Pal Pal dil ke pass - Page 5

Loved it Minami! Sorry for the delay - was traveling this weekend and couldn’t get time to read it.

I loved how you depicted Vidhi’s emotions through whatever she went through with Arjun. Arjun was a little immature - but that’s not surprising! Can’t wait to see what dev says/does and how this continues to shape up😊

Originally posted by: Monkish

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Thanks... I missed it somehow. 😬

Loved it so much❤️ Please tag me when the next part is updated

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Hey! Thank you for tagging me.. have been wishing to comment on this ff kafi time se par ache se likhne ka time ni mil paa raha tha..

Today, i read all the parts again, and it is very nicely written, the characterisation of the trio and their slowly developing emotions, the progress and pace of the story is so well set.. it is hard to believe it is your first attempt at writing. 👏 Loving the realistic touch this story has..

Also, the pictures in between are a good supplement for the imagination.. (umm, next update mei Dev ke party look ki picture mil sakti hai kya?😛)

The last update was longer, thanking you for that =P enjoyed it the most.. the daily talks in his study n them getting comfortable in each other's company remined of the song- ye tuhari meri baatein yuhi chalti rahein..😄 beautiful update.. waiting for the next part!

Originally posted by: Chakor07

Hey! Thank you for tagging me.. have been wishing to comment on this ff kafi time se par ache se likhne ka time ni mil paa raha tha..

Today, i read all the parts again, and it is very nicely written, the characterisation of the trio and their slowly developing emotions, the progress and pace of the story is so well set.. it is hard to believe it is your first attempt at writing. 👏 Loving the realistic touch this story has..

Also, the pictures in between are a good supplement for the imagination.. (umm, next update mei Dev ke party look ki picture mil sakti hai kya?😛)

The last update was longer, thanking you for that =P enjoyed it the most.. the daily talks in his study n them getting comfortable in each other's company remined of the song- ye tuhari meri baatein yuhi chalti rahein..😄 beautiful update.. waiting for the next part!

Thank you so much for the feedback. 😊

I'm unable to update since I'm travelling..Will be updating soon..

I just love your dev and vidhi.❤️

Galat BAAT.. ekdum galat baat. Aise koi end karta hai kya chapter? Jokes aside!! I just love your ViDev!! Absolutely brilliant story line. Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Loving the way the study room has turned into their solace. The little moment they had their was really beautiful. I am enjoying their confusion and conflicts that they feel about each other but side them anyway. The chai at park session is good, their conversation felt very natural and cute. Dev says she looked good, *phew* Arjun and Vidhi angle is churning out well too. Aise cliffhangers nahin dete 😭 eager to know how Vidhi and Dev react to it. Update the next chapter soon!!! :D

My heart ❤️ Such a beautiful update....I want Vidhi to reject Arjun's proposal though... can't see a sad Dev.🥺