Pal Pal dil ke pass - Page 2

Nice update ❤😀

Originally posted by: Minami_koi

Ii hate HP so much that did not want to take his name here..

Did not want to stray too much from original name too.. So Harishankar it is..

.wo cardiologist hai. Indore me apne kaam se matlab rakhta hai. Hamla in my story are a stark contrast to nuksh.

I thought so too, when I saw a different name.😂😂

Absolutely loved it! You’ve captured their thoughts really well. The pace you’ve set is great - I’m already looking forward to the next part to see how the story is going to progress ❤️❤️

Absolutely loved the intro and set up of the story! Really looking forward to it ❤️

I am intrigues how you will play it out since satya and vimla are friends too

Please tag me for future updates

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Videv feel true to their character..

Very nicely written, bahut hi badhiya.

Very well written!! Keep writing.

that's an interesting plot. would love to see how your story unfolds. can't wait. 😳

Loved it! What I would give to see such a beautifully subtle scene in the show 😭

This was perfection Minami! Please continue soon ❤️❤️❤️