Door next Love : ViDev - SS - Page 9

Hii revu sorry pdhne mein deri hogyi guests k kaaran😒

To chapter 9 was woooooooooooowwwwwwwwwww!

Mtlb itna zyada bdhiya totally mera vala romantic dev☺️itna zyada naughty sharam se beetroot hi bn gyi meinkya kroon apna🤣rishabh koto fokat mein daant pd gyi🤣

Shirtless dev Or vidhi ka bathroom romance 💏❤🌹speechless aisa naughty raichand dikha kr tumto schmein jaan logi hmari. Mjhe lgta hai tum apne real life k ache experience use krti ho jiju may be very romantic🤣🤣

But thank u very much tumne mere khne pr likha🤗

And last chapter yrr bht hi emotional kr diya sb ro pde itna nhi dukhi dekh skti sbko😭koi raaz h satyawati itni chup hai tbhi.

5th k baad tum nhi aaogi forum pe I'll be very sad. Take care revu. Mein tujhe bhut miss krungi not just for the ff or os but you are a very nice human being. I wish I can do something for u. You r always in my prayers. God will bless u a naughty baby Dev 🥳

Mein jiss track ke hisaab se likh rahi hoon 🤔🤔 wahan yeh kaise possible hein? Thanks for reading and giving me the suggestion 😃 Shayad next part pe nahi hogi but I will try if it's possible in any upcoming parts, Shinika 😄

Thanks 😊 a lot Parud 🤗....Yeh itna romantic type aisa mein pehle kabhi likhi nahi , pata nahi kaise ho paaye ? Real life experience 😉🥰🥰 , 🥰🥰 uss mein romance se zyada dangal was going before marriage, zyada romance toh shaadi ke baad hi ho paayi donon ke beech..... Bathroom romance 🥰🥰 bas kaise bhi karke Teri Tamanna puri karni thi aur bas dikha Dee, next part pe emotional... That's also need to be explored actually.... Kyunki Dev ne Bahut kuch dekha hein, yahan thing is actually Dev first falls for Vidhi but Vidhi was the first to heal his pain....Toh yahi base dikha Dene kee koshish kar rahi hoon, not dukhiyari Vidhi always just like she is been shown now a days and not Dev always need to be in confusion and worries also, he has a naughty shade , a lovely soul which is making him to do craze in loving Vidhi . Toh yahi dikhane kee koshish kar rahi hoon..And yeh jaise honge please usse read Karo and ek ek karke saare dard mitenge, beech mein thode romantic ViDev bhi honge...I will miss you all very much..But kya karun ? Abb bahut saare medicines lene pad rahi hein and mein yahaan pe bhi zyada aa nahi paa rahi hun pehle kee tarah. Love you lots Parud

Originally posted by: Revutty

Thanks 😊 a lot Parud 🤗....Yeh itna romantic type aisa mein pehle kabhi likhi nahi , pata nahi kaise ho paaye ? Real life experience 😉🥰🥰 , 🥰🥰 uss mein romance se zyada dangal was going before marriage, zyada romance toh shaadi ke baad hi ho paayi donon ke beech..... Bathroom romance 🥰🥰 bas kaise bhi karke Teri Tamanna puri karni thi aur bas dikha Dee, next part pe emotional... That's also need to be explored actually.... Kyunki Dev ne Bahut kuch dekha hein, yahan thing is actually Dev first falls for Vidhi but Vidhi was the first to heal his pain....Toh yahi base dikha Dene kee koshish kar rahi hoon, not dukhiyari Vidhi always just like she is been shown now a days and not Dev always need to be in confusion and worries also, he has a naughty shade , a lovely soul which is making him to do craze in loving Vidhi . Toh yahi dikhane kee koshish kar rahi hoon..And yeh jaise honge please usse read Karo and ek ek karke saare dard mitenge, beech mein thode romantic ViDev bhi honge...I will miss you all very much..But kya karun ? Abb bahut saare medicines lene pad rahi hein and mein yahaan pe bhi zyada aa nahi paa rahi hun pehle kee tarah. Love you lots Parud

Ye itna romantic tum tb likh paayi kyuki I'm pushing u constantly ya fir tum pr Dev ka asar hogya hai😆tumhara beta Dev jesa hi hoga likhwa lo mjhse☺️

Dard to mitaaogi but thode nhi zyada videv romance chahiye mjhe mein bht lalchi hoon you know🤣

Mein to imagine kr rhi hoon Dev ko black coat suit mein with sunglasses n vidhi in red sari what a hot couple❤️

Lgta h real life mein tumhari story bhi videv se km nhi rhi ek din beth kr is pe bhi charcha krungi tumse. Filhal tum apna dhyan rkho Or zyada stress nhi lena sb thik hoga I'll pray to God for u🙏

Haan tum har baar aashayein leke khadi hoti ho , iss baar shirtless Dev ko dikhani thi toh kaise kaise soch soch mein yeh ho gayi...Yes ViDev kaa bahut asar hein, apni story bhi thode bahut inse milte hain tabhi toh mein Dev sir kee fan ban gayi.. Thanks 🙏 dhyan rakhungi

Originally posted by: Revutty

Part 9

Vidhi and Dev released their lips from each other ....Dev gently took his hands from her away and she raised up from his lap.

Vidhi: Sir woh aapke woh....hothon pe....kuch ...

Dev : Kya abhi bhi meethi coffee lagi hein?

Vidhi shyily kept her palms at her face and said: Aap kitne naughty hein Sir.... Aise office rules apne hisab se badal denge toh nahi chalega.

Dev removed her palms and looked her

Dev : Kya nahi chalega Miss Vidhi ?

Vidhi : Aap iss tarah bahar jaayenge toh aapke hothon pe aur thode neeche joh lipstick...

Dev : Vidhi !!

Vidhi : Dekha , aap phir se wahin Angry Young Man Dev Sir ban gaye!!

Dev : Tissues de do Vidhi ...

Vidhi ; Kyun doon ? Bada aaye the aap Marginal utility ko practical banane mein, abb mein nahi dene waali tissues..

Dev ; Nahi dogi !!

Vidhi stared Dev . Dev took Vidhi's dupatta's edge and wiped the chin and lips with it...

Dev : Iss se badi tissue aur kya ho sakte hein?.

Vidhi was completely lost in Dev's eyes.

Dev : Vidhi , apne kaam pe focus Karo.

Saying this Dev went away with a smile towards the cabin door...

Vidhi; Aapne toh woh karke saare focus hata dee, mein kaise karungi kaam ?

Dev ; What ?. Kya matlab hein nahin karogi ? Dekho agar kaam nahi karogi toh punishment milega ...

Vidhi : Pyaar, kiss , job sab aapne dee aur aap punishment bhi denge mujhe.

Dev : Mujhe pura haq hein....tum agar kaam nahi karogi , padte so jawogi toh zarur dunga..

Vidhi: Kaisa punishment?

Dev : Mein jab dunga tab pata chal jayega.

Dev opened the cabin door and Rishabh looked Dev and smiled.

Dev; Aise kyun dekh rahe ho? Saare focus iss naye Accounts Head kee cabin mein lagaye ho kya?

Rishabh; Sir maine kya kiya?

Dev : Tum jaise ladkon kee dimaag naa ek track pe chalte hein.....Pata hein mujhe...

Rishabh: Sir aap kya bol rahe hein? Mein kyun iss cabin pe nazar rakhunga?

Anaya was observing this.

Dev ; Matlab tum yeh kar raha thaa jaise andar kuch huwa ho...

Rishabh ; Sir please... Maine bas aapko dekha toh jaise usually smile karta hoon waise hi abb bhi kiya....I swear aur koyi intention nahi hein...

Dev coughed and said ; Mehnat karte karo , aise smile mein bhi ek minute waste mat karo...

Rishabh: Okay sir.

Anaya went to Rishabh as soon as Dev went inside his cabin.

Anaya : Dev Sir ko kya ho gaya?

Rishabh : Nahin pata. Mera bahut kharab time chal rahe hein. Lagta hein Vidhi ne complaint kee hogi jab woh door close kar rahi thi toh maine dekha , but uske baad uss tarf bilkul nahi dekha .

Anaya : Kya zaroorat thi tumhein woh sab dekhne kee ? Apne kaam se matlab rakho....

Rishabh took a file and pat his forehead with that one. Vidhi who was watching the whole scene was finding hard to control her laughter. She took her phone and looked Dev's childhood pic and recalled the way she told about to meet his mom..

Vidhi; Sir mein milungi aur aapki maa ko pakka wood house mein leke aawungi.

And when Sunday arrived Vidhi knocked at Dev's door. Dev opened the door much late.

Vidhi; Sir aap abhi tak ready nahi huye ? Humein jaana hein naa ?

Dev ; Vidhi ek baar phir se soch lo...Maa pata nahi kaise react karegi ? Upar se mere bhai aur Priya.... Vidhi tum kya kahogi wahan jaakar ?

Vidhi; Yeh sab aap mujh pe chod deejiye....Aaj mein aapke liye kuch karne waali hoon...Abb tak aapki baari thi. Aaj meri hein.. .

Dev: Vidhi !!.

Vidhi; Shh!!!!

Vidhi kept her finger at his lips.

Vidhi : Jaayiye, nahayiye aur kapde badaliye ....Jab tak aap ready nahi ho jaate mein yahi baithungi..

She sat on a chair and looked Dev.

Dev : Tum bahut ziddhi ho Vidhi.

Vidhi smiled and pointed out her finger towards the bathroom....Dev entered inside and knocked the door...Vidhi started reading a book and while she was turning pages, she heard a scream from the bathroom...

Vidhi : Sir kya huwa ?

Dev : Aah!! Meri aankhein jal rahi hein.... Shampoo chala gaya aankhon ke andar ....Aah !!

Vidhi : Sir aap door kholiye mein dekhti hun...

Dev : Nahi Vidhi, aise kaise ?

Vidhi: Aapki aankhein jal rahi hein....Kholiye naa Sir

Dev opened the door and Vidhi entered inside and she saw Dev's wet bare body . He was staring her with his intense naughty eyes.

Vidhi's eyelids went up as if she watched some thing which she wasn't able to watch and she was about to faint. Dev held her with worried face and screamed: Vidhi !!!

Dev : Vidhi !! Aankhein kholo, I am sorry. Mujhe aisa nahi karne chahiye thaa....Woh mein bas tumhein ched Raha thaa, meri aankhein bilkul theek hein....Bas tumhara woh sharam see chehra dekhne ke liye maine aise Kiya... Vidhi, Vidhi !!

Vidhi winked her one eye and Dev was surprised with this deed.

Vidhi; Kyun shocking surprise Dena sirf aapko aata hein? Mr Romantic Raichand!!!

Dev : Tumne toh Dara thi mujhe....

Vidhi smiled and stared him top to bottom.

Dev : Aise kyun ghoor rahi ho mujhe?

Vidhi: Ek bath towel ke siwah aur kuch pehna hi aapne , sochta hoon kee woh bhi...

Dev : Vidhi!!! Aisa nahi ho sakta. Tum jawo yahan se.

Vidhi: Aap mere boss hein...Kabhi bhi office rules fodke cabin mein aake aap mere hothon se meeti coffee pee sakte hein toh mein bhi aapki hone waali biwi hoon.....Mera pura haq hein....

Dev : Vidhi !!! Tum Aisa nahi karogi ...

Dev started walking backwards and Vidhi was staring him and was going towards him....

Vidhi: Zara mein bhi toh dekhun apne Hot Dev Sir ko...Aap punishment nahi donge mujhe ?

Dev : Nahin dunga...Tum Jawon yahan se...

Vidhi: Pakka mein jawun...

Dev: Kyun ? Kya iraade hein tumhari?

Vidhi: Kuch bhi toh nahi...

Dev ; Mujhe toh theek nahi lagta ...

Vidhi: Aap bahar aayiye, mein mein jaa rahi hoon....

Vidhi turned to go , Dev held her hand from back.

Dev : Tumhein nahin dekhna hein apne hot Boss ko ?

He encircled his arms around her body from back. With wet hair he sprinkled those water drops at her back neck and Vidhi turned in front of him . She saw his wet chest and the shoulders of him infront of her eyes.

Dev : Mera dubara nahane kaa mann hein...

Vidhi: Aap kaafi naha chuke hein, abb aur nahi...

Dev : Abb toh pakka nahawunga ...

He open the knob of the shower 🚿 and now ViDev were standing under the shower.Dev with his wet fingers slowly touched Vidhi's neck and when his fingers were started to coming down with much shyness Vidhi hugged him tightly and he too hugged her....

Dev whispered at her ear : Shaadi ke baad roz hum donon aise nahayenge...Lekin tab tum bhi bath towel mein hogi aur mein bhi ....Uske alawa aur kuch bhi nahi honge hamare bodies ko cover karne ke liye.... Mujhe bhi toh dekhna hein apni hot Vidhi ko...

Vidhi turned from Dev and looked downward.

Dev pecked a kiss at her cheek.

Vidhi: Mein change karke aati hoon...

Dev : Jaldi aana, warna mein tumhare darwaaze ko thodkar andar awunga. Phir joh hoga uske liye mein responsible nahi hoon...

Vidhi looked him surprisingly.

Dev : Iss se pehle Mera irada badle tum jaake change kar lo Vidhi....

Vidhi ran away shyily from there. Dev smiled and stood once again under the shower...

At Indore

After few hours they both reached Indore. Dev looked Raichand house in a glance.

Dev : Iss gate Tak hi mein tumhare saath hoon. Iske andar tumhein akele jaane padenge Vidhi

Vidhi: Ladayi kee shuruwat ho chuki hein Sir...

Dev : Vidhi meri aankhein iss gate par honge , ek ummeed hein kee waapis tum akeli nahi tumhare saath Maa bhi aayegi...

Vidhi: Mein puri koshish karungi Sir... Milapini maa mujhe aashirwad de...

Vidhi went inside and slowly she pressed the calling bell. A woman came and opened the door.

Vidhi looked her and recalled her pics which she saw at the wood house.

Vidhi: Aap Satyawati Raichand hein naa ?

Satyawati: Haan. Magar tum kaun ho ? Maine dekha nahin tumhein ...

Vidhi: Mein Raichand group of industries kaa Chief Accounts Head hoon..Mera naam Vidhi Sharma hein....

Satyawati: Andar aayiye...

Vidhi came inside.....

Satyawati: Joh bhi professional baatein hein usse mein nahi mera beta Dev Raichand sambhalta hein.... Mumbai ke main branch mein tum Dev se mil sakti hoon.

Vidhi; Mein wahi main branch mein job karti hoon, Dev Sir ke saath.

Satyawati: Accha!! Toh phir Dev se baat kyun nahi karti ? Mein abb business wagera dekhti nahi hoon.

Vidhi: Unse toh kaafi saari baatein ho chuki hein.....Yeh baat joh mein kehne wali hoon yeh aapse Judi hein....

Satyawati: Mujhse ? Kya Dev ne koyi message bheja hein personal? Tabhi toh tum aayi ho ?

Vidhi: Sahi kaha aapne... Unhone bheja hein mujhe......Unhein aapki bahut yaad aa rahi hein..... Bachpan mein ek wood house mein aapke saath aapki godh mein baithke bitaye huye lamhon ko unn photographs joh wood house ke deewaron mein lagi hein usse dekhkar naa jaane kitne baar roye honge? Unke akelepan ko, unke dard ko maine dekha hein, maine jaana hein ..

Satyawati: Wood house ke baare mein tum jaanti kaise ho?

Vidhi; Aapke bete Dev ne khud mujhe leke Gaye wahan pe ....

Satyawati gets shocked.

Sabse pehle sorry... Late review dene k liye..

Nd coming to chapter.. It is awesome as always...

Hamare saare armaan aap hi pure karoge behan.. Itne pyare pyare scenes...

Nd dev... Main darwaza tod k andar aaunga... Itna bold dev... Aur pyaar ho gya hai mujhe is se ab, 😀

Kaash makers ye ideas bhi chori krlein yaar aapke..

Ab dekho ye saas bahu ki conversation kya rang lati hai

Yaar bechara dev... Kitna tadap raha hai apni maa k liye..

Vidhi k sab dialogues bahut ache hain... Dil ko chu lene vale..

Pta nhi ye abhi priya ka kya chakkar hai.. Jis wajah se dev itna dard mein hai..

No need of sorry ☺️..Take your own time to read it. I am glad you liked it 😊

Pata chal jayega, please wait 🙏 🙏🙏 I will try to update soon

Part 11

Satyawati looked Shantanu's photo and folded her hands.

Satyawati: Kya karungi mein? Dev bardaasht nahi kar paayega woh sach.

Meanwhile a servant came and screamed; Mam!!

Satyawati: Kya hua? Aise kyun chilla rahi ho ?

Servant: Priya mam apne kamre mein nahi hein..

Satyawati: Kya ? Hey bhagwan kuch ho naa jaaye usse. Theek se dekho upar kahin hogi

Servant: Mam maine saare rooms check kee, upar neeche sab jagah. Par abhi tak Priya mam kahin nahi dikhi.

Satyawati: Baaton mein gawane ke liye waqt nahi hein hamare paas ....Dhoondna hein usse.

Suddenly they heard some one knocking door and screaming Maa, Maa !

Satyawati: Yeh toh Dev kee awaaz hein.....Abhi tak yahan hein..

Satyawati opened the door and was shocked to see Dev, Vidhi and Priya in Dev's arms.

Dev : Yeh behosh hoke giri thi mere saamne Maa....Kya huwa Priya ko ?

Satyawati: Dev , andar aa jaa beta.

Dev looked Satyawati..

Satyawati: Tumhari Maa bula rahi hein. Andar aawo beta....

Dev entered inside the house and placed Priya on the couch. Satyawati instructed servant to call doctor immediately.

Dev : Maa, kya hua Priya ko ? Yeh gate se bahar Jaa rahi thi..Maine isko awaaz lagayi , par isne suna hi nahi. Yaa sunkar ansuni rahi...

Vidhi: Maa yeh road kee taraf jaa rahi thi..Dev Sir chilla rahe the Priya Priya kehke. Ek gaadi inke saamne se...

Satyawati: Kya ??

Dev : Maa ghabrayiye mat aap...Kuch huwa nahi isse, tab tak humne isko wahan se bacha Lee, par yeh raste mein hi behosh huyi....Kya huwa Priya ko Maa ? Aap doctor ko bula rahi hein ? Kya wajah hein iske peeche?

Servant: Aise kayi baar ho chuke hein Dev sab.

Satyawati: Apne kaam se matlab rakho tum.

Dev : Maa , kya chupa Rahi ho aap mujhse ? Priya ko kya huwa hein Maa Batawo Naa....

Satyawati: Doctor abhi aayegi, Dev.

Meanwhile doctor arrives there..

Satyawati: Acha huwa, Dr Amba aap aa gayi..

Amba: Kya huwa thaa usse exactly ?

Dev : Doctor yeh behosh huyi mere saamne road pe ...Mein Dev iss Ghar ka bada beta..Priya mere chote bhai Abhimanyu kee wife hein

Amba : Kya Priya ne aapko pehchana ?

Dev : Aap aise kyun keh rahi hein doctor?

Amba looked Satyawati..

Satyawati: Dev ko kuch pata nahi hein.....

Amba; Let me check the patient..

Amba checks Priya and instructs some medicine.

Amba: Thodi der mein isse hosh aa jaayegi..Mein pehle bhi keh chuki hoon Priya kaa dhyan rakhna chahiye. Iski condition bahut serious hein....

Dev : Doctor Amba, kya huwa hein Priya ko?

Amba: Please calm down, Mr Dev....Mein chalti hun.

Amba leaves.

Satyawati sat beside Priya and waved her forehead.

Vidhi: Abb toh batayiye naa Maa...

Satyawati: Vidhi Dev ko leke jawo yahan se.

Dev : Kyun Maa ? Mujhe jaane ke liye kyun bol rahi ho aap? Maa please aapko meri kasam, sach sach batayiye.

Dev kept his mom's hand at his head .

Satyawati: Dev yeh kya kiya beta ?

Dev : Paanch saalon se duriyan banake rakhi hein aap, kya wajah hein....Priya ko kya bimari hein? Kya isi wajah se aap mujhe kuch bata nahi rahe the ?

Satyawati: Haan .... Dev.. Priya abb pehli waali Priya nahi....Kabhi kabhi usse sab yaad aati hein toh kabhi kuch yaad hi nahin rehta ...Tumhein yaad hein Dev Paanch saal pehle Maine tumhein ghar bulayi thi ?

Flash back ( before 5 years )

At Raichand house

Satyawati: Kya yeh sach hein?

Abhimanyu: Haan Maa, mein Paapa banne waala hoon aur Priya maa banne waali hein..Bas abb Dev Bhai bhi yahin aaye toh kitna accha hota.

Priya: Bhaisaab kitne khush honge yeh sunke. Abhi kyun naa hum unhein surprise de?

Abhimanyu: Good idea..Waise Maa iss baar Bhai kaa koyi bahana chalega nahi.....Kaise bhi karke humein manane hein unhein shaadi ke liye.

Priya: Hum sab milkar koyi ladki dhoondhenge Bhaisaab ke liye...

Satyawati: Pehle aane toh do mere bete ko....Sab milkar surprise denge.Priya Mubarak ho beti

Priya: Aap dadi Banne waali hein, aapko bhi Mubarak Mumma.

Satyawati and Priya hugged each other.

Abhimanyu: Hum log Zara bahar jaake aate hein....Kya hein kee jahan pe hum log chori chupke shaadi ke pehle milte the wahin jaane kaa man karta hein.

Satyawati: Haan jawo jawo...

Abhimanyu and Priya leaves from there..

Satyawati makes a phone call to Dev.

Dev ; Hello Maa

Satyawati; Joh bhi kaam ho usse jaldi khatam karo Dev..

Dev : Maa mein main branch Mumbai mein hoon..Yahan bahut kaam hein....

Satyawati: Tujhse ek bahut zaruri baat karni hein.... Surprise hein, tu bas jaldi aa jaa ghar mein.

Dev : Maa aise bhi kya surprise hein ?

Satyawati: Mein phone rakhti hun,surprise ko surprise hi rehne dete hein.

Dev smiled when Satyawati cut the call.

Satyawati: Pehle Abhi aur Priya ke room ko thoda decorate karni hein.

Satyawati keeps some toys and smiles. Soon she gets a phone call from an unknown number.

Satyawati: Hello

Commissioner: Mrs Satyawati Raichand, Mein police commissioner Harsh hoon..Yahan high way mein ek accident huwa hai..Aapke bete Abhimanyu joh gaadi chala rahe the woh ek lorry se takra gaye ....Donon abhi city hospital mein admit hein....

Satyawati: Kya accident? Abhimanyu aur Priya!!!

Satyawati rushed to hospital.

Doctor: Dekhite donon ko bacha toh liye..Par Priya

Satyawati: Kya huwa Priya ko ?

Doctor; Priya ke kokh mein joh baccha thaa usse bacha nahi paaye. Jab Priya yahan laayi thi tab buri tarah se injured thi...I am sorry.

Satyawati was shocked with this harsh truth. Meanwhile her phone was ringing.

Satyawati saw the name Dev..

Satyawati: Pehle bhi kitne dardon se guzar chuke hein Dev, abb yeh batawungi toh Dev root jaayega. Mujhe rokna hoga Dev ko..

Satyawati wiped her tears and attended Dev's call.

Dev : Maa mein yahaan se nikalne waala hun

Satyawati: Wahin ruk jawo beta. Yahan mat awo.

Dev : Kya hua Maa ?

Satyawati: Kuch nahi...Tum wahi raho thode din aur Dev.

Dev : Par aap toh kisi surprise kee baat kar rahi thi ?

Satyawati: Aisa kuch bhi nahi hein Dev. Tum wahi raho beta..Jab tak mein nahin kahungi tum waapis nahi awoge.... Abhimanyu aur Priya mein kuch issues hein...

Dev : Kya ?

Satyawati thought: Mujhe maaf karo Dev. Tumse jhoot bolna pad rahj hein.Par yeh dard bhi tumhein de doon isska man nahi kar raha hein..Mera Abhi aur Priya toh dard mein hein aur mujhe unhein sambhalni hein

Dev : Maa aap kuch kehti kyun nahi?

Satyawati: Dev , mein sab theek karne ke baad tumhein bulati hoon....Mujhpe bharosa hein naa beta ?

Dev : Aap pe toh bahut bharosa hein Maa.

Satyawati: Toh sahi waqt kaa intezar Karo.

Satyawati cuts the call and cries bitterly.