Rakshak - PurVir SS |part 3 updated on page 7| - Page 5

Originally posted by: esha143

Wonderful update..... You have been successful in upping the suspense quotient... Khandhar ki rahasyamay kahani 🤔....will be waiting eagerly to know the secret.... The rest of the story is really good.... I like how you are trying to use every character in some meaningful way ....gives more content to the story and makes it interesting.... Do update soon please! ❤

Appreciation ke lie bada sa thanksss 🥳🤗 it means a lot ❤️

I'll try keeping the pace up😌😌

Fantastic update Supriya!! You have built up the suspense so brilliantly 👏👏👏

Can't wait to find out what is Vir's connection with the khandar

And thanks so much for tagging me😳

Originally posted by: Sxshh

Tm kya romantic se sadist writer me convert hone ke vichar me ho ?? 🤓

Patani yo to lord Saba pe depend karta he kya deti he plate me 🤣

Yha pe aake bakwas karne ka maja hi dusra hai ...chaska lag gya to 🤣🤣

Haan alag level Ka satisfaction he yha bakwaass Karne me 😆

Bakwaass Karna Mera rozka he 😌😌 log saans lete me bakwaass karti 😎😎😎

🤣🤣🤣🤣

Tedha hai par mera hai 2.0 🤣

Originally posted by: Manasi_16

Fantastic update Supriya!! You have built up the suspense so brilliantly 👏👏👏

Can't wait to find out what is Vir's connection with the khandar

Di thanks to you for helping me with ideas ...apki di hui seekh aage implement karni hai mujhe😁

And thanks so much for tagging me😳

Pleasure is all mine 🤩🤩🤩

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

Aree ye to fir se same to same ho gya ...bakwaas karna apun ka bhi favourite kaam hai 🤣🤣

Aur yha bakwaas karne ka chaska lag gya mujhe bhi ....

Itna ki kaam reh jata iske chakkar me 🙄🙄

😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Sxshh

Aree ye to fir se same to same ho gya ...bakwaas karna apun ka bhi favourite kaam hai 🤣🤣

Aur yha bakwaas karne ka chaska lag gya mujhe bhi ....

Itna ki kaam reh jata iske chakkar me 🙄🙄

Yo to Roz Ka ho gya he Mera koi new khabar sunao

😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

Ab to manne bhi yo hi laage hai ki mhara roz ka ho gaya hai aise bakwaas karna 🤣🤣🤣

Fantastic Update Supriya👏

Acha suspense create kar rahi ho..To tum bhi mystery likhna try kar rahi ho..Not bad😉😆😉😆

So,Yogi got his due in ur ff😆🤣

Pure ff m y part sabse acha laga ki tumne mention kiya ki pur ko chot lagi h...ff m concerned vir milega.. r pls baad m y bhi dikha dena ki pur ko stab kar diya..🤣

Bahut bahut bahut acha likha h😳

Originally posted by: sargamif

Fantastic Update Supriya👏

Acha suspense create kar rahi ho..To tum bhi mystery likhna try kar rahi ho..Not bad😉😆😉😆

I just tried my hand on it ☺️

So,Yogi got his due in ur ff😆🤣

Show me to kuch dete nhi hai.. yhi mil jaye to sukoon mile 🤣

Pure ff m y part sabse acha laga ki tumne mention kiya ki pur ko chot lagi h...ff m concerned vir milega..

Mere FF ka title bhi to "rakshak" hai -- meaning purvi's saviour 🤩🤩🤩 apna Viru bhot bade bade kaam krega abhi 🤣

r pls baad m y bhi dikha dena ki pur ko stab kar diya..🤣

Aisa kuch socha tha maine bhi 🤣

Bahut bahut bahut acha likha h😳

Bhot bhot dhanyawad❤️

Di aur ideas aye to btana ... you're good at mystery sooo....!! 😃

Originally posted by: Sxshh

Di aur ideas aye to btana ... you're good at mystery sooo....!! 😃

Areeyyy..m to tumhari shishya hu..Tum mujhe ideas batana..Tum to guru ho meri😉😎😉😎😆😆

Itna acha mystery likh rahi ho😆

Pehle mystery to bata kya h..Tabhi yo ideas bataungi jo incorporate kar sake tu isme😎😎😎😃