whitepearl thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#1
Hi! I am back with my few words shayari...Don't know what today's episode has for us in store ? But after watching Megha's disapproval in action..'Slap'...This is what I think would be the feel of the show now...So for those who understand Hindi are few verses and those who do not...I hope Mira and Madhu would help me in translation.

Megha :
Aaj phir apni majbooriyon ko
terey jazabaaton se takrate dekha hai
Mere aasoon toh gubaar ban beh gayay
Par teri aankho ko toofan chupate dekha hain
Kab tak sahogey is chubhan ko
Har bhaar tujhe meri rah ke kaante uthate dekha hai.

Na hawa de iss junoon itna ki khud fanhaa ho jaaye
Teri ruswaiyoon ke saath mera dil bhi tanha ho jaaye
Kaise rakkhu kadam mohobbat ki rahon pe main
Mere saath tera jahaan bhi khak na ho jaaye

Mohan:
Aaj phir apne jazbaatoon ko
Teri majbooriyon se takrate dekha hai
Ordh lo chaahe chilman berukhi ka magar
Teri chehare ko har raaz bataatey dekha hai
Chale toh jaarahe to rooth kar door magar
Teri dhadkano ko dil ke aas-paas hi dekha hai.

Zara aahista se chala khanjar ai dost mere
kahi nashtar tera tujh hi ko na chubh jaaye
palko pe uthaunga yeh zakhm bhi main magar
shart hai ki teri aakhoon main dard nazar na jaaye.


Read, Enjoy and Feel...

Edited by whitepearl - 13 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

26

Views

3.4k

Users

13

Likes

63

Frequent Posters

Supanpreet thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#2
Beautiful & touchy lines 👏 meghan ki feelings ko hu-bu-hu pesh kiya hai aapne.. Too good keep it up 👍🏼
whitepearl thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#3

Originally posted by: Supanpreet

Beautiful & touchy lines 👏 meghan ki feelings ko hu-bu-hu pesh kiya hai aapne.. Too good keep it up 👍🏼



Itni jaldi pad liya ...😊 Thank you Preet.

NeelimaSJ thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#4
Oh wow! Varsha yeh kya kar diya tumne??? Excellent! Brilliant! Superb!

Kab tak sahogey is chubhan ko
Har bhaar tujhe meri rah ke kaante uthate dekha hai.

Perfect lines for Megha. This is exactly what Mohan has been doing for her.👏👏👏


Thank you so much for sharing 🤗
whitepearl thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: NeelimaSJ

Oh wow! Varsha yeh kya kar diya tumne??? Excellent! Brilliant! Superb!


Kab tak sahogey is chubhan ko
Har bhaar tujhe meri rah ke kaante uthate dekha hai.

Perfect lines for Megha. This is exactly what Mohan has been doing for her.👏👏👏


Thank you so much for sharing 🤗


Thanks Neel U have made my evening...I cherish your appreciation..🤗I was not sure if this is how Megha is going to feel but keeping my hopes very high...and happy in imagining that she also cares for Mohan.
Supanpreet thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: whitepearl




Itni jaldi pad liya ...😊 Thank you Preet.

Mohan se related koi baat ho or main na padu yeh ho nahi sakta varsha
Hit.It.Miss thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#7
Wah man, kia talent hai.👏👏👏

Your words just completely described Megha, made me feel the intensity of the dilemma she faces at present and the cross roads she finds herself standing at right now.

This was fantastic, thanks for such beautiful poetry, hope you keep sharing such words with us in future too.
Thanks🤗
--khushi-- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#8
wow 👏👏👏
awesome lines dear...
sooo touching
loved it
Silentsoul thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#9
Beautiful...VArsha seriously...bikul sahi hai MOhan megha ke liye...
Megha ke ke liye bikul sahi hai/./////...
Par teri aankho ko toofan chupate dekha hain
Kab tak sahogey is chubhan ko
Har bhaar tujhe meri rah ke kaante uthate dekha hai.
Mohan
Teri chehare ko har raaz bataatey dekha hai
Chale toh jaarahe to rooth kar door magar
Teri dhadkano ko dil ke aas-paas hi dekha hai.
Dono ke dil kee baat sahi bayann hui in sabdo main
you always inspire me to wrtie and revive my geet days..maine kal diary ke baad mohan ke liye kuch likha tha.,...just posting here
Mohan
Asan nahi hai firse toote dil se khayab fir sajana
Ussi toote tumahre dil ka illaaz dhoodh raha haoon
tumhari mushkilon ka shayad andaaza hai mujhe
Per kahin fir bhi aapne pyaar ka agaaz dhoodh raha hoon
Tumhari aakhon jo karti hain bayaan aajkal
bas lafhzo main vahi ek jawab dhoodh raha hoon
zindagi bhare paano pe likhi jaa sakti nahi
Likh sako zindgi firse ase koi khali kitaab dhoodh raha hoon
Edited by kuls11 - 13 years ago
nbtgdshw thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#10
this may be a repetition ...but this forum has managed to bring out the best of writers , shayars, video developers, poets and analysts because of this great show. I wonder if indian telly awards ki tarah koi daily soap literature award function hua😉 then many members from this forum will be nominated for awards and like aakanksha many will win awards :)...
varsha ji... what u have written is just so beautiful... thanks for sharing :)

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".