FF - Forget Me Not|Part 15 updated on page 42 - Page 10

👏🙌 show version sahi chal raha hai..hum enjoy bhi kar rahe hai..lekin aapka yeh usse jayda kamaal ka hai..show ek hi direction mein..jabki aap aur baat par bhi dhyaan de rahe ho..

Jaise isme appartment waala scene..Pur ka apne past ko lekar aise tensed ho jaana..purane cast ka bhi itna badiya use kar rahe ho

PurVir scene 🤧❤️..merko words nahi pata complement kaise du aapko😐..explain kaise karu🤦🙃😅

Originally posted by: PSP07

👏🙌 show version sahi chal raha hai..hum enjoy bhi kar rahe hai..lekin aapka yeh usse jayda kamaal ka hai..show ek hi direction mein..jabki aap aur baat par bhi dhyaan de rahe ho..

Jaise isme appartment waala scene..Pur ka apne past ko lekar aise tensed ho jaana..purane cast ka bhi itna badiya use kar rahe ho

PurVir scene 🤧❤️..merko words nahi pata complement kaise du aapko😐..explain kaise karu🤦🙃😅

Thank you for your lovely comments.

I've been able to use the extra cast but I'm struggling for future parts with them. Just a heads up, future parts may be only PurVir.

Originally posted by: Fazzzz

Thank you for your lovely comments.

I've been able to use the extra cast but I'm struggling for future parts with them. Just a heads up, future parts may be only PurVir.

Future parts Jungle Family aur PurVir par hoga na..baaki ka use na hona logical hai...udhr tak jaane se pehle jo dikha chahiye woh atleast aap dikha chuke ho😊

Just bumping this in case anyone missed the latest chapter on the previous page.

Good that you brought the thread ahead...Otherwise I would have missed it...

This is soooooo beautifully written...❤️❤️

So perfectly expressed to show how they are becoming more and more comfortable with each other...😳❤️😳

And the best part ...Purvi fell asleep in Virendra's arms...😳☺️

Your version of Veer is so damn good...😆😈 And the way you use the rest of the cast...Commendable👏👏

Eagerly waiting for the next part❤️😳

Originally posted by: darkchocolates

Good that you brought the thread ahead...Otherwise I would have missed it...

This is soooooo beautifully written...❤️❤️

So perfectly expressed to show how they are becoming more and more comfortable with each other...😳❤️😳

And the best part ...Purvi fell asleep in Virendra's arms...😳☺️

Your version of Veer is so damn good...😆😈 And the way you use the rest of the cast...Commendable👏👏

Eagerly waiting for the next part❤️😳

Thank you! 🤗

I had a feeling some like yourself would miss the update because it fell on the second page, so bumped.

Honestly I get so happy with the lovely comments. Definitely encourages me more.

The last scene was a bliss fazzu...

They feel asleep in each other’s arms ☺️❤️ SCREAMING

I loved their moments in this chapter it felt more intimate ❤️

Loved it 👍🏼👏

Fazzzz..I am yet to read your updated parts so I'll comment on it later.. but I just wanted to tell you, I learned a lot from you.. I wanted to write OS but I was rubbish at it.. I finally tried somthing today and turns out to be good.. ppl are liking it.. so one thanks goes to you too..

Originally posted by: Sau25

Fazzzz..I am yet to read your updated parts so I'll comment on it later.. but I just wanted to tell you, I learned a lot from you.. I wanted to write OS but I was rubbish at it.. I finally tried somthing today and turns out to be good.. ppl are liking it.. so one thanks goes to you too..

Thank you! 🤗

Hope to read your comments once you've caught up.

All the credit should be to yourself. Keep writing. Anything on PurVir, I will read.