down causing bel to panic. Bel stutters out of nervousness. She was about to explain, but stop when she saw his head landing on her chest. She panicked at first, but than realised he just passed out.

Unbeknown to her vikrant was using his phone to record the scene. He says a naagin whose too humane will only put us in danger. Thats not the kind of leader we need. Smirking to himself he disappears.

( hospital)

The whole family came after finding out mahir was at the hospital. Some were worried while others weren't. Jamini disguise as one of the doctors inform the family about mahir condition. She says " it will be wise for mahir to stay another night at the hospital to be sure."

" if his unconsious it cant be that serious, so we will discharge him" his father says

Jamini smiles " he isnt in the best mood to move. Like I said he is fine yes...but that's because we removed poison from his system."

The family gasp " poison? How is that possible "

Unbeknown to them bel was in the corner listening. She was surprised by this. She recall falling on him and her teeth sink into his shoulder. She didnt think it was too deep. " it is my fault" she mumbles feeling guilty.

Jamini smirk knowing bel was hiding. She says " from what I can tell it looks like he was bitten by a snake"

This definetly got the family upset. Sumitra cries. She convince Andy to let her son stay until his well. He agrees and threatens that he will sue whoever let that snake out.

Jamini says " your son will be well taken care of"

Later that night bel snuck inside mahir room. She couldnt visit him because she wasn't family. The wind blowing gently causing the curtain to sway. The moons light shining in the room. Bel transforming into her human form looks at mahir who was asleep. She look at the mark apologetically. " I promised dadi that I wouldn't hurt a human, but I did" she says letting tears fall " what kind of leader am I, if I cant even save someone."

She reached out to touch mahir face to caress it but stop hearing the door turning. Quickly she transforms and hides behind his pillow. She listens as the person comes near the bed. " I cant believe I'm getting paid so much just to kill you" he says happily

Bel eyes widen. She watch as the man walk near the bed with a pillow, just when he was about to suffocate him bel comes from behind the pillow and hisss. The men move back in fear. Bel comes closer and transform into her naagin form. " if you dont wish to die than I will advice you never come near him again "

Seeing bel getting taller, the man stumbles before running out the door.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Nice update
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice part😊
I loved how Bela saved Mahir❤️
I hate Vikrant😡
Edited by Nonie12345 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
can't wait for more. love it. update soon.

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