Purvir FF- ajeeb dastaan he yeh 🤫🧐

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This FF is made in an alternate setting n universe 🤪

Bhool chuk maaf 😌


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**Part 1**


~~~Setting:- it's midnight n everyone in the haveli is resting in the lap of luxury peaceful sleep.... In Purvir's room Which was now virakshi's saki suddenly wakes up on finding vir's absence besides her...it was very unlikely of her to wake up in the middle of a dark night as the medicines n painkillers slowed down her heartbeat n functioning of brain leading to a completely dozed off saki , she gets up n searches for Vir in the room but all her efforts went in vain~~~


Saki(confused): yeh Viren Kaha gye ? She goes out n starts roaming around in the haveli...

Whom was saki looking for? Was it Vir or someone else??


(In Saki's room- Anjali is there for some mysterious work )

Anjali: hey bhagvaan kitti garmi he yha! AC bhi nhi he ! ... Sits on the bed... Chalo fan hi Chala lete he ... But she never knew that one switch would cause her consciousness to get out of her skeleton.... She screamed at the top of her voice n ran down the stairs to reach Prakashi's room...

Anjali(heavily knocking door n crying): maaaaaaaa!!! Door kholo maa jaldi!! Vo manne kha jayegi !! Maaaaa!!!!!

Prakashi opens the door in disgust: k ho gya tanne Jo aadhi Raat ko manne neend se jaga rhi he ? Or yeh Kya bakke ja rhi he ? Kisne khaa gyi Tu sapne me ??

Anjali (horrified): maa me nhi vo kha jayegi mujhe !!

"Kon vo" Prakashi's disgust rising

"Sakshi... maaa or kon!" Though Anjali whispered but horror was visible on her face

Prakashi: pagal ho gyi he kya ?? Usne to tapka Diya tha na USS Raat to yeh kaisi baate Kar rhi he ?? Or ib yeh mat kahio ki iska bhoot aa gya !!

Anjali trying to convince her: me sach keh rhi hu maa Jo Mene dekha Uske baad to mujhe sach me lag rha he Sakshi Ka bhoot humare peeche pad gya he ! Aapne Jo kaam Karne bheja tha vhi Karne gyi thi me par Galti ho gyi merese Jo Mene USS kambakt fan ko on Kiya !!

Prakashi: k keh rhi he Sahi se bol...

Anjali: mujhe garmi lagi to Mene fan on Kiya par fan me se khoon Nikal rha tha maa!! Dekho mere upar bhi Gira he !!

Prakashi: yo khoon nhi aalta hoga Kisi ne shararat Kari hogi tere Saath or Tu darr gyi ! Hey bhagvaan Mene bhi kaise namoone Paal rakhe he !

Anjali after all her trials finally convinces Prakashi to go with her in Saki's room but to her amazement there were no blood stains n fan was absolutely fine too...

Anjali in disbelief: maa yo kese ho Sakta he abhi to pure floor par khoon fela hua tha !!

Prakashi calming her down : bhram hua he tanne chal ib soo jaa or manne bhi sone de !...

N leaves to her room ...

Anjali too feels she had a bad dream but soon she realises that this is reality the harsh horrific reality as she saw Sakshi's bangles stained with blood... She was terrified beyond words n ran to her room to escape the evil spirit of sakshi... Who came for her revenge....

"Bachaoooooo!!!" Woke up Anjali with tensed muscles n sweating forehead , she wiped her face n saw blood...

Was it actually the spirit or someone else?

Y was saki killed ? Was she really killed ?

Was it really anjali's dream or reality?


(The morning in guest room , Purvir are sleeping in each other's arms , the sun rays shine upon vir's eyes waking him up...)


Vir: baawri uth ja... Dekh surajmukhi (sunflower) bhi khil gya ... N plants a gentle kiss on her forehead...

Pur: Hume surajmukhi nhi Apne mukhi Ka khilta hua chehra Dekh k uthna Pasand he...n smiles innocently

Vir: yeh mukhi to Suraj k Saath hi khilta he or Tu mhara Suraj he mhari Zindagi me roshni or Khushi ki Kiran ....

Pur: par aap iss Kiran ko kabtak chuppa k rakhenge ? Ujala zarurat se jayada ho jaaye to andha Kar Deta he! Aapne ek jhooth chhupane k liye kitte jhuth bole ...

Vir: Mene k jhooth Kaha Tu mhare bachho ki tution teacher he or Saath me unka dhyan bhi rakhti he maa ki Tarah or ab to Sakshi bhi yo baat samajh gyi he... Baawri me majboor tha..na Sakshi se uska haq chheen paaya na tujhe tera adhikar dila paaya ! Yo uljhan Roz manne kaante ki Tarah chubti he !

Pur: shhhhhh! N cups his face ... "Aap Kuch mat kahiye hum sab jaante he, iss guest room me hi Sahi humne apni ek alag Duniya basa li he or jaha tak bachho ki Baat he unko Sakshiji se alag karna Sahi nhi hoga vo maa he unki! Abhi to unke rishte me sudhar Aaya he or bachhe bohot samjhdaar he unke Dil me humari or Sakshiji dono ki jagah he pakka unpe hi gye he dono " Pur silently laughed mocking Vir

Vir : badi Hasi aa rhi he , hmmm ? N pulls her closer

Pur: nhi !...n pushes him shyly... humara matlab tha ki Sakshiji bhi kitti samjhdaar he Varna Hume to laga tha vo Hume bachho se dur Kar dengi par unhone aisa Kuch nhi Kiya Ulta humse madat maangi taaki vo bachho k pass aa sake ! Par kya unko Zara bhi Shaq nhi hua humare baare me ??

Vir: na baawri , Raat ki medicine k Kaaran vo soti rehti he or seedha subah uthti he !

Pur : par yeh sab kabtak chalega vo dheere dheere theek ho rhi he ?

Vir: me bhi Uske theek hone Ka wait Kar rha hu, tab jaake usse Saara sach bata paunga ...

Vir prepares to leave n Pur back hugs him


Vir shuts the door n is shocked to find the figure in front of him "Viren aap purvi k room me kya Kar rhe the ??" Enquired saki

Vir's reaction was as if the heavens crashed onto him "vo... Purvi ki salary badhani thi na issi silsile me gya tha usse Milne"

Saki: itti subah ??

Vir: Haan vo aaj jaldi meeting me jaana he na gao k bahar..

Saki gives him prashaad " achha he Kam se Kam aadhi Raat ko to nhi gye Uske kamre me"

Vir's breath got stuck in his throat ...

Saki: Kaisa laga ?

Vir: kya ?

Saki: arre laddu ! Apne haatho se banaya he

Vir: Haan bohot achha he

Saki: arre me to mazak Kar rhi thi aapke pasine kyu chhutne lage ? Me jaanti Hu aap mere kamre me gye honge ... Sahi Kaha na !?!

Vir: Haan Sakshi !

Saki caresses his face n leaves with an innocent smile ....

Later in the lobby ...

Saki: aap kal Raat humare kamre me nhi the...ho bhi kaise sakte he , kyoki vha to hum gye the ...!

The innocent expressions changed their way to serious grins as she moved towards the kitchen....

Who is this person? Y does she went to Saki's room last night ? Was she involved in anajali's Horrific dream/ reality?

Edited by Piyaazzz - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Tagging a few more

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Purvir scene mujhe show me chahiye ab....


Good one piya...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Naam Sweet affair rakhde...🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Piyaa!!!! I'm so happy reading this. Purvir r together n chup chup ke romance chal raha hain 😍😍🤭🤭🤭

Anjali dar gaye I hope show main bhi aisa kuch hoga uske saath 😏😏

Tum itna accha likti hoon yaar n woh red wali lines are perfect... padne mein maza aata 🥰🥰

I love this story, hopefully hume aisi scenes show mein bhi mile 😄😆

Next update main purvir scenes aur liko pls 🤭🤭🤭 I want more chupke romance n scens when they almost get caught by someone 🤣🤣

Thanks for d tag n ab next part bhi jaldi update kardo 🤗🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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TFS


Epic dialogues of sakshi vir

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

Naam Sweet affair rakhde...🤣

Aapne Kaha to yhi Rakh deti par story thodi intense he 😆
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Boht badiya likha hai...

Suspense toh dekho..kya bnaya hai...mast bilkul

Agle part part mein purvi and mukhi ke scene thode jada likhna😉😉

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