What season 2 could have been about( my FF)Epi 4 part 3 update pg11 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I updated that post because when i tried to so earlier the latter part got deleted for some reason.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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please change the abduction of Ritik into Rudra saved all three of them together please and show after all three are saved rivanya decides they will leave india for couple of years please don't follow same pattern of naagin season 2 in which Ritik was killed and you made him abducted and it's humble request to keep rivanya together .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Episode 2 continuation part 2

Shivaani is in her school library completing her assignments while her best friend Ruhi is busy taking selfies. Shivaani has an uncanny physical resemblance to her mother, however she is a pretty care free and cheery person like her father.
"Shivaani smile!" Ruhi asked Shivaani to which she responded by covering her face with a book. " Hey! I told you no pictures allowed" Shivani retorted
"Why not? We're about to graduate from high school and enter college in a few months so why not click some pictures as final memories of our high school life?" Ruhi complained
"Then get a film camera or a polaroid to capture these memories not your phone" Shivani explained
"that way you'll be able to save these memories without me having to worry about them getting posted online" she continued
"Why are you so paranoid when it comes to the social media? if it's about your mom then just block her online" Ruhi suggested
"And if she asks why have I blocked her what am i supposed to tell her? because I have a wonderful friend named Ruhi who gave me the brilliant idea of blocking my mom online so I can upload my pictures online! " Shivaani asked and answered in an authoritative yet Sarcastic manner
" Well make a new account and block your mom from viewing it so you can upload your pics there!" Ruhi made another suggestion
"Sure as if the chances of her not coming across those pics there are very low right? Shivani continued the sarcasm.
" I never thought of that" she replied feeling defeated. " Hey cheer up its only a picture, you can click it with my polaroid next time
" Yeah sure" Ruhi replied in an unexcited tone " By the way what are you planning to wear for the valentines day party tonight?" Ruhi asked Shivaani
" I dont know havent really decided that yet, plus i have to figure out how I'd make it to the party in the first place" she told Ruhi
" Hey you better not miss this one like the previous one, I dont want to be left out alone again" Ruhi warned Shivaani
" I wont! So dont worry" Shivani assured Ruhi " Even if I dont make it you have Rocky to give you company"
'Who your boyfriend? the only thing he can give me is his ignorance not company and it wont be any different this time either, he'll definitely be busy hanging out with everyone else or texting you on whatsapp" Ruhi countered.
" Hey he isnt like that ok, plus why do you always complain abut him" Shivaani told Ruhi
"I dont always complain about him, I wouldnt care if accompanies me or not at all? Ruhi asked
" I told you I am" Shivaani assured ruhi once again

As Shivaani completed her assignment they began to leave the library. As they were about to open the door they find a guy with a bunch of red roses covering his face. As he lowered the flowers to reveal himself i.e. Rocky
"Happy Valentines day, would you be my valentine?" he asks Shivaani in a very humble tone
" Is that something to ask? Of course yes!" Shivaani replied
"Hello!! Earth to lovebirds! We're in the library so can you lower your voice and PDA" Ruhi told both of them
" Oh sorry.. We'll be leaving shortly" Rocky said apologetically

And then they left the library and headed to school exit

" Ok guys i'll be leaving for home, see you'll later in the evening." Shivaani told them
" I could drop you home, just wait I'll get my car" Rocky offered
" No thanks, its fine plus my mom wouldnt really like that, why dont you drop Ruhi home instead since the two of you live nearby anyways" She told him
" Are you sure"? he asked
" Yes I am" Shivani answered " Ok i'll be leaving now since my mom is calling, Bye"
And then Shivaani left with the two of them( Rocky and Ruhi ) together going home in the opposite direction.

To be continued in part 3 of episode 2

( Note : Are you'll surprised to see Rocky here? Well dont be since he is a part of the original show so its only fair if i include him here too.) :)



Edited by Rein123 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sarveshjoshi42

please change the abduction of Ritik into Rudra saved all three of them together please and show after all three are saved rivanya decides they will leave india for couple of years please don't follow same pattern of naagin season 2 in which Ritik was killed and you made him abducted and it's humble request to keep rivanya together .


What to do now i have already written it that way. Dont worry Rithik wont die here and Rudra will definitely save them all. Just wait and see how it goes. But for the time being the just bear with it please.. 😊
Edited by Rein123 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Actually at first i didnt observe this was a ff... i thought u were giving the starting way of season 2 in ur style.. But now understood this is a complete story.. (FF)
And i am loving it... really its too nice... this is the first time am reading a ff.. and it is great.. go ahead rein... its very intersting now
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sweet-devil

Actually at first i didnt observe this was a ff... i thought u were giving the starting way of season 2 in ur style.. But now understood this is a complete story.. (FF)
And i am loving it... really its too nice... this is the first time am reading a ff.. and it is great.. go ahead rein... its very intersting now

Thanks!! :) I'll try my best to make it super interesting and engrossing so that you'll can enjoy it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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rein thanks for replying and ok i will wait and you have written beautifully ff and i want ask you do you love kvb character rocky in naagin 2
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sarveshjoshi42

rein thanks for replying and ok i will wait and you have written beautifully ff and i want ask you do you love kvb character rocky in naagin 2

I don't really like Rocky but if its a story that includes him then I might as well give him a believable and somewhat likeable character sketch, better than what is being showed. Basically stuff, traits, and background that would have made me like him in the original story. In other words if its going to be triangle then I feel that the people who read it should be able to connect to it and the characters and not just keep guessing around all the time. In other words I don't want any showpieces in this story. He may be a showpiece in the original story but if I can help it I'd make him somewhat better than that.
Edited by Rein123 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@Rein, I love it. It's so much better than the actual show. I'm super happy you introduced Rudra early on.
Looking forward to to reading more.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Episode 2 part 3
Shivanya was at home following her daily routine of looking after her daughter Shivaani and managing her Restaurant in the city with the help of Kailash (the sage serpent ) who would take care of the daily operations. Unlike normal people Shivanya hadn't aged much and looked no older than a woman in her late 20's.The house which once looked worn out, now looked very renewed and well maintained with family pictures hung on most of the walls which seemed to have been painted recently. The old furniture was replaced and the bare flooring was now covered with marble tiles.

Shivanya was waiting for Shivaani's return so she could take over the restaurant operations in the evening from Mr. Kailash. As she was about to change her clothes she heard the door bell ring and headed to open the main door but to her surprise there was no one around. Since the house was invisible to strangers she wondered if it was her imagination. As she closed the door and was about to go back to changing her attire she heard a very familiar voice.

"Shivanya!" which she recognised as Rithik's voice but as she turned around she was disappointed to find no one there. She wondered if this was also her imagination too, since there was no one around and began to wonder if she was losing her sanity. Over the past 17 years she managed to raise Shivaani with the help of Mr. Kailash who considered and treated Shivanya like his own daughter. Even though Rithik wasn't around there wasn't a single day where she hadn't thought about him. Through this time she had been trying to figure out a way to enter the world where Rithik was being held captive with help from Mr. Kailash.
As she dismissed what she just heard and returned to her room. After changing, she moved out into the backyard to collect the clothes that were hung on a line for drying. As she returned to her room with the clothes the doorbell rang again and this time it was Shivaani who was waiting at front door.
" I'm coming, just give me a minute" Shivanya answered out loud
As Shivanya opened the door Shivani entered the house and headed straight to her room.
" What took you so long? You're school normally ends at 1 so why are you coming back 5 hours late?" Shivanya asked
" Ruhi needed help with her assignments so headed to the library after school to complete our assignments together, since the assignment given was a bit difficult it took us a lot of time to complete it, I'm sorry, I know I should have informed you, I promise I won't repeat it again" shivaani explained
"Its OK sweetheart, if its about your school work then I don't really mind just make sure you inform me next time" Shivanya replied and then began to set the dinner at the dining table
" you're leaving early today?" Shivaani asked with curiosity
"Yes we are having the valentines day promotions going on so there'll be lot of work and customer orders to manage today" Shivanya
Shivaani thought of this as an opportunity to sneak out and attend the party
"Alright then, I'll be leaving right now, take care and have your dinner on time" Shivanya told Shivaani before leaving
As Shivanya left the house Shivaani gave a Ruhi a call and asked her to pick her up from the bus stop at 7:30pm and then got ready to go for the party.

To be continued in part 4..
Edited by Rein123 - 8 years ago

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