Mohan aur Megha: Dard ka rishta - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11


Thank you for penning these beautiful words for MM.

Meghan's situation makes me think of the lyrics of 'Masochist' by Ingrid Michaelson:

"She says you're a masochist for fallin' for me...and I think I like her 'caus she tells me things I don't want to hear..."


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kuls11

Beautiful...VArsha seriously...bikul sahi hai MOhan megha ke liye...

Megha ke ke liye bikul sahi hai/./////...
Dono ke dil kee baat sahi bayann hui in sabdo main
you always inspire me to wrtie and revive my geet days..maine kal diary ke baad mohan ke liye kuch likha tha.,...just posting here

Thanks kuls๐Ÿค— U so much ...ab itni izzat dogi toh main sarm ke maare kahan jaoogi?๐Ÿ˜ณ...Your words are so beautiful and touching...straight from your heart...No...Mohan's heart.
Mohan
Asan nahi hai firse toote dil se khayab fir sajana
Ussi toote tumahre dil ka illaaz dhoodh raha haoon
tumhari mushkilon ka shayad andaaza hai mujhe
Per kahin fir bhi aapne pyaar ka agaaz dhoodh raha hoon
Tumhari aakhon jo karti hain bayaan aajkal
bas lafhzo main vahi ek jawab dhoodh raha hoon
zindagi bhare paano pe likhi jaa sakti nahi
Likh sako zindgi firse ase koi khali kitaab dhoodh raha hoon


Yaar Kash Mohan tumhari yeh shayari ek baar Megha ko suna de toh definitely use bhi kuch kuch toh ho jayega...LOVED it. Standing Ovation for these verses...๐Ÿ‘.LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT.๐Ÿ‘ Do write more...I'll be waiting.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fari-

Wah man, kia talent hai.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘


Your words just completely described Megha, made me feel the intensity of the dilemma she faces at present and the cross roads she finds herself standing at right now.

This was fantastic, thanks for such beautiful poetry, hope you keep sharing such words with us in future too.
Thanks๐Ÿค—


Thanks fari ...I am so touched..๐Ÿค—..Yes Megha is confused...it is not an easy task for her to open her heart for Mohan...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Supanpreet

Mohan se related koi baat ho or main na padu yeh ho nahi sakta varsha


Sabka yehi haal hi Preeto
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Payal-



Thank you for penning these beautiful words for MM.

Meghan's situation makes me think of the lyrics of 'Masochist' by Ingrid Michaelson:

"She says you're a masochist for fallin' for me...and I think I like her 'caus she tells me things I don't want to hear..."



Thanks Payal I have not read it but now I will ...Thanks for sharing.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome lines..dear...๐Ÿ‘โญ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘

Aaj phir apne jazbaatoon ko
Teri majbooriyon se takrate dekha hai

It always like this for Mohan...
Edited by Bharti_k - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: whitepearl


Yaar Kash Mohan tumhari yeh shayari ek baar Megha ko suna de toh definitely use bhi kuch kuch toh ho jayega...LOVED it. Standing Ovation for these verses...๐Ÿ‘.LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT.๐Ÿ‘ Do write more...I'll be waiting.

Thanks Varsha...as I told you...You inspire me to post on forum...I wrote it yesterday being inspired from dairy and Guru dailgue...But posted just on your threa.d...definetly your words for Megha were so damn apt...I thought I might post for Mohan heere this from Megha after today episode...it dint came out good still posting for heck of it...

Kuch ankhi hulchul hai iss dil main'
Kuch vahi machalte jazbaat kyoon hai''''

Tumhari baton ka kuch to asar hai mujpe
Varna asee unsuljhe ahsaas kyoon hai''.

Kaise samjhoon tumhe itna asan nahi yeh sab
KI mere itne muhskil halat kyoon hai

Kuch to hua hai inn kuch deeno main mujhe
Per jhultana use maane se itna asaan kyoon hai

Nahi chahti pata chale tumhe meri dil ki kashmakash
Per vo sach aakhen ker jaati bayaan kyoon hai

Edited by kuls11 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wah wah ๐Ÿ‘ Amazing ๐Ÿ‘ i am speech less ๐Ÿ˜
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kuls11

Thanks Varsha...as I told you...You inspire me to post on forum...I wrote it yesterday being inspired from dairy and Guru dailgue...But posted just on your threa.d...definetly your words for Megha were so damn apt...I thought I might post for Mohan heere this from Megha after today episode...it dint came out good still posting for heck of it...

Kuch ankhi hulchul hai iss dil main'
Kuch vahi machalte jazbaat kyoon hai''''

Tumhari baton ka kuch to asar hai mujpe
Varna asee unsuljhe ahsaas kyoon hai''
.

Kaise samjhoon tumhe itna asan nahi yeh sab
KI mere itne muhskil halat kyoon hai

Kuch to hua hai inn kuch deeno main mujhe
Per jhultana use maane se itna asaan kyoon hai

Nahi chahti pata chale tumhe meri dil ki kashmakash
Per vo sach aakhen ker jaati bayaan kyoon hai


Dear Kuls ...You have beautifully written what Megha expressions conveyed last night.
She is in a state of shock for her own developing feelings and these lines are just perfect...
Tumhari baton ka kuch to asar hai mujpe
Varna asee unsuljhe ahsaas kyoon hai''
.

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ...This is for U dear...
Tum bahut hi koobssorti se lafzon ko piroti ho
phr kiyon kahati ho ki dilpasand nahi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amisha.Laher

wah wah ๐Ÿ‘ Amazing ๐Ÿ‘ i am speech less ๐Ÿ˜


Shukriya Amisha...tumhaari tarif hamai aur likane ka hosala deti hai..๐Ÿค—.(Monu Style)

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